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[Kaoru]

Name: Kaoru
Age: 14
Gender: Female

Description: Kaoru is a 5"3' teenage girl, her brown hair can't quite decide if it should be curly or wavy. She may not look very strong but don't be fooled although she lack muscle mass she is still as strong as any other ninja. She isn't the girliest so she normally wears ninja gear, but rumors say she is the most beautiful girl in the village when she wears a kimono

History:Kaoru's past is a mystery she was orphaned at birth, left outside of the gates of Kumogakure she was rescued by one of the instructors of the academy. She spent five years in the orphange thats when she showed talent in the way of the ninja it was then that a shinobi came and adopted her, thus she has been trained in the art of the ninja since a very young age.She is a master of camouflage and ninja art. Unfortunately her guardian died of a mysterious disease when she was twelve, so she is now living by herself in the business district of the village. Because of her unique circumstances the kurokage has put off Kaoru's enrollment into the academy she finally has the chance to get out of her private lessonsand personal training to join a regular class. She is a very competitive girl and can't wait to test out how good she really is.

 

[Sato Daigo]

Welcome again. You may have been told that your name that you have chosen have been taken, but you can have a different surname/lastname. May I assist you on that?

 

[Kaoru]

yeah I have been but thats ok i already got it changed to Kaoru thank you though

 

[Kaoru]

So was I accepted. I'm confused (^_^

 

[Santaru Rin]

Hey there, Kaoru. Before we can begin, as you may not have seen, the history word count minimum is 150. If you can fluff it up a bit--perhaps describe who Kaoru's current guardians are and where she lives--we can get things rolling. Typically, an orphaned Cloud child would either go to an orphanage or be adopted, so perhaps she was adopted by some ninja who encouraged her to attend the academy.

 

[Kaoru]

oh ok I'll get right on that

 

[Kaoru]

ok I edited my original profile

 

[Kaoru]

Name: Kaoru
Age: 14
Gender: Female

Description: Kaoru is a 5"3' teenage girl, her brown hair can't quite decide if it should be curly or wavy. She may not look very strong but don't be fooled although she lack muscle mass she is still as strong as any other ninja. She isn't the girliest so she normally wears ninja gear, but rumors say she is the most beautiful girl in the village when she wears a kimono

History:Kaoru's past is a mystery she was orphaned at birth, left outside of the gates of Kumogakure she was rescued by one of the instructors of the academy. She spent five years in the orphange thats when she showed talent in the way of the ninja it was then that a shinobi came and adopted her, thus she has been trained in the art of the ninja since a very young age.She is a master of camouflage and ninja art. Unfortunately her guardian died of a mysterious disease when she was twelve, so she is now living by herself in the business district of the village. Because of her unique circumstances the kurokage has put off Kaoru's enrollment into the academy she finally has the chance to get out of her private lessonsand personal training to join a regular class. She is a very competitive girl and can't wait to test out how good she really is.

 

[Takaki Saeko]

Nice name, makes me think of good ol' Sex Hair from Amagami SS

Apologies for the Regent Commander of our ANBU wearing that particular face. Anyway, you do meet the word count, however there are a few minor spelling and terminology errors still in your application. I've taken the liberty of correcting them here, and if you use this, we will accept your application:

Name: Kaoru
Age: 13
Gender: Female

Description: Kaoru is a 5"3' teenage girl, her brown hair can't quite decide if it should be curly or wavy. She may not look very strong but don't be fooled although she lacks muscle mass she is still as strong as any other ninja. She isn't the girliest so she normally wears ninja gear, but rumors say she is the most beautiful girl in the village when she wears a kimono

History: Kaoru's past is a mystery she was orphaned at birth, left outside of the gates of Kumogakure she was rescued by one of the instructors of the academy. She spent five years in the orphanage, that's when she showed talent in the way of the ninja it was then that a shinobi came and adopted her, thus she has been trained in the art of the ninja since a very young age. She is a master of camouflage and ninja art. Unfortunately her guardian died of a mysterious disease when she was twelve, so she is now living by herself in the business district of the village. Because of her unique circumstances the Raikage has put off Kaoru's enrollment into the academy and she finally has the chance to get out of her private lessons and personal training to join a regular class. She is a very competitive girl and can't wait to test out how good she really is.

Name: Kaoru
Age: 14 (Academy ages are 8-13 by some arbitrary rule, sorry, can't do anything about that)
Gender: Female

Description: Kaoru is a 5"3' teenage girl, her brown hair can't quite decide if it should be curly or wavy. She may not look very strong but don't be fooled although she lack(s) muscle mass she is still as strong as any other ninja. She isn't the girliest so she normally wears ninja gear, but rumors say she is the most beautiful girl in the village when she wears a kimono

History: (space added) Kaoru's past is a mystery she was orphaned at birth, left outside of the gates of Kumogakure she was rescued by one of the instructors of the academy. She spent five years in the orphange (orphanage,) thats (that's) when she showed talent in the way of the ninja it was then that a shinobi came and adopted her, thus she has been trained in the art of the ninja since a very young age.(space added)She is a master of camouflage and ninja art. Unfortunately her guardian died of a mysterious disease when she was twelve, so she is now living by herself in the business district of the village. Because of her unique circumstances the kurokage (The leader of Cloud is called the "Raikage") has put off Kaoru's enrollment into the academy (and)she finally has the chance to get out of her private lessons (space added) and personal training to join a regular class. She is a very competitive girl and can't wait to test out how good she really is.

On behalf of Council, thank you for choosing Cloud! We hope that you will have an enjoyable roleplaying experience with us. Right now, the entire site is in a period of transition from an older format, so you will not be given starting yen at this point. However, we will add you to the usergroup and you will be able to participate in free roleplaying within the village. Once admin has worked out payment, jutsu, training, and battle systems, you will be given more information and your starting yen. In the meantime, please familiarize yourself with the basic setting of Cloud and its parent nation, Lightning Country. Threads can be found here.

 

[Kaoru]

Thank you sooo much ^_^