Kurosawa's Private Dojo

[Toraono Kuro]

Character Name: Kurosawa Nataku

Demon's Grace
HP: (45 + 15) x 600 - 36,000
CP: (40 + 15) x 600 - 33,000
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu (Rikudo Sennin)
High: Melee Acc, Nin Acc
Average: Evasion, Ranged Accuracy, Puppet DC, Genjutsu DC
Low: None
OOC Rank: S

Bloodline/Core Ability:Demonic Ancestry

Core Ability Choices:
3 - Demonic Aura
3 - Third Eye
3 - Smite Foe
3 - Ancient Order
3 - Akuton
2 - Death Touch
1 - Daunting Presence
2 - Form of the Demon

Kinjutsu: Rikudo Sennin

Curse Seals: None

Advanced Shop Battle Related Purchases:

Abilities:
0. Shinobi 101-
0. Branch Ability - Paramedic
1. Sixth Sense
2. Healing Factor
3. Duelist
4. Contract Mastery
5. Jutsu Mastery
6. Poison Mastery
7. Hyperactive
8. Strategist
9. Kinjutsu
10. Kinjutsu
11. Kinjutsu

Major Affinities:
1. Lightning
2.
3.
4.
5.

Minor Affinities:
1. Earth
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.

Advanced Elements:
1. Gravity
2.
3.
4.

Weapons:
Name: Oathkeeper
Damage Type: Unarmed - May use Handseals while armed with an Unarmed Weapon
Secondary Damage Type (Trick Weapon): Slashing - May naturally inflict Bleeding
Accuracy Mod: +2 Accuracy (-10% damage)
Augments: Trick Weapon, Toxify, Razor Strike
Other: Chakra Disruption Blade - 90% of damage to HP, 10% of the damage is done to CP

Contracts: Youkai - [Approval Link]

 

[Kurosawa Nataku]

So I found this topic, I suppose this is my dojo.

A Note: I never requested Split Personality as an ability, and since this is my dojo immediately after OCR it shouldn't have any abilities in it anyways. So please remove that one.

Also I'd be really grateful is someone cleaned up that first post (since I can't edit it myself) so it looks prettier. It's kinda ugly and hard to read e.e
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1. I'll claim Major Lightning and Minor Earth as my free affinities. Then I'll claim Gravity as an AE.

2. Let's get some abilities: (For fun, I'm writing all these in the first person, lest I gouge my eyes out with boredom)

Sixth Sense

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

I had just returned from a horrifying mission, one that has left a pain I can never remove. A whole village slaughtered, including the squad I was sent there to protect them with. Only I remained, outside of a few of the villagers that escaped. My father told me it was my lack of awareness that caused the incident. That I could have prevented it if only I was more alert. He then proceeded to use some jutsu that made it impossible to see anything. I was in a void without sound or light. He kept hitting me with a stick and I was somehow supposed to defend myself. My mind was in shambles trying to reason what had just happened, and my father was trying to train me. My emotions were making it impossible. I kept trying to guess where he would come from, but I was always wrong. One moment after another I was getting bruised up badly. He managed to sweep me off my feet and I hit the ground hard. Staring up into darkness, suddenly I felt something. I knew where he was, I even knew the motion he was making with the stick. I reached a hand out and grabbed it. To my surprise, I caught the stick! He quickly kicked my hand away though. There was much training to do.

Paramedic (free branch ability slot) and Healing Factor

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

I had just become an MiT, and my parents were very proud. I remember my mother was complementing me so much, saying how impressive it was for me to have joined at my young age. My father, however, masked his pride by telling me I needed to get stronger. He wasn't satisfied with me being above average; I needed to be the absolute best. He pulled me aside for some private training. He started by cutting his arm and telling me to heal it. I began healing it, but he said I was taking too long. If this was a real fight my attempt to heal him would have gotten us both killed. He still let me finish, though, and seemed genuinely impressed by how well I did. He did not say this, though, and instead told me to do it again. I was starting to get tired, but I was actually moving faster than I had before. It was become basic instinct for me to heal someone as soon as they were injured. He tested me with various locations and types of injuries, ranging from minor to severe wounds. Eventually, he cut me. Now I was supposed to heal myself, but after a certain point I decided I didn't care as much about healing myself as I did about healing others. I wanted to be done, I was tired, and I used up all my chakra. Father would not let up, as he insisted I should continue. I refused.

I was told I needed to have separate RPs because I couldn't do 2 abilities together, so I simply made a divider at this point. The RP was over 400 words anyways..

In response to this, father smirked and quickly procured a bunny from the bushes nearby. I begged him not to hurt the bunny, and he said it wouldn't be hurt if I healed it as he cut it open and it started bleeding profusely. I raced over and gave it everything I had, taking the bunny back to perfect health from a near-fatal wound. I fell on my back, sweating and let out a big sigh. My father smiled and said we were done for the day, and let me move on. When I got home, I checked out some of the injuries on my arms and back, and was astonished to find they were all gone. Sure, there was some dried blood, but the cuts themselves had sealed up. I was certain I didn't heal them myself, but alas, maybe I had just forgotten. I would later learn I was simply a quick healer.

 

[Amano Hikari]

Everything approved and the above Dojo post has had Split-Personality removed from it.

 

[Kurosawa Nataku]

Duelist

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

I remember that day well. I was only fourteen, but my father treated me like a seasoned warrior. There was no chance I would get off easy. He called me for some extra training on a Sunday afternoon in the Winter. Mind you, the Winters in Sunagakure were never that cold. We traveled far on private property, apparently all of it belonged to him, but I had never been there before. It looked like a big farm. Here he unearthed a sword from seemingly nowhere. He told me that it had been handed down for generations in our family, and it was now time that it became mine. I was shocked.

It was a gorgeous silver katana with intricate etched designs. It seemed as though someone had taken a laser to it to give the subtle details of the artwork. On one side of the pommel there was a design of a vicious wolf snarling. On the other, a star was etched. The hilt was a bit flashy, with gold accents. The cross-guard had one word, "Oathkeeper". And the blade looked razor sharp. He didn't hand me the blade though.

"You have to earn it," he told me. He then produced another sword, again seemingly from nowhere, but it was not nearly as good looking. He took a fighting stance and without a word it was clear that I should do the same. "If you can defeat me, it's yours." I can't remember how much time passed, but I was passionately going at him with my sword far into the evening until the sun was gone. I could not best him even once. He spent most of the time just advising me on how to properly duel someone with a sword in one on one combat. Eventually he noticed that I was beyond exhausted and he told me to stop. He then handed me the sword and said the words I'd never forget: "In life, some challenges will seem impossible. It is through unyielding effort that you will obtain whatever it is that you seek. I present to you Oathkeeper."

Contract Mastery

There is one encounter that has been scratching at the back of my mind for the longest time. I can't remember where I was, or who I met with, but I met with something. It was dark, evil, but I loved it. I can't even recall what went down, but when it was all said and done I had made a blood pact. Suddenly I could call creatures of demonic origin, similar to my own, to aid me in battle. How strange a feeling.

Maybe I'm crazy, but it felt natural. I mean, I have demonic blood running through my veins. I always have. So when I suddenly could summon demons, I wasn't scared or surprised. I got to know some of the creatures I was summoning quite well. My favorite was this fox spirit named Kori, who transformed into a woman to seduce men and then take advantage. While I don't necessarily approve of that behavior, her spirit was always an enjoyable presence as she seemed to have a lot of fun.

Jutsu Mastery

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

Around the time I was beginning to grasp the powers that my Rinnegan brought me, I also began to understand jutsu as they were. It became so natural to me, I could feel the chakra flow, and combining it in different ways would produce different results. My father taught me that all jutsu have an optimal way of being used. Each technique can be done just right, to produce the most ideal result. If you put too much chakra into a technique, most of it ends up going to waste. If you put too little, all of it ends up going to waste and the technique fails. If you can perfect the handseals, the jutsu will come out effortlessly. If you cannot, it will be a little shaky. With enough practice, I was able to understand the nature of all jutsu, and soon they all seemed basic and effortless to me.

Poison Mastery

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

One day my father brought me into a strange room in his mansion. He showed me a bunch of plants all with various colors. They were beautiful, and I was intrigued. I started to step close to smell and examine them when he cautioned me to step back. Most of them were poisonous, used to creature dangerous toxins. A few were for medicinal purposes, however. He had me learn the name of each, how to identify them in the wild, and how to extract the proper chemicals to form the most potent poisons. He taught me that poison was something to add an edge to your blade. In a real battle, between life and death, one should not take any chances. Having a deadly poison can mean that all you need to do is just get one strike in on your opponent. He also told me not to use poisons on anyone I don't intend to kill.

Hyperactive

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

In my younger years, I was nothing like I am today. I was always wide-eyed and in love with my surroundings. I constantly jumped from one place to the next, always seemed to have the energy for training, and kept improving at an alarming rate. Whenever my father trained me for long sessions, I would inevitably use up all my chakra. He would then have me take a break, and in almost no time I'd feel ready to go again. I figured that was just normal, but as I grew older I noticed that it was just me. Not every shinobi was like this. Maybe it's just my willpower, but something tells me that I have a natural regenerative capability. After all, my injuries seem to heal quickly too. I suppose I have my demonic blood to thank for this.

Strategist

From time to time, my mind drifts back to when I lived with my father in Soon. When he trained me in ways that nobody else could.

It seems cliche, but the best advice I may have ever received from my father was to always be prepared. For every situation. It didn't matter what I got myself into, there should have been a point prior where I at least considered that situation and how I might handle it. I should never be forced to make a decision on the spot, because I should already have the decision made. It seemed crazy, but enough thought experiments showed me that it was quite possible. He taught me how to prepare my weapons, conceal them like he did, and make them ready to go at a moment's notice. He told me that I should always have several aces up my sleeve, so that no matter what a fight threw at me, I'd have something to throw back.

Weapon
Name: Oathkeeper
Damage Type: Unarmed - May use Handseals while armed with an Unarmed Weapon
Secondary Damage Type (Trick Weapon): Slashing - May naturally inflict Bleeding
Accuracy Mod: +2 Accuracy (-10% damage)
Augments: Trick Weapon, Toxify, Razor Strike
Other: Chakra Disruption Blade - 90% of damage to HP, 10% of the damage is done to CP



Also can you do me a favor and use this format to make the first post look pretty: (Plz?)

Spoiler

[b]Character Name: Kurosawa Nataku[/b]

[u]Demon's Grace[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (45 + 15) x 600 - 36,000
[b]CP:[/b] (40 + 15) x 600 - 33,000
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu (Rikudo Sennin)
[i]High:[/i] Melee Acc, Nin Acc
[i]Average:[/i] Evasion, Ranged Accuracy, Puppet DC, Genjutsu DC
[i]Low:[/i] None
[b]OOC Rank:[/b] S

[b]Bloodline/Core Ability:[/b]Demonic Ancestry

[i]Core Ability Choices:[/i]
3 - Demonic Aura
3 - Third Eye
3 - Smite Foe
3 - Ancient Order
3 - Akuton
2 - Death Touch
1 - Daunting Presence
2 - Form of the Demon

[b]Kinjutsu:[/b] Rikudo Sennin

[b]Curse Seals:[/b] None

[b]Advanced Shop Battle Related Purchases:[/b]

[b]Abilities:[/b]
0. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=506#p506][u]Shinobi 101- [/u][/url]
0. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=55571#p55571][u]Branch Ability - Paramedic[/u][/url]
1. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=480#p480][u]Sixth Sense[/u][/url]
2. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=42617#p42617][u]Healing Factor[/u][/url]
3. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=540#p540][u]Duelist[/u][/url]
4. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=136553#p136553][u]Contract Mastery[/u][/url]
5. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=527#p527][u]Jutsu Mastery[/u][/url]
6. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=42593#p42593][u]Poison Mastery[/u][/url]
7. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=531#p531][u]Hyperactive[/u][/url]
8. [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=477#p477][u]Strategist[/u][/url]
9. Kinjutsu
10. Kinjutsu
11. Kinjutsu

[b]Major Affinities:[/b]
1. Lightning
2.
3.
4.
5.

[b]Minor Affinities:[/b]
1. Earth
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.

[b]Advanced Elements:[/b]
1. Gravity
2.
3.
4.

[b]Weapons:[/b]
[u]Name[/u]: Oathkeeper
[u]Damage Type[/u]: Unarmed - May use Handseals while armed with an Unarmed Weapon
[u]Secondary Damage Type (Trick Weapon)[/u]: Slashing - May naturally inflict Bleeding
[u]Accuracy Mod[/u]: +2 Accuracy (-10% damage)
[u]Augments[/u]: [url=https://ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=202329#p202329]Trick Weapon[/url], [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=15198#p15198]Toxify[/url], [url=https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=15226#p15226]Razor Strike[/url]
[u]Other[/u]: [url=http://ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=43308#p43308]Chakra Disruption Blade[/url] - 90% of damage to HP, 10% of the damage is done to CP

[b]Contracts:[/b] Youkai - [url=http://ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=414&t=44077][Approval Link][/url]

 

[Senju Kazuki]

Approved.