Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

Current Ninpocho Chronicles Time:

Kane --> Tetsu {Need Processing}

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Old Character Name: Kane
Old Village/Missing: Merc/Missing
OCR Type: Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: Moon country
Old IC Rank: S-rank

New Character Name: Isaki Tetsu
Preferred Username: Tetsu
New Village: Merc
New BL/CA: Hashigaki
Custom Class:
Custom Class said:
Code:
[u]Class Name[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (55+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (45+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +4 Gen DC
[i]High:[/i] Gen DC
[i]Average:[/i] evasion, gen save, melee acc, nin acc
[i]Low:[/i] Ranged acc, Puppet acc
Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main branch
IC Rank: Merc

Character Age: 20
Gender: male
Character's Physical Description: Tetsu stands at a standard five foot seven inches. He has short spikey hair which was covered up by a gray hoody at all times. Behind black sunglasses which have never been removed are Tetsu’s silver, yet blind eyes. His body was athletic but not bulky. He would look on the smaller side to most people. Black jeans with a gray hoody was his normal attire. Sometimes he went black hoody black jeans. But those weren’t his normal attire.

Character's Mental Description: Sadistically peaceful, the perfect words to describe this young man’s personality. While completely sane and knowing right from wrong, He also has a sense of what he wants is also the only right thing. The only ones he would listen to would be his immediate family being the Isaki clan, and even then it would take some reasoning for them to stop him. He's overly proud of being apart of the Isaki clan and flaunts a sense of power over people, putting them in a position to be inferior to him in his mindset.

Multiple Personality Application: n/a
Character History:
The history of Tetsu begins at the beginning as any would. After being born and raised by his parents inside of the manor of the Isaki clan. The family spread far and wide within the village of mist and it being one of the oldest, making it also one of the most prosperous clans. Also being part of such a huge clan, meant having various and different numerous abilities. Tetsu’s father was of the Hashigaki clan, a humble and brave clan of physically blinded men and women.

While growing up, sense his mother was first line cousins with Tenken, she knew the language of the Isaki clan and had passed some of it down to Tetsu. He didn’t know it perfectly but he could understand the basics of it, just not speak it. Just enough to understand a general meaning of what was being said, even if he didn’t get the whole thing.

The problem was that Tetsu didn’t respect his cowardly father. His side of the family was weak and not important in any way possible. He gained the arrogance of the Isaki clan and from his mother. For sake of better words being unused, she wore the pants in the family while he cowered at her times of anger. She was Tetsu’s pride and joy. He looked up to her.

Tetsu went through the academy and graduated at the age of ten like most children. He wasn’t a prodigy of any type however he did work hard as instructed by his mother. He would do all he could to make her proud. He made Genin rank in Kirigakure by the time he was thirteen by catching three different bells from three chuunin ranked shinobi. There was one thing that Tetsu had that most people thought would be a disadvantage. He was blind. He was born with the Hashigaki’s powers however they didn’t develop until slightly before his genin exam. In which time was the only time he found a use for the person named his father which through his instruction. Using the Hashigaki’s ability with sonar to feel out people in a fight and distinguished the sound he heard and the vibrations people made in their movements. He was also taught on how the pitch of his voice could be used to force a Genjutsu onto someone instead of using eye sight like other shinobi’s. After the exam finished, he was allowed to keep one bell for his own and on it wrote the word "Genin". Along with his forehead protector that he had on his right arm underneath his hoody, he wore the bell around his neck, just like a necklace. With his Sonar abilities from the Hashigaki bloodline, this allowed him to see even more clearly due to the sound it would make and the sound waves bouncing off objects every time he took a few steps. He would see the world in black in white, just the way he viewed it.

After the training ended however, he ended most contact with his father again. He despised the man’s weakness for not reaching for his true potential. Tetsu would refuse to become like him and his stupidity. A few years later and he was up for his chuunin exam. For this particular exam he and two others had to go on a mission to the outskirts of mist and kill a band of thieves that had been terrorizing trade routes to Kirigakure’s smaller villages and were making their ways towards the port for trading; taking over everything in their way. Through the combination of Tetsu’s Genjutsu and the other two shinobi’s ninjutsu, they formed a trap and killed their targets with some struggle but nothing unmanageable for the three now chuunin shinobi of Mist with a few more scrapes and bruises. Tetsu was instructed to become a team with the other two, but with his personality he left the group, seeing them as inferior and a waste of space, something to this day he still doesn't regret thinking. There was no reason to team up with the weak, only the strong and smart would survive.

He was sixteen and working hard to become a Jounin when the frozen tundra came over Mist. Through trials and a long journey they left their village. Tetsu’s parents died from being frozen over by the cold and harsh elements. Tetsu fully embraced and dropped his father’s surname, while picking up his mothers’ maiden name. He was an Isaki by blood and he would stay that way. He was brought into the clan by Tenken, the current leader of the Isaki clan. It’s been four years for Tetsu, now at the age of twenty, sense that day. He was a full-fledged member of the Isaki clan and had banished his father from the clan, as an example of his own power. He wasn't a leader but he was the oldest male member by blood in the household and what he said now went. His mother protested but eventually came to terms with such a decision. The weak would hold them back, the weak were only there to be in the way... to die. He would fight to protect his family. He would make this world into his liking and nobody would stand in his way of proving to his deceased mother that this world would bow down, one village at a time. His own brand of peace… and possibly tyranny. The Blind Demon was alive and a new brand of Hoshikata was born. Whomever stood in his way, would certainly perish.

Clan Request: Isaki clan

Death/Retirement Thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=654&t=42233
Old Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=486&t=26029
Old Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=487&t=26375
Old Dojo: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=488&t=26430
Old FAQ: n/a?

Special Usergroups: missing council and such

Old Stats:
Stats: (caps @ 600)
Stamina: 600/600
Agility: 6000/600
Ninjutsu: 600/600
Genjutsu: 600/600
Taijutsu: 600/600
Chakra Control: 600/600
PL: 3,600

Old OOC Rank: s-rank
Stat Cut: n/a

New Stats:
Stats: (caps @ 600)
Stamina: 600/600
Agility: 6000/600
Ninjutsu: 600/600
Genjutsu: 600/600
Taijutsu: 600/600
Chakra Control: 600/600
PL: 3,600

New OOC Rank: s-rank

Justu Mastery Swaps:


Name of any Contract you currently own:
n/a

Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Dark Sage

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
 

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Re: Kane --> Tetsu {WIP}

Old Character Name: Kane
Old Village/Missing: Merc/Missing
OCR Type: Full Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: Moon country
Old IC Rank: S-rank

New Character Name: Isaki Tetsu
Preferred Username: Tetsu
New Village: Merc
New BL/CA: Hashigaki
Custom Class:
Code:
[u]The Melody of Death[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (55+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (45+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +4 Gen DC
[i]High:[/i] Gen DC
[i]Average:[/i] evasion, gen save, melee acc, nin acc
[i]Low:[/i] Ranged acc, Puppet acc

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main branch
IC Rank: Merc

Character Age: 20
Gender: male
Character's Physical Description: Tetsu stands at a standard five foot seven inches. He has short spikey hair which was covered up by a gray hoody at all times. Behind black sunglasses which have never been removed are Tetsu’s silver, yet blind eyes. His body was athletic but not bulky. He would look on the smaller side to most people. Black jeans with a gray hoody was his normal attire. Sometimes he went black hoody black jeans. But those weren’t his normal attire.

Character's Mental Description: Sadistically peaceful, the perfect words to describe this young man’s personality. While completely sane and knowing right from wrong, He also has a sense of what he wants is also the only right thing. The only ones he would listen to would be his immediate family being the Isaki clan, and even then it would take some reasoning for them to stop him. He's overly proud of being apart of the Isaki clan and flaunts a sense of power over people, putting them in a position to be inferior to him in his mindset.

Multiple Personality Application: n/a
Character History:
The history of Tetsu begins at the beginning as any would. After being born and raised by his parents inside of the manor of the Isaki clan. The family spread far and wide within the village of mist and it being one of the oldest, making it also one of the most prosperous clans. Also being part of such a huge clan, meant having various and different numerous abilities. Tetsu’s father was of the Hashigaki clan, a humble and brave clan of physically blinded men and women.

While growing up, sense his mother was first line cousins with Tenken, she knew the language of the Isaki clan and had passed some of it down to Tetsu. He didn’t know it perfectly but he could understand the basics of it, just not speak it. Just enough to understand a general meaning of what was being said, even if he didn’t get the whole thing.

The problem was that Tetsu didn’t respect his cowardly father. His side of the family was weak and not important in any way possible. He gained the arrogance of the Isaki clan and from his mother. For sake of better words being unused, she wore the pants in the family while he cowered at her times of anger. She was Tetsu’s pride and joy. He looked up to her.

Tetsu went through the academy and graduated at the age of ten like most children. He wasn’t a prodigy of any type however he did work hard as instructed by his mother. He would do all he could to make her proud. He made Genin rank in Kirigakure by the time he was thirteen by catching three different bells from three chuunin ranked shinobi. There was one thing that Tetsu had that most people thought would be a disadvantage. He was blind. He was born with the Hashigaki’s powers however they didn’t develop until slightly before his genin exam. In which time was the only time he found a use for the person named his father which through his instruction. Using the Hashigaki’s ability with sonar to feel out people in a fight and distinguished the sound he heard and the vibrations people made in their movements. He was also taught on how the pitch of his voice could be used to force a Genjutsu onto someone instead of using eye sight like other shinobi’s. After the exam finished, he was allowed to keep one bell for his own and on it wrote the word "Genin". Along with his forehead protector that he had on his right arm underneath his hoody, he wore the bell around his neck, just like a necklace. With his Sonar abilities from the Hashigaki bloodline, this allowed him to see even more clearly due to the sound it would make and the sound waves bouncing off objects every time he took a few steps. He would see the world in black in white, just the way he viewed it.

After the training ended however, he ended most contact with his father again. He despised the man’s weakness for not reaching for his true potential. Tetsu would refuse to become like him and his stupidity. A few years later and he was up for his chuunin exam. For this particular exam he and two others had to go on a mission to the outskirts of mist and kill a band of thieves that had been terrorizing trade routes to Kirigakure’s smaller villages and were making their ways towards the port for trading; taking over everything in their way. Through the combination of Tetsu’s Genjutsu and the other two shinobi’s ninjutsu, they formed a trap and killed their targets with some struggle but nothing unmanageable for the three now chuunin shinobi of Mist with a few more scrapes and bruises. Tetsu was instructed to become a team with the other two, but with his personality he left the group, seeing them as inferior and a waste of space, something to this day he still doesn't regret thinking. There was no reason to team up with the weak, only the strong and smart would survive.

He was sixteen and working hard to become a Jounin when the frozen tundra came over Mist. Through trials and a long journey they left their village. Tetsu’s parents died from being frozen over by the cold and harsh elements. Tetsu fully embraced and dropped his father’s surname, while picking up his mothers’ maiden name. He was an Isaki by blood and he would stay that way. He was brought into the clan by Tenken, the current leader of the Isaki clan. It’s been four years for Tetsu, now at the age of twenty, sense that day. He was a full-fledged member of the Isaki clan and had banished his father from the clan, as an example of his own power. He wasn't a leader but he was the oldest male member by blood in the household and what he said now went. His mother protested but eventually came to terms with such a decision. The weak would hold them back, the weak were only there to be in the way... to die. He would fight to protect his family. He would make this world into his liking and nobody would stand in his way of proving to his deceased mother that this world would bow down, one village at a time. His own brand of peace… and possibly tyranny. The Blind Demon was alive and a new brand of Hoshikata was born. Whomever stood in his way, would certainly perish.

Clan Request: Isaki clan

Death/Retirement Thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=654&t=42233
Old Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=486&t=26029
Old Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=487&t=26375
Old Dojo: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=488&t=26430
Old FAQ: n/a?

Special Usergroups: missing council and mod groups <--- keeping

Old Stats:
Stats: (caps @ 600)
Stamina: 600/600
Agility: 6000/600
Ninjutsu: 600/600
Genjutsu: 600/600
Taijutsu: 600/600
Chakra Control: 600/600
PL: 3,600

Old OOC Rank: s-rank
Stat Cut: n/a

New Stats:
Stats: (caps @ 600)
Stamina: 600/600
Agility: 6000/600
Ninjutsu: 600/600
Genjutsu: 600/600
Taijutsu: 600/600
Chakra Control: 600/600
PL: 3,600

New OOC Rank: S-rank

Justu Mastery Swaps:

Note for Council member doing my swaps: all of my jutsu that I'm swapping is in rank order from e-rank down to A-rank. That is NOT the case for the Jutsu I am Gaining.


Keeping: ALL Wind, Fire and NE jutsu

Affinities:
Major: Wind, Fire, NE, Water (Free),
Minor: Earth (free)
AE: Sound (Free-BL), Kinesis (will write rp below)

Gen:
Major: Will, Audial, Visual, Kinetic
Minor: n/a

Swapping:
Scorch {AE}:
Scorched Land master rank ---> Mime Box master rank {Visual}
Dehydration master rank ---> Solar Flare master rank {Visual}
Rushing Burst master rank ---> Nightmare Master rank {Visual}
Unstable Release master Rank ---> Depth Barrier Master rank {Visual}
Scorching Devastation master rank ---> Perception Filter master rank {Visual}
Air land master rank ---> Advanced Clone master rank {visual}
Convection Spheres master rank---> Invisibility master rank {Visual}
Heatblast master rank---> Deja Vu Master rank {Visual}
vaporization master rank ---> Night master rank {Visual}
updraft master rank --> Body Double master rank {Visual}
Searing whirlwind master rank --> Occular Assualt Master rank {Visual}
Amplifer master rank---> The Reaper Gaze master rank {Visual}

Water:
Pressurized Mist - MASTER --->Distortion master rank {Visual}
Water Gun - MASTER ---> Occular Trauma master rank {Visual}
Water Whip - MASTER ---> Black Flash master rank {Visual}
Aqua Fang - MASTER---> After-Image Master rank {Visual}
Rinse off - MASTER ---> Verse of Darkness master rank {Visual}
Grand Waterfall - MASTER ---> Basic Clone master rank {Visual}
Impaling Hydro Jet - MASTER ---> Blur master rank {Visual}
Water Prison - MASTER ---> Rorshach Eye master rank {Visual}
Rain Dance - MASTER----> Double Vision master rank {Visual}
Torrential Vortex - MASTER---> Mimic master rank {Visual}
Hydro Tidal Shockwave - MASTER ---> False Surroundings master rank {Visual}
Water Shark Bomb – MASTER ---> Eye Strain master rank {Visual}
Mystical Pond - MASTER ---> Curse of the Leper master rank {Kinetic}
Grand Hydra Excavation – MASTER ---> Hemorragic Fever master rank {Kinetic}
Water Dragon Bullet - MASTER ---> Delayed Agony master rank {Kinetic}
Scorn Of Aquarius - MASTER ---> Parasitic Infestation master rank {Kinetic}
Supreme Aqua Realm - MASTER---> Tree Binding master rank {Kinetic}

Shadow {AE}:
Black Eruption – MASTER ---> Shared Torment master rank {Kinetic}
Midnight Strike - MASTER ---> Phoenix Embrace master rank {Kinetic}
Specter Shade - MASTER---> Petrification master rank {Kinetic}
Dark Displacement - MASTER ---> Lingering Spark master rank {Kinetic}
Underworld Prison - MASTER ---> Crush Depth master rank {Kinetic}
Shadow Punishment - MASTER---> Puppet Betrayal master rank {Kinetic}
Black Moon Fang - MASTER ----> Pox master rank {Kinetic}
Ebony Nightmare - MASTER ---> Mist of Deceit master rank {Kinetic}
Shadow Garb - MASTER ----> Crippled master rank {Kinetic}
Darkness Falls - MASTER ----> Masochism master rank {Kinetic}
Absolute Void - MASTER ---> Silly Fingers master rank {Kinetic}
Shadow Summoning - MASTER ---> Crossed Wires master rank {Kinetic}

Lightning:
Electrocution master ---> Drunken Stupor master rank {Kinetic}
Electroshock master ---> Influenza master rank {Kinetic}
Thunderfist master ---> Tickling master rank {Kinetic}
Storm bolt master ---> Facepalm Master rank {Kinetic}
Thunder clap - MASTER ---> Hot weapon master rank {Kinetic}
Zeus Flash - MASTER ----> Stun master rank {Kinetic}
Lightning Torrent – MASTER ----> 1000 years of Pain Kai master rank {Kinetic}
Lightning Struck - MASTER ---> Devil's Whisper master rank {Audial}
Volt Charge – MASTER ----> Death's Anthem master rank {Audial}
Chidori – MASTER ----> Blank Slate master rank {Audial}
Gigavolt Cannon – MASTER ---> Radial Shock master rank {Audial}
Lightning Beast – MASTER ---> Chakra Ravage master rank {Audial}
Amp Field – MASTER ---> Auto-Tune master rank {Audial}
Raijins Vengeance – MASTER ---> Centralized master rank {Audial}
Kirin - MASTER ---> Death Chime master rank {Audial}
Thunderdome -master ---> Prolong master rank {Audial}
Chidori Control- master ----> Leak master rank {Audial}

Storm {AE}:
Squall master rank ---> Wither master rank {Audial}
Shielding Tempest master rank ---> Bass Drop master rank {Audial}
Laser Prison master rank ---> Sometimes Shouting works master rank {Audial}
Fissure Slash master rank ---> Deaf master rank {Audial}
Barrage of Storms master rank ---> Run it Back master rank {Audial}
Voltaic Flash master rank ----> Groans master rank {Audial}
Storm Release: Black panther master rank ---> Piercing Cry master rank {Audial}

Earth:
Gravel Shift - MASTER ---> Trembling Music master rank {Audial}
Stone bullet - MASTER ---> Pained Expressions master rank {Audial}
Earth Flow River - MASTER ---> Appreciation of Music master rank {Audial}
Mud Clone - MASTER ----> Gong master rank {Audial}
Sinkhole fist - MASTER ----> Deception master rank {Audial}
Inner Earth Reflection Lure - MASTER ---> Favortisim master rank {Audial}
Earth Flow Wave - MASTER ---> Wasteful master rank {Audial}
Rock Golem - MASTER ---> Torment of the Physical Plain master rank {Will}
Earthen Coating - MASTER ---> Corruption of the Earthly Plain master rank {Will}
Bedrock Coffin – MASTER ---> Chaos of the Mental Plain master rank {Will}
Weighted Rock Technique – MASTER ---> Mental Kombat master rank {Will}
Earth Spiker – MASTER ---> Temple of Nirvana master rank {Will}
Antlion Sinkhole - MASTER ---> Repetition master rank {Will}
Fist Of Gaia - MASTER ---> Havoc of the Doomed Mind master rank {Will}
Earthen Magnitude - MASTER ---> Slowed Perception master rank {Will}
Earthslide wall - MASTER ---> Oblivious Rapture master rank {Will}
Petrification – MASTER ---> Betrayal master rank {Will}

Slashing:
Sword Juggle master ---> Taunt master rank {Will}
zero slash counter master ----> Thought Down master rank {Will}
top spin master ---> Black out master rank {Will}
blade trail master ---> Insomnia master rank {Will}
magnum break master---> Paranoia master rank {Will}
Slash master ---> Charismatic Breakdown master rank {Will}
Arcing Slash master ---> Untruth master rank {Will}
Dynamic Slash master ---> Amnesia master rank {Will}
Overhead Strike master ---> False Success master rank {Will}
Full circle master ---> Leaking Mind master rank {Will}
Cross rip master ---> Sear of Mind master rank {Will}
Crimson Flash master ---> Lethargy master rank {Will}
Gasher master ---> Tourniquet master rank {Will}
Heavy tow Master ---> Intimidation master rank {Will}
Vanishing slash master ---> Force Blast Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Lunar steps master ---> Psionic Assault Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Whisperer master ---> Kinetic Infusion Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
focal blade master ---> Force Guard Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
steel weaving master ---> Psi-shock Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
flight aerial strike master ---> Force Break Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Kill Driver master ---> Mind Lock Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Executioner master ---> Reflection Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
lotus Flower master ---> Kinetic Blast Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Zantetsuken Master ---> Psionic Rend Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Higuma master ---> Concussion Pulse Master rank {Kinesis-AE}
Annihilation master ---> Redirection Master rank {Kinesis-AE}

Hand to Hand
One-Two master ---> Harmonic Vibrations master rank {Sound}
Low Sweep master ---> Echo Strike master rank {Sound}
Spearhand – MASTER ---> Harmonization master rank {Sound}
Janken master ---> Distorted Aura master rank {Sound}

Dark Sage-kin
Dead Soul Technique master rank ----> Final Chime master rank {Sound}
Ressurection Technique: Corpse Soil master rank ----> Resonating Howl master rank {Sound}
Reaper Death Seal master Rank ----> Hypersonic Reververation master rank {Sound}
Malevolent Sealing master rank ----> Concussion Wave master rank {Sound}
Scorn of the Lich master Rank ----> Sound Bullet master rank {Sound}
Summoning: IWR master Rank{S-rank} ----> {sell... can I turn this into ASP?}


Name of any Contract you currently own:
n/a

Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Dark Sage- not keeping

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?n/a

SIDE NOTE: Per the Announcement by admin and my training thread (linked above). Tetsu has Advanced shop purchase: 800- select a contract of your choice.


AE-Kenesis write up
So by putting the two elements of wind and fire the element Kinesis was born. It's a psychological attack that looks invisible however it works through telepathic type powers by using the wind in controlling gravity and the will of fire to move an object with ones mind. The logic and physics don't matter in this as well... logic and Ninpocho Chronicles do not ever mix when it comes down to the battle system. Well enough of breaking the fourth wall.

After careful and intense study for three hours with two fifteen minute break increments. The library within moon country wasn't as extensive as say a hidden shinobi village like Suna or Cloud. However someone did end up stealing or getting a copy from someone village's archives. Whichever the case tetsu was extremely happy to find this book as his journey with his clan would benefit from any extra knowledge that Tetsu could learn. After all, family is important and is the only thing important, besides his twisted view of peace. All it takes is one extra jutsu, one split second reaction between beating an opponent and losing one's life. His peace would cause people to look differently at the world. They would either learn to live in peace or they would die by his hand and the Kinesis element was going to help do just that. The power to move objects with his mind would be extremely helpful in the long run. Be able to block attacks with a boulder with his mind, to redirect an attack back at a different opponent just because he felt like it. Reverse an attack back onto someone to save a family member. All too many options and all of them were valid options with this type of power. He went out into the woods, in the outskirts of Moon country to try his abilities. First he would summon a huge dragon head made of fire and controlled it to go up into the air and then come crashing back down at him as if it missed its original target. As the firey head came back down at him he used Redirection to smash the fire into an iron tree where an explosion occurred. Tetsu smiled as he couldn't see, but he could feel the power in which he just commanded. And whatever he couldn't see, his sonar filled in the rest in a black and white picture in his mind.
 

Kairyuu

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Approved for Isaki clan.

Name: Approved
Rank: Approved
History: approved, but mist used chakra tattoos, not forehead protectors.
BL/CA: approved
Stats: approved
 

Tsukino Nanami

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Class: *Seems like you already have a ASP purchase for class -- Noted. Class Approved.
The Melody of Death
HP: (55+lvl) x stamina
CP: (45+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +4 Gen DC
High: Gen DC
Average: evasion, gen save, melee acc, nin acc
Low: Ranged acc, Puppet acc

Branch: Main Branch -- Approved
IC Rank: Mercenary -- Approved
Age: 20 -- Approved
Gender: Male -- Approved
Physical Description: Approved
Mental Description: Approved
Affinities:
Major: Wind, Fire, NE, Water (Free),
Minor: Earth (free)
AE: Sound (Free-BL), Kinesis (will write rp below)
Gen:
Major: Will, Audial, Visual, Kinetic
Minor: n/a
Not going to approve the Kinesis write-up. The write-up does not really detail how you learned the advanced element. While Tetsu may have procured a book about it in Moon, it doesn't detail him actually reading/learning how to harness the power of "the force". Please expand on it a bit and reply with the corrections. Approved. Reading's hard.

Jutsu Swaps: Approved -- But you can't get ASP for IWR as it masters at Rank 1. Will do refund after you sell everything back.


--
TLDR:
- No ASP swap for IWR
- Fix history: Mist didn't have headbands, they had chakra tattoos.
- Add more to your Kinesis write-up.
- Sell your jutsu first and I'll do the other 1/4 of pay you're missing out on.
 

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History {revised}
The history of Tetsu begins at the beginning as any would. After being born and raised by his parents inside of the manor of the Isaki clan. The family spread far and wide within the village of mist and it being one of the oldest, making it also one of the most prosperous clans. Also being part of such a huge clan, meant having various and different numerous abilities. Tetsu’s father was of the Hashigaki clan, a humble and brave clan of physically blinded men and women.

While growing up, sense his mother was first line cousins with Tenken, she knew the language of the Isaki clan and had passed some of it down to Tetsu. He didn’t know it perfectly but he could understand the basics of it, just not speak it. Just enough to understand a general meaning of what was being said, even if he didn’t get the whole thing.

The problem was that Tetsu didn’t respect his cowardly father. His side of the family was weak and not important in any way possible. He gained the arrogance of the Isaki clan and from his mother. For sake of better words being unused, she wore the pants in the family while he cowered at her times of anger. She was Tetsu’s pride and joy. He looked up to her.

Tetsu went through the academy and graduated at the age of ten like most children. He wasn’t a prodigy of any type however he did work hard as instructed by his mother. He would do all he could to make her proud. He made Genin rank in Kirigakure by the time he was thirteen by catching three different bells from three chuunin ranked shinobi. There was one thing that Tetsu had that most people thought would be a disadvantage. He was blind. He was born with the Hashigaki’s powers however they didn’t develop until slightly before his genin exam. In which time was the only time he found a use for the person named his father which through his instruction. Using the Hashigaki’s ability with sonar to feel out people in a fight and distinguished the sound he heard and the vibrations people made in their movements. He was also taught on how the pitch of his voice could be used to force a Genjutsu onto someone instead of using eye sight like other shinobi’s. After the exam finished, he was allowed to keep one bell for his own and on it wrote the word "Genin". Along with his chakra tatoo that he had on his right arm underneath his hoody, he wore the bell around his neck, just like a necklace. With his Sonar abilities from the Hashigaki bloodline, this allowed him to see even more clearly due to the sound it would make and the sound waves bouncing off objects every time he took a few steps. He would see the world in black in white, just the way he viewed it.

After the training ended however, he ended most contact with his father again. He despised the man’s weakness for not reaching for his true potential. Tetsu would refuse to become like him and his stupidity. A few years later and he was up for his chuunin exam. For this particular exam he and two others had to go on a mission to the outskirts of mist and kill a band of thieves that had been terrorizing trade routes to Kirigakure’s smaller villages and were making their ways towards the port for trading; taking over everything in their way. Through the combination of Tetsu’s Genjutsu and the other two shinobi’s ninjutsu, they formed a trap and killed their targets with some struggle but nothing unmanageable for the three now chuunin shinobi of Mist with a few more scrapes and bruises. Tetsu was instructed to become a team with the other two, but with his personality he left the group, seeing them as inferior and a waste of space, something to this day he still doesn't regret thinking. There was no reason to team up with the weak, only the strong and smart would survive.

He was sixteen and working hard to become a Jounin when the frozen tundra came over Mist. Through trials and a long journey they left their village. Tetsu’s parents died from being frozen over by the cold and harsh elements. Tetsu fully embraced and dropped his father’s surname, while picking up his mothers’ maiden name. He was an Isaki by blood and he would stay that way. He was brought into the clan by Tenken, the current leader of the Isaki clan. It’s been four years for Tetsu, now at the age of twenty, sense that day. He was a full-fledged member of the Isaki clan and had banished his father from the clan, as an example of his own power. He wasn't a leader but he was the oldest male member by blood in the household and what he said now went. His mother protested but eventually came to terms with such a decision. The weak would hold them back, the weak were only there to be in the way... to die. He would fight to protect his family. He would make this world into his liking and nobody would stand in his way of proving to his deceased mother that this world would bow down, one village at a time. His own brand of peace… and possibly tyranny. The Blind Demon was alive and a new brand of Hoshikata was born. Whomever stood in his way, would certainly perish.
 

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History approved.

Now let me know as soon as you sell your jutsus so I can pay you back the difference
Otherwise, OCR is complete.

Just request a name-change.
 

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Calculating Refund:
After everything is sold: 700,400
Divide by 4, due to sell-back being at 75%.

Refund: 175100
Gonna ping an admin to change your name and your OCR is complete.
 
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