[Inactivity Retirement] (Sand) Oshiro Tetsushi --> (Sand) Miyamoto Hiroshi

[Ginyama Senshiro]

Old Character Name: Oshiro Tetsushi
Old Village/Missing: Sand
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement
Last Known Where-abouts: Sand or Tea (Event); Tetsushi was in several threads last time I (the writer) logged in.
Old IC Rank: Academy Student

New Character Name: Miyamoto Hiroshi
Preferred Username: M. Hiroshi
New Village/Missing: Sand
New BL/CA: Pyromaniac

黒騎士の決意 (Kuro Kishi no Ketsui; lit. "Will of the Black Knight")
HP: (60+lvl+bonus) x stamina
CP: (45+lvl+bonus) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +2 Unarmed Accuracy; +10% Unarmed Damage
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Dodge (all), Genjutsu Save
Low: Genjutsu Difficulty, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Ranged Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: ANBU
IC Rank: ANBU (if possible; if not AiT works just as well)

Character Age: 25 yo
Gender: (Mostly) Straight
Sex: Male

Spoiler: Character's Physical Description

Towering over others at an impressive 6 ft 8 in and 255 lbs, Hiroshi's massive stature alone makes all but the most hardened of shinobi falter in their steps. His sun-kissed skin bears an abundance of scars--relics of his rambunctious youth--most of which are proudly worn as mementos of his indomitable tenacity through the years. His proudest embellishments are not wounds, however; they are instead gray-scale tattoos depicting open eyes located on the palms of his hands and in the middle of his chest.

Oddly enough for a natural-born native of the arid Kaze no Kuni, he is able to grow out his facial and body hair at an alarmingly fast rate, and as such he opts to trim and style his beard and sideburns rather than shave them off constantly (his mustache is a different story as he would prefer not to have a mouthful of his own mustache while eating). He also grooms the dark brown hair on top of his head so that all of it kept fairly short save for a twin set of bangs framing his hair line.

Of course, Hiroshi does not run about without any clothes whatsoever; he favors attire that is functional for his ANBU profession as opposed to fashionable among the Sunagakure elite, opting to wear a khaki outfit consisting of a sleeveless loose fitting hoodie, a pair of loose fitting breeches, and Greco-Roman-styled sandals.

Spoiler: Character's Mental Description

Despite constantly battling the entity known as Unmei within him for his own bodily autonomy, Hiroshi remains relatively calm and collected most of the time--'relatively' in this instance referring to his intolerance for willful ignorance (or, in layman's terms, blatant stupidity) and the aggravation such idiocy causes him.

However, when under extreme duress, it is not entirely unlikely that he will experience a sort of psychosis as he starts losing himself to Unmei. During such episodes, he will start mumbling to himself (or rather he and Unmei will begin conversing externally rather than internally) and possibly respond to any attempted interaction--friendly or otherwise--with hostility. In conjunction with his strong sense of justice for all, these rare occurrences, for better or for worse, prove to leave lasting impressions on both Hiroshi and the lives he touches.

Spoiler: Multiple Personality Application

Name: Unmei
Aliases: 恐怖のオオカミ (Kyōfu no ōkami; lit. Dread Wolf); 死の鳴き声 (Shi no Nakigoe; lit. Howl of Death); 雑種 (Zasshu; lit. Mongrel)

Spoiler: Image (Large)

Spoiler: Origin

Much like Zansatsu, Unmei was also once a powerful demonic entity that predates civilization and perhaps humanity itself. However, whereas Zansatsu wishes to incite the apocalypse upon the world so he can revel in wanton destruction and mayhem, Unmei merely seeks an end to civilization so that all living beings may continue to adapt instead of becoming complacent with the stagnancy of society.

Spoiler: Connection to Miyamoto Hiroshi

The Miyamoto clan dates back as far as the Sentama Clan and the days of Primus and the first men, and as such it should come as no surprise that both Unmei and Zansatsu share similar fates; whereas Zansatsu had been originally sealed with Sentama Reikazu and eventually Akatora Shin to further the pursuit of power by Father Soma, Unmei was sealed within Hiroshi by his own clan to keep the demonic entity guarded against Soma and the remainder of the Makaibatsu Cult. Hiroshi, though willing to bear host to the Dread Wolf, is still learning how to tame the savage beast within him.

Spoiler: Character History

Born into the Miyamoto clan to two loving parents, Hiroshi's childhood in Kaze no Kuni was fairly bland until one day at the age of six he was abducted by Makaibatsu cultists. Although the Miyamoto clan was swift to rescue the boy, the whole ordeal awakened the dormant Unmei within Hiroshi, provoking the young boy to go into a tantrum of titanic proportions while in the custody of his clan. Finally, his grandfather--the clan elder--contacted the Kazekage and his Steward and requested that Hiroshi be enrolled within the academy there so that he can learn to tame and harness the power of the Dread Wolf . . . or at least be contained by those more experienced in such matters.

While attending the academy, the fledgling student trained vigorously at the Throne of Bone and revived the Way of Infinite Intuition, which subsequently enabled him to utilize any corporeal weapon more effectively so long as additional mental effort was applied. Eventually, he used his newfound martial prowess and mental discipline to graduate into the ranks of the ANBU as an AiT at the age of twelve. Ten years later he became a full-fledged ANBU.

Clan Request: N/A

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: (LINK)
Old Training: (LINK)
Old Dojo: (LINK)

Special Usergroups: Sand (obviously, since I'm not switching villages this time )

Spoiler: Old Stats (after last Training)

Agility: 205
Stamina: 205
Ninjutsu: 205
Taijutsu: 205
Genjutsu: 205
Chakra Control: 205

ASP: 64

Old OOC Rank: B-Rank
Stat Cut: 0% (Inactivity Retirement)

Spoiler: New Stats (Including PL > ASP, if possible

Agility: 225
Stamina: 250
Ninjutsu: 225
Taijutsu: 225
Genjutsu: 125
Chakra Control: 175

ASP: 69

New OOC Rank: B-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Spoiler: Keep

Spoiler: Affinities (if possible)

D-Rank Minor/C-Rank Major: Fire
C-Rank Minor: Wind
1st Advanced Element: Kinesis

Spoiler: Ninjutsu

Non-Elemental (8/24 Owned; 8/24 Mastered)
(E) Transformation (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Body Switch (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Combination Transformation (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Crystal Eye (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Cancel (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Spirit Lantern (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Elemental Clone (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Barrier (Mastered) [LINK]

ANBU (6/14 Owned; 6/14 Mastered)
(D) Mask Summon (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Critical Exposure (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Snapshot (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Chakra Sense (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Active Camo (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Mental Infiltration (Mastered) [LINK]

Kinesis (6/12 Owned; 4/12 Mastered)
(C) Force Blast (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Psionic Assault (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Kinetic Infusion (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Force Guard (Mastered) [LINK]
(B) Mind Lock (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Reflection (Rank 1) [LINK]

Spoiler: Taijutsu

Unarmed (23/28 Owned; 16/28 Mastered)
(E) The One-Two (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Low Sweep (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Janken (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Uncalled-for Shot [LINK]
(D) Four-Hit Combo (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Spinning Wind (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Dynamic Entry (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Dynamic Finish (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Nut Buster (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Dragon Assault (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Tiger Hook (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Step-In Flash (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Shoryuken (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Tatsumaki Senpaku (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Roaring Combination (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Grapple (Mastered) [LINK]
(B) Suplex (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Primary Lotus (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Shadow Step Strike (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Seismic Toss (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Submission (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Spear Hand (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) 16-Hit Combo (Rank 1) [LINK]

Spoiler: Genjutsu

None Yet

Spoiler: Swap

None

Spoiler: Sell

Fire (9/17 Owned; 0/17 Mastered)
(E) Infernal Ember (Rank 1) [LINK]
(E) Thermal Maw (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Fireball (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Immolation Armor (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Combustive Seal (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Dragon Fire (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Searing Eruption (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Scalding Ash Cloud (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Heat Wave (Rank 1) [LINK]

Wind (9/17 Owned; 0/17 Mastered)
(E) Wind Slash (Rank 1) [LINK]
(E) Pressure Burst (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Whirlwind Spin (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Air Bullet (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Shredding Touch (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Wind Scythe (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Tempest (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Gale Force (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Wind Release (Rank 1) [LINK]

Other Refunds:

Spoiler: Keep

Spoiler: Advanced Shop

Ability Card (Carry Over)

Spoiler: Other

• Headset [LINK]
• Hidden Weapon [LINK]
• Pouch

Spoiler: Sell

Spoiler: Augments

• Vanguard[LINK]
• Steady [LINK]
• Vengeance [LINK]

Name of any Contract you currently own: N/A
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: N/A

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads? N/A

 

[Raizo]

Taken to council for review!

 

[Raizo]

So far we are satisfied with all of the OCR except for the following;


The Mental Description: We have some concern with how it is worded that we would be opening the door for some sticky situations for yourself and those you RP with, especially since you make it clear that he cannot be reasoned with in one of his episodes

If there is some resolution we can reach on that front that would essentially be the only thing halting this OCR's completion!

 

[Ginyama Senshiro]

To be clear, the first episode he has was prior to any shinobi training and self-discipline he may have now. However, I do see where it may cause some issues down the road . . . how is this? (Quoting whole post for ease of paperwork)

Old Character Name: Oshiro Tetsushi
Old Village/Missing: Sand
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement
Last Known Where-abouts: Sand or Tea (Event); Tetsushi was in several threads last time I (the writer) logged in.
Old IC Rank: Academy Student

New Character Name: Miyamoto Hiroshi
Preferred Username: M. Hiroshi
New Village/Missing: Sand
New BL/CA: Pyromaniac

黒騎士の決意 (Kuro Kishi no Ketsui; lit. "Will of the Black Knight")
HP: (60+lvl+bonus) x stamina
CP: (45+lvl+bonus) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +2 Unarmed Accuracy; +10% Unarmed Damage
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Dodge (all), Genjutsu Save
Low: Genjutsu Difficulty, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Ranged Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: ANBU
IC Rank: ANBU (if possible; if not AiT works just as well)

Character Age: 25 yo
Gender: (Mostly) Straight
Sex: Male

Spoiler: Character's Physical Description

Towering over others at an impressive 6 ft 8 in and 255 lbs, Hiroshi's massive stature alone makes all but the most hardened of shinobi falter in their steps. His sun-kissed skin bears an abundance of scars--relics of his rambunctious youth--most of which are proudly worn as mementos of his indomitable tenacity through the years. His proudest embellishments are not wounds, however; they are instead gray-scale tattoos depicting open eyes located on the palms of his hands and in the middle of his chest.

Oddly enough for a natural-born native of the arid Kaze no Kuni, he is able to grow out his facial and body hair at an alarmingly fast rate, and as such he opts to trim and style his beard and sideburns rather than shave them off constantly (his mustache is a different story as he would prefer not to have a mouthful of his own mustache while eating). He also grooms the dark brown hair on top of his head so that all of it kept fairly short save for a twin set of bangs framing his hair line.

Of course, Hiroshi does not run about without any clothes whatsoever; he favors attire that is functional for his ANBU profession as opposed to fashionable among the Sunagakure elite, opting to wear a khaki outfit consisting of a sleeveless loose fitting hoodie, a pair of loose fitting breeches, and Greco-Roman-styled sandals.

Spoiler: Character's Mental Description

Despite constantly battling the entity known as Unmei within him for his own bodily autonomy, Hiroshi remains relatively calm and collected most of the time--'relatively' in this instance referring to his intolerance for willful ignorance (or, in layman's terms, blatant stupidity) and the aggravation such idiocy causes him.

However, when under extreme duress, it is not entirely unlikely that he will experience a sort of psychosis as he starts losing himself to Unmei. During such episodes, he will start mumbling to himself (or rather he and Unmei will begin conversing externally rather than internally) and, while not so detached from reality that can't be reasoned with, he may possibly respond to any attempted interaction--friendly or otherwise--with hostility. In conjunction with his strong sense of self-awareness during these moments, these rare occurrences, for better or for worse, prove to leave lasting impressions on both Hiroshi and the lives he touches.

Spoiler: Multiple Personality Application

Name: Unmei
Aliases: 恐怖のオオカミ (Kyōfu no ōkami; lit. Dread Wolf); 死の鳴き声 (Shi no Nakigoe; lit. Howl of Death); 雑種 (Zasshu; lit. Mongrel)

Spoiler: Image (Large)

Spoiler: Origin

Much like Zansatsu, Unmei was also once a powerful demonic entity that predates civilization and perhaps humanity itself. However, whereas Zansatsu wishes to incite the apocalypse upon the world so he can revel in wanton destruction and mayhem, Unmei merely seeks an end to civilization so that all living beings may continue to adapt instead of becoming complacent with the stagnancy of society.

Spoiler: Connection to Miyamoto Hiroshi

The Miyamoto clan dates back as far as the Sentama Clan and the days of Primus and the first men, and as such it should come as no surprise that both Unmei and Zansatsu share similar fates; whereas Zansatsu had been originally sealed with Sentama Reikazu and eventually Akatora Shin to further the pursuit of power by Father Soma, Unmei was sealed within Hiroshi by his own clan to keep the demonic entity guarded against Soma and the remainder of the Makaibatsu Cult. Hiroshi, though willing to bear host to the Dread Wolf, is still learning how to tame the savage beast within him.

Spoiler: Character History

Born into the Miyamoto clan to two loving parents, Hiroshi's childhood in Kaze no Kuni was fairly bland until one day at the age of six he was abducted by Makaibatsu cultists. Although the Miyamoto clan was swift to rescue the boy, the whole ordeal awakened the dormant Unmei within Hiroshi, provoking the young boy to go into a tantrum of titanic proportions while in the custody of his clan. Finally, his grandfather--the clan elder--contacted the Kazekage and his Steward and requested that Hiroshi be enrolled within the academy there so that he can learn to tame and harness the power of the Dread Wolf . . . or at least be contained by those more experienced in such matters.

While attending the academy, the fledgling student trained vigorously at the Throne of Bone and revived the Way of Infinite Intuition, which subsequently enabled him to utilize any corporeal weapon more effectively so long as additional mental effort was applied. Eventually, he used his newfound martial prowess and mental discipline to graduate into the ranks of the ANBU as an AiT at the age of twelve. Ten years later he became a full-fledged ANBU.

Clan Request: N/A

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: (LINK)
Old Training: (LINK)
Old Dojo: (LINK)

Special Usergroups: Sand (obviously, since I'm not switching villages this time )

Spoiler: Old Stats (after last Training)

Agility: 205
Stamina: 205
Ninjutsu: 205
Taijutsu: 205
Genjutsu: 205
Chakra Control: 205

ASP: 64

Old OOC Rank: B-Rank
Stat Cut: 0% (Inactivity Retirement)

Spoiler: New Stats (Including PL > ASP, if possible

Agility: 225
Stamina: 250
Ninjutsu: 225
Taijutsu: 225
Genjutsu: 125
Chakra Control: 175

ASP: 69

New OOC Rank: B-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Spoiler: Keep

Spoiler: Affinities (if possible)

D-Rank Minor/C-Rank Major: Fire
C-Rank Minor: Wind
1st Advanced Element: Kinesis

Spoiler: Ninjutsu

Non-Elemental (8/24 Owned; 8/24 Mastered)
(E) Transformation (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Body Switch (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Combination Transformation (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Crystal Eye (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Cancel (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Spirit Lantern (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Elemental Clone (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Barrier (Mastered) [LINK]

ANBU (6/14 Owned; 6/14 Mastered)
(D) Mask Summon (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Critical Exposure (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Snapshot (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Chakra Sense (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Active Camo (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Mental Infiltration (Mastered) [LINK]

Kinesis (6/12 Owned; 4/12 Mastered)
(C) Force Blast (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Psionic Assault (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Kinetic Infusion (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Force Guard (Mastered) [LINK]
(B) Mind Lock (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Reflection (Rank 1) [LINK]

Spoiler: Taijutsu

Unarmed (23/28 Owned; 16/28 Mastered)
(E) The One-Two (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Low Sweep (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Janken (Mastered) [LINK]
(E) Uncalled-for Shot [LINK]
(D) Four-Hit Combo (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Spinning Wind (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Dynamic Entry (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Dynamic Finish (Mastered) [LINK]
(D) Nut Buster (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Dragon Assault (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Tiger Hook (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Step-In Flash (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Shoryuken (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Tatsumaki Senpaku (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Roaring Combination (Mastered) [LINK]
(C) Grapple (Mastered) [LINK]
(B) Suplex (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Primary Lotus (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Shadow Step Strike (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Seismic Toss (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Submission (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) Spear Hand (Rank 1) [LINK]
(B) 16-Hit Combo (Rank 1) [LINK]

Spoiler: Genjutsu

None Yet

Spoiler: Swap

None

Spoiler: Sell

Fire (9/17 Owned; 0/17 Mastered)
(E) Infernal Ember (Rank 1) [LINK]
(E) Thermal Maw (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Fireball (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Immolation Armor (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Combustive Seal (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Dragon Fire (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Searing Eruption (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Scalding Ash Cloud (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Heat Wave (Rank 1) [LINK]

Wind (9/17 Owned; 0/17 Mastered)
(E) Wind Slash (Rank 1) [LINK]
(E) Pressure Burst (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Whirlwind Spin (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Air Bullet (Rank 1) [LINK]
(D) Shredding Touch (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Wind Scythe (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Tempest (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Gale Force (Rank 1) [LINK]
(C) Wind Release (Rank 1) [LINK]

Other Refunds:

Spoiler: Keep

Spoiler: Advanced Shop

Ability Card (Carry Over)

Spoiler: Other

• Headset [LINK]
• Hidden Weapon [LINK]
• Pouch

Spoiler: Sell

Spoiler: Augments

• Vanguard[LINK]
• Steady [LINK]
• Vengeance [LINK]

Name of any Contract you currently own: N/A
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: N/A

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads? N/A

 

[Raizo]

Just realized that you don’t actually have a write up for obtaining your CA, could you please give us that to review? Or am I missing it?

 

[Ginyama Senshiro]

D'oh! I knew I was forgetting something; I'll mock something up shortly

 

[Ginyama Senshiro]

Basis for Pyromaniac in brief: because of Unmei's immense power, Hiroshi cannot fully contain the entity's power (represented by Pyromaniac's backlash).

Spoiler: Pyromaniac RP - WC 383

The young Hiroshi rocked back and forth in a ball within his family's modest abode as the flames began to engulf him. Though the fire did not harm him physically, containing them as well as Unmei had already taken its toll on his untrained chakra reserves and thus his stamina; soon he would falter in his vigil and fall asleep, unwillingly granting the Dread Wolf sealed within him complete dominance over his body.

If such a tragedy were to occur, the Miyamoto clan would have no choice but to severe Unmei's bond with Hiroshi, ending the boy's life in the process.

Tears begin to roll down the host's cheeks. "Please stop, Unmei-sama!" he begged the jinchuuriki sealed within to no avail. "I don't want to hurt anyone!"

The entity growled through Hiroshi's own body, taking the boy himself by surprise. "Be quiet, you sniveling pup!" Unmei spoke. "Why should I care what happens to this fetid atrocity you call civilization!?"

Despite being unable to fully comprehend the entity's verbosity, Hiroshi understood one thing at the very least--Unmei despised what humanity had done to itself. "Unmei-sama . . . please . . . there has to be a better way to heal than to hurt . . . "

Hiroshi flinched mentally as the Dread Wolf nipped his soul--a mere warning to not meddle with his affairs. "Even at such a young age, you dare defy my will!?"[/glow] he howled through the boy himself. "Do you not understand that I destroy so that others can rebuild!?"[/glow]

A moment of silence passed before Hiroshi spoke of his own accord again. "No, I don't . . . "

At that moment, Unmei felt pity for the boy and extinguished the inferno. "I see . . . very well then; until you understand why I exist, I shall merely be your guardian. However, be warned that my power exceeds that which a typical mortal is capable of; my mere presence within you will eventually ravage your body. Do you accept such a fate?"[/glow]

"If I can save my family and friends but not myself, . . . I'm okay with that."

Unmei chuckled as he relinquished full autonomy to Hiroshi, already content that the boy had developed a basic understanding of one of his tenants.

 

[Raizo]

This has been approved (name, ca, mental description that had been edited, swaps, keeps)

Based on the history provided I am approving AiT rank. Please request a name change and a banner change from the appropriate admin request boards! Re-Welcome to Sand!