Asupekuto Renja AKA Aspect

[Aspect]

Name: Asupekuto Renja AKA Aspect
Age: 13
Physical Description: Tall for his age, Aspect is a ranged attacker, he constantly wears a cloak and no one has ever seen his face. He only would show his face to his dearest friends. He has blue eyes and brown hair. He is very thin as well, he weighs a little over 115 and is approximately 5'6" tall. He does have scars all over his body, most of them are burns, but there are a few cuts and tissue damage.
Mental Description: Aspect is mysterious, curious, sarcastic, cocky, and patient. He is mysterious in many ways, one of which is because no one has actually seen his face. He is also curious, he is easily distracted, and thus for, easy to catch of guard. He is very sarcastic and cocky, he is truly one of a kind. Finally he is patient, he is able to wait out time for something or someone to target of meet.
History: No one knows much about Aspect, what is known isn’t certain. He has scars from struggles he can’t remember, mental wounds that haven’t healed, and yet, through all this, he can’t remember what, this is what he seeks to find out, his past.

 

[Shieo]

First off. Welcome to NC!

To start off, there is some requirements that need to be met before we can approve the character. There's a larger 'How-To' that can be found: Here

To summarize

• We will need to know if you intend on starting as an Academy Student or as a Genin (As this reflects on word-count requirements on descriptions)
• For History; if you intend on starting as Academy Student you will need to reach a 150 Word-Count; at the moment you're at 43. If you intend on starting as Genin you will need to get to a Word-Count of 500. (If you need a tool to let you know where you're at you can find one here: https://wordcounter.net/
• For Physical & Mental Descriptions there is a requirement for 150 Word-Count each for Academy Student; and 500 Word-Count for Genin (Although we can sometimes make exceptions as long as it's decently fleshed out).

If you find yourself struggling to fulfill these word-counts, don't fret! We're here to help any way we can. And you can catch us in sending us a PM; or by joining our discord! (You can find an icon to the Discord on the main-page, right-hand side if you scroll down a bit).

Just some quick pointers from my experience:

Physical Description: It can help to bring to light some of his features. We appreciate the aim for mysteriousness, but I'm sure Avatar knows what he looks like! Going into some details like the colors, the materials, or even the differences between his shinobi attire and general attire are. After-all, everyone has to have a break once in awhile!

Mental Description: I find it can help to elaborate on things that he likes, admires, dislikes and perhaps 'what' caused him to start thinking the way he did. After-all people are creatures of their past and present. And it wouldn't hurt to get into some things like favorite foods, things he fears, etc! Just some ideas.

History: Some pointers that sort of tie into mental and physical description is he's thirteen years old. Plenty of things can happen in that time; touching base on things like who he was born to, what developed him into being the way his personality is. Or how did he get his scars? Expanding on things like what brought the allure into becoming a shinobi in the first place, or into enrolling into the Academy.

Otherwise, if you have any questions feel free to PM any of the Council Members in Cloud. Or by joining Discord and you can find us there!