Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

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Nigiri Shimete -> Amegatsu

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Old Character Name: Nigiri Shimete
Old Village: Cloud

Preferred New Username: Amegatsu

New Character Name: Shikame Amegatsu
New Village: Cloud
New BL/CA: Haku

New Character Class:
Figure Skater
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +5% Max HP & CP, +1 inventory slot
High: Puppet Accuracy
Average: Evasion, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Genjutsu Save, Range Accuracy
Low: Genjutsu DC, Melee Accuracy



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ANBU, Medical or Main Branch? Chunin

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Age: 18
Gender: Male
Personality: Amegatsu is one of the younger members of the Gypsy clan and like other member she too did not inherit the powers of the Hoshigaki bloodline, which runs deep in this clan. There are three paths a gypsy can take and each one is a follower of a different gypsy goddess. Those who inherit the Hashigaki bloodline usually become followers of Luna; Luna followers focus on music and casting illusions through song. Amegatsu chose to be a follower of Tia; followers of Tia focus on dance and primarily use tiajutsu. The two followers normally work together; the Luna providing music for Tia’s dancing. Each follower of Tia focuses on the art of dance, but it is how they dance which truly defines them. Amegatsu was determined to make his mark on the world and perform spectacular feats. He dances with puppets and normally does it on ice like figure skating.


Appearance: Amegatsu has a nice thin body which is also quite flexible; like to the extent that he can wrap her legs around his neck. His muscles are strong due to acrobats; if he flexed his arm, it will likely intimidate other kids his age. He is also fast and agile which is not unusual for a dancer. He is petite but he is not underweight. He is a well-toned oiled machine like the puppets he wields.

History:
Not so long ago there was a caravan of gypsies traveling across the mountains. It was getting dark so they made camp. Unfortunately a demon wondered through those lands. A yuki-ona, a snow demon, froze almost everyone is one of the caravan’s wagons to death in their sleep. Luckily one of the gypsy in this wagon left to get wood for the fire. When he returns he sees his sleep-mates dead with a woman standing there amongst them. The demon would have killed him too, but she found him attractive. She walks to him and places a hand on his cheek as she stares into his eyes. Her hand was soft and cold as ice. He did not flinch from her icy touch for he was entranced by her beauty. Instead he takes her hand and gives it a kiss. Yuki-ona blushes and asks, “What is your name, human?” Her breath was so cold that it was visible.

Still holding her hand he answers, “I am Shikame Tsubasa. What might your name be miss?”

She smiles, “You may call me Yuki.” She then pulls away her hand and continues. ”I am afraid Shikame-san that your team has trespassed through my territory. It is for this reason that your team is now dead.”

“Well we…” Before Tsubasa could say anything else she puts a finger to his lips and whispers into his ear.

“If you do not speak of me, I shall let you live.” Tsubasa silently nods his head. “Good, then we have an agreement. Be sure to remember it.” With a smile she walks away. The next day Tsubasa and the rest of the caravan enters the village of Cloud.

A few years come and go and Tsubasa forgets all about that traumatizing event. He falls in love with a woman and she bares him a son. All was perfect until one cold winter day. It was the day of the winter festival. They completed in the snowman making competition. Tsubasa and his five year old son gather up buckets of snow and the mother shapes it into a figure. She makes a beautiful snow woman. Tsubasa then stupidly mention, “It looks like the yuki-ona I met on one of my missions long ago.”

The smile on his wife’s face quickly fades away and she tells him, “Honey, we need to talk.” Tsubasa was unsure what he did, but it must be something bad to hear those words. Tsubasa and his wife walk off to a nearby tent to talk in private. Once inside his wife turns into yuki-ona, this gave Tsubasa quiet a fright. ”I told you I will kill you if you mention me, but for the sake of our son I shall spare your life.” She then disappears in thin air.

Tsubasa walks back to the snowman and the child asks him, “Where’s mommy?”

Tsubasa kneels down to the kid’s level and hugs him tightly. ”I’m so sorry Amegatsu. She is gone.” Amegatsu did not accept this answer. He slips out of his father’s embrace and runs through the festival grounds crying for his mother. He runs from stall to stall searching until he trips and falls into the snow. He just lays there and cries. Tsubasa picks Amegatsu up, holds him in his arms and strokes his hair gently. Amegatsu starts to calm down and Tsubasa takes him home.

Amegatsu was an avid reader and was always reading stories about ninjas. It was his dream to become a ninja and now that he has reached the age of ten, he is old enough to join the academy. But before he could go he requires his father to sign the form of enrollment. Amegatsu hands him the form and asks him to sign it.

Tsubasa instantly recognizes it and takes a deep breath for he knew this day was going to come sooner or later. Tsubasa fears the demonic spiritual energy flowing within his son’s veins. He knew that the lack of training will cause Amegatsu’s spiritual energy points to become dormant. “Amegatsu, this is for ninjas. We are gypsy. We are nomadic and eventually we will move on away from this place.”

“But”

Tsubasa then spoke in a stern voice, “No buts. You are not to join the academy and that is final.”

Amegatsu angrily runs to his room and slams the door behind him. Now within his inner sanctum he forges his father’s signature on the form. Amegatsu was determined to prove to his father that he can become a Ninja.

The next day Amegatsu turns in the form and attends his first class. He learns how to mold his spiritual energy and being proud of his new skill, he show off in to his father. Amegatsu casts a spit bullet jutsu, which for some reason became an ice bullet. The bullet zooms towards the house, but before it could hit the wall Tsubasa catches it with his bare hands. “What is this? You went to the academy didn’t you?” Tsubasa was yelling on full volume and Amegatsu was too scared to speak. Instead he gave an affirmative nod. ”You are grounded for a month!”

On the last week of his grounding Tsubasa feeling that his son learned his lesson lifts his ground in time for the winter festival. Amegastsu was glad to see the winter festival once again. It was one of his favorite events of the year. When he was younger his parents would take him. He would ride on his mother’s shoulders as his father played the games and winning him prizes.

This would be the first time he would come here alone. He wore a traditional kimono. His kimono was a solid white with a black sash tied around his waist. A little book can be seen tucked inside the sash. It was around noon, but the sun hid behind the clouds. Amegatsu blew on his hands, his breath completely visible. Suddenly a snowflake lands onto his glasses and immediately he looks up to see snow softly descending from the heavens.

He walks around looking for a stall that was indoors. That’s when he saw the fortune teller’s tent. He walks in with his blue hair now white with snow. Inside the tent was dark for the only source of light was a crystal ball that glowed dimly on the table. In front of Amegatsu, he could see a chair and across the table sat a figure that hid in the shadows. Amegatsu could not tell if the teller was male or female, but he took a seat anyways. He notices a deck of cards lying on the table before him. Amegatsu did not ask any questions for a true fortune teller knows exactly what he wants foretold and that is the fortune that will be told. He would not be disappointed for what he needs to hear is what he will hear.

It’s such a simple thing, but in truth it is very difficult to accomplish. Even though a fortune teller offers results that are difficult to confirm it doesn’t give a person to lie or do less than their utmost. A customer comes to the fortune teller with the ardent hope of getting a real divination, and it’s rude to that hope to do less then one’s best.

The fortune teller tells him oh a book he must find; a book that he would find in the attic of his house. While searching he comes across his father’s old journal. He pockets it and the next day he sneaks it to the library to read.
Dec. 27
I am a fool. I married a demon, a yuki-ona. How could I have been so blind? I can’t believe

Amegatsu always wondered why his father rarely talked about his mother and now he knew. He wonders if he inherited any of her powers. Eager to find out, he rushes outside. Being the beginning of spring it was raining. He closes his eyes, concentrates but nothing happened.

This half demon thing was a bit overwhelming and his mind was going a mile a minute with questions he wanted to ask his father. Before heading back home Amegatsu goes to the hot spring to quiet his thoughts. He sits in the hot water all relaxed. He closes his eyes and remembers his mother. She was very beautiful and cared for him deeply. Amegatsu recalls a day that he was quite ill. He had an extremely high temperature and was sweating heavily. His mother placed a hand on his forehead and sings him to sleep. As she sang he could feel energy all around him like a cool wet towel enveloping his entire body. Before the song put him to sleep, he could see his sweat droplets turn to flakes of snow.

He opens his eyes and was willing to try one more experiment. He steps out of the water and meditates. He focuses on his spiritual energy, which flowed like water through his body. He touches the water and pours his spiritual energy into it. The water begins to cool as his spiritual energy dilutes it. With one single word, “freeze,” his spiritual energy stops the water molecules from moving thus turning it to ice. Amegatsu felt disappointed with his work. True he succeeded, but it lacked beauty. He had to try again but the water was already frozen. So he permeated the air in his hand with his spiritual energy. It freezes the water vapor in his palm into a senbon, a needle looking weapon. The senbon was hollow and possessed two holes. As he throws it, it makes a beautiful sound.

So it was true. He was a half breed after all. His mother was a demon and his father hid it from him. Amegatsu was happy to see he had special powers, but he was also scared at what he might become. He heard horrible stories about demons. Would he become a monster like those in legends? Maybe in was better that he did not know and lived in ignorance, but that time has passed. Amegastu knows the truth. Now he must face it head on. “I must find out the nature of the demon that has given birth to me. Only then will I know if this power is safe or dangerous.”

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Death/Retirement Thread: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=210490#p210490
Old Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=45044
Old Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=45110
Old Dojo: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=45050
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Current Usergroups: none

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Old Stats:
Agility: 425/525
Stamina: 485/525
Ninjutsu: 437/525
Taijutsu: 519/525
Genjutsu: 210/525
Chakra Control: 525/525
Stat Total: 2601

New Stats:
Agility: 380/525
Stamina: 400/525
Ninjutsu: 300/525
Taijutsu: 300/525
Genjutsu: 300/525
Chakra Control: 400/525
Stat Total: 2080

Justu Mastered Swap:
~E-Rank
Unforeseen Strike (Range) -> Momentum Tackle (Pup Off)
Curve Shot (Range) -> Castling (Pup Def)
Dynamic Slash (Slash Tai) -> Puppet Protection (Pup Def)
Overhead Strike (Slash Tai) -> Transformation (NE)
Arcing Slash (Slash Tai) -> Body Switch (NE)
Strike Aid (Pup-Sup) -> Keep

~D-Rank
Crimson Flash (Slash Tai) -> Projectile Launcher (Pup Off)
Heavy Tow (Slash Tai) -> Death's Embrace (Pup Off)
Mystical Hand (Medical) -> Oil Sheen (Pup Sup)
Coagulation (Medical) -> Water Whip (Water)

~C-rank
System Shock (Medical) -> Mechanical Smack Down (Pup Off)
Counter Shot (Range) -> Magnet Missile (Pup Off)
Skeletal Fortification (Medical) -> Needle Shower (Pup Off)
Tracking Beacon (Range) -> Thorny Blockade (Pup Def)
Anesthetic Infusion (Medical) -> Hidden Smoke Bomb (Pup Def)
System Restoration (Medical) -> Puppet Tent (Pup Def)
Scan (Kinjutsu) -> Puppet Craft (Pup Sup)
Grapple (Unarmed Tai) -> Barrel Trap (Pup Sup)
Eight Trigrams Acupuncture (Kinjutsu)-> Visor of the Eccentric (Pup Sup)
Shadow Dance (Buff) -> Arctic Aether (Ice)

~B-Rank
Heaven's Dance of Hazy White (Kinjutsu) -> Feint Strike (Pup Off)
Grapple Shot (Range) -> Terra Shift (Pup Def)
Suplex (Unarmed Tai) -> Vitality Force (Pup Sup)
Submission (Unarmed Tai) -> Puppet Barrier Replication (Pup Sup)
Seismic Toss (Unarmed Tai) -> Snowflake Shuriken (Ice)
Homing Shot (Range) -> Crystallize (Ice)
Flurry Shot (Range) -> Ice Prison (ice)

~A Rank
Eight Trigrams Heavenly Guard (Kinjutsu) -> Hailstorm (Ice)
Terra Firma Shot (Range) -> Subzero Purge (Ice)
 

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Rank: Checking with Main Branch Sennin

BL/CA: See History

Class: Approved

Personality:
I'm sorry, but that doesn't really tell his personality. Personality is a totality of an individual's behavioral and emotional characteristics. What you supplied was essentially added history. Basically I just want to know how he would react to people generally. Is he a nice guy? Is he broody? Does he fly into a rage when someone calls him pipsqueak? Stuff like that to have a general sense of how he would react in a social situation. Other possible characteristics are loyalty, sense of justice, etc. You can keep what you have, but please post below (DO NOT EDIT YOUR POST) giving a better explanation of his behavioral/emotional characteristics. It doesn't have to be long, I promise, just something to explain his general mood.

History:
We in council have agreed that your history is good the way it is. HOWEVER! Currently you make it sound like your character is both Haku and Demonic Ancestry as you put equal emphasis on the demon part as you did the ice aspect.

We aren't saying you have to rewrite your history, as it is a very nice history, and the rules do state that you can be half demon. What we are saying is that if you are going to be Haku, then you will have NO demon chakra/characteristics (but he would be allowed to still have a demon mom). You would not be able to have any CRPJs, abilities, or what-have-you that do or are related to demony things unless you went for a BL/CA swap. Your new avatar is perfectly fine, but note that if you do choose to be Haku, then you would not be able to actually rp having pointed ears, as pointed ears are a Demonic Ancestry perk. On the other hand, you could go Demonic Ancestry instead, but would have to remember that this would mean that your free Major and Minor would have to be Water and Wind respectively in order for your character to use Ice (and you would therefore not be able to use Haku BL abilities)

*Note: If you wish to go the Demonic Ancestry route with Ice Advanced Element, your history does a good enough job to count as the rp to unlock Ice, so you would not have to do it in your dojo as long as you have your free Major and Minor be Water and Wind respectively.

Stats: Approved

Jutsu Mastery Swap: Approved

In the Added Personality Post you will supply below, please clarify if you wish to stay with Haku, or switch to Demonic Ancestry. Thank you kindly!
 

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Personality: As a gypsy he lives to entertain and considers himself an artist as good as any Toujigikou. With thin air he conjures ice and snow molding it into works of art; some of which explode in an arctic blast. Nature is his inspiration. He rather create flowers and other plant life than masks or weapons of human design. Amegatsu is very sociable and eager to please, however his motivations are often for receiving something in return. One thing he will not tolerant is bigotry towards his heritage as a gypsy. A show would come at an abrupt halt at a claim of gypsies being thieves and pick pockets.

History: I understand and I would like to continue as Haku. I'm also pleased that you liked my history as I put a lot of work i it.
 

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Awesome-sauce. With that:

Bloodline (Haku): Approved
Personality: Approved
History: Approved

Waiting on:
Rank approval by MB Sennin
Second Council Member Approval
 

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Main Branch Sennin here about the rank approval.

I, too, like your history. However I would ask that you simply add a bit about your character's shinobi career. For example, clearly he must have continued attending the academy despite his father's admonishment. If you could add something about how he reached Genin and Chuunin ranks, then I give my approval for Chuunin rank. Doesn't have to be much, but there should be something describing life after Academy seeing as he is a Chuunin now.
 

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Amegatsu remembers back in his first class he befriended Hebi and it was there they learned that in order to pass the academy one must receive so many credits. This would take days for a normal student, but not them. No they merely summons two support puppets and uses puppet transformation to make them look like each other. With these to puppet she was able to take two classes at one time, thus allowing them to achieve the credits they needed in a half of the time. However they both decided to wait to take the exam for two heads is better than one. They did not apply to any more classes but their puppets transform as someone else. Both they and their puppet signed up for the exam. In the exam the participants were split into two teams, however it was up to the students to decide the teams. Hebi and Amegatsu were in one team and their dolls in another. The other team did not have a chance with a saboteur in there mists. He consider it a lesson to the other team to always question the identity of those around you on a mission for you never know when one of them may be replaced even at the start.

As a genin he took many missions as an entertainer. With certain clan in the village it was not unusual for people of the country to come to the village and hire shinobi entertainer for special events.

Since it was nearing the Lightning festival the Chunin exam proctor tailored the exam after the first chakra user event. Amegatsu tosses a shard of ice into the ground. At first it sprouts into a small plant but then it quickly grows to an immense size. It was a tree of snow and ice and it was larger than any tree is the forest. Its trunk was big as a house and its branches extended out providing shade to the entire battlefield. Roots of ice penetrate deep into the ground like a real tree. White leaf with razor sharp edges rain down from its branches. It was truly a sight to behold; Amegatsu was never one to provide simple ninjutsu.
 

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Nigiri Shimete said:
Amegatsu remembers back in his first class he befriended Hebi and it was there they learned that in order to pass the academy one must receive so many credits. This would take days for a normal student, but not them. No they merely summons two support puppets and uses puppet transformation to make them look like each other. With these to puppet she was able to take two classes at one time, thus allowing them to achieve the credits they needed in a half of the time. However they both decided to wait to take the exam for two heads is better than one. They did not apply to any more classes but their puppets transform as someone else. Both they and their puppet signed up for the exam. In the exam the participants were split into two teams, however it was up to the students to decide the teams. Hebi and Amegatsu were in one team and their dolls in another. The other team did not have a chance with a saboteur in there mists. He consider it a lesson to the other team to always question the identity of those around you on a mission for you never know when one of them may be replaced even at the start.

This section about Amegatu's time as a student will suffice for that, although I will say that the part about a normal student taking "days" to pass the academy is erroneous. I would say most spend at least a year, probably more, in the academy ICly.
Nigiri Shimete said:
As a genin he took many missions as an entertainer. With certain clan in the village it was not unusual for people of the country to come to the village and hire shinobi entertainer for special events.

This could be better if it was a bit more fleshed out. Only taking missions as an entertainer wouldn't really refine his skills as a shinobi very much.
Nigiri Shimete said:
Since it was nearing the Lightning festival the Chunin exam proctor tailored the exam after the first chakra user event. Amegatsu tosses a shard of ice into the ground. At first it sprouts into a small plant but then it quickly grows to an immense size. It was a tree of snow and ice and it was larger than any tree is the forest. Its trunk was big as a house and its branches extended out providing shade to the entire battlefield. Roots of ice penetrate deep into the ground like a real tree. White leaf with razor sharp edges rain down from its branches. It was truly a sight to behold; Amegatsu was never one to provide simple ninjutsu.

As a Chuunin exam this alone wouldn't really suffice to be honest. Maybe as the first phase of an exam, but not the entirety of it. A Chuunin exam is supposed to test the proficiency of a shinobi. While the jutsu he demonstrated might have been impressive, it wouldn't really be enough to show that he's ready to be a Chuunin, you know? Perhaps having him sent on a mission or just a more expansive exam that would ask him to overcome certain trials to prove himself. If you need some ideas I encourage you to ask in Cloud's Skype chat (if I'm there at the time I will gladly help).

I hope you will take this all as constructive criticism.
 

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At first missions he was allowed to take were boring and mundane like finding a person’s lost dog. However after years went by they got more interesting like escort missions and body guarding. His favorite kind of mission was an entertainer. With certain clan in the village it was not unusual for people of the country to come to the village and hire shinobi entertainer for special events.

Since it was nearing the Lightning festival the Chunin exam proctor tailored the exam after the first chakra user event with a twist. The rule were simple: only ninjutsu were allowed and last one standing or person in better condition after in an hour wins. It was a long and exhausting battle, but in the last minutes. Amegatsu tosses a shard of ice into the ground. At first it sprouts into a small plant but then it quickly grow to an immense size. It was a tree of snow and ice and it was larger than any tree is the forest. Its trunk was big as a house and its branches extended out providing shade to the entire battlefield. Roots of ice penetrate deep into the ground like a real tree. White leaf with razor sharp edges rain down from its branches. It was truly a sight to behold; Amegatsu was never one to prove simple ninjutsu. The assault for the tree’s icy leafs completely slays his opponent dragon of flame.
 

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