Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Koton comes back? [OCR]

Koton

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Old character name:
Koton

Old village: cloud

Ocr type: transfer

last known whereabouts: cloud

Old ic rank: chuunin

New character name: Koton

preferred username: Koton

new village: cloud

New bl/ca: Sunaku

Stats:

Agi: 300
Stam: 300
Nin: 313
Tai: 300
Gen: 300
Cc: 300

Pl:1813

Custom class
hp: (65 + 8) x stam
cp: (35 + 8) x cc
Class bonus: +20% wind dmg, +5% nin dmg
High: nin acc
Mid: evasion, gen save, gen dc
Low: melee acc, ranged acc

main branch/Anbu/Mednin: Main branch

Ic rank: Jounin

Character Age: 22

gender: male

sex: male


character physical description:
Koton stands at a solid six foot two, weighing in at approximately one hundred and eighty five pounds. With a toned athletic build befitting a ninja, casually he is found in some white pants with any random shirt and his favorite white jacket. On missions he wears a black ninja suit with half mask, his jounin vest, varying dark patterned cargo pants, and an open black trench coat. The cargo pants have an almost ridiculous amount of pockets and pouches, filled with shuriken and kunai, along with paper tags and scrolls.The trench coat is, quite like the cargo pants, widely laden with pockets carrying an assorted small arsenal of personal weaponry.

Character mental description:
He has an open and light outlook on the word. An intellectual and profound thinker, he is often unintentionally removed from casual settings or events, simply getting lost within the inner machinations of just about anything his mind desires. with a relaxed, if some what lazy nature. He values friendship as well as strength and wisdom. As a kind soul, he would rather avoid killing his enemies, but his drive and determination will easily overcome that at a moment's notice. He is in fact a smoker, having picked up the habit shortmy after becoming chuunin, he smokes about a pack a day. He doesn't feel it's effected his abilities so he sees no harm in it, no reason to quit really.

charcter history
As a young shinobi Login showed great promise despite growing up alone. He had been sent to the academy and on the day he would take his genin exam, his parents packed and fled without him. He took his whole exam shining through, waiting for the moment he could tell his parents he had done something praiseworthy. He had become a genin. As fate would have it, the boy ran smiling and cheering, headband in hand, to an empty home.

Devastation and grief quickly swept over him and wrapped him in its cold embrace. He would spent that night and many nights of the coming months crying himself to sleep in what felt like a hollow ghost of a building. In the daylight he steeled himself to the emotions. He was just as exemplary, but cold. It was calculated, every motion and reaction, and cold as ice. Every action seemed to flow from an almost entirely detached catalyst. This sort of life carried on into the days of his chuunin exam.

Just the day before this, he found himself on,the training ground. His squad mates were there but he didn't usually think of them much. When he did it was almost solely on mission scenarios and probabilities, or of their ability and disposition as to effectively cooperate. They were apt and capable ninja who were developing right along their schedules. Something Koton noted as a major discerning factor in their differences. His schedule was just ahead of theirs, and that was all there was to say on the matter.

He felt more of a peership from their senesei if anyone. A jounin, though that didn't mean much to him, he felt that he would be on par with the man he saw in days nearer than far.

The chuunin exam was going alright, but Koton was displeased with their progress. He felt slowed down,by his so called teammates now more than ever. In a brash motion he split off from the group, deciding he would get ahead and take care of things himself ahead of time. This was a great idea to him, until the ambush. Two squads of enemies from nowhere, and they had the jump on him. He was pinned down on no time, and was nearing the end when his squad arrived. They pushed the enemy back enough to free him, and began yelling at him.

His squad mates managed to open the door to the side of him that ran away with his parents. He smiled, Mid battle, thanks to their words of scolding and inspiration. The conflict they were in ended shortly, as koton had become more than he had believed himself capable of. With expert timing of a freightning nature, he manipulated the sand around him to obliterate the opposition in moments.

The rest of the exam flowed flawlessly together as the newly revived sunaku pressed forward, carving a path for his squad mates, leading them to the completion of their objective. The performance displayed had put koton under the observation of an anonymous 'higher up' who shortly thereafter recommended he be evaluated for a jounin ranking. The following trial was one Koton made an impression in. He was sent to intercept an enemy transport, it's cargo being an intelligence report, and return with the documents.

Taking up position along the route of the caravan, some intelligence that had been gathered lead to believe this was the prime opportunity, the Sunaku hid himself in the earth alongside the road. Once under he began carefully directing his chakra through the earth and sand to set his trap, ensuring his plan would play out perfectly.

He expertly halted the caravans movement with covert sand manipulation; slightly tilting the wheel to snap the axel. As the infranty began to investigate this, they simultaneously found themselves being bound and engulfed by the earth. This was when Koton emurged from cover, entered the caravan and retrieved the report. Quickly exitting, he would hold the jutsu until he was physically could not hold it over the distance he covered. No soul had seen not heard him and he had returned with the goods.

With his jounin vest koton now had a full sense of accomplishment. He wondered how his parents would think of the fact their son was a jounin; or if they thought of him at all.


Jutsu:
~Earth~
E rank:
Gravel shift R1 to m

D Rank:
Mud Clone R1 to M

~Sand~
C rank:
Desert deflection R1 to M
Sand Stars R1 to M

B rank:
Sand coffin R1 to M
Sand shower R1 to M

A Rank
Desert tendril unleash R1 to M

~Wind~
E Rank:
Pressure burst R1 to M
Wind slash R1 to M

D rank:
Shredding touch R1 to M
Whirlwind spin R1 to M
Air bullet r1 to M

C rank:
Wind scythe r1 to M
Gale force R1 to M

B rank:
Great wind scythe r1 to M
Wind scar r1 to M

A rank:
Ambience of the forbidden r1 to M
Zephyr's grace r1 to M


--Abilities--
Teamwork
Bloody mess
Jutsu Creator
Quick Reaction
Duelist
Human Anatomy
Clarity
Deflection
Combat instinct
Jutsu mastery
Acrobatic
 

Tanuki Rinko

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I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to chip at this instead of making you wait for me to do everything at once. So here's what I've got so far:

Still need to do
I still need to make sure your stats, yen, and masteries all work out, and need to check your class. (Will do that when at a computer)

Issues
Either way for your stats, at OoC B-rank, you may only have 9 abilities. Luckily (or unluckily), Jutsu Creator was decidedly removed by dev team on the 21st. (Sorry if it is still listed in abilities) I will say that I really don't see most of these abilities in your history. You need at least 100 words for each ability, and there just wasn't anything that felt devoted to any ability. You tell us your character has teamwork, but never really show your character fighting with the team. There's no mention of him learning human anatomy, or him deflecting anything, etc. If you believe you have enough words and examples in your history to get any of these (remember, max of 9) then please section them off so it is more clear. Or, you can write up quick 100 words for the abilities you want.

My other issue is your bloodline. There was barely any mention of it. To obtain a bloodline is 200 words. If you could give more on it, that would be appreciated. How did he awaken to it? Was it a harsh event that did it? Or did he know his bloodline and affinity for sand and trained hard in order to master it? Something like that.

Lastly, I personally am a little iffy on the IC rank. It seemed like your Chuunin exam was harder than your Jounin exam...and that just shouldn't be the case. However, it is ultimately the decision of the main branch Sennin, so he may be fine with it. (Just wanted to give you a heads up that there maaaaay need to be a bit more work put into that) I will lead him here so he can give his opinion.

Please do not edit your above info!!! Reply below with the new/sectioned off stuff. Thank you, and I'll get to the rest when I am able. :)
 

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(Taking place after returning home from his chuunin exam.

Koton quickly pounded through the halls, his footfall reverberating and echoing off the walls of it's empty chambers and corridors. He ran from room to room, frantically searching for his parents. One by one the number of rooms that could be holding his parents fell rapidly, until he finally came to the door to his own room. With a trembling hand he opened to door. Everything was just as he had left it, not a thing had been touched at all. The only things left in the house would be found here, and his parents were absent. The questions immdiately descended upon him, relentlessly battering his mind, straining his mind. how could this happen? he thought, why would they leave me? The sheer horror and disarray quickly redeveloped and redoubled into rage. those irresponsible, erroneous bastards. How dare they leave me behind!? particles of sand began rising around him, snaking up through the slats in the floorboards, to form somewhat of a cloud.

In a mere moment it had seemed to collapse in on itself before violently reconfiguring and striking out in almost every direction. Spears if sand continuously formed around him and pierced the surrounding structure before dematerializing and repeating this action over and over. Koton screamed and wailed from inside, unaware of what was going on around him, or even that it was his fault. It seemed his subliminal mastery of the sand that happened to shine through in his chuunin exam was coming through again, though this time it came 'en force'

jounin exam extension

(to take place when before he takes up position but after departure)

Koton, Buntai, and Meito were an route to the ambush location, they had discussed the mission in depth already and were just going over some technical segments to make sure they were all on the same page. So I hope you two are up to speed and prepared for this. Buntai, you are to lay in wait behind where we plan to half the transport. Meito, you're more proficient in range, so I want you in the treeline that overlooks the path. I will engage and hopefully pull this off without any casualties, I thin we can all agree it's more of a one man part in this play. We need defenses for unexpected reinforcements and a bird's eye to keep track of enemy movemtns or hopefully give warning of aforementioned reinforcements. Clear? The other two nodded, their Teamworkhad developed to an advanced comprehension. Koton was sure he didn't need to explain anything, but had for safety sake.

The party would be interrupted however, by a squadron of enemy forces. The team noticed them first however, and quickly moved out of sight behind some nearby foliage. there's between seventeen and thirty eight enemies sir Meito chimed in. Koton softly chuckled but even he wasn't sure why. Suddenly, in a moment of Clarity he understood. It was a pop culture reference in an alternate universe, one very different from his own. This brought a muffled but stronger laughter from him. It amused him that his life could be nothing more than mere fiction in the world of another's, whose life was the same to Koton.

Back to the task at hand he thought. He knew exactly what they had to do, and how. His mind was sharp and made this entire encounter child's play. After quickly explaining the plan, the team burst from cover into the enemy squadron. Koton quickly use his sand coffin jutsu to crush the communications ninja into a bloody mess. Landing himself instead of the squad commander, he singled them off from the fight with a sand barrier. An enemy kunai had slipped through behind him, but his reactio,s saved his neck as he barely dodged it, watching it sail ahead of him and fall with a weak thud. His focus was back to the commander, who had finally realized he would have to fight his way out. Koton took up an offensive stance and readied himself. A myriad of projectiles came his way, but his sands merely caught them mid flight. Iwas hoping you would be stronger Koton grinned. Quickly duplicating the opponents weaponry with sand copies, he returned the barrage to its rightful owner.

The blades were halted by a flame jutsu, but this did nothing to stop The sand copies, most of which found their mark.battered but,not beaten The commander followed with a flurry of fireballs, each absored by sand, though the dome was beginning to get pretty heated. Not too shabby, but I would shake a stick at you all day man. Time to end this. with just a sick motion, Koton forced the barrier around,his opponent to pierce and gouge and shred his opponent, along with a flurry of shuriken. The blades and sands tore through the enemy with ease, leaving nothing but ribbons and a very large stain. The barrier fell and Koton found himself standing with his squad mates, the enemy ranks all fallen.


Outstanding work you two! But the fact this patrol was here means are Intel was incomplete, or our recon team had been noticed. We had best be prepared for anything when we get to that transport, got it? We have about an hour and a half before we have to be in position, so eat a ration and catch your breath you guys, you will need it he lit a cigarette as they nodded and sat to rest. He wondered how things will be at the caravan, or if this was the main defense sent ahead to ensure safety? Will the second phase be more or less dangerous? A sigh escaped him as he sat with his squad. He resigned to find out when the time came. They rested and then moved to enact their plain.


Whilst laying in wait at his position, he radioed his squad mates, who were assigned for this mission by his own request. The two of them were taking up their own positions, Meito in the canopies of an overlooking tree range, while Buntai was just a few yards behind were the caravan would be halted.

[Forget the abilities for now, I'll apply for those later.]
 

Shinrya Kitsune

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Name: Requires a last name.
Description: Approved.
History: Approved.
Class: Approved.
BL: Approved.
Stats: Approved.
OOC Rank: Approved.
IC Rank: Needs approval by Kogami Ayumu.
 

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Ah! Kitsune is absolutely correct, I apologize on the Abilities mistake. I am at my computer, so here is everything.

Name: Approved
OoC Rank: Approved
IC Rank: Approved by Sennin
Bloodline: Approved
Physical and Mental Descriptions: Approved
History: Approved

Class
Your class mostly checks out. You forgot to add in where Puppet Accuracy goes. If you were unaware of Puppet Accuracy when creating your class, feel free to switch up your stats, or just slap it in the average section. (either way, reply with your decision for papertrail purposes) Once that's decided, it is approved.

Jutsu and Masteries
I believe your bought jutsu is too high I'm afraid. Here are my calculations for clarity:
E-rank = (3 x 450) = 1350
D-rank = (4 x 1200) = 4800
C-rank = (4 x 3250) = 13000
B-rank = (4 x 7500) = 30000
A-rank = (3 x 12500) = 37500
Total = 86650 / 75000 yen

You could simply just remove 1 A-rank jutsu. Or you can mess around with different removal combos. In the end, it needs to be equal or less than 75000 yen, and to remain A-rank, you must keep at least 12 jutsu with 1 in each rank except A.

Currently, this is where your mastery points stand (however, this will change due to the above yen issue):
E-rank = (3 x 6) = 18
D-rank = (4 x 8) = 32
C-rank = (4 x 10) = 40
B -rank = (4 x 12) = 48
A-rank = (3 x 15) = 45
Total = 183 / 2100
Remain Points = 1917

This means that you have more PL than you gave yourself (and you will get more when you remove the necessary jutsu to meet the yen requirements)

Please post below with the changes. Once that's done and checks out, you should be good to go! Thank you for your patience and understanding!
 

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Stats:

Agi: 300
Stam: 300
Nin: 417
Tai: 300
Gen: 300
Cc: 300

Pl:1917

Custom class
hp: (65 + 8) x stam
cp: (35 + 8) x cc
Class bonus: +20% wind dmg, +5% nin dmg
High: nin acc
Mid: evasion, gen save, gen dc, puppet acc
Low: melee acc, ranged acc

And ditching desert tendril release.
 

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Alright. Technically since you ditched the A-rank jutsu, you have another 15 stat points, but I'm not going to make you post again just to add those and have to continue to wait around.

So let it be noted that Koton will add an additional 15 points where he wants on top of the following stats:

Agi: 300
Stam: 300
Nin: 417
Tai: 300
Gen: 300
Cc: 300

Jutsu and stats approved!

With that, you are now ready!
 

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