Gen Ryu(Stone) -> Jinba ittai(Cloud)

[Ryu Hime]

Old Character Name: Gen Ryu
Old Village/Missing: Stone
OCR Type: Retirement by suicide
Old IC Rank: MiT

New Character Name: Jinba ittai
Preferred Username: Jinba ittai
New Village: Cloud
New BL/CA: Inuzuka (Horse version)
Custom Class:
Stable Hand
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% Melee damage, 1 Free basic attack per round
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Evasion, Genjutsu Save, Genjutsu DC, Puppet Accuracy
Low: Ranged Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy
Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Medical
IC Rank: MiT

Character Age: 13
Gender: Female
Character's Physical Description: Jinba is a thirteen year old girl that has yet to really hit puberty. Her hair is red as a nice rip apple and extends down to her shoulders. When not preforming She wears a pair of overalls with a T-shirt underneath. She is always found with her equine companion. Her pony companion has a grey coat with red hair. Like Jinba has attributes of a horse her companion has the attributes of a human. Her pony wears her in a pair of twin braids, she wears a hoodie with holes for her ears to stick out and she has her ears pierced.

Character's Mental Description: Jinba is very influenced by the animal side inside her. She is extremely friendly; so much so that her average greeting is the rubbing of cheeks. She is submissive and will likely follow any order that she receives from a superior. She is also a gentle spirit and thus will refuse to harm anyone. However though she is gentle, friendly she is also wild. Nothing makes her happier than to run or ride. Not to get away from something or to get to somewhere, but just running/riding for the sake of it. To feel the sun beating on her back and the wind whipping through her hair is simply exhilarating.

Character History: Jinba ittai; her name translates to person and horse as one body. It describes the unity between steed and rider and it is a most fitting name for her. When one does not travel by foot, a horse is often the mode of transportation. Her family runs a stable in the outskirts of the village. Her family has been tending horse for generations. Each member of this family has one horse that they they create a bond with that exceeds the boundaries of horse and rider. Jinba is a young little girl who has made a pony into her companion.

Being the gentle spirit that she is there was little choice in what path she would take with in the shinobi world. With in the academy she took the classes and learned the jutsu required to enter the medical field. Unfortunately she failed the exam. She concluded that she, like many of the other students, was trying to rush though the academy and rank up quick. After being patient and taking a few more classes and mastering more of the medical jutsu, rather than just learning the minimum, she retook the exam and passed thus making her a mednin in training.

Clan Request Mochizuki Troupe

Death/Retirement Thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=573&p=201410#p201410
Old Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=559&t=40974
Old Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=561&t=41102
Old Dojo: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=560&t=40986

Special Usergroups:

Old Stats:
Agility: 525/525
Stamina: 515/525
Ninjutsu: 455/525
Taijutsu: 280/525
Genjutsu: 525/525
Chakra Control: 525/525
Stat Total: 2825
Asp: 125
Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: None, I had previous character for over 180 days
New Stats:
Agility: 525/525
Stamina: 515/525
Ninjutsu: 455/525
Taijutsu: 525/525
Genjutsu: 280/525
Chakra Control: 525/525
Stat Total: 2825
Asp: 125
New OOC Rank: S-Rank

Justu Mastery Swaps:
~E-Rank
Tourniquet (Will)-> Slash (Slash Tai)
Tool Shift (Pup-Player)-> [Keep]
False Surroundings (Visual)-> Dynamic Slash (Slash Tai)
Stun (Kinetic)-> Overhead Strike (Slash Tai)
Wasteful (Audial)-> Arcing Slash (Slash Tai)
Strike Aid (Pup-Sup)
Momentum Tackle (Pup-Off)

~D-Rank
Projectile Launcher (Pup-Off)-> Crimson Flash (Slash Tai)
Oil Sheen (Pup-Sup)-> Heavy Tow (Slash Tai)
Death's Embrace (Pup-Off)-> Mystical Hand (Medical)
Puppet Transformation (Pup-Player)-> Coagulation (Medical)

~C-rank
Magnet Missile (Pup-Off)-> System Shock (Medical)
Puppet Tent (Puppet Def)-> [Keep]
Channel Puppet (Pup-Player)-> Skeletal Fortification (Medical)
Verse of Darkness (Visual)-> [Keep]
Crippled (Kinetic)-> Anesthetic Infusion (Medical)
Hidden Smoke Bomb (Pup-Def)-> System Restoration (Medical)
Needle Shower (Pup-Off)
Deaf (Audia)
Puppet Clones (Pup-Player)
Mechanical Smack Down (Pup-Off)

~B-Rank
Terra Shift (Pup-Def)-> Mystical Force (Medical)
Puppet Barrier Replication (Puppet Sup)-> [Keep]
Vital force (Puppet Sup)-> [Keep]
Night Mare (Visual)-> [Keep]
Brown Secret Technique: Puppet Symbiosis (Kinjutsu)-> Medical Assistant (Medical)
Cylinder of Magic (Trap)-> Tranquilize (Medical)
Feint Strike (Pup-Off)-> Medical Ward (Medical)

~A Rank
Monzaemon Pandora Box (Puppet Sup)-> Angelic Blessing (Medical)
Puppet Fusion (Pup-Player)-> Torment of the Physical Plain (Will)

{edit: Hope you don't mind I added a Clan request. Just got someone to pm me clan information today. also notice I forgot the class bonus. I fixed that too]

 

[Shinrya Kitsune]

Medical rank approved.

 

[Junan]

Name: Approved, but don't you need a capital i?
BL: Approved (Horse version)
Class: Approved
Rank: Approved by Kitsune
Description: Approved
History: Approved
Clan: Will wait for Tomo/Tama

OOC Rank: Approved
Stats: Approved
Jutsu Swaps: Approved... need clarification though on the ones without a swap. Are you selling these?

Have contacted Tama and Kitsune (who I believe has gotten here before me) to approve/deny their parts

 

[Ryu Hime]

Indeed that I does need capitalization. If an admins wonders by this thread to change my name make it Jinba Ittai

As for the jutsu I'm not keeping at mastered, I was wondering if I can keep them as rank 1. expect for the Kinjutsu ones I'm definitely selling those.

 

[Morishige]

Everything looks good save for Karl's concerns. Approved

 

[Tanuki Rinko]

Clan Request: Not Approved

I'm sorry, but the clan request in this current state would have to be declined. Due to conflicts with your history and the history we have already established, we cannot accept this as is. Tama and I will pm with details.

 

[Ryu Hime]

[If the problem is blood the answer is simple. Will make her not blood related. Replace middle paragraph with this version of history]

On the mother side is the Mochizuki Troupe, who she was adopted into for quite some time. Such a clan is widely known as performer. It was from her mother that she inherited her lush red hair and her love of running. Her mother taught her how to maintain balance even while standing on the back of a moving horse. As time went by Ittai was able to perform a series of dance routine with a ribbon while on top of her equine companion.

 

[Suzuki Setsu]

Tomo and I wanted to iron out the Mochizuki part of your history via PM so this thread wouldn't get filled with back and forth posts. But since you either didn't finish reading the PM, or disregarded it I will post it here.

I'm afraid that your mother could not be a blood Mochizuki for the following reasons:

1) Sakara and Kokoro are not married.
2) Minako is married to Ryoji and would NOT cheat.
3) Sonoko is a part of the ANBU and has decided to not start a family until she retires. During the time when your character would have been conceived/born, Sonoko was on duty.
4) Kimiki is not married, and would most likely not have children even if she was.
5) Kiki and Koko are too young to have children, or at least an eight to thirteen year old child. Same with Tama.

You can still attempt to be a regular troupe member. However if you still wish to join, before editing your OCR, please pm your changed history so we can discuss it before you post it.<i></i>

Because of this however, Tomo and I have come to the consensus to not approve your character's history with the Mochizuki Troupe. Please remove the Troupe from your history. If you are still interested in joining though, you can attempt to ICly.

 

[Ryu Hime]

Okay I understand, part removed. Just trying to get this moving a little faster obviously I was just being impatient. ~Sweat drop~ Sorry about that. Probably will rp it. Actually I think I like that idea better. I'm odd like that sometimes. I was going to mention something about her two sisters here, but it hardly seems important now.

Also whose Karl? and any answer to my jutsu question?

 

[Junan]

I'm the almighty being known as Karl lol.

With the jutsu you've not indicated swapping you can keep those at Rank 1, I was just wanting to make sure that this is what you wanted rather than selling so that I knew how much to refund once everything was sold and this OCR gone through.

Needing to re-read everything however due to the changes made.

Name: Approved, still needs a capital i however this has been agreed to in a later post.
BL: Approved (Horse version)
Class: Approved
Rank: Approved by Kitsune
Description: Approved
History: Approved

OOC Rank: Approved
Stats: Approved
Jutsu Swaps: Approved

Will let council know we need a second approval here and then you can underway with everything

 

[Ryu Hime]

Everything looks good save for Karl's concerns. Approved

Wait isn't this my second approval?

 

[Junan]

It would have been, but because you edited things we need to get double approvals on everything again, it's to make sure that the less honest of us don't get the chance to include things which otherwise wouldn't be approved in their applications.

I'm sorry for how long this has taken, will shake the tree till someone falls out.

 

[Tsuirakuya Shashu]

Seems good to me. I'll fix you up.