Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Kazama Yusei

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Old Character Name<i></i>: Kazama Yusei
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: ANBU
Last Known Where-abouts: I don't remember
Old IC Rank: B-Rank


New Character Name: Kazama Yusei
New Character Age: 16
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New OCR Type: ANBU
New BL/CA: Hyuuga


The Eternal Light
HP: (65+lvl) x stamina
CP: (30+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% to all Damage; this does not apply to Caps, +.5 accuracy, +.5 dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: All others
Low: Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty

(I was told I had about 2000 points to spend on Stats, so here I go)

Agility: 300/300
Stamina: 300/300
Ninjutsu: 300/300
Taijutsu: 300/300
Genjutsu: 200/300
Chakra Control: 300/300
PL: 1700
Old Jutsu List:
Taijutsus
4 Hit Combo
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Dynamic Entry
Prerequisites: 15 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Janken
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Spinning wind
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Pressure palm
Prerequisites: 55 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Dragon finish
Prerequisites: 85 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Ensnare
Prerequisites: 55 Taijutsu, Can only be used with a chain.
sadistic whiplash
Prerequisites: 85 Taijutsu, Can only be used with a chain.
Shoryuken
Prerequisites: 110 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Lions barrage
Dragon assault
Prerequisites: 110 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Primary Lotus
Prerequisites: 160 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.


elemental jutsus
storm bolt
electrocution
Zeus Flash
earth flow wave
mud clone
rock golem
Earth Spiker
Wind scythe


nonelemental jutsus
Transformation
Basic summoning
Body Switch
Chakra Blast
Crystal Eye
Contract Summoning
Barrier
Rasengan

New Jutsu Lists:
Taijutsu<i></i>
Janken R2
The One-Two R2
4 hit combo R2
Spinning Wind R2
Dynamic Entry R2
Dragon Assault R2
Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku R2
Shoryuken R2
Roaring Combination R2
Primary Lotus R2
16 hit combo R2

Nonelemental Jutsu:<i></i>
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Contract Summoning R1
Crystal Eye M
Barrier M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M

Elemental Jutsu<i></i>
Electrocution M
Zeus Flash M
Volt Charge M
Thunder Clap M
Gigavolt Cannon R1
Earth Flow River M
Sinkhole Fist M
Mud clone M
Rock Golem M
Wind Scythe M
(Let me know if I did this right)

Name: Kazama Yusei
Age: 16
Rank: ANBU Sentinel
Alignment: Politely good
Physical Description<i></i>
Upon acceptance to the ANBU ranks, Yusei accepted his fate and became the youngest shinobi to enter their ranks at 14. He traded in the classroom sessions for highly dangerous missions and even thought about returning to the academy to teach. He keeps his headband, which pleasantly sits under his fire red hair which comes to the middle of his back. He loves his hair and he fears he might be weakened without his spikey locks, but he loves his ANBU mask, the guise of the bear, even more. It is kept on his person at all times, whether in a pouch or hidden in his wild mane. He is a charmingly good looking teen, with a strong chin and a constantly furrowed brow. Yusei is a strongly built guy, physically more ripped than average with little body fat. He is in fact highly physically strong. He is taller than most. At his age, he is up to his former teacher in height, making him one of the tallest shinobi. Yusei's chakras were not the average light blue, it blazed with a strong bluish-gold hue. He has a birth mark in the shape of a lightning bolt covering his left eye, although he still retains his eyesight through his orange blue eyes. Yusei is a darker child than the others, but he realizes one day he will go the way of his grandfather. He always carries his lightning blue knapsack with all his equipment strapped tightly to his body. Yusei has become synonymous for being a beastly Taijutsu Hyuuga with an all-black skintight training suit with the mark of Tian on it, the same emblem on the boys bare back. Yusei is forever training to be stronger, and obtaining the strength to gain the upper hand on his villages enemies.

Personality<i></i>
Yusei is a child of very little words. He possesses an IQ of over 200, yet he never shows it because he hardly ever speaks. Yusei, being that he never knew anyone growing up but his father, is a strong loner. He is charged with being anti-social, though he has a small circle of friends that he sticks to preferably.


History<i></i>
On the night of his birth, his mother was struck by lightning while on her way to give birth to the child. She died shortly after successfully delivering him into the world. The doctors were amazed that he was born and didn't cry even a little. His unusual chakra resonance frightened the doctors, hence why he was dubbed "the lightning prince" by those in the hospital after the fact. Three days later, his father Batousai Banrai came home from a special ANBU mission and found out the tragic news of his wives death. Once little yusei was 4, his father began to train him to be the best ninja to grace the Banrai family. Batousai imbedded in his son his nindo, "to bring great glory and honor as well as to save those we love". Yusei felt like he owed it to his father as well as himself to be the best he could be based on his father's nindo. He raised his son to be powerful beyond measure and adept in all the ways of the ninja. Batousai taught his son how to use all the ninja tools, of which he prefers the sword, he taught him ninjutsu and taijutsu. Yusei's father tested him religiously on all his training. He trained his son to bear through extreme chakra depletion, even though the child has vast quantities of it in him. His father trained his mind with the uncanny ability to resolve the battle in any manner befitting to him. While other children were playing outside, he was honing his skills. He doesn't care about anything or anyone else because he lives solely in his mind. When Yusei turned seven, his father took him out to the wilderness and placed a simple task upon his son's shoulders. "live out here for a full year, and you will be ready". While living in the wilderness, he sought only to better hone his skills. He lived off berries and nuts and the wilderness game. He was hurt and wounded many times in the wilderness but he never saw them as serious. He battled bears and other dangerous animals to gain strength, and chased deer and other fast animals to attain incredible speed. He never knew friendship nor companionship, just sheer strength and cunning. When the boy returned from his year of training, he found that his father was nowhere to be found. He took on the mantle of Banrai from his father, but quickly discarded it when he realized he wasn’t just the son of an illustrious samurai.

At the Behest of his grandfather, and the ignition of his Byakugan eyes, Yusei learned to channel his inner Hyuuga ways, Enabling him to be one of the best trackers in the ANBU.
 

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Hey anbu sennin here. sadly you really have nothing about being approached by us, you approaching us or anything. You didn't state how you suddenly jumped from 7 to 14 to obtain full fledged anbu from AiT. Or why you'd obtain full anbu 3 years prior to the minimum age of 17. As it stands now I can't give you approve on your rank at all. Nor can I even recommend a suitable rank cause you don't have any solid details of shinobi work in your history. I would reapproach the drawing board on your approach.
 

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Welcome back to the site Yusei! A few things before we can get you going, some necessary, others suggestions.

Rank: See our ANBU Sennin's response above.

Stats, Class, and Jutsu: I'm still checking on this. I just wanted to relay the easy stuff to you first so you can work on that while I try to math.

Bloodline: Please include a 200 word explanation of how you awoke to your Hyuuga traits. The only mention of your Hyuuga-ness was tacked on at the end. But just having Hyuuga in your blood doesn't always mean it awakens. In fact, with the baby opening, it sounds more like he would be Santaru than Hyuuga. So perhaps include a training session with the mentioned grandfather or a mentor at the academy. This can be done in your history, maybe it is part of his academy days, or was worked on while an AiT. It could also be written separately if you like and just say it is your "Bloodline Application".

Physical Description: Somebody's assuming that women find grumpy-looking musclemen attracting. ;) But it seems fine to me.

Personality
If I may tell some observations and make some suggests to help this form into something more. An IQ of 200 is INSANELY HIGH! Yusei probably wouldn't think like other people, which would probably be quite frustrating for both him, and anyone talking to him depending on what is being discussed. I suggest thinking on exactly what he is knowledgeable about, and consider that he might have a flaw from this. (maybe he is OCD, perhaps he is impatient due to people not understanding his logic, or he might not understand something that is super simple because he is overthinking it) Flaws are very important, and it would be very nice to see him have one. Just being anti-social isn't much of a flaw if he doesn't really mind being such.

You also go out of your way to say he is a loner, doesn't speak, and "He never knew friendship nor companionship, just sheer strength and cunning." If so, how would he even have friends? This is something that would need to be explored more, because it sounds to me like he wouldn't consider anyone a friend, wouldn't seek out friends, and his attitude would drive potential friends away. This is why adding in a section about your academy life would be nice to see. We can get some insight into such things.

History
As stated by the ANBU Sennin, there definitely needs to be some talk about Academy life and AiT if you are going full ANBU. It's even possible he could have been a Genin for a while before going ANBU. If you are having a hard time coming up with something, you could pm me or others to get some feedback, maybe rp something out, etc.

This is IMPORTANT!
Do not edit your post! Please instead respond below with any additions, deletions, or edits you make. If you have any questions, comments, or concerns, please feel free to pm me.
 

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Ok, so I made a few edits. I'll just go Chuunin and see where I go from here:

Old Character Name</I><i></i>: Kazama Yusei
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: ANBU
Last Known Where-abouts: I don't remember
Old IC Rank: B-Rank


New Character Name: Kazama Yusei
New Character Age: 16
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New OCR Type: Chuunin
New BL/CA: Hyuuga

The Eternal Sight
HP: (65+lvl) x stamina
CP: (30+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% to all Damage; this does not apply to Caps, +.5 accuracy, +.5 dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: All others
Low: Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty

(I was told I had about 2000 points to spend on Stats, so here I go)

Agility: 300/300
Stamina: 300/300
Ninjutsu: 300/300
Taijutsu: 300/300
Genjutsu: 250/300
Chakra Control: 300/300
PL: 1750
Old Jutsu List:
Taijutsus
4 Hit Combo
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Dynamic Entry
Prerequisites: 15 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Janken
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Spinning wind
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Pressure palm
Prerequisites: 55 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Dragon finish
Prerequisites: 85 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Ensnare
Prerequisites: 55 Taijutsu, Can only be used with a chain.
sadistic whiplash
Prerequisites: 85 Taijutsu, Can only be used with a chain.
Shoryuken
Prerequisites: 110 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Lions barrage
Dragon assault
Prerequisites: 110 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Primary Lotus
Prerequisites: 160 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.


elemental jutsus
storm bolt
electrocution
Zeus Flash
earth flow wave
mud clone
rock golem
Earth Spiker
Wind scythe


nonelemental jutsus
Transformation
Basic summoning
Body Switch
Chakra Blast
Crystal Eye
Contract Summoning
Barrier
Rasengan



Buffs:New Jutsu Lists:
Taijutsu<i></i>
Janken R2
The One-Two R2
4 hit combo R2
Spinning Wind R2
Dynamic Entry R2
Dragon Assault R2
Shoryuken R2
Roaring Combination R2
Primary Lotus R2
16 hit combo R2

Nonelemental Jutsu:<i></i>
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Contract Summoning R1
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Combination Transformation M
Barrier M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M

Elemental Jutsu<i></i>
Electrocution M
Electroshock M
Zeus Flash M
Volt Charge M
Thunder Clap M
Gigavolt Cannon M
Earth Flow River M
Sinkhole Fist M
Mud clone M
Rock Golem M
Earth Flow Wave M
Earth Spiker M
Wind Scythe M

Name: Kazama Yusei
Age: 16
Height: 6'6
Weight 245
Rank: Chuunin
Alignment: Politely good
Physical Description<i></i>
He is a charmingly good looking teen, with a strong chin and a constantly furrowed brow. Yusei is a strongly built guy, physically more intimidating than most with little body fat. He is in fact highly physically strong. For someone with so much more to look forward to in life, he is taller than most. At his age, he is actually abnormally tall, transcending most of his teacher in height, making him one of the tallest shinobi. Yusei's chakras are not the average light blue, it blazes with a strong bluish-gold hue. He has a birth mark in the shape of a lightning bolt covering his left eye, although he still retains his eyesight through his orange blue eyes. Yusei is just a bit darker than others who know him, a smooth, soft brown complexion. His mane, the long spiky body of hair he has flows down to his back, and is a bright, flame red. He always carries his lightning blue knapsack with all his equipment strapped tightly to his body. Yusei has become synonymous for being large, almost bearlike with an all-black skintight training suit with the mark of Tian on it, the same emblem on the boys bare back. He smiles, but very seldomly because his teeth seem almost like fangs, but only during times of strong emotional distress do they bare in such a true form.

Personality<i></i>
Yusei is a quiet person, he enjoys deep meditation and reading. He is strongly intelligent in science, geography, history, and in the ways of Taijutsu. Yusei is a kind-hearted and gentle soul, even though his outward appearance doesn’t appear so, but at the same time, he is strongly attuned to his goals and dreams and refuse to let those fall by the wayside.


History<i></i>
On the night of his birth, his mother was struck by lightning while on her way to give birth to the child. She died shortly after successfully delivering him into the world. The doctors were amazed that he was born and didn't cry even a little. His unusual chakra resonance frightened the doctors, hence why he was dubbed "the lightning prince" by those in the hospital after the fact. Three days later, his father Batousai Banrai came home from a special ANBU mission and found out the tragic news of his wives death. Once little yusei was 4, his father began to train him to be the best ninja to grace the Banrai family. Batousai imbedded in his son his nindo, "to bring great glory and honor as well as to save those we love". Yusei felt like he owed it to his father as well as himself to be the best he could be based on his father's nindo. He raised his son to be powerful beyond measure and adept in all the ways of the ninja. Batousai taught his son how to use all the ninja tools, of which he prefers the sword, he taught him ninjutsu and taijutsu. Yusei's father tested him religiously on all his training. He trained his son to bear through extreme chakra depletion, even though the child has vast quantities of it in him. His father trained his mind with the uncanny ability to resolve the battle in any manner befitting to him. While other children were playing outside, he was honing his skills. He doesn't care about anything or anyone else because he lives solely in his mind. When Yusei turned seven, his father took him out to the wilderness and placed a simple task upon his son's shoulders. "Live out here for a full year, and you will be ready". While living in the wilderness, he sought only to better hone his skills. He lived off berries and nuts and the wilderness game. He was hurt and wounded many times in the wilderness but he never saw them as serious. He battled bears and other dangerous animals to gain strength, and chased deer and other fast animals to attain incredible speed. He never knew friendship nor companionship, just sheer strength and cunning. When the boy returned from his year of training, he found that his father was nowhere to be found. He took on the mantle of Banrai from his father, but quickly discarded it when he realized he wasn’t just the son of an illustrious samurai.

Here Goes a Story about... A Hyuuga<i></i>
After the loss of Battousai, 8 year old Yusei left his home temporarily to spend time and learn with his grandfather. The old Hyuuga surprised him when they first met after mere moments of acknowledgement of one another, the old man attacked him. Yusei fell away from him almost instantaneously, but old Shinjuro was a man better than Battousai as a teacher, and much more ruthless. Yusei became enraged by the aggressive act and began to build chakra but he couldn’t, Shinjuro had stopped his chakra flow. The boy tried to fight back, swinging wildly, but the fatigue had set in almost instantaneously. His grandfather laughed heartily,
“you’ve learned to endure the lack of Chakra, but now you must learn how to stop others for your own benefit.”
Those words were set into stone. Yusei took another two years under the tutelage of Shinjuro, furthering his understanding of the human body and chakra points. It burned the boy that he wasn’t able to see them, much less the influence of chakra on the human body the way Grandfather Shinjuro did. He learned the art of the Gentle fist, and the ability to disrupt chakra points, but he was still soundly defeated without much of a glancing blow from him to his grandfather. Yusei became frustrated,
<I>”Was I not passed these abilities?? Am I unworthy of the abilities bestowed upon me??? What can I do???<i></i>
He sat silent in his room, acknowledging his most recent defeat, almost in meditation. The thoughts of his losses carried heavily across his mind. He began to study the battles in his mind, to see his missteps over and over, but it all boiled down to the age and kekkei genkai variables. Yusei needed to be stronger, to prove he was indeed a member of old Shinjuro’s family and possessed the dominant genes of the Hyuuga’s, but he kept his minds eye on the chart of human chakra points and the Gentle Fist abilities. Months passed, Yusei became more adept in the ways and Old man Shinjuro watched over him with a smirk as the boy progressed through his training, the old man had even managed to lose to the boy a few times in combat, so the training had been upgraded. He was to the point where he could flawlessly execute chakra halting blows, and Yusei had been training blindfolded. Yusei’s grandfather was pleased by the boys progress, it was almost flawless. Few could be so adept in the ways to the Gentle Fist in such a matter of months, unless one were indeed a Hyuuga.
“Open your eyes boy, I see it is time for you to truly be inducted in the ways of our family.”
Yusei began to remove his blindfold, but something rushed past him in a flash of wind that caught him offguard. He stepped back, into the Jyuuken Stance, taking into account every sense he possessed. He could hear the movement, and track it. He could feel the sensation of the air current around him, and the lack thereof when his grandfather whisked past him. The Taste of anticipation was paltry to him, and this time he would succeed in earning his right as a Hyuuga. Abruptly there was a coarse wind pressed against his chest, but his body was in motion as the hand touched him swiftly. He rolled to the left, his right hand’s pointer and middle fingers flying in retaliation of his assailants arm. He could see the body in motion, the chakra points in movement, firing up for an attack. Yusei realized he was in range for a counterattack, but his fingers were too swift, he jammed them into the points of his grandfathers forearm. He bounded back and fell into step,
”Lets see if this works, I hope I can get lucky again…”<i></i>
He thought, his body poised into trigrams position. The old man had been amazed by the movements his grandson possessed, but scared by the attack by the unknown man. Then he realized that Yusei wasn’t the typical shinobi. The masked Assailant rushed to close the gap between him and Yusei, but it was too late.
”8 trigrams 2, 4, 8, 16….”<i></i>
He thought with every shot he produced, hitting another chakra point, perfectly shutting them down bit by bit. The man before him collapsed, and Yusei removed his blindfold with a chuckle,
”Grandfather, you didn’t need to let me win that altercation. I believe I have shown that I can perform we……”<i></i>
Yusei paused when he realized that he actually WAS seeing everything before him. His Kekkei Genkai showed him the perfect flow of chakra energy, but also he hadn’t paid attention to the fact that there were two bodies in the forest instead of one other body there. He closed his eyes and relaxed, allowed his mind to recap the events for the last 3 minutes. His grandfather clapped in celebration of his grandsons accomplishment. He had done it.
 

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Round 2!
Bloodline: Approved!

Rank: Needs Main Branch Sennin Approval

Class: Since you are B-rank, you are considered Veteran Grade. That means you have 1 more class points you can use (for a total of 6), and you get a +5 to both your HP and CP mod. Also you have to have at least 35 in HP/CP. If I am correct, you were going for the 90 route (with one in high and two in low). In which case having your mods be HP: 65 and CP: 35 is what you would use to have the highest HP.

Physical Description & Personality: Approved!

History: Kinda the same problem as before, but with Main Branch. A mention of taking a Genin Exam would be nice. It doesn't need to be in-depth, simply mentioning a test of shinobi aptitude should suffice. For the Chuunin Exam, writing something similar to your Bloodline app would be ideal. Again, if you need ideas or want to rp something out, feel free to pm me or others.

Jutsu & Stats: Still working on that front. I am a slow mathematician, but it will get done, promise.
 

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I added a piece about the academy, and preparing to take and passing the Chuunin exams. I also did some number crunching and found that I was lacking in some areas, so I rectified that.

Old Character Name</I><i></i>: Kazama Yusei
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Went Inactive
Last Known Where-abouts: I don't remember
Old IC Rank: Leaf ANBU


New Character Name: Kazama Yusei
New Character Age: 16
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New OCR Type: Chuunin
New BL/CA: Hyuuga

The Eternal Sight
HP: (60+lvl) x stamina
CP: (40+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% to all Damage; this does not apply to Caps, +.5 accuracy, +5% melee dam
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: All others
Low: Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Acc

Agility: 300/300
Stamina: 300/300
Ninjutsu: 300/300
Taijutsu: 300/300
Genjutsu: 270/300
Chakra Control: 300/300
PL: 1770
Old Jutsu List:
Taijutsus
4 Hit Combo
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Dynamic Entry
Prerequisites: 15 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Janken
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Spinning wind
Prerequisites: 40 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Pressure palm
Prerequisites: 55 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Dragon finish
Prerequisites: 85 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Ensnare
Prerequisites: 55 Taijutsu, Can only be used with a chain.
sadistic whiplash
Prerequisites: 85 Taijutsu, Can only be used with a chain.
Shoryuken
Prerequisites: 110 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Lions barrage
Dragon assault
Prerequisites: 110 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.
Primary Lotus
Prerequisites: 160 Taijutsu, can only be used while unarmed.


elemental jutsus
storm bolt
electrocution
Zeus Flash
earth flow wave
mud clone
rock golem
Earth Spiker
Wind scythe


nonelemental jutsus
Transformation
Basic summoning
Body Switch
Chakra Blast
Crystal Eye
Contract Summoning
Barrier
Rasengan



Old Buffs:New Jutsu Lists:
Taijutsu<i></i>
Janken R2
The One-Two R2
4 hit combo R2
Spinning Wind R2
Dynamic Entry R2
Dragon Assault R2
Shoryuken R2
Roaring Combination R2
Primary Lotus R2
16 hit combo R2

Nonelemental Jutsu:<i></i>
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Contract Summoning R1
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Combination Transformation M
Barrier M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M

Elemental Jutsu<i></i>
Storm Bolt M
Thunderfist M
Electrocution M
Electroshock M
Thunderclap M
Zeus Flash M
Lightning Torrent M
Thunderstruck M
Volt Charge M
Thunder Clap M
Gigavolt Cannon M
Chidori M
Lightning Beast M
Earth Flow River M
Sinkhole Fist M
Mud clone M
Rock Golem M
Earth Flow Wave M
Earth Spiker M
Wind Scythe M

Name: Kazama Yusei
Age: 16
Height: 6'6
Weight 245
Rank: Chuunin
Alignment: Politely good

Physical Description<i></i>
He is a charmingly good looking teen, with a strong chin and a constantly furrowed brow. Yusei is a strongly built guy, physically more intimidating than most with little body fat. He is in fact highly physically strong. For someone with so much more to look forward to in life, he is taller than most. At his age, he is actually abnormally tall, transcending most of his teacher in height, making him one of the tallest shinobi. Yusei's chakras are not the average light blue, it blazes with a strong bluish-gold hue. He has a birth mark in the shape of a lightning bolt covering his left eye, although he still retains his eyesight through his orange blue eyes. Yusei is just a bit darker than others who know him, a smooth, soft brown complexion. His mane, the long spiky body of hair he has flows down to his back, and is a bright, flame red. He always carries his lightning blue knapsack with all his equipment strapped tightly to his body. Yusei has become synonymous for being large, almost bearlike with an all-black skintight training suit with the mark of Tian on it, the same emblem on the boys bare back. He smiles, but very seldomly because his teeth seem almost like fangs, but only during times of strong emotional distress do they bare in such a true form.

Personality<i></i>
Yusei is a quiet person, he enjoys deep meditation and reading. He is strongly intelligent in science, geography, history, and in the ways of Taijutsu. Yusei is a kind-hearted and gentle soul, even though his outward appearance doesn’t appear so, but at the same time, he is strongly attuned to his goals and dreams and refuse to let those fall by the wayside.


History<i></i>
Here Goes a Story about... A Hyuuga<i></i>
On the night of his birth, his mother was struck by lightning while on her way to give birth to the child. She died shortly after successfully delivering him into the world. The doctors were amazed that he was born and didn't cry even a little. His unusual chakra resonance frightened the doctors, hence why he was dubbed "the lightning prince" by those in the hospital after the fact. Three days later, his father Batousai Banrai came home from a special ANBU mission and found out the tragic news of his wives death. Once little yusei was 4, his father began to train him to be the best ninja to grace the Banrai family. Batousai imbedded in his son his nindo, "to bring great glory and honor as well as to save those we love". Yusei felt like he owed it to his father as well as himself to be the best he could be based on his father's nindo. He raised his son to be powerful beyond measure and adept in all the ways of the ninja. Batousai taught his son how to use all the ninja tools, of which he prefers the sword, he taught him ninjutsu and taijutsu. Yusei's father tested him religiously on all his training. He trained his son to bear through extreme chakra depletion, even though the child has vast quantities of it in him. His father trained his mind with the uncanny ability to resolve the battle in any manner befitting to him. While other children were playing outside, he was honing his skills. He doesn't care about anything or anyone else because he lives solely in his mind. When Yusei turned seven, his father took him out to the wilderness and placed a simple task upon his son's shoulders. "Live out here for a full year, and you will be ready". While living in the wilderness, he sought only to better hone his skills. He lived off berries and nuts and the wilderness game. He was hurt and wounded many times in the wilderness but he never saw them as serious. He battled bears and other dangerous animals to gain strength, and chased deer and other fast animals to attain incredible speed. He never knew friendship nor companionship, just sheer strength and cunning. When the boy returned from his year of training, he found that his father was nowhere to be found. He took on the mantle of Banrai from his father, but quickly discarded it when he realized he wasn’t just the son of an illustrious samurai.

After the loss of Battousai, 8 year old Yusei left his home temporarily to spend time and learn with his grandfather. The old Hyuuga surprised him when they first met after mere moments of acknowledgement of one another, the old man attacked him. Yusei fell away from him almost instantaneously, but old Shinjuro was a man better than Battousai as a teacher, and much more ruthless. Yusei became enraged by the aggressive act and began to build chakra but he couldn’t, Shinjuro had stopped his chakra flow. The boy tried to fight back, swinging wildly, but the fatigue had set in almost instantaneously. His grandfather laughed heartily,
“you’ve learned to endure the lack of Chakra, but now you must learn how to stop others for your own benefit.”
Those words were set into stone. Yusei took another two years under the tutelage of Shinjuro, furthering his understanding of the human body and chakra points. It burned the boy that he wasn’t able to see them, much less the influence of chakra on the human body the way Grandfather Shinjuro did. He learned the art of the Gentle fist, and the ability to disrupt chakra points, but he was still soundly defeated without much of a glancing blow from him to his grandfather. Yusei became frustrated,
”Was I not passed these abilities?? Am I unworthy of the abilities bestowed upon me??? What can I do???<i></i>
He sat silent in his room, acknowledging his most recent defeat, almost in meditation. The thoughts of his losses carried heavily across his mind. He began to study the battles in his mind, to see his missteps over and over, but it all boiled down to the age and kekkei genkai variables. Yusei needed to be stronger, to prove he was indeed a member of old Shinjuro’s family and possessed the dominant genes of the Hyuuga’s, but he kept his minds eye on the chart of human chakra points and the Gentle Fist abilities. Months passed, Yusei became more adept in the ways and Old man Shinjuro watched over him with a smirk as the boy progressed through his training, the old man had even managed to lose to the boy a few times in combat, so the training had been upgraded. He was to the point where he could flawlessly execute chakra halting blows, and Yusei had been training blindfolded. Yusei’s grandfather was pleased by the boys progress, it was almost flawless. Few could be so adept in the ways to the Gentle Fist in such a matter of months, unless one were indeed a Hyuuga.
“Open your eyes boy, I see it is time for you to truly be inducted in the ways of our family.”
Yusei began to remove his blindfold, but something rushed past him in a flash of wind that caught him offguard. He stepped back, into the Jyuuken Stance, taking into account every sense he possessed. He could hear the movement, and track it. He could feel the sensation of the air current around him, and the lack thereof when his grandfather whisked past him. The Taste of anticipation was paltry to him, and this time he would succeed in earning his right as a Hyuuga. Abruptly there was a coarse wind pressed against his chest, but his body was in motion as the hand touched him swiftly. He rolled to the left, his right hand’s pointer and middle fingers flying in retaliation of his assailants arm. He could see the body in motion, the chakra points in movement, firing up for an attack. Yusei realized he was in range for a counterattack, but his fingers were too swift, he jammed them into the points of his grandfathers forearm. He bounded back and fell into step,
”Lets see if this works, I hope I can get lucky again…”<i></i>
He thought, his body poised into trigrams position. The old man had been amazed by the movements his grandson possessed, but scared by the attack by the unknown man. Then he realized that Yusei wasn’t the typical shinobi. The masked Assailant rushed to close the gap between him and Yusei, but it was too late.
”8 trigrams 2, 4, 8, 16….”<i></i>
He thought with every shot he produced, hitting another chakra point, perfectly shutting them down bit by bit. The man before him collapsed, and Yusei removed his blindfold with a chuckle,
”Grandfather, you didn’t need to let me win that altercation. I believe I have shown that I can perform we……”<i></i>
Yusei paused when he realized that he actually WAS seeing everything before him. His Kekkei Genkai showed him the perfect flow of chakra energy, but also he hadn’t paid attention to the fact that there were two bodies in the forest instead of one other body there. He closed his eyes and relaxed, allowed his mind to recap the events for the last 3 minutes. His grandfather clapped in celebration of his grandsons accomplishment. He had done it.

A School Affair to remember <i></i>
Young Yusei entered the Academy at the behest of his grandfather after the disappearance of Battousai. The young Hyuuga felt it was almost unnecessary, that he should just obtain his headband by having it handed to him. Alas, it was not to be such a thing. He took a wide variety of classes, many of which tried the youths patience, as he was only physically adept and as of forbidden to use his eyes to achieve. His grandest endeavor was the library, and he treated it as a means to surpass what he couldn’t do, and what he didn’t know.

He started with the history tomes, the oldest feasible books in the archives that taught him the history. Yusei started with the original tomes of the Kagetsu clan, cause their end marked the beginning of the modern age of Kumo. The foundation of the very village he lived in started there, as well as the original maps for the Lightning Country as a whole. He saw how the Kagetsu conquered and their battle tactics that won them the Village that sat before him. SO many books, and such little time, so he decided to break his grandfathers rule because it stood in the way of obtaining knowledge. The tomes, only lightly dusted because Yusei wasn’t the first nor the last to peer into their well aged pages, allotted their knowledge to the young Kazama. Almost 7 at a time, they were being read while he held the maps so he could reenact the might battles, the brutal defeats, the changes in the landscape and human habitation. Yusei became fascinated in the way the past worked. From the disappearance of the last Kagetsu Raikage, to her subsequent return and the loss of Hayata Shin, the losses and gains of the shinobi world were before him, and it utterly fascinated the youth extravagantly.

He would spend his days and weeks in the library just learning all that he could, but now it extended far beyond just the history of Kumo. It was the chemistry of the human body, it was the physics of the universe around him, it was the theory of shinobi arts and equations corresponding to the shinobi and what variables that exist in combat; the math behind overarching angles and how to effectively evade an enemy. The young Kazama sought to be more than just a dangerous warrior, but to be a living weapon in any format. He was succeeding, and even old Shinjuro was impressed by little Yusei’s progress. The Genin exams were easily a breeze for the boy, earning some of the highest marks in his class. After it was over, he made sure he still went to the library, and read about the basic Jutsu that existed in the world. He wanted to see just which ones appealed to him and which ones he would do best to work with his fighting style.

He trained his body, and he trained his mind. The loose fitting clothes that he wore as a child, which more often than not wound up as tatters, were not worthy of the beast who existed now. Yusei change his wardrobe to all black, the slimming training suit contoured to his massive form seamlessly. He made sure to wear his headband in his hair, or around his waist depending on what day it was, but still he continued to train. He wanted to be in peak physical condition for the Chuunin exams, which were steadily approaching.

The day came and the Proctor greeted him by the door on a common Saturday afternoon,
”So, you finally got your head out of the books, and out of that forest long enough to show up for this round of exams? I’m impressed. Don’t fail, cause I’m looking forward to you doing great things this year…”
He muttered off at the boy. Yusei squeezed into a seat in the corner, a preferable spot for him to sit. He knew he had prepared for the sit down test for this exam quite thoroughly, but he still had an air of worry about the day. He knew the test came in two forms, but it was the second half he was unsure of….
<I>”……What could it be? Could it be the illustrious fighting test I’ve heard so much about?? I don’t think I can hold my own against any of the upper ranked teachers here…. At least no one above Jounin….”<i></i>
He pondered heavily as test papers were being passed around. Yusei knew this part was to test the knowledge and cunning of the test goers, but he aimed to take this test without trying to cheat. Not that he hadn’t mastered ways to cheat, but because Yusei knew he could figure these things out. The questions were increasingly difficult, but the boy only needed to get 8 right, which he managed to get 9 right on his own. When he left the testing grounds that day, something just didn’t feel right though. The flaming red hair on the nape of his neck stood up, and he felt a level of unease as he progressed further away from the grounds. Yusei didn’t head straight home, but to a clearing he remembered from a long time ago…. A time when he was still young and relished the thought of friends…. There he sat, As his hairs straightened further, standing almost straight up, and the fangs became more pronounced, he activated his Byakugan to see into the distance and noted he was indeed being followed. Was it part of the test, or was this another attempt at his life he couldn’t be sure, but he wasn’t about to let them get the drop on him or let them know he had figured out who they were.

He began to practice his basic fighting stances, nothing too fancy. Just something to keep his senses on what was around him, as all his moves in these practice bouts were moreso automatic.
”… Am I not supposed to know that they are here? Am I supposed to run???... I don’t run, I crush my opposition…”<i></i>
He thought ferociously, the true monster in him surfacing again. Yusei had to quell the aggression in him and maintain his calm, they were watching him. He reached out and grabbed a tree, a mighty ten foot spruce, aged perfectly by the years of the forest there. He snatched it out, roots and all. He began to break it down into smaller pieces, 8 round sections and placed them all around him, as a Kunai almost instantaneously pressed up against chest, and he fell back, melted. A Mud clone! Yusei reemerged on the outside of the forest, casting seals quickly. He pressed down on the ground hard, as the earth around him seemingly liquefied and became a giant Earth flow River. The Kazama, his orange and blue Byakugan fixated on his opponents bared his fangs and rode the massive entitiy through the trees, while also imbuing his pawlike hands with lightning. The boy was almost upon them when he the group of shinobi all came upon him. Yusei growled a warning at them,
”I don’t step down from fights. Either you all step down, or we fight..”<i></i>
They stopped him right there and he stared closely at their chakra and body language, they weren’t about to attack, and their aura seemed to be one of respect.
”Relax boy, we were only watching you to see how you would react when under pressure by ones enemies. You didn’t disappoint. You laid the trap, and when it sprung you were ready for whatever came afterwards. Hell, we had to calm you down because you seemed content to fight all of us to the death.” The Proctor chuckled. Yusei calmed himself down and let his Byakugan subside once more, ”You have earned the right to call yourself a Chuunin, congratulations.”
 

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Hi, sorry for the delay.

Bloodline: Still approved
IC Rank: Approved as Chuunin
OOC Rank: May change based on jutsu/stat allotment.
Class: Holding off for the same reason as the OOC rank
Physical Description & Personality: Still approved
History: Seems good to me now
Jutsu & Stats: See below!

So I've looked at your stats and jutsu and they appear to need some work.

In case this wasn't properly explained to you: As an old site transitioner, you get 2100 points to spend between your stats and your jutsu ranks. This is because we can no longer retrieve profiles from the old site to verify what people previously had for their stats and jutsus. That means any old stats, jutsus, abilities, anything you may have had are invalidated now. Again, you have 2100 points to spend on jutsu ranks and stats. You have 75,000 yen to spend on actually buying the jutsu.

There are two problems here:
1. In your previous post you assigned 1770 points to stats whereas your jutsu ranks you assigned 350 - 362 points (I'm not certain because you listed Thunderclap twice, but I think you meant Amp Field instead of the second Thunderclap). That puts you over 2100 by 20-32 points.
2. The jutsus you listed also have a total cost of 121550-129050 (again, can't be sure because of your listing Thunderclap twice). That puts you over being able to afford all of those jutsu by 46550-54050 yen.

When picking your stats and jutsu ranks you have to be mindful of how many points you have to spend and if you can afford the jutsu with the yen you've got. Your best bet here is probably to cut back on the jutsus you want to buy and rank up and instead put those points into your stats. That way you'll be spending less yen.

For your reference, I used this to calculate the totals for your jutsu:
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A link to the new shinobi shop with jutsu ranks and costs:
https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=107&p=232583#p230470

And what each rank (E-A) of jutsu costs in points to master:
E-Rank: 6 Points
D-Rank: 8 Points
C-Rank: 10 Points
B-Rank: 12 Points
A-Rank: 15 Points
 

Kazama Yusei

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Alright, let’s just edit this correctly then. I thank you for correcting me ^_^, I needed to be sure I wasn't just grasping at straws.

The Eternal Sight
HP: (60+lvl) x stamina
CP: (40+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% to all Damage; this does not apply to Caps, +.5 accuracy, +5% melee dam
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: All others
Low: Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Acc

Agility: 300/300
Stamina: 300/300
Ninjutsu: 300/300
Taijutsu: 300/300
Genjutsu: 300/300
Chakra Control: 300/300
PL: 1800

New Jutsu Lists:
Taijutsu<i></i>
Janken R2
The One-Two R2
4 hit combo R2
Spinning Wind R2
Dynamic Entry R2
Dragon Assault R2
Shoryuken R2
Roaring Combination R2
Primary Lotus R2
16 hit combo R2

Nonelemental Jutsu:<i></i>
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Contract Summoning M
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Combination Transformation M
Barrier M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M

Elemental Jutsu<i></i>
Storm Bolt M
Thunderfist M
Mud Clone M
Earth Flow river M

two questions:
With my Stats, can I go up to A Rank?
If not, Can the rest of these points go towards the Advanced Shop?
 

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Okay cool, this is progress! With your current selection of jutsu you are using 208 points and 64,000 yen by my calculations. With what you allotted to stats (1800) that places you at 2008/2100 points used with 92 remaining.

On to your questions:
Yes, you easily meet the requirements for A-rank with the number of jutsus you have and your stats. That means your caps go up, would you like to allocate the rest of the points into stats? You do have the option of putting simply holding on to them as advanced shop points if you prefer.

Now, about your class:
The HP/CP mod and High/Avg/Low stat allocation are fine, however you've got too much for your class bonus. You get 6 points to spend on class bonuses and you've got:
+5% to all damage (doesn't apply to caps) --- 4 pts
+5% melee damage --- 2 pts
+.5 accuracy --- 1 pt

Which puts you at 7 points... you'll need to drop something unfortunately.

Hope that helps! Feel free to ask any more questions if you have them!
 

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Lol, that means I had this right the first time. Then this should be all set.

The Eternal Sight
HP: (60+lvl) x stamina
CP: (40+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% to all Damage; this does not apply to Caps, +.5 accuracy, +.5 dodge
High: Melee Accuracy
Average: All others
Low: Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Acc

Agility: 300/525
Stamina: 330/525
Ninjutsu: 300/525
Taijutsu: 332/525
Genjutsu: 300/525
Chakra Control: 330/525
PL: 1892

Oh, can my story be linked to about 3 abilities?
I can link Unarmed mastery, Jutsu expansion, and sensor to the story.

Also, can I Limbo train? I'm not gonna be available tomorrow.
 

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Your class, stats, and jutsu all appear to be fine now, so I'm gonna go ahead and call this OCR finished.

For abilities, you'll have to post up your dojo and apply for them there. As far as I know we're not allowed to obtain abilities in OCR using history. Sorry.

As for Limbo training, that doesn't really apply to your current situation. That is for people who are prevented from training with their current character while waiting to OCR into their new character. However, you have until Sunday at 11:59PM to post a training for this week so you still have a little over 50 hours to post.

Yen:
-35 (not sure how this ended up on your profile, but just setting it back to 0)
+75,000 (for returning player package)
-64,000 (buying jutsu)
=11,000 (your updated balance)

Post here for your banner change to Cloud Chuunin.

I will be adding you to the Cloud usergroup briefly after which you can post a profile, training, and dojo.

Now, without further ado, welcome to Cloud! Glad to have you in my branch!
 

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