Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Jinba Ittai-> Hakuren [VOID]

Ryu Hime

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Old Character Name: Jinba Ittai
Old Village/Missing: Cloud
OCR Type: Early Retirement
Old IC Rank: MiT

New Character Name: Yamanaka Hakuren
Preferred Username: Hakuren
New Village: Cloud
New BL/CA: Quick Learner
Custom Class:
Spa Personel
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +1 ability slot
High: Range Accuracy
Average: Evasion, Genjutsu Save, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Melee Accuracy
Low: Puppet Accuracy, Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Medical
IC Rank: Mednin
Mednin Specialties: Chakra System [Experienced level]
Despite Hakuren and Aroe not inheriting the Yamanaka abilities, as kids they were still taught key skills that were taught to every other member of the clan. Their parents thought they would at least learn something and they did. The knowledge they would learn here would later help them in their career goals in the future. One of the few skills they took a knack too was senbon wielding. Most Yamanaka use flower stems as senbon, which allows the to poison their opponent. However the clan was not satisfied with simply poisoning for there is so much more potential for such a simple weapon. A senbon is a key tool in acupuncture; with certain knowledge you can paralyze your opponent. For years they had to study the chakra system and memorize each pressure point in the human body.

Hakuren and Aroe can still remember sitting in a room full of kids around their own age. One of the older members of the clan would draw a chart on the human chakra system onto the chalkboard. With a pointer the teacher would strike a point it the chakra system, look at Haruken with a very stern look and ask her with a firm voice, "Haruken! Name this point." Haruken swore he only calls on her because he knows she doesn't know the answer.

Nervously Hakuren would stand up and give her best guess. "Keimon the gate of joy, sir" With the teachers frown she instantly knew she was wrong.

"That is incorrect. I suggest you study hard tonight for there will be a quiz at the end of this week." Hakuren gives a shy nod and sits down. The teacher would then look at Hakuren's twin sister Aroe. Aroe was far better at remembering these things. It just seemed unfair to Hukaren. "Aroe can you give us the correct answer?"

With a big smile Aroe stands up and proclaims, "That is Kaimon the gate of Opening. It is the first of the eight inner gates." And of coarse she was right for she was always right.

"That is correct Aroe excellent job." The teacher would then praise her and she would sit down. "Hukaren why can you be more like your sister here?" Hakuren was jealous this came so easily for her but thankfully Aroe always helps her study after class. Eventually Hakuren knew the subject as well as Aroe did which definitely helped in the exams.

It was not until the Med-nin in training years that they realize that acupuncture had healing qualities. Hakuren found a medical text book on massage therapy, "Hey look we can divert chakra to focus on a injury to make it heal quicker with the stuff we learned from the clan. We can recover a person that had their chakra points blocked and even stimulate pleasure rather than pain." Also they realized they did not need weapons to do any of this. All they require were there hands to preform what is called acupressure. They then begin looking at more books on the subject and for some time they studied and practiced several forms of massages; on each other of coarse. This thus became their first specialty, which allowed them to apply for the Med-nin exam. once they became an official med-nin they did more detailed studies an even decide to put specialty into practice. Hakuren and Aroe would make a job out of there specialty by preforming acupressure on other shinobi. Soon the two of them got the own offices in the hospital as massage therapists. But they will need more practice if the what to master the art form.

Character Age: 30
Gender: Female
Character's Physical Description: Hakuren long blue hair held by a white head band across her forehead. Her skin is soft and smooth with the use of various herbal medicines that maintains her youthful beauty. She wears very little make up; a little lip stick and eye shadow. She has a nice hourglass figure with nothing excessively large or thin. She wears what looks to be a nurse uniform with a white lotus embroidered on the right side. Hakuren is often seen with her twin sister who is almost identical except her hair is pink.

Character's Mental Description: Both Hakuren and her twin sister Aroe are proud of there accomplishments. They have worked hard to get this far it the medical field. they enjoy there work at the spa using there talents in the medical field in not only healing but relaxing ways. A shinobi life is full of stress with one not even knowing for certain if they will come back from a mission alive. Such built up tension is unhealthy and as med-nin under the General Practice Division they seek to treat these tensions before they turn into something major.

Character History: Due to the fact Hakuren and Aroe never inherited the Yamanaka talent they were constantly picked on be the other kids in the clan. However instead of descending into misery they were determined to rise above it. They will make a name for themselves, but that doesn't mean the bullying did not have any negative effects on them. No the constant teasing and hitting from the older kids made them timid. They will strive to prove there worth as long as it did not mean they had to fight. So while the other academy students played, they studied day and night. Among the three field they could go down the answer was obvious. To most of the students dismay the MiT exam was a written one with a couple of essay questions at the end.

There MiT years was mostly spent in the hospital as receptionist, which is not nearly as easy as it sounds. It's more then just sitting behind a desk all day. Its all paperwork. Organizing appointments, medical histories, patient logs, doctor notes, research documents. A knowledge of medical therms was a must and medical field plenty of acronyms know like DVT (deep vein thrombosis). They learn quickly that this was primarily what the medical field was. Half of a doctor job was practicing there field of expertise and the other half was paperwork. On their off hours they spent their time observing a superior member at work while taking detail notes.

Finally after a couple of years they were ready for their medical exam. They expected to do something in the hospital, instead they were lead outside the village to a location the was hit by a mud slide from the weeks of rain they have been having. In short they were to do field work. They had to find and rescue survivors in the heavy rain, get them to the medical tent and treat them with far less resources then what they would have at the hospital. They had to learn to make do with you got. Guys got a broken leg and you don't have a splint, find to pieces of wood, rip off your sleeve and make one. It was the most grueling experience they ever done and will complain about paperwork ever again. When they passed they chose to stay in the hospital.


Death/Retirement Thread: Immediate conversion to Inpc
Old Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=44518
Old Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=44561
Old Dojo: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=44567

Special Usergroups: none

Old Stats:
Agility: 525/525
Stamina: 515/525
Ninjutsu: 455/525
Taijutsu: 280/525
Genjutsu: 525/525
Chakra Control: 525/525
Stat Total: 2825
Asp: 195
Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: 565 - 195-24 = 346

New Stats:
Agility: 425/525
Stamina: 415/525
Ninjutsu: 455/525
Taijutsu: 449/525
Genjutsu: 210/525
Chakra Control: 525/525
Stat Total: 2479
New OOC Rank: A-Rank

Justu Mastery Swaps:
~E-Rank
Tourniquet (Will)-> Slash (Slash Tai)-> Unforeseen Strike (Range)
Tool Shift (Pup-Player)-> Curve Shot (Range)
Dynamic Slash (Slash Tai)-> Piercing Shot (Range)
Overhead Strike (Slash Tai)-> 6 points
Arcing Slash (Slash Tai)-> 6 points
Strike Aid (Pup-Sup)-> 6 points
Momentum Tackle (Pup-Off)-> 6 points

~D-Rank
Crimson Flash (Slash Tai)-> Disillusion Shot (Range)
Heavy Tow (Slash Tai)-> Bounce Shot (Range)
Mystical Hand (Medical)-> [Keep]
Coagulation (Medical)-> [Keep]

~C-rank
System Shock (Medical)-> [Keep]
Puppet Tent (Puppet Def)-> Counter Shot (Range)
Skeletal Fortification (Medical)-> [Keep]
Verse of Darkness (Visual)-> Tracking Beacon (Range)
Anesthetic Infusion (Medical)-> [Keep]
System Restoration (Medical)-> [Keep]
Needle Shower (Pup-Off)-> Sly Silver (Projectile)
Deaf (Audia)-> Sinister Steel (Projectile)
Puppet Clones (Pup-Player)-> Silver Stream (Projectile)
Mechanical Smack Down (Pup-Off)-> Shadow Dance (Buff)

~B-Rank
Mystical Force (Medical)-> [Keep]
Puppet Barrier Replication (Puppet Sup)-> Grapple Shot (Range)
Vital force (Puppet Sup)-> Body Flicker Shuriken (Projectile)
Night Mare (Visual)-> Silver Cloud (Projectile)
Medical Assistant (Medical)-> [Keep]
Tranquilize (Medical)-> [Keep]
Medical Ward (Medical)-> [Keep]

~A Rank
Angelic Blessing (Medical)-> [Keep]
Torment of the Physical Plain (Will)-> Terra Firma Shot (Range)
(Same as last time. Would like to keep mastered jutsu being swapped out at rank 1)

Edit: Previous history moved to spoiler under medical rank. New history written
 

Tsuirakuya Shashu

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Re: Jinba Ittai-> Hakuren

You still need to buy and/or display on your shelf:

Terra Firma Shot
Body Flicker Shuriken
Grapple Shot
Silver Cloud

Other than that everything else looks ok. We'll still need Med-nin approval as well as fixing up the items listed, then I can fix you up.
 

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Re: Jinba Ittai-> Hakuren

Medical rank not approved.

You need to flesh it out more. A whole darn lot more. You have a tiny blurb about actually being a mednin, and then its not even a proper mednin, its a glorified masseuse.
What did she do during her MiT time? What happened in the exam? What has she done in the medical branch since she passed it? Remember, mednins are expected to work at the hospital, not the local mob-supported "massage" clinic.

Flesh it out more, then call me in the morning. (Heh. Doctor humor.)
 

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Re: Jinba Ittai-> Hakuren

Got things displayed and history focuses more on their medical experiences.

{I would like to put this on hold for the time being}
 

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Re: Jinba Ittai-> Hakuren

After much deliberation I have decided to go with an old character rather than a new one. Please refer to this thread http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=366&t=44922
 

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