Inuzuka Kotori [Sand] --> Okibi [Sand]

[Okibi]

Old Character name: Inuzuka Kotori

Old Character Village: Sand

Old Profile Topic Title: It... had :||: Kotori in it, I think.

Old Training Topic Title: Um..... it might have had the word Training in it...? Dont think her name was in it.

Old Dojo Topic Title: I dont remember =_= Didnt use this one much.

Any Relevant information that can aid us in finding your information: Like I said I didnt use my dojo much. Pretty sure all thats in it is my first minor element activation.

New Character Name: Okibi

New Village: Sand

Link to latest Voucher

: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=2290#p2290

 

[Santaru Rin]

General


Name: Kotori
Age: 13
Height: 4’4”
Weight: 80 lbs.
Gender: Female
Day of Birth: September 21
Natural Hair Color: Dark Brown
Natural Eye Color: Light Sea Green
Rank: Academy Student

*Note* Age in image is 14-15
Personal Info

Apearance:
Still young, and still small, Kotori reaches the shoulders the shoulders of most women, and the chests of the average man. Her hair has grown, and falls around her shoulders in what is usually a mass of messy waves. She hides her sea green eyes behind her long bangs, and has taken to wearing clothes that are much more appropriate for the desert heat.

Personality:
As a young girl, Kotori is very timid. Because she has grown up never having to do anything for herself, shes never had the need to speak up for herself either. Never getting to the leave the house on her own has kept her from interacting with many people, and thus her social skills are quite low at the moment. Sometimes she still stumbles over her words, but she is slowly starting to come out of her shell.

In her teenage years, after certain strange events, Kotori has become much more open, honest, and daring. She has gained a confidence which aids her in not only her quest to become a decent shinobi, but in everyday life as well.

History:
From birth, Kotori was small. Being born prematurely, her parents had to go to lengths greater than the norm to see her come home from the hospital. She was weak growing up as well. Kotori caught illnesses almost regularly, and thus, was rarely strong enough to handle objects heavier than a book on her own. As a result, the family household wound up with many broken this-and-thats over the years. Eventually, Kotori's parents simply took to doing everything for her, be it washing her before bedtime, feeding her, or even reading her a book. They never let her do anything on her own.

Being raised in such a way, its no wonder how Kotori came to be a shy, nervous, and self-doubting child. Her confidence was almost non-existent. As though to reflect this, Kotori took to wearing baggy clothes that were almost two times her size, despite her mothers efforts to dress her in girlier clothes. It wasnt so much that she didnt find the things her mother gave her pretty, but that she didnt have the confidence to think she could wear them properly. The baggier clothes simply made her feel more comfortable. And her mother never pushed her to think differently, too afraid of upsetting her daughters delicate disposition. Her father was no better. If he could have his way, he would carry her wherever she went.

Yet, in her life, there was one person who didnt treat her like she was a breakable doll. He was an older man, but strong, and very loud spoken. He had odd markings on his cheeks which were always an interest to Kotori. Whenever he visited, she spent hours sitting beside him, touching them while he told her stories of his adventures, his 'missions' he called them. He always told them to her in his loud voice too, never fearing to scare her.

This man had a companion who could always be found in his presence. She was old too, just as healthy and strong as the old man, but walked on four legs instead of two. A canine companion; a cayote, the old man had told her. Larger than any of the pictures she had seen in her books, Kotori had been afraid of her at first, but the she-cayote never once bore her fangs or even so much a woofed at her. She was always gentle, always docile, as though she knew that Kotori would be afraid of anything more. But, once the first hurtle was overcome, even she lost her restraint around Kotori, and would regularly flop herself in the girls lap and lick her pale cheeks, much to the dismay of her parents.

The old man, and his canine companion. Her grandfather, who was a retired shinobi, and his retired ninja-dog partner. When she was old enough to understand the concept, Kotori asked why neither of her parents were like him: ninja. They said they never wanted to be, that the life of a ninja was too violent, too bloody for the likes of them. Whenever she asked her grandfather, he would laugh heartily and agree; yes the life of a shinobi was indeed wrought with danger and violence. She didnt understand how he could say such things and laugh at the same time. He would simply say to her "Its also exciting."

When she turned ten, it was her grandfather who convinced her to take a shot at this 'exciting' life. At first, she was completely against the idea. Her? A ninja? Why, the thought was completely against everything she knew about herself! She was not strong, nor was she particularly smart, and she definitely wasnt brave. How could she possibly become a ninja? All to which her grandfather replied, "You are more than you think you are, Little Bird." And he left it at that. He didnt bring it up again beyond that time, but apparently, he knew that it was all that needed to be said.

Kotori thought about that conversation with her grandfather endlessly. He thought she could do it? Could she? Maybe... maybe if she tried hard enough, she could? She second guessed herself countlessly, but eventually...

Three weeks later, on one of the nights that her grandfather was visiting, she brought the subject up at the dinner table. Her parents were aghast, distraught, and completely against at the idea. Her grandfather laughed heartily, like always, and somehow convinced them, her nervous beyond nervous parents, that she could do it. It took a few hours, but eventually, they caved in to his charismatic persuasions. Kotori would enroll in the ninja academy.

And that is where her story would truly begin.

Hobbies:
Drawing and Painting

Likes
Things

Dislikes
Stuff

Statistics

Level: 5

Health Points: 5000
Chakra Points: 1720

Agility: 100/100
Stamina: 100/100
Ninjutsu: 50/100
Taijutsu: 98/100
Genjutsu: 8/100
Chakra Control: 43/100

Power level: 399
Stat Average: 65
Action Points: 1.31

Class
The Sleeping Beast
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (35+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +1 Accuracy and +1.5 Dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy, Spell Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Evasion
Low: Genjutsu Difficulty

Bloodline: Inuzuka

ABILITIES
Quick Reaction

NINJUTSU
Level 1
Transformation - Rank 3/3
Body Switch - Rank 3/3
Water Gun - Rank 1/3

Level 2

Level 3

Level 4

Level 5

Level 6

Level 7

Level 8

E Rank

D Rank
Shredding Touch - Rank 1/3
Electrocution - Rank 1/3
Electroshock - Rank 1/3
Cancel - Rank 1/3

C Rank

B Rank

A Rank

GENJUTSU
Level 1

Level 2

Level 3

Level 4

Level 5

Level 6

Level 7

Level 8
TAIJUTSU
Level 1
Angry Slash - Rank 1/3

Level 2
Dynamic Entry - Rank 3/3

Level 3
Janken - Rank 1/3
4 Hit Combo - Rank 1/3
Dynamic Scratch - Rank 1/3
Rabid Claw - Rank 1/3
Speed Boost - Rank 1/3
Strength Boost - Rank 1/3

Level 4
Lethal Lunge - Rank 1/3

Level 5

Level 6

Level 7

Level 8

Equipment

1:Kaiken
2: Kawarimi Target
3:
4:
5:
Projectile Holster: Shuriken

Kotori's Relationship Table

Mio-san: She's really nice! She helped me buy formula for Kouun when he was still a pup and I couldnt afford it! Id definitely like to see more of her.

Kinnaku-sensei: Sensei jumped in front of a knife (my own dagger!) for me during my lesson. I think its safe to say shes pretty cool.

Zetsumei-san: I still think he has awesome hair; its so different! I hope he likes the good luck charm I'm making for him... Kouun thinks hes moody, but I think theres more to him than that!

Anku-san: This guy... he seems nice, if not a little odd. Not that theres anything wrong with that! His tattoos are interesting too.

Kensai-san: He seemed very knowledgeable, maybe a little haughty, but still nice. He helped us get into the secret back rooms in the library!

Kenta-san: Another nice guy! He had a lot of swords, which I thought were interesting.

To be continued!

No Dojo Topic.

Training topic shows:

Taijutsu: 100/100
Ninjutsu: 81/100

Please update stats with this information.

 

[Takahashi Aki]

yen: 17625
Masteries: 3

Active before the hack? Oh yes.

 

[Takahashi Aki]

+700 stats
+23000 Yen
Proceed to C rank

 

[Okibi]

Old Character Name: Inuzuka Kotori
Old Village: Sand
Old Character Class (if you have one):

The Sleeping Beast
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (35+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +1 Accuracy and +1.5 Dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy, Spell Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Evasion
Low: Genjutsu Difficulty

Old BL/CA (if you have one): Inuzuka

Preferred New Username (check for availability first if you can):

New Character Name: Okibi
New Village: Sand
New Character Class:

The Okibi Theory
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (35+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +1 Accuracy and +1.5 Dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy, Spell Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Evasion
Low: Genjutsu Difficulty

New BL/CA: Inuzuka
* * * * *

Reason that the new BL/CA matches your character: N/A Get it for free right?
ANBU/Med-Nin/AIT/MIT?: Just passed my genin exam... I can haz genin?

* * * * *

Age: 15
Gender: Female
Quick Character Description:

Spoiler

Physical: Due to her life spent in the wild - hunting for her food, living off the land - Okibi has a certain type of physicality about her. She's slightly shorter than your average fourteen year old, standing at five feet and one inch, and has a lanky build, lined with muscle gained from years of harsh living. Foraging through dirt and shrubs has left her fingernails with a perpetual smear of mud on and under them, some of them slightly chipped at the ends. Her hands and feet are rough, but what else can be expected when you live outdoors with nothing to wear on your feat, and nothing to take care of your skin?

Not that it ever bothered her.

Okibi's hair is nothing short of a lions mane. Even when she was young, merely a toddler, she could nearly lose herself in the frizzy curls. It's color, a blazing mixture of reds, blondes and everything in between, has kept its luster through the years, even without the upkeep that comes with... civilized living. Her skin is sun kissed, and her cheeks and shoulders and spattered with just a hint of freckles. Her eyes, sometimes lost in the fiery mess of her hair, are like glimmering emeralds - the purest green you will ever see - sparked with a wantonness that came only from the kind of life she has lived.

Student/Genin
Okibis has gone through many changes since she and Seven became part of Sunagakure. Because she has to, she wears clothes (although sparingly) almost all the time, as much as she hates it. Over the months, she has grown a few inches and put on some healthy pounds, thanks to the constant availability of food.

However, there has been a couple drastic changed in her appearance, thanks to her inability to tell her curiosity "No." A 'science experiment' gone wrong resulted in an explosion that somehow affected the melanin in her eyes and hair, turning them pink and purple respectively. She now looks like someone dunked her in molten candy.

Personality: Okibi's personality fits her appearance to a tee. As wild and crazy as her hair is, so is she. Since she was young she has struggled with an impulsive recklessness that has gotten her into sticky situations on more than one occasion. She is not, however, a mean hearted person - though sometimes her actions might say differently. Because of her propensity for impulsive and reckless behavior... she might step on some toes now and then. Having grown up with no human contact whatsoever, she isnt the best when it comes to social interaction. Okibi grows bored very quickly when people start to ramble.

And then there's her temper. Of course someone with a personality as bright and fiery as hers would have a temper to match right? She doesnt lose it all too easily, or very often, but you could equate her to a ticking time bomb, once you get that fuse lit.

Character History:

Spoiler

Okibi's history cannot be properly told without first delving into that of her Kepper's. However, it can still be done. Okibi was found abandoned in the wild when she but a scant two summers old. Her Keeper and companion, by some strange luck, was the one to come across her rather than some hungry beast. It was her cries that had drawn him, thankfully, before anything else.

There isnt much more to say about the girl's backstory really. She was raised by her Keeper in the wilds of wind country, running from larger predators, and living as a predator to the smaller creatures. In all her fourteen years she had never been introduced to other humans, perhaps because her Keeper wished to 'keep' her from the soils of human civilization. Perhaps not. She didnt know, and she never asked. Because of this however the girl has grown up without the kind of knowledge any normal human girl her age would have, such as... human speech. Indeed, the only language she knew was that of the beasts that roamed Wind Country. Could that be called a setback? Who could say.

Yes that history sucks. I've never put much effort into backstories, Id rather play it out in real time!

* * * * *

Death thread: N/A
Profile thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=59&t=826
Training thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=61&t=2866
Dojo thread: Havent made one yet.

* * * * *

Usergroups:

* * * * *

Jutsu Swaps:

Angry Slash [Rank 1] --> Spinning Wind [Rank 1]
Dynamic Scratch [Rank 1] --> Full Circle [Rank 2] Spending 1 Mastery point
Rabid Claw [Rank 1] --> Cross Rip [Rank 2] Spending 1 Mastery point
Speed Boost [Rank 1] --> Crimson Flash [Rank 2] Spending 1 Mastery point
Strength Boost [Rank 1] --> Nut Buster [Rank 1]
Lethal Lunge [Rank 1] --> Shoryuken [Rank 1]

Now, I will spend some of my +700 stats to rank up 3 more jutsu to qualify for B rank!

Nut Buster [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 8 points
Spinning Wind [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 8 points
Shoryuken [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 10 points

Total Points Spent: 26 points

Total Points Left: 674

Current Stats (state respective stat cap):
OLD STATS

Agility: 100/100
Stamina: 100/100
Ninjutsu: 81/100
Taijutsu: 100/100
Genjutsu: 8/100
Chakra Control: 43/100

NEW STATS (Proceeding to B rank - after jutsu swaps/rank ups - with +674 Stat Points)

Agility: 300/300 Allocated 200 points
Stamina: 200/300 Allocated 100 points
Ninjutsu: 106/300 Allocated 25 points
Taijutsu: 300/300 Allocated 200 points
Genjutsu: 100/300 Allocated 92 points
Chakra Control: 100/300 Allocated 57 points

Total PL: 1106

 

[Hanone]

Hi dear!

Name, village, genin ranks approved.
New stats are approved.
Jutsu swaps are also approved.

Your Class is wrong. You have 80 for your points right now which means you should have 1 in high, 0 in low and the rest in average. However, if you would prefer, change your points to 85 and leave your high/low/avg as is.
Jutsu swaps. The bonuses are fine.

After you decide on that, you now have vet class (yay!) so you can add +5 modifiers to BOTH your cp and hp modifiers.

Edit: and it seems you were already given yen, so.. yen given!

Please don't just edit, make sure to repost your entire OCR with the changes.

 

[Okibi]

Old Character Name: Inuzuka Kotori
Old Village: Sand
Old Character Class (if you have one):

The Sleeping Beast
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (35+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +1 Accuracy and +1.5 Dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy, Spell Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Evasion
Low: Genjutsu Difficulty

Old BL/CA (if you have one): Inuzuka

Preferred New Username (check for availability first if you can):

New Character Name: Okibi
New Village: Sand
New Character Class:

The Okibi Theory (Veteran)
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (40+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +2 Accuracy and +2.5 Dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy, Spell Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Genjutsu Difficulty, Evasion
Low:

New BL/CA: Inuzuka
* * * * *

Reason that the new BL/CA matches your character: N/A Get it for free right?
ANBU/Med-Nin/AIT/MIT?: Just passed my genin exam... I can haz genin?

* * * * *

Age: 15
Gender: Female
Quick Character Description:

Spoiler

Physical: Due to her life spent in the wild - hunting for her food, living off the land - Okibi has a certain type of physicality about her. She's slightly shorter than your average fourteen year old, standing at five feet and one inch, and has a lanky build, lined with muscle gained from years of harsh living. Foraging through dirt and shrubs has left her fingernails with a perpetual smear of mud on and under them, some of them slightly chipped at the ends. Her hands and feet are rough, but what else can be expected when you live outdoors with nothing to wear on your feat, and nothing to take care of your skin?

Not that it ever bothered her.

Okibi's hair is nothing short of a lions mane. Even when she was young, merely a toddler, she could nearly lose herself in the frizzy curls. It's color, a blazing mixture of reds, blondes and everything in between, has kept its luster through the years, even without the upkeep that comes with... civilized living. Her skin is sun kissed, and her cheeks and shoulders and spattered with just a hint of freckles. Her eyes, sometimes lost in the fiery mess of her hair, are like glimmering emeralds - the purest green you will ever see - sparked with a wantonness that came only from the kind of life she has lived.

Student/Genin
Okibis has gone through many changes since she and Seven became part of Sunagakure. Because she has to, she wears clothes (although sparingly) almost all the time, as much as she hates it. Over the months, she has grown a few inches and put on some healthy pounds, thanks to the constant availability of food.

However, there has been a couple drastic changed in her appearance, thanks to her inability to tell her curiosity "No." A 'science experiment' gone wrong resulted in an explosion that somehow affected the melanin in her eyes and hair, turning them pink and purple respectively. She now looks like someone dunked her in molten candy.

Personality: Okibi's personality fits her appearance to a tee. As wild and crazy as her hair is, so is she. Since she was young she has struggled with an impulsive recklessness that has gotten her into sticky situations on more than one occasion. She is not, however, a mean hearted person - though sometimes her actions might say differently. Because of her propensity for impulsive and reckless behavior... she might step on some toes now and then. Having grown up with no human contact whatsoever, she isnt the best when it comes to social interaction. Okibi grows bored very quickly when people start to ramble.

And then there's her temper. Of course someone with a personality as bright and fiery as hers would have a temper to match right? She doesnt lose it all too easily, or very often, but you could equate her to a ticking time bomb, once you get that fuse lit.

Character History:

Spoiler

Okibi's history cannot be properly told without first delving into that of her Kepper's. However, it can still be done. Okibi was found abandoned in the wild when she but a scant two summers old. Her Keeper and companion, by some strange luck, was the one to come across her rather than some hungry beast. It was her cries that had drawn him, thankfully, before anything else.

There isnt much more to say about the girl's backstory really. She was raised by her Keeper in the wilds of wind country, running from larger predators, and living as a predator to the smaller creatures. In all her fourteen years she had never been introduced to other humans, perhaps because her Keeper wished to 'keep' her from the soils of human civilization. Perhaps not. She didnt know, and she never asked. Because of this however the girl has grown up without the kind of knowledge any normal human girl her age would have, such as... human speech. Indeed, the only language she knew was that of the beasts that roamed Wind Country. Could that be called a setback? Who could say.

Yes that history sucks. I've never put much effort into backstories, Id rather play it out in real time!

* * * * *

Death thread: N/A
Profile thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=59&t=826
Training thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=61&t=2866
Dojo thread: Havent made one yet.

* * * * *

Usergroups:

* * * * *

Jutsu Swaps:

Angry Slash [Rank 1] --> Spinning Wind [Rank 1]
Dynamic Scratch [Rank 1] --> Full Circle [Rank 2] Spending 1 Mastery point
Rabid Claw [Rank 1] --> Cross Rip [Rank 2] Spending 1 Mastery point
Speed Boost [Rank 1] --> Crimson Flash [Rank 2] Spending 1 Mastery point
Strength Boost [Rank 1] --> Nut Buster [Rank 1]
Lethal Lunge [Rank 1] --> Shoryuken [Rank 1]

Now, I will spend some of my +700 stats to rank up 6 more jutsu to qualify for B rank! According to this post, the mastery point --> stat point conversion can work in reverse, so~

Nut Buster [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 7 points
Spinning Wind [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 7 points
Shoryuken [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 7 points
Transformation [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 7 points
Body Switch [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 7 points
Dynamic Entry [Rank 1] --> [Rank 2] = 7 points

Total Points Spent: 42 points

Total Points Left: 658

Current Stats (state respective stat cap):
OLD STATS

Agility: 100/100
Stamina: 100/100
Ninjutsu: 81/100
Taijutsu: 100/100
Genjutsu: 8/100
Chakra Control: 43/100

NEW STATS (Proceeding to B rank - after jutsu swaps/rank ups - with +658 Stat Points)

Agility: 300/300 Allocated 200 points
Stamina: 200/300 Allocated 100 points
Ninjutsu: 106/300 Allocated 25 points
Taijutsu: 300/300 Allocated 200 points
Genjutsu: 84/300 Allocated 76 points
Chakra Control: 100/300 Allocated 57 points

Total PL: 1090

 

[Hanone]

Okay, all looks good now. Waiting on second approval.

 

[Okibi]

I just realized I botched the points on my class, so I redid it!

The Okibi Theory (Veteran)
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (40+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +2 Accuracy, +5% Melee Damage, +1 Dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy, Spell Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Genjutsu Difficulty, Evasion
Low:

^ Those are in the 3 point column, just to be clear!

 

[Hanone]

Okay, looks fine. Approved.

 

[Takahashi Aki]

That'll do, that'll do.