Kurogane Shin - Nara Raian [Retirement]

[Nara Raian]

Old Character Name: Kurogane Shin
Old Village/Missing: Cloud
OCR Type: Retirement
Last Known Where-abouts: Cloud
Old IC Rank: S

New Character Name: Nara Raian
Preferred Username: Nara Raian
New Village/Missing: N/A
New BL/CA: Nara
Custom Class: Apathetic Fist

[u]Apathetic Fist[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (40+5+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (50+5+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu Option, +1 Dodge and Genjutsu Save
[i]High:[/i] Ninjutsu Accuracy
[i]Average:[/i]  Dodge, Genjutsu Save,  Melee Accuracy
[i]Low:[/i] Ranged Accuracy , Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: ANBU
IC Rank: Mempo

Character Age: 24
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description:

Neck length gray hair with silver eyes that always seem half open. He contains a slightly tan, mostly from the days he falls asleep under the sun, allowing his mind to process. Raian has a rather athletic build hidden behind most of the casual shirts he usually wears. He sometimes carries a relax fitting jacket that he'll use as a form of a pillow to lay down for a second before resuming his stroll. He stands about 5'11 with a weight of 200lbs. Most of his clothing is business casual with a relax fit design.

Character's Mental Description: Raian like most of his clan contains a natural strategic mind, using most of his interaction to learn more about people and subjects that catch his interest. Calm spoken, even though most of the time he seems half awake, Raian processes most things rather quickly, often offering small nuggets of advice or pointing out small things that people might overlook. His innate laziness mostly stems from a lack of interest in either people or subjects.

With his transition into the ANBU branch, most of his thoughts focus on learning how to improve himself and prevent possible threats early on.

Character History:

Raian is an only child, coming from parents with shinobi backgrounds. With both parents, often being called away at a moment’s notice, Raian often had to find things to keep himself interested, his mind even from an early age often requiring him to do something least he remain lazy throughout the day. A such, he was mostly more active than most his clan, given no small part to his mother, a woman train in Hachimon. Knowing that most of time she would have with her son would be fleeting , she would constantly push him, making him research anything that happen to catch his eye and study it to the finest detail. Catching a hint of laziness from her son regardless of his feeling towards the matter, made her push him more, in not in just strategy being but always of village history, mastering dialogue, and even understanding the foundation of the clan.

His father being trained in intelligence gathering, focus more on Raian understanding of his clan’s innate talent, teaching him the finer points of strategy as well as understanding the clan connection with shadows. “You never truly pay attention to one’s shadow.” The man would always say, believing it better to have another estimate you before showing them how costly a mistake that could be. Having two different styles constantly pushing Raian, it was rather easy for him to rough two years more mature than most of his age group. Most civilian’s child was off playing games with friends, Raian was outside practicing to become a better shinobi.

By the time reach enter the academy, he could understand lesson and training such a fundamental level that most his practice for focusing on controlling his clan ability to manipulate shadows. Even if some might have complained that he seemed to be uninterested in the subjects, most professor would realize that he still was taking in what they were saying, his grades often slight above average for one his age. Calm spoken and driven, Raian had few people as he grew that he found interest in. Even with graduation in a few years, Raian sought something that would push him further.

It was no surprise to his parents, that Raian would chose to switch branches early on and join the ANBU division, rather than being a regular Genin. Training was harsh and the average person would be hard pressed to have to deal with some of the things trainee had to experience to prepare them. For Raian, it was something incredible, a place in which he might find things that would keep in interesting for a long time. Different backgrounds and clan working together as a single unit to protect against threats that would wish the village harm.

Raian constantly desire to seek things that interested him have allowed to reach Mempo rank by his seventeen birthday, and the things that he has found of interest to have made him rather effect in his abilities. With the drive given by his parents, and his Nara blood making him want to improve himself, there’s no telling what the future will bring.

Clan Request: N/A

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=1593
Old Training: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=2527&start=105
Old Dojo: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=2730

Special Usergroups: N/A

Old Stats:
Old OOC Rank: S
Stat Cut: Retirement
New Stats:
Agility: 485/600
Stamina: 465/600
Ninjutsu: 518/600
Taijutsu: 514/600
Genjutsu: 463/600
Chakra Control: 510/600

OCC Rank: S
PL: 2,955
CL: 12
New OOC Rank: S

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Keeping​

Spoiler

Non-Elemental:​

[E-Rank] Transformation Mastered
[E-Rank]Body Switch - Mastered
[D-Rank] Crystal Eye - Mastered
[D-Rank]Contract Summoning Mastered
[D-Rank] Cancel Mastered
[D-Rank] Combination Transformation Mastered
[C-Rank] Elemental Clone - Mastered
[B-Rank] Chakra Blast Mastered
[B-Rank] Rasengan - Mastered
[A-Rank] Stardust Nova - Mastered
[A-Rank] Perfect Rasengan - Mastered​

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Fire:​

[E-Rank] Infernal Ember Mastered
[E-Rank] Thermal Maw Mastered
[D-Rank] Fireball Mastered
[D-Rank] Immolation Armor Mastered
[C-Rank] Dragon Fire Mastered
[B-Rank] Ring of Fire Mastered​

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Lightning:​

[E-Rank] Storm Bolt Mastered
[E-Rank] Thunderfist Mastered
[D-Rank] Thunderclap Rank 1
[D-Rank] Electroshock Rank 1
[D-Rank] Electrocution Rank 1
[C-Rank] Zeus Flash Mastered
[C-Rank] Lightning Torrent Mastered
[B-Rank] Gigavolt Cannon Mastered
[B-Rank] Chidori Mastered
[B-Rank] Lightning Beast Mastered
[A-Rank] Raijin's Vengeance Rank 1​

Water:​

[D-Rank] Water Whip - Rank 1
[D-Rank] Aqua Fang - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Grand Waterfall - Mastered
[C-Rank] Impaling Hydro Jet - Mastered​

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Earth​

[E-Rank] Stone Bullet - Rank 1
[E-Rank] Gravel Shift - Rank 1
[D-Rank] Earth Flow River - Mastered
[D-Rank] Sinkhole Fist - Mastered
[D-Rank] Mud Clone - Mastered
[C-Rank] Inner Earth Reflection Lure - Mastered
[C-Rank] Earth Flow Wave - Rank 1​

Wind:​

[D-Rank] Air Bullet - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Wind Scythe - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Tempest - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Gale Force - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Wind Release - Rank 1​

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Gravity​

[C-Rank] Gravity Distortion - Mastered
[C-Rank] Anti-Gravity - Mastered
[C-Rank] Orbital Strike - Mastered
[C-Rank] Gravitational Pull - Mastered
[B-Rank] Graviton - Mastered
[A-Rank] Shinra Tensei - Mastered
[A-Rank] Chibaku Tensei - Mastered
[A-Rank] Newton's Apple - Mastered
[A-Rank] Centrifugal Force - Rank 1​

Photon​

[C-Rank] Light Flare - Mastered
[C-Rank] Flashbang - Mastered
[C-Rank] Luminous Shine - Mastered
[C-Rank] Invisible Shell - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Clandestine Concealment - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Starstrike - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Mirage Manipulation - Rank 1​

Radiation​

[C-Rank] Atomic Shockwave - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Sub-Atomic Scorch - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Radioactive Decay - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Radioactive Glow - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Acute Irradiation - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Nuclear Discharge- Rank 1
[B-Rank] Radiation Poisoning - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Atomic Deterioration - Rank 1​

Kinesis​

<COLOR color="#008000">Taijutsu​

[C-Rank] Dragon Assault Mastered
[C-Rank] Shoryuken Mastered
[C-Rank] Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku Mastered
[B-Rank] 16-Hit Combo Mastered​

<COLOR color="#BF40FF">Genjutsu (Visual):​

[C-Rank] Black Flash - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Ocular Trauma - Rank 1​

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Genjutsu (Kinetic):​

[C-Rank] Crippled - Rank 1
[C-Rank] Mist of Deceit - Rank 1
[B-Rank] Lingering Spark - Rank 1​

<B>A.N.B.U​

[D-Rank] Mask Summon - Mastered
[C-Rank] Snapshot - Mastered
[C-Rank] Mental Infiltration - Mastered
[B-Rank] Incapacitate - Mastered
[C-Rank] Active Cameo - Mastered
[B-Rank] Shadow Servant - Mastered​

<B>Medical​

[D-Rank]Mystical Hand - Rank 1
[D-Rank]Coagulation - Rank 1
[C-Rank]System Shock - Rank 1
[C-Rank]Skeletal Fortification - Rank 1
[C-Rank]Anesthetic Infusion - Rank 1
[C-Rank]System Restoration - Rank 1​

Other Refunds: N/A

Name of any Contract you currently own: N/A
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: N/A
Name of Kinjutsu you own: None - Applying for Chimera

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads? No

Old Abilities​

0. Sentinel - ANBU Branch
1. Duelist
2. Fearless
3.Human Anatomy
4.Healing Factor
5. Initiative
6. Bloody Mess
7. Sixth Sense
8. []
9. []
10. []
11. []​

Affinities

Major Affinity: Lightning
Major Affinity: Fire
Major Affinity: Wind
Minor Affinity<i></i>: Earth
Advance Affinity #1<i></i>: Gravity
Advance Affinity #2<i></i>: Radiation
Advance Affinity #3<i></i>: Photon
Advance Affinity #4<i></i>:Kinesis​

 

[Kagetsu Yuii]

Uh, so unless you include your app for your kinjutsu here you're treated as not having one until then- so you may want to change your class until you'd done the app.

Otherwise, everything looks good

 

[Nara Raian]

OCC: Ah okay, I wasn't sure if I had to wait. I was going to have him gain it threw surgery, so I apologizes if my app seems odd.

Kinjutsu Application - Chimera [Temporal Strider]

Spoiler

Raian sat motionless on ground his breathing in small shallow breaths. In a few hours, he would be undergoing an important change within himself, something that he had been preparing for the past three months. Raian knuckles made a popping sound as he began transitioning his breath back to normal before making it shallow once more. For the past, few weeks this happen been his pattern while off duty, a sort of preparation for what he was attempting. Receiving a kinjutsu, something that he had gone through great lengths prior to this day to understand.

While he was growing up, a single subject had held his focus, the topic of kinjutsu. The ability to modify one’s self to reach even greater capabilities. The trade off with some however could be anything from fits of insanity to shaving off potions of their life force. The amount of energy need to undergo such transformation require a shinobi to have at least a few years of knowledge before even attempting to learn such arts. His mother, a woman married into the Nara clan had to undergrow strict dieting and endurance training before she had taped to fundamentals of Hachimon, abilities that an allowed one to remove limiters on a person body to achieve unnatural levels of unarmed masterly. The trade of being if the max limiters were breach, a person would in sort kill themselves from the amount of energy they were burning through.

However, this was not the kinjutsu that interested Raian, even though his body had to undergo change several weeks prior to what he was attempting. During a de-briefing a squad debriefing, a few of his teammates had encountered a rather strange shinobi during an infiltration operation in a foreign town. The shinobi was believed to had been Inuzuka, yet prolonged conflict against the man revealed him to have control of Kikai, insect typical hosted within the bodies of the Aburame. Once the shinobi was and a proper investigation on the man was underway, it revealed that his body had hosted two separate bloodlines, the primary one being the Aburame and the Inuzuka a secondary. Doing some secondary research Raian discovered this be another type of Kinjutsu, known as Chimera. By slowly modifying one’s body, they could in theory absorb the remains of another person and host a secondary bloodline, creating a hybrid of sorts. This was not without its faults, the more bloodlines that a person attempted to insert in themselves, the weaker the abilities with natural be, proving extreme strain to the body as it attempted to contain the foreign energy.

From what research papers, he could read, it seemed that three was the maximum allowance of foreign bloodlines that a shinobi could keep inside before the body with break down, leading to potential death. Optimally, one of two would make a person rather proficient, being able to manipulate the battle field to suit his needs. This could provide Raian would capabilities to make himself even far more effective within his branch. But he need to plan this correctly, modifying one’s body was dangerous for shinobi without medical knowledge and he would have to understand what made the basic of bloodlines and innate abilities before he attempted being such a being.

First few weeks, Raian spent his off-duty times researching information on chakra, the spiritual and physical aspect of it and how it fit to mutating genes in creating bloodlines. Understanding what creates the building blocks of his innate abilities with shadow control was the first step, the second was how his body house it and allowed him to control his clan’s jutsu. Using this as a basis it would allow Raian to pick a starting bloodline that would provide him the best skills needed to remain effective even with the strain his body would undergo.

Next few weeks were spent reinforcing his body, ensuring that he would be healthy enough to undergo the required surgery before attempting to absorb the foreign chakra. While it could be possible to locate the potential bloodline through hunting missions, it made much more sense to have people with medical knowledge preforming most of the genetic restructuring to allow him to control the absorbing abilities of the Chimera. Using medical jutsu that he could learn while in a different branch, he could spend the morning enhancing his body while using the afternoons to research what he could about the basic body makeup of a Chimera itself, brushing up on reports and practicing his chakra to drain energy back into himself. He used his lighting clones as a test, trying to mimic the Life Drain technique of Chimera based on live reports and documentation.

Raian was grateful for his foreknowledge of using medical jutsu to slightly modify his bodies strength, the first attempt of trying drain the chakra from his clone almost fried his wrist in the attempt, causing Raian to take a small break flat on his back as he attempted not to release the contents of his stomach. It had felt like a needle at struck parts of his bodies, almost as if struck by an invisible foe. The second attempt was hardly any better, rather than the draining the chakra, Raian found himself quickly expelling his own, forcing Raian to end the day rather early, and spending the next few ones building back up his strength. This technique was one of the basics and if he couldn’t learn to use this prior to his surgery, he would have to delay his attempt at absorbing another bloodline for another month. This was not an acceptable decision, so Raian needed to understanding what was going wrong.

He would spend the next two weeks attempting to perfect the Life Drain ability, taking rest days to ensure that preparing himself for this genetic modification would not negatively affect his performance in the field. Each failure was documented, Raian using the rest days to go through them and see what mistakes he might have made to could have cause issues. While the weeks progressing, he seemed to get a handle on the ability, the odd feeling of reinserting his own chakra was still and odd sensation, but one his body seemed to able to handle for the most part. He didn’t dare attempt to master the other abilities with his body as he currently was. For now, he could research them so he would have enough knowledge to prepare them correctly when it came to his surgery.

This cycle would go on for a while, first the researching and then the implementation, causing Raian to notice his body had developed some strain to his attempts to reinforce his skeleton and attempting to restore it should he make a mistake his calculations. Raian knew that this was the most that he could do with his knowledge, know he had to focus on ensuring his body remain healthy enough that he would not suffer any negative effects during the surgery.

Raian started to breath normally, his preparation for today having being finished. He could for now only using a single ability, one that was always one hundred percent. Attempting to strain his body any more would cause damage that he doubted he would be able to recover from without medical professionals, and he knew that he that would be a conversation he would not want to deal with. Opening his eyes, he remains a single book from his lap, placing it done next to his documentation for surgery. A few hours he would be leaving and completing the final steps for his body to be modify to handle the abilities correctly and without any issue hopefully.

Cracking his shoulders, he picked up another journal of filled with notes for the primary body that he would be requesting to absorb after the surgery was deemed successful. During his study, of possible bloodlines to store in his body, he had narrow done his choice to Temporal Strider; those with this technique seemed to be able perception of time making dangerous opponents to come across. With an innate understanding of their own time, throw off opponents and shake their own perceptions. It was clever way to get the drop on an enemy, and it didn’t hurt to have an innate understanding of one’s time. The clan would love this, probably use it to maximizes their time in the shade. Raian thought to himself, placing the book down and getting up to stretch.

His body was preforming well, some slowness but that was to be expected. He would be glad to be done with the reinforcing of his skeleton, the drain slowly becoming a small annoyance. Raian flexed his fist for a few second before getting dressed for patrol. He put a few items under his arms, making sure to include his documents for surgery before leaving. If everything when according as planned, he’d be able to see how well the rest of the Chimera abilities worked in action and claim his first bloodline. This day would be interesting.

WC: 1508

 

[Kagetsu Yuii]

Looks great

You have my vote- I'll track you down a second approval .

 

[Okada Kaji]

Second Approval Granted.
Swaps and all that jazz look good.
Chimera looks good.
Anbu Rank - Mempo, Granted.

Sorry for the wait; Irma put me out of the game for a few days.