Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Zen Chin

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My name is Chin zin, I am 5,3 with green eyes and black and green hair. I have a scar running down from my right eyebrow to my left cheek . when I was born both my parents died in a raid by a band of rouge ninja. The only memory I have of them is their screams of mercy . I was found by a ninja and put into a orphanage. When I grew older about eight or nine I ran away vowing to train my self to become a great ninja to take revenge on the rouges who killed my family. So for many years I lived in the forest living on fruit and the river water. I learned to adapt to nature feeding off its energy to train myself to be hard as a rock and firm but flowing like a river. I am know 15 standing in front of the mighty leaf village asking to further my skills as a ninja.
 

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Hi Chin Zin. I've come in to help you out with your character registration.

1: Please refer to Here for the format that we like to use.
2: The name Chin Zin, is acceptable, but please use the format used by the asian community with Family(Last) name first and Given(First) name following after that
3: I'm going to assume your character is a male.
4: Starting character age is between 8-13 years of age
5: After reading your history (which we would actually like it to be at least 300 words in length minimum) seems like a rather cliche motif of having your parents die by raiding bandits. It also doesn't explain how your character was the only survivor after the raiding party. Also, having your character being born outside the gates, is too, a rather overused cliche in Ninpocho. I wouldn't be against if your character's family was killed by a nuke/missing nin that entered Konoha and you got saved by an uber cool ninja, thus thrown into another family/orphanage within the village. But you cannot, currently, have your character from outside the village in an orphanage from nobody knows where.

Please follow the format and try again. Upon correcting this, please post your new character creation application as a reply instead of editing. Thanks!
 

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Name: Zen Chin

Age: 13

Gender: Male

General Description. I have sea green eyes and jet black hair , a scar running down my face when I was five from a explosion. I am wearing a black T-shirt with black cargo shorts. I am 5 foot 7. I am bit on the agile but muscular body type.
History: My name is Zen Chin; I was born to a loving family in the leaf village. My parents were very skilled ninja, my father was a medical ninja, and my mother was specialized in Tai jutsu. When I was about five my parents started to teach me in the ninja arts. I was to be the next great anbu or hokage they whispered to me every night before they put me to bed. One day I was playing with my mother and father in the house when one of my fathers exploding scrolls went off. My mother and father managed to cover me with their bodies to protect me from the explosion. Two other med ninja managed to find me under the rubble and my parent’s bodies when they pulled me out I had a big cut running down my face from my right eye to my left cheek. They took me to the orphanage in the leaf village. I stayed to myself; I am to shy to talk to the other kids. I exercised every day last eight years I grew to be 5foot 7 inches in height and I also expanded all my knowledge of all the ninja forums by reading books about ninjutsu to genjutsu but the ones I studied the most was medical and tai jutsu, it was to make my parents proud of me, and to keep my promise to become a great aunbu or hokage. I waited for the leaf counsel to say weather or not I was ready to start going to the ninja academy...
 

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Hey, we spoke in PM before.

1) Name:
On Ninpocho we like to make characters with Japanese names. That means you make your name using only the characters available in Japanese. Unfortunately, 'Zi' is not a sound we can make in Japanese. I might suggest 'Zen', or 'Jin' in place.

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The above is a list of characters (ka, ki, ku, ke, ko, etc) that Japanese has. Can you try to make your name within the above confinement? 'Chin' is fine, by the way.

You'll have to change your account name to reflect your character name.
So if you chose your family name to be 'Zen', then you account name would need to be 'Zen Chin' (last, first).
Here's the link to request the name change: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=97&t=938&start=90

2) History:
Everything looks fine except for one thing. On Ninpocho, everyone starts as from the very elementary level. This means we have no Jutsu to begin with, so it's impossible for your character to be proficient in Med/Tai/Nin/Gen right off the bat. This isn't a major change, as you can just as easily say that Chin aspired to be proficient in those areas. I just want to make sure you're not shocked once you're in-game, and you realize you have 0 techniques at game-start.

I hope everything makes sense, but if something doesn't, you know how to reach me.
Good luck Chin!
 
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