Aiyo Shinbatsu ==> Tsuki (Reactivation)

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

Old Character Name: Aiyo Shinbatsu
Old Village/Missing: Sand
OCR Type: Returning from inactivity
Last Known Where-abouts: I don't remember, probably in his book store.
Old IC Rank: Chuunin

New Character Name: Aiyo Tsuki
Preferred Username: Tsuki
New Village/Missing: Sand

New BL/CA: If it's not a problem with you guys, I'll do this later.

Custom Class: If it's not a problem with you guys, I'll do this later. If you have to, start me off with the Rookie class.

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main branch.

Character Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Character's Physical Description: Tsuki stands at six foot four. He's got silver hair that's slicked back, red eyes, and tan skin, insinuating that he's been in the sun more than the cave-dwelling populace of Suna. He's well built for combat, and his stature insinuates that he can both take and deliver a hit. In a word, he's intimidating.

Character's Mental Description: He's normal and about as smart as I am.

Character History: Most people don't even know Tsuki exists, including his own government. Upon his conception, his parents believed that they were harboring a prophet, and they did everything they could to hide knowledge of Tsuki's existence from the world. Today, those who have seen him certainly do not know who he is, let alone who his parents are. His family history is entirely unclear, his history is entirely unclear, and almost nothing is known about him. Up till now, Tsuki has been a ghost. The chronicle of his existence begins with my writing this passage.


Death/Retirement Thread: I think I just went inactive. I don't remember actually retiring, and I hope I don't have to. If it's a formality, please consider Shinbatsu retired without me writing a novel about it.

Old Profile: I don't have access to it.
Old Training: I don't have access to it.
Old Dojo: I don't think I ever had one.
Old FAQ: I don't think I ever had one.

Old Stats:
Stamina: 600
Agility: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600

Advanced Points: 1198 (I'll figure out what to do with this stuff later if you don't mind)

Spoiler

E Rank ==> Transformation (Master)
E Rank ==> Body Switch (Master)
E Rank ==> Basic Summoning (Master)
D Rank ==> Combination Transformation (Master)
D Rank ==> Crystal Eye (Master)
D Rank ==> Cancel (Master)
C Rank ==> Stunt Double (Master)
C Rank ==> Elemental Clone (Master)
C Rank ==> Barrier (Master)
C Rank ==> Will Genjutsu: Betrayal (Master)
C Rank ==> Will Genjutsu: Temple of Nirvana (Master)
B Rank ==> Energy Transfer (Master)
B Rank ==> Leech Seal (Master)
B Rank ==> Chakra Shield (Master)
A Rank ==> Stardust Nova (Master)

Old OOC Rank: S Rank



Stat Cut: Pretty sure none.
New Stats: Same as above.

New OOC Rank: S Rank

Are we good? I'd like to please get started.

 

[Toraono Kuro]

I am under the mystery of your history but unfortunately there still has to be more to it. You can be unknown, you can even have the memories of your actual existence erased from those who birthed and or raised you. We can even go so far as to have your actual records as a ninja of Sunagakure erased ala James Bond style from SKYFALL but you must have an actual history explaining how your existence was erased. I see an easy tie in to a District 9 Organization like ROOT from Lead or the chosen Thunders of Cloud but I must inform you that a history is necessary and if you need help with making yourself a clandestine agent I am more than happy to help you.

 

[Kairyuu]

For the record:

Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=400&t=7325
Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=396&t=7315

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

@ Hoshi: I'm so confused. Yesterday when I was checking there was only one page to the Training Quarters. I thought they got moved to an inactivity area or something. I swear I looked three times. I'm so sorry for the misunderstanding.

@ Kuro: I really, really tried with this history, and it's more than I thought I could do. I can give you thousands of words of RPs- with other people- once you let me in. But asking me to write some stuff I made up about myself is just going to kill my mojo. Please don't make me do this, because anything I add won't actually make my history any different.

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

If this will help out at all, I'd like to add a Steadfast application that will hopefully double for some history.

"Wake up."
"Wake up."
"Wake up."
"Wake up."

Existence is perpetual. Of the things we see around us, nothing will ever cease to exist. Metallics, organics, inorganics, energy. It faded, it ossified, it formulated into what is and what is not, but at the end, it all really is. Wake up, Aiyo Tsuki. Within his slumber he saw what could be if he chose to settle in the midst of all of this: he would gain trust, become empowered, and those around him would eventually give him everything. He'd be a king, a Kage, the master of peasants. Desolation would take hold, the throne would decay, and he'd be known as King Nothing. Sitting still never got anyone anywhere.

"Wake up."
"Wake up."
"Wake up."

A stone is not desolate. It seems desolate to us because we only see it for our lifetimes. A stone lasts far longer than we do. Than you do, rather. Tsuki sees it. I see it. I have sat down and watched my stone form, and now it fades, and tomorrow it will be gone. I will outlast it. Atomic particles, rules, laws, everything physicists think they know does not apply to me. As is existence, I am perpetual. I will watch you decay, but I refuse to do it passively. Not this time around.

I am awoken.

You will decay. Your neighbors will decay. But as a perpetual being, I have the power to accelerate either measure. I, Aiyo Tsuki, have decided your fate already. If you are to be spared, you will find out, but then you will grow old and pass on. I will still be here. If you are to die, you will meet my blade, and I will still be here. And if you are to be irrelevant, you will probably never see me, for I was a ghost, and I am a ghost, and the men of this world will never know me. I have existed from its beginning, and I will exist till its end, and I will make it what it is, but it shall have no effect on me. For I am perpetual. Aiyo Tsuki is perpetual. I, Aiyo Tsuki, am Steadfast.

 

[Toraono Kuro]

If necessary I daresay I could offer you a suitable history, this however would be an offer from me as just another player not admin helping or granting someone a favor as you know I am willing to help everyone. Simply PM me details and significant names and or places you want mentioned and I will send you back an acceptable history that you can flavor to your liking. I understand if at the moment you just can't wrap your mind into the flow but I cannot go back on that particular ruling.

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

Alright, I'm going to try explaining myself one more time. The reason I joined Sand, of all four villages, back in '07 was that it had no history requirement. That didn't mean I didn't care about my character. I put a lot of work into Iyo Tsuki, I rose through the ranks as him, and I became Kazekage. The main reason I was able to be so successful and to make a character people still remember three years after my inactivity and two years after the site crash was that I didn't have any preordained lines telling me who my character was. I didn't tell you who my character was when I made him, I showed you over the years. If you asked me to have a history at the time, I wouldn't have been able to get into it, and I would have gone inactive after a few weeks. The same applies now. It's the reason I didn't make it with Aiyo Shinbatsu: the only reason I lasted 6 months was that I was on probation and I had to stick around to do justice. I'm serious: if you want me to go inactive a few weeks down the road, making me have a character history is the way to do it.

I'm not asking you to bend the rules for me, but I do think this village should consider adjusting its rule to resemble what it once was.

 

[Toraono Kuro]

I can understand that, however the council has yet to set that rule back into effect. As such I can grant you all the secrecy you want in the world but as of this moment you still need an origin for your shinobi abilities. People don't have to literally know you exist but the history must be present as of our current rules.

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

Honestly though, why do you care? I'm going to be in Sand for five minutes before I nuke.

 

[Kairyuu]

Arguing isn't helping anyone.
This is a requirement. You can meet the requirement, or not. If you do not, you will not be joining that village.
Honestly, having a history for your character is a requirement for ANY village, so you could say it's a requirement for the site.

So you can make a history that works, or forever be stuck in OCR limbo. Histories are there to keep people from retconning ridiculous things later on about their life. We need a sort of guide as to how you ended up where you did and what not. For instance, you're aiming for a main branch Sand shinobi, so speak of how they entered the shinobi academy and worked their way up the ranks, talk about their parents and family, about their favorite things to do as a child.

But stop asking people to ignore the rules for you.

 

[Keiji]

Honestly though, why do you care? I'm going to be in Sand for five minutes before I nuke.

That is besides the point.
You are REQUIRED to have a history, one that's relevant and tells the origin and reasoning behind his personality, his training, his friends, allies, enemies, etc. Anything that at least gives a semi understanding towards the person.

"His family history is entirely unclear, his history is entirely unclear, and almost nothing is known about him." Is NOT enough to explain a single thing.
Who was his sensei? Who taught him to fight? In what way was he trained? What is his speciality in terms of fighting? What Branch was he in his whole life? Who was his parents? Who was his friends (if he had any)? What did he do to become who he is? Why is a Shinobi?

None of these basic questions has no answer with that history of yours. I mean, you've not even written more than a hundred words..

At least.. TRY.. Please?


Also, you're Steadfast application does not account for any history it doesn't even describe a single thing, only vague semblance towards something or other. Works fine for a Steadfast app, but not as history, not by a longshot..


I do apologize for being overly critical on this regard but Kuro and Hoshikata speaks the truth on this matter.

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

@ Hoshikata: The only reason I'm shooting for a Main branch Sand Shinobi is the site doesn't allow me to start not-in-a-village, or in-a-village-without-having-been-through-the-academy-but-still-trained. Can you just verify this statement for me? I'm trying to figure out if I'm missing something.

@ Keiji: I can't answer any of those questions. I don't know anybody on this site and I just want to RP and get to know people. I'm not trying to make up half a dozen NPCs just to appease requirements. I want to make a character, not make one up. I thought this was an RPing site, not a tutorial in novel writing.

Listen, I just want to get back in the swing of things. Holding me here and asking me to make stuff up that nobody really cares about, that everybody is going to forget, and that's going to depress me out of staying active is counter-productive. I just want things to be simple. Why are you making things complicated?

 

[Kairyuu]

Because these are the fundamental of RPing.
Backstory, setting, the things that makes your character tick.

Oh, also?
The rules. You follow the rules, we follow the rules.
One of those rules? You do what the village requires in OCR.

So stop arguing that the rules do not apply to you.
Either make a real history, or stop wasting the time of the staff on this site.

EDIT:
Also, true, you can't RB as a missing/merc without having been one this version,w hich you have not.
You also cannot be a non-shinobi, and being from a village this means you must go through their system.

 

[Keiji]

You seriously don't have to invent numerous NPCs just to have a history.
You'll have to answer those questions (not all of them mind you) in some manner or the other. That's a requirement on the site.
You could write that you had an uncle that you grew up with and then left to join the village. Bam, he doesn't have to an official NPC by any degree. He's just another role in your character history.
You'll have to clear this statement up for me. "I want to make a character, not make one up."
You want to make a character, but not make one up? Isn't that what you're already doing? You're already making up a character by making this application. So what's the problem there-in by simply giving him a history?

And for some, this is a tutorial in novel writing, for some this is novel writing practice just by staying active, others (and for the most I believe) this is a fun roleplaying site with an attached awesome community.
Every single person in this community has a character with a definite history, one with potential, one with hearty descriptions, others incredibly detailed down to every little bit describing the entire family tree. Great thing is, the thing they all have in common is that they took their applications serious, and wrote a history that enabled them to expand and still have some background that explained their character.

One of the most core essentials for any character is the history. And it's required to have a character. We're not going to bend the rules for you.
End of discussion.

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

This OCR is officially canceled. I need to talk to the Administrative Team to determine whether I'm still interested in returning.

 

[Raizo]

Locking away; please PM if you'd like to reopen this OCR if your thoughts change in the future!

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

Juzo said so

Reactivate me as is, please.

EDIT: Also, hi.

 

[Michi]

Re: Juzo said so

Unfortunately that cannot be done because you have been blacklisted from the Sunagakure community.

Council Link

 

[Aiyo Shinbatsu]

Re: Juzo said so

lol called it!

But anyway I do want to know my options. If I do rejoin, what does this mean? I have to force-retire? I thought the rule was you could keep a character through a blacklist so long as it was a part of the village already. Also, is appealing the blacklist an option? And am I allowed to know -why- I was blacklisted? Just any and all information would be wonderful, thanks.

EDIT: This new site is so confusing. I thought I edited this post, but apparently I edited my first post. But yeah, go back to that post to read my edit.

 

[Toraono Kuro]

Re: Juzo said so

http://ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=364&t=38414&p=157512#p157512

Post Tue Jul 15, 2014 2:44 am

Due to the outstanding quality of this application and the power that it implies via rp this character cannot be accepted in Suna. The unwillingness to comply with Sand Council's desire to write a reasonable character history in combination with recent behavior in relation to Cloud Council has given Sand Council enough concern that your presence in Sand is not within the best interests of the village and so it has been decided to blacklist you. As such this OCR and its originator are blacklisted from Sunagakure and must rebirth in another village.

Due to Sand council decision in order to return to the site you must pick a new village/origin. If another village will accept your name and origins so be it, but there can be no return to Sunagakure.

- There are -No Appeals for blacklisting- Only appeals for actual bans are allowed.
- Fate of your previous PC - (force retire, there is no auto-merc/missing unless the Sand council decides to allow it, Sand will not recommend auto merc.)