Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Omoi Tetsu

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So can you, like, give me Chuunin stats? I swear I was B-Rank years ago (as Obito Taiki up until a few revives later), but I forget pretty much everything about my old account. Okay, thanks :D

Name: Omoi Tetsu
Age: 14
Weight: 160 lbs
Height: 176 cm
Blood Type: B-
Bloodline: Hashigaki

Physical Description:

Out of place seemed to be the most apt and succinct way to describe Tetsu. At 176 cm, he was ever so slightly too tall for his age, and at 14, certainly too old to be registering in the academy, and a giant among his peers. In the early days of an uncomfortable growth spurt, the boy's every movement seemed softly tinged with a kind of forcefulness that made it look as though he was piloting his oversized body, rather than simply living in it comfortably. He would slouch, trying to squeeze himself inward into a smaller space. He didn't otherwise look apparently as though he was shrinking from view, only that something about him seemed amiss. Awkward. As though he was simultaneously trying to make himself smaller while disguising the attempt.

Short shocks of black hair were kept parted from the stoic expression that had become a permanent fixture of his still-boyish face; it almost gave the impression that Tetsu was well put together, tidy, careful. That caveat, almost, seemed to persistently follow him, however. He had no strict sense of fashion to adhere to, but rather, he'd give the most dedicated attention to the state of the clothing he had available on any given day. The shirt that only had a single, small hole, say, in it's lower back, could be tolerated, so long as that hole was still relatively easy to cover; permanent sweat stains were occasionally acceptable, so long as the boy remembered to keep his arms down that day. These were the hand-me-downs of hand-me-downs, and Tetsu wore them as a kind of sentence, a term of his duty. They brought with them a kind of slow urgency for the boy to return to doing nothing and escaping notice in those brief moments he was pulled from his quiet rigidity by the world around him.

Mental Description:

He didn't know why, but he could feel something tightening around his heart, slowly, year by year, like a snake.

Fairly bright, Tetsu still routinely had difficulty absorbing topics in any kind of effective or timely manner. He was, for lack of a better word, the opposite of talented. When it came, that fog that would infect his focus, he would find himself peering closer and closer into the person trying to capture it, finding the sweat droplets palpitating on their quivering skin, their pores opening and closing to breathe in the air from a massive swathe of living skin. The person would start seeming like a kind of host, an organism that had managed to take over that mass of flesh and sweat and blood and guts he found himself staring at with a hypnotic devotion. It wasn't disgust that he felt, not exactly, but something close to it. A little bit longer, if he couldn't break free from the feeling of the unfamiliar present; like an invader, the thought of ripping that mass of skin to pieces would slowly seep into the edges of his consciousness. When it subsided and calm returned to him, Tetsu could at least find some solace in the fact that his life was, essentially, good. He just wanted to scream and never stop.

He could see the growing ambitions of the people around him; the need to make their family proud, to impress their village, and maybe, just maybe, imprint their name on the minds of those across the oceans and borders of the small world they all lived in. Tetsu tried, but he couldn't force himself to feel what they all apparently had; the drive to carry on some kind of meaningful memory into the future. All he had was the urgent need to make one more small step forward, for as long as he could, while the oxygen seemed to thin around him, the blotted out edges of his vision seeming to get smaller each day, to a point of light flickering in and out of darkness. Catharsis alone would save him, he seemed sure of it, from the bottom of his soul. Life for him was good though, the days were easy. Nothing to report.

History:

Tetsu's father, Omoi Goro, was a blacksmith, and not a very good one, and everyone knew it. They lived in a small cabin on the side of a mountain, overlooking the forest. Goro knew his work was mediocre, but prided himself on being a blacksmith for all seasons, and by that, he meant, of course, that during surges of anger and vengeance and war that would see the countryside swept of it's nobler farmers and tradesmen, Goro would be right there to pick up the slack. "Hillbillies with knives, out on fool's errands." He would call them, and vocally too; these men who thought they could retire for years and years from combat and still convince themselves they were fit for it because the occasion had called for violence, men who would periodically rid the countryside of their convictions. What remained was undertrained and fatherless teenagers or children, swinging around a hammer like the offspring of fools they were.

Ryuichi, Tetsu's soon-to-be older brother, remembered this time as a moment of pure bliss, his very first memories forged by the rolling in of the evening tide along the shores below their home just before night, and constantly traveling out to gather rice with his father from the local market, or wading through rocky fields sloped against the coming sunrises. And later, when he was a little older, running to his distant neighbours with some of his childhood friends; they would distract their neighbours while Ryuichi searched for all the places the farmer's chickens might have hidden some of their eggs. Goro had gradually convinced his wife, Junichi, to live frugally even during those seasons that his business was thriving. 'This was' he assured her, [/i]'the only way they could survive in times when his shop once again fell out of public favour.'[/i]

She agreed with him, of course; 'she loved him', she would tell him during the days he tried, as well as he could, to convince her to leave him. What started as debts that suddenly, from under that tide of good will, could not be repaid, ended as a type of irreversible change of personality for the two of them. Junichi began pleading that her last dime for rice or wheat would be spent repaying her debt for last week's groceries, or tavern tab, or new and leased outfits for her son's first day of school. Goro, meanwhile, had resorted to a number of clever, if only minor, money saving scams. Often, he'd go to the market to buy a replacement for something that had fallen apart; a cracked pot, or radio, or worn anvil, and then, in the near future, make a large scene as he tried to return a clearly more worn version of the tool. Those in the village who didn't greet them with a suspicious eye and a tightened fist, were regarded, themselves, as being as foolish as the brave blacksmiths and farmers Goro was always going on about.

A perfect little domestic life, crystallized forever in Ryuichi's young memory, but it couldn't last.

For some reason, lost in the darkness of Ryuichi's ever retreating childhood memories, he remembered, on a visceral level, that what had happened had been the result of sweet buns. It wasn't that he didn't know in that rational part of his brain that those sweet buns had run out days prior to the argument. Those tasty and once a month donated treats, had given way to a diet of rice alone, and spices, for several days, maybe a week, before their next real meal. Ryuichi felt like he couldn't take it any more. His stomach was actually cramping tightly with hunger. He even got his hands on an apple during one of those days of fasting and had become shocked and scared as it gave him an even worse pain in his stomach, one that seemed to last, sharply, for an entire hour. His mother, Junichi, then, at the peak of his misery and without warning or announcement, came in early one morning before Ryuichi had woken, stirring him out of unconsciousness with the morning light from the doorway and the smell of cooked chicken as the blur that was his smiling mother came into view, out from the light of the morning.

Ryuichi got straight to work, doing the best he could to prepare dinner, and the table to eat it from. He couldn't hear what Junichi and his father were saying to each other, but what started as rapid processions of whispers soon rose to words squeaked out in voices that would be funny, if the faces of the two hadn't made it so enigmatically terrifying. His father looked into Ryuichi's eyes and gently took the woman by the elbow into the yard, where their voices turned to shouts. The boy turned the water pressure up to wash the dishes and made a kind of sound in his head that was very close to being a complete absence of sound, as though he could drown his parents out with a deafening silence. No one had dinner that night, and less than a year later, Tetsu was brought into this quiet little countryside world.

Junichi began complaining of regular and overwhelming headaches. Dark rings would routinely dig their ways in the depths of her eyelids, seemingly regardless of the amount of sleep she actually got. She began becoming tyrannical about the noises of the creeping children at night, or any time before the sun wasn't directly overhead. The slightest breath, off-pace, seemed to be capable of waking her; one creak in the floor, a kicked toy, anything, could set her into a sudden waking fury and terror, and as soon as either of the boys had heard the error of their own ways, they would freeze, their adrenaline suddenly pumping. They would be made to stand still, in the middle of the room for hours, until she fell back asleep; the only mercy they could hope for was possibly being allowed to finish what they had gotten up for, be it a glass of water or to use the washroom.

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It wasn't long before Ryuichi would leave Tetsu alone. Junichi could anticipate the moment coming for years, and it brought her a terrible amount of anxiety. The Omoi family would spend the last days of that Summer, before Ryuichi had started apprenticing under his father, out on the coast of the lightning country, Tetsu blowing bubbles along the water with his mother as Goro explained to Ryuichi the unique dangers that existed in all the forests that were close enough to see from the shoreline. When it ended and Ryuichi was gone, Junichi took Tetsu gently by his shoulders, and told her son that she wanted a better life for him, and that he wouldn't be the same man his father was. She began wanting to pass on everything she was able to learn in mathematics and science, learned back when she lived in the heart of the village, to her son. She began imagining him one day consulting the Tsuchikage, or as the Jounin in charge of supplies for Lightning Country's armory. The only obstacle seemed to be that the boy seemed incapable of learning anything at any reasonable sort of pace.

Junichi had really meant what she said, and at first, even Tetsu could see her try, as hard as she possibly could, it seemed, to resist that slow slide backwards into old habits. She would start cracking his knuckle with a thin piece of wood she kept handy at the side of the boy's desk when he would periodically, and without fail, lose track of the pattern of thought he needed to follow to bring himself to the answers for his daily homework. Tetsu and Ryuichi used to compete to see who could get away with the most breeches to their mother's daily increasing list of disobediences that would see either one of them standing for hours to listen to her fury-filled rants. It was used as a punishment rather than a mechanism for complaints. Back then, the two had been fearless in the depths they would go to to incite her temper, but with Ryuichi now gone, the disobedience seemed hollow, and oppressive.

Tetsu had wanted to listen, to follow her pointing finger along the school books she had sacrificed so much to get her hands on. He wanted to, but could feel that lapse of attention waning on the horizon, and soon, and inevitably after that, the words would lose their focus, Tetsu seeming unable to even move his pupils, as if they were frozen in place. He knew if he couldn't break this spell in time, his mother would notice, and this had the effect of actually reducing the pace of his thoughts; to the point that he spent the final half of this moment of bliss preparing for what would then be inevitably on it's way. "You know what?" his mother suddenly barked at him, grabbing him by his arm, "If you're too stubborn to listen, you can stand out and think about whether you'd like to learn, or live like an animal."

He had taken to sleeping in the bathtub over the last several months, despite his mother's embarrassed berating when she found him, curled up like an infant. In Tetsu's mind, it was simple; the one bit of reality he could control beyond expectations was within his grasp; it was, almost, the difference between breathing and not breathing. As she tugged the boy out into the yard, a question, clinging to the back of his mind started clawing it's way gently along his subconscious, 'Why did she start taking me outside when I used to stand in the middle of the house?' It rolled along the flowing undulations of a quiet clamor of voices yelling up from the recesses of his memories and sense of the past. He knew, in the bowels of his soul, that it wasn't so that he wouldn't know when she had her eyes on him, and when he could get away with a momentary slouching to recover from his long and still-standing position. 'Hurry up! I don't have all day to wait for you to drag your feet!" Her anger was rising, and she jerked the boy's arm, hard. He knew something he couldn't quite articulate; that the reason the two of them were walking to a small spot out in the field for him to stand in, was because Junichi didn't want to have to look at her son. "Why don't you go fuck yourself?" Tetsu said, a whisper at first, but rising in a few short words to an awkward and shaking scream. He did not want to say it, the thought wasn't even in his head. It seemed to manifest from some physical part inside of himself, in his throat or stomach, and released as if against his own will and knowledge; but as soon as the words were given oxygen, they filled him with a boldness he had never felt in himself before.

Junichi shook Tetsu by his shoulders to make him look at her, even though he was already staring into her eyes, a glimmer of light she couldn't yet understand now igniting his gaze, "What did you say to me?!" She seemed uncertain at first, as if asking the question she almost choked on would solidify Tetsu's words into the fabric of reality, and Tetsu could see Junichi rapidly searching her own mind, trying to find some way that the boy might not have said what he had, in fact, said. "I said, YOU CAN GO FUCK YOURSELF!" The words poured out in a desperate shriek, the edges of his vision giving way to blackness, and were followed immediately by the woman grabbing and shaking the boy's jaw, "Listen to me!.." Junichi tried to begin, but was interrupted by Tetsu brushing her hand off of him and responding with "Don't touch me." So that when she came back and pressed her finger into his face, she couldn't seem to help but blurt out, "Do you wonder why your brother went to work for your dad and you didn't? He doesn't want to see you, you were a mistake. You belong to no one." She stormed away a few steps in a deafened fury, before Tetsu grabbed her by her elbow, swinging her around to punch her squarely in the cheek.

Junichi lay completely still on the rocky path for about eight seconds, unconscious, before springing to life and running in terror for her home, locking the door behind her. Not that it would have made any difference. Tetsu stood paralyzed in place until the necessary number of hours passed for his father to return home. The next day, when Tetsu had gone to the local Academy to apply, his father, catching wind of it, raced to apologize for his son's embarrassing and sudden appearance. Voices from a million miles away seemed to take some kind of pity on him though, as words that he couldn't quite hear, from faces he couldn't exactly see, seemed to be bargaining for his release, and before the day was done, he was registered. He was finally alone, and happy.


P.S. I have a single saved training post e-mail, timestamped from 2009, that could at least prove that I am an ancient player here...
 

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Good day,

Do you recall anything about your old PC? Which village they were in, anyone you may have RP'd with, how long ago it was? Anything at all. We need something to verify since so far the name isn't ringing anyone's bells.
 

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Yes!

Haha! Did a bit of research and have finally found my most recent character and login and everything. This is my account. One of the topics I was in was here. Unfortunately, you know, being a Stone Anbu, not quite sure where the record of my stats or jutsu or anything might be.

... Given that I've now found this account, I am going to continue to use this login. I now kind of have the ability to take this request to the OCR board, but I don't want to muddy the waters too much. Just say the word though and I'll take it over there now.
 

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Although I don't seem to be able to find the search function that would allow me to look for my stuff on the OCR board, I did find this message in my inbox:
Tao said:
Now, since you're a returning member and you never actually made an OCR in the post-hack version, you're going to get something special.

You are not going to get back your old stats/jutsus/items (primarily since most of them dont exist anymore), but instead what you will be getting is:

2100 ASP and 75,000 yen

Now, what does that mean? Well, yen-wise it's self explanatory (the yen cost for jutsus and items dropped by around the 10 fold), as for the ASP thing, its basically what we had to replace cap points. These ASP can be used for jutsu training, buying ASP cards (something like cap shop items but accessable for everyone regardless on whether you're capped or not). Since you're getting those for your very first OCR you can use them for your stats as well. Now remember, when you reach spesific ranks, you'll need a minimal amount of mastered jutsus, so you probably wont be using all of those ASP purely for stats, but hey, starting out somewhere between high B rank and low A rank is not too bad, eh? xD

Fill out this form: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=55161#p55161
And post it here: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewforum.php?f=613 (if you're still going to go to stone that is)
 

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Your stuff as of your last training:
Taijutsu
Ninjutsu
Non-Elemental:
Body-Switch: Mastered
Crystal Eye: Mastered
Cancel: Mastered
Genjutsu
Audial:

Kinetic:
Tickling: Mastered
Silly Fingers: Mastered
Crippled: Mastered
Lingering Spark: Mastered
Petrification: Mastered
Visual:
Depth Barrier: Mastered
Night Mare: Mastered
Mime Box: Mastered
Invisibility: Mastered
Will:
Slowed Perception: Mastered
Torment of the Physical Plain: Level 1

Current Stats
Gen: 425
Nin: 210
Tai: 329
Agi: 339
CC: 310
Sta: 315

Power Level: 1888
Character Level: 8

Advanced Shop Points: 0

[The Long Haul - Marked for Training]
Word Count: 418

Weekly Stat Assignment

Gimme the money - 30 point for Y 5,500
Sta: +5

Updated Stats:

Gen: 425
Nin: 210
Tai: 329
Agi: 339
CC: 310
Sta: 320

Power Level: 1933
Character Level: 9
 

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I may as well get this out of the way here while I wait too.

Kinjutsu application: Grandeur Phantom​
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Downward, by degrees, the transparent liquid graveyard faded from clear, to a deep green, to nothingness. Everything invisible, it seemed, when stacked deeply enough, eventually collapsed into blackness. Tetsu could feel the waves lightly lapping against his face, like an unending onslaught of hands, weakly, but surely, pulling him into the depths of that monstrous orb of night that stood waiting below him. This is it...

Before he went down, he tried to take a kind of inventory. It was a strange instinct, Tetsu's lizard brain, in the midst of panic, performing a last ditch accounting feat, trying to organize his thoughts into a kind of priority; a rapid scan of his patterns of thinking, along with his memories, in search of useful information. Automatic, it overloaded his senses, his physical body awakening to an autonomous state to overpower his own agency, as if fed up with sitting dormant for fourteen years only to be killed by a fool. This was being simultaneously overridden by the internal clock on his dwindling oxygen supply telling him to find a single memory to hold and cherish. Time was running out, and the Goddess of the abyss was kind enough to let him carry one treasured possession with him to her watery throat.

'One more time.' The voice called out to him. Tetsu saw his father coming in through the front door, looking down at the handle as he closed it, waiting there for a fraction of a second with an indescribable look on his face, like he was trying to hold his breath while simultaneously struggling to breathe. He glanced up at Tetsu with a strange and un-self-conscious look as he passed, one that the boy had some difficulty parsing out, but it immediately made him feel as if he was on equal footing with the man. Not in a good way either, but rather, in the way your employer or teacher might look at you right before asking you to help them bury a body. Goro slowed down and rested his hand on a nearby table for support. "Listen..."

'Not that one.' The accountant in his head demanded. It was too long. The boy, if he wished to savor some memory, to chew on it, it had better be the single frame of a moment, selected from the very best, for a single moment was practically all he had to enjoy it with. If he was looking for clues, there simply was no time to chew the scenery, to try to exactly understand the nature and dynamic of his father's feint expression of grief. He jumped forward, to the forest, as he pushed and waded through the thick brush, his temper slowing and cooling to the pace of long hours spent managing the continual minor annoyances that hiking through unbeaten paths through the trees came with. He gripped a branch nearby as the crumbling soil beneath his feet trickled a little further down the ravine, and tried to catch a glimpse of the parted sky between dancing silhouettes of leaves. Where was he? How much further to the shore? One glimpse of the landscape, exposed from parting branches caught by the wind, immediately oriented Tetsu within his internal map of the countryside. His father had taught him how to do that. You could say what you wanted about the man, and everyone did, but for as much as he mocked the dead and cast aspersions on all those who believed living for 'honor' meant anything at all, he would always describe the forests and mountain ranges of the Lightning Country with the same passion and attention to detail that a man who had built his own house might. He loved this country, in his own way. Tetsu looked down at the soft Earth. He saw his mother's footprint impressed within the mud.

He thought back to that afternoon. He didn't mean to hit her. His body, encapsulated by the darkness, now began to vibrate and shake without his control. His chest hurt. It was unbearable, it was literally unbearable, but he knew he would not be asked to suffer it for too much longer. He had been robbed of everything. He could hear the voices of his screaming parents ringing in his head, distorted from his own gargled screams, back in the present, as if time itself was experiencing some kind of painful schism, the burst of sound emanating from him was being soaked within the memories he could not help but to play through the panicked and wordless landscape unraveling within his own mind. Blame, and the unknown. His parents had nightly surpassed every limit of anger a person could reasonably allow themselves to succumb to without resorting to absolute violence. Grievances, paranoia, denial; all of the same conversations playing out in forward, in reverse, laced with insidious commentaries on the contents of a person's character. The object stopped being to find the truth, or to live together, or even to prove, finally, that they were more right and more rightfully aggrieved; it was to inflict deep and lasting wounds, to injure more than they had been injured. The darkness was closing in now. He looked up to the fragmented sun, and searched for an answer for his life.

He couldn't face himself, even then. He felt a deep shame for it, if this was the end. If. The words seemed to echo mockingly from the abyss below. No, this was it. There was no saviour that would come in at the eleventh hour, and he had done absolutely nothing with all the time he had been given. He thought briefly of all of the millions of people who must have come before him, scythed out of existence without a thought in their head as to what was coming, a progression from the promise of one day possessing the whole world to, suddenly, nothing; a senseless and meaningless blip into the fabric of living reality. He could see his mother's smiling face, after she had made fun of him for something. He couldn't remember what. Ryuichi was there, and they were all waiting out on the edge of the forest for their father to finally wake up and take them into town. Was this it? His last memory? It was plucked from a nearly forgotten morning, there wasn't even anything particularly special about it; Tetsu simply remembered how stunning the look of the cold sun was on the dew covered grass of the countryside, the shadows from the trees and from their house as black as the night against the crystalline shimmer of the forest, and, he remembered, the particular expressions on the faces of Ryuichi, and his mom. Something deeply contented and hopeful from his brother, but also like he was enjoying a little joke to himself involving his own overly dramatic expression. Tetsu seemed sure his brother didn't even know anyone else would be looking at him, it was his own private little amusement. For some reason, from the very pit of his stomach, he wanted to burst out crying. If only he still had control over his body.

After, in a rage, Tetsu had hit his mother and run away, so too did his mother, as a kind of melodramatic show of fear. She would get as close as she could to the edge of the Country before expecting to be apprehended by Goro, who would be chasing her desperately for fear that she would be killed trying to flea the nation without a passport. 'Everything is always about you.' His own voice called out from the abyss. 'Your own mother risks her life to escape her violent and tyrannical son,' the voice was getting closer now, and he began to see the dark reflection of himself begin to emerge from the depths of the world below, 'And you somehow turn this into a sentiment where you're the victim of her melodramatic guilt trips. It just doesn't get much more narcissistic, don't you think?' The boy could feel rage and resentment and sadness all swirling around the small world inside of him, remembering all the nights he was beaten, but even then, under the gaze of his own mocking eyes, he knew the memory was insincere, an excuse invented to give to no one, just before he died. This was the way he lived his life; pathetically. There was, however, some small amount of truth in there, somewhere, and he decided to give himself to it. 'Then why do I feel this way?' He asked, knowing that this last uncomfortable realization that he was forming would, finally, become that small morsel of life that he would end up bringing with him. One last thought to crush his spirit and fracture his sense of identity. Well, it wasn't like he needed those things any more anyway.

'I wanted to be alone.' The words started pouring out from his mind, "I hated who I was, and I wanted to blame it on someone else. I feel like I'm filled with a rage that can never be satisfied, I feel betrayed.' And Tetsu's reflection came even closer, face to face with the boy and ready to pull him into the embrace of the monster, 'And you know why that is, right?' The sadistic smile crept up the boy's cheeks as he stared up at the other dying boy, 'Who is it that betrayed you? Who told you life was going to be different for you, that you were special enough that you could sit around doing nothing and expect life to just start for you?' Tetsu stopped struggling now. '...I did.' He told himself, 'I was waiting for something magical to happen.' And after a pause, he added, "And here it is." The voice agreed, echoing, "And here it is." As Tetsu, for the first time, really looked at the immensity of the ocean around him. He thought of his father, imagined the moment when the man would hear what had happened to his son. Tetsu knew that Goro would hold onto that burden indefinitely, until it killed him. He told himself simply that there was nothing he could do about that now. He thought of his mom. He thought of her face, and knew that thinking of her in words was not something he had the time or ability to manage any more, he just wanted to remember her.

When he awoke the next day on the beach, he immediately began throwing up water. His chest and legs hurt so much that he passed out from the coughing fit and only woke again several hours later, when the sun was just beginning it's setting trajectory. He sat up with a strange feeling, his thoughts overwhelming him to the point that it felt like a calm quiet had fallen over his mind. He felt light, like something blocking the flow of his blood, of his life and fate, had suddenly become unclogged, and he thought of the boy he found at the bottom of the ocean. He knew instantly that he had unlocked something fundamental to his jutsu techniques, lost in the novelty and experience of the specific feeling of enlightenment on the topic rather than any utility purpose for it. This was the pathway to the Grandeur Phantom kinjutsu, he understood what it was now as plainly as recognizing the sky for being blue, or water for being wet. He knew, too, why it was a kinjutsu; you had to die to learn it.
 

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Also, can I please request a username change to Omoi Tetsu? Also, also, I realize that cloud has some rules regarding IC ranks and how those match up with OOC ranks. I've described Tetsu as an academy student in the history portion of my application, but I can make a quick fix to that, just not sure if I should edit the post now that it's under review.

EDIT: Also, can I start as a Genin if I promise to seek out a Chuunin exam as soon as I start playing?
 

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Genin would be fine since you're A-rank not S-rank iirc.

Also, at this point, I just need to know if you're planning to keep your old stats and jutsu as-is or if you're planning to change those up. You'll also need a character class and the like. Basically, fill out this: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=55161#p55161 :)
 

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So, I've swapped some of my jutsus here for jutsus only available to someone with the Grandeur Illusion kinjutsu; obviously, those swap requests are contingent upon my above kinjutsu application being accepted, and if it isn't, I will alter my swap requests.

Old Character Name: Saito Hachirou
Old Village/Missing: Stone
OCR Type: Inactivity
Last Known Where-abouts: I was entering Wind Country, I believe. Having some trouble searching for topics I was in though.
Old IC Rank: Anbu

New Character Name: Omoi Tetsu
Preferred Username: Tetsu
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New BL/CA: Hashigaki
Custom Class:

Reverse Therapist
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (65+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu
High: Gen DC
Average: Gen Save, Evasion
Low: Ranged Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Melee Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Genin

Character Age: 15
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description:

Out of place seemed to be the most apt and succinct way to describe Tetsu. At 176 cm, he was ever so slightly too tall for his age, and at 14, certainly too old to be registering in the academy, and a giant among his peers. In the early days of an uncomfortable growth spurt, the boy's every movement seemed softly tinged with a kind of forcefulness that made it look as though he was piloting his oversized body, rather than simply living in it comfortably. He would slouch, trying to squeeze himself inward into a smaller space. He didn't otherwise look apparently as though he was shrinking from view, only that something about him seemed amiss. Awkward. As though he was simultaneously trying to make himself smaller while disguising the attempt.

Short shocks of black hair were kept parted from the stoic expression that had become a permanent fixture of his still-boyish face; it almost gave the impression that Tetsu was well put together, tidy, careful. That caveat, almost, seemed to persistently follow him, however. He had no strict sense of fashion to adhere to, but rather, he'd give the most dedicated attention to the state of the clothing he had available on any given day. The shirt that only had a single, small hole, say, in it's lower back, could be tolerated, so long as that hole was still relatively easy to cover; permanent sweat stains were occasionally acceptable, so long as the boy remembered to keep his arms down that day. These were the hand-me-downs of hand-me-downs, and Tetsu wore them as a kind of sentence, a term of his duty. They brought with them a kind of slow urgency for the boy to return to doing nothing and escaping notice in those brief moments he was pulled from his quiet rigidity by the world around him.

Character's Mental Description:

He didn't know why, but he could feel something tightening around his heart, slowly, year by year, like a snake.

Fairly bright, Tetsu still routinely had difficulty absorbing topics in any kind of effective or timely manner. He was, for lack of a better word, the opposite of talented. When it came, that fog that would infect his focus, he would find himself peering closer and closer into the person trying to capture it, finding the sweat droplets palpitating on their quivering skin, their pores opening and closing to breathe in the air from a massive swathe of living skin. The person would start seeming like a kind of host, an organism that had managed to take over that mass of flesh and sweat and blood and guts he found himself staring at with a hypnotic devotion. It wasn't disgust that he felt, not exactly, but something close to it. A little bit longer, if he couldn't break free from the feeling of the unfamiliar present; like an invader, the thought of ripping that mass of skin to pieces would slowly seep into the edges of his consciousness. When it subsided and calm returned to him, Tetsu could at least find some solace in the fact that his life was, essentially, good. He just wanted to scream and never stop.

He could see the growing ambitions of the people around him; the need to make their family proud, to impress their village, and maybe, just maybe, imprint their name on the minds of those across the oceans and borders of the small world they all lived in. Tetsu tried, but he couldn't force himself to feel what they all apparently had; the drive to carry on some kind of meaningful memory into the future. All he had was the urgent need to make one more small step forward, for as long as he could, while the oxygen seemed to thin around him, the blotted out edges of his vision seeming to get smaller each day, to a point of light flickering in and out of darkness. Catharsis alone would save him, he seemed sure of it, from the bottom of his soul. Life for him was good though, the days were easy. Nothing to report.

Multiple Personality Application: N/A
Character History:
Tetsu's father, Omoi Goro, was a blacksmith, and not a very good one, and everyone knew it. They lived in a small cabin on the side of a mountain, overlooking the forest. Goro knew his work was mediocre, but prided himself on being a blacksmith for all seasons, and by that, he meant, of course, that during surges of anger and vengeance and war that would see the countryside swept of it's nobler farmers and tradesmen, Goro would be right there to pick up the slack. "Hillbillies with knives, out on fool's errands." He would call them, and vocally too; these men who thought they could retire for years and years from combat and still convince themselves they were fit for it because the occasion had called for violence, men who would periodically rid the countryside of their convictions. What remained was undertrained and fatherless teenagers or children, swinging around a hammer like the offspring of fools they were.

Ryuichi, Tetsu's soon-to-be older brother, remembered this time as a moment of pure bliss, his very first memories forged by the rolling in of the evening tide along the shores below their home just before night, and constantly traveling out to gather rice with his father from the local market, or wading through rocky fields sloped against the coming sunrises. And later, when he was a little older, running to his distant neighbours with some of his childhood friends; they would distract their neighbours while Ryuichi searched for all the places the farmer's chickens might have hidden some of their eggs. Goro had gradually convinced his wife, Junichi, to live frugally even during those seasons that his business was thriving. 'This was' he assured her, [/i]'the only way they could survive in times when his shop once again fell out of public favour.'[/i]

She agreed with him, of course; 'she loved him', she would tell him during the days he tried, as well as he could, to convince her to leave him. What started as debts that suddenly, from under that tide of good will, could not be repaid, ended as a type of irreversible change of personality for the two of them. Junichi began pleading that her last dime for rice or wheat would be spent repaying her debt for last week's groceries, or tavern tab, or new and leased outfits for her son's first day of school. Goro, meanwhile, had resorted to a number of clever, if only minor, money saving scams. Often, he'd go to the market to buy a replacement for something that had fallen apart; a cracked pot, or radio, or worn anvil, and then, in the near future, make a large scene as he tried to return a clearly more worn version of the tool. Those in the village who didn't greet them with a suspicious eye and a tightened fist, were regarded, themselves, as being as foolish as the brave blacksmiths and farmers Goro was always going on about.

A perfect little domestic life, crystallized forever in Ryuichi's young memory, but it couldn't last.

For some reason, lost in the darkness of Ryuichi's ever retreating childhood memories, he remembered, on a visceral level, that what had happened had been the result of sweet buns. It wasn't that he didn't know in that rational part of his brain that those sweet buns had run out days prior to the argument. Those tasty and once a month donated treats, had given way to a diet of rice alone, and spices, for several days, maybe a week, before their next real meal. Ryuichi felt like he couldn't take it any more. His stomach was actually cramping tightly with hunger. He even got his hands on an apple during one of those days of fasting and had become shocked and scared as it gave him an even worse pain in his stomach, one that seemed to last, sharply, for an entire hour. His mother, Junichi, then, at the peak of his misery and without warning or announcement, came in early one morning before Ryuichi had woken, stirring him out of unconsciousness with the morning light from the doorway and the smell of cooked chicken as the blur that was his smiling mother came into view, out from the light of the morning.

Ryuichi got straight to work, doing the best he could to prepare dinner, and the table to eat it from. He couldn't hear what Junichi and his father were saying to each other, but what started as rapid processions of whispers soon rose to words squeaked out in voices that would be funny, if the faces of the two hadn't made it so enigmatically terrifying. His father looked into Ryuichi's eyes and gently took the woman by the elbow into the yard, where their voices turned to shouts. The boy turned the water pressure up to wash the dishes and made a kind of sound in his head that was very close to being a complete absence of sound, as though he could drown his parents out with a deafening silence. No one had dinner that night, and less than a year later, Tetsu was brought into this quiet little countryside world.

Junichi began complaining of regular and overwhelming headaches. Dark rings would routinely dig their ways in the depths of her eyelids, seemingly regardless of the amount of sleep she actually got. She began becoming tyrannical about the noises of the creeping children at night, or any time before the sun wasn't directly overhead. The slightest breath, off-pace, seemed to be capable of waking her; one creak in the floor, a kicked toy, anything, could set her into a sudden waking fury and terror, and as soon as either of the boys had heard the error of their own ways, they would freeze, their adrenaline suddenly pumping. They would be made to stand still, in the middle of the room for hours, until she fell back asleep; the only mercy they could hope for was possibly being allowed to finish what they had gotten up for, be it a glass of water or to use the washroom.

Bloodline Application: Hashigaki

It wasn't long before Ryuichi would leave Tetsu alone. Junichi could anticipate the moment coming for years, and it brought her a terrible amount of anxiety. The Omoi family would spend the last days of that Summer, before Ryuichi had started apprenticing under his father, out on the coast of the lightning country, Tetsu blowing bubbles along the water with his mother as Goro explained to Ryuichi the unique dangers that existed in all the forests that were close enough to see from the shoreline. When it ended and Ryuichi was gone, Junichi took Tetsu gently by his shoulders, and told her son that she wanted a better life for him, and that he wouldn't be the same man his father was. She began wanting to pass on everything she was able to learn in mathematics and science, learned back when she lived in the heart of the village, to her son. She began imagining him one day consulting the Tsuchikage, or as the Jounin in charge of supplies for Lightning Country's armory. The only obstacle seemed to be that the boy seemed incapable of learning anything at any reasonable sort of pace.

Junichi had really meant what she said, and at first, even Tetsu could see her try, as hard as she possibly could, it seemed, to resist that slow slide backwards into old habits. She would start cracking his knuckle with a thin piece of wood she kept handy at the side of the boy's desk when he would periodically, and without fail, lose track of the pattern of thought he needed to follow to bring himself to the answers for his daily homework. Tetsu and Ryuichi used to compete to see who could get away with the most breeches to their mother's daily increasing list of disobediences that would see either one of them standing for hours to listen to her fury-filled rants. It was used as a punishment rather than a mechanism for complaints. Back then, the two had been fearless in the depths they would go to to incite her temper, but with Ryuichi now gone, the disobedience seemed hollow, and oppressive.

Tetsu had wanted to listen, to follow her pointing finger along the school books she had sacrificed so much to get her hands on. He wanted to, but could feel that lapse of attention waning on the horizon, and soon, and inevitably after that, the words would lose their focus, Tetsu seeming unable to even move his pupils, as if they were frozen in place. He knew if he couldn't break this spell in time, his mother would notice, and this had the effect of actually reducing the pace of his thoughts; to the point that he spent the final half of this moment of bliss preparing for what would then be inevitably on it's way. "You know what?" his mother suddenly barked at him, grabbing him by his arm, "If you're too stubborn to listen, you can stand out and think about whether you'd like to learn, or live like an animal."

He had taken to sleeping in the bathtub over the last several months, despite his mother's embarrassed berating when she found him, curled up like an infant. In Tetsu's mind, it was simple; the one bit of reality he could control beyond expectations was within his grasp; it was, almost, the difference between breathing and not breathing. As she tugged the boy out into the yard, a question, clinging to the back of his mind started clawing it's way gently along his subconscious, 'Why did she start taking me outside when I used to stand in the middle of the house?' It rolled along the flowing undulations of a quiet clamor of voices yelling up from the recesses of his memories and sense of the past. He knew, in the bowels of his soul, that it wasn't so that he wouldn't know when she had her eyes on him, and when he could get away with a momentary slouching to recover from his long and still-standing position. 'Hurry up! I don't have all day to wait for you to drag your feet!" Her anger was rising, and she jerked the boy's arm, hard. He knew something he couldn't quite articulate; that the reason the two of them were walking to a small spot out in the field for him to stand in, was because Junichi didn't want to have to look at her son. "Why don't you go fuck yourself?" Tetsu said, a whisper at first, but rising in a few short words to an awkward and shaking scream. He did not want to say it, the thought wasn't even in his head. It seemed to manifest from some physical part inside of himself, in his throat or stomach, and released as if against his own will and knowledge; but as soon as the words were given oxygen, they filled him with a boldness he had never felt in himself before.

Junichi shook Tetsu by his shoulders to make him look at her, even though he was already staring into her eyes, a glimmer of light she couldn't yet understand now igniting his gaze, "What did you say to me?!" She seemed uncertain at first, as if asking the question she almost choked on would solidify Tetsu's words into the fabric of reality, and Tetsu could see Junichi rapidly searching her own mind, trying to find some way that the boy might not have said what he had, in fact, said. "I said, YOU CAN GO FUCK YOURSELF!" The words poured out in a desperate shriek, the edges of his vision giving way to blackness, and were followed immediately by the woman grabbing and shaking the boy's jaw, "Listen to me!.." Junichi tried to begin, but was interrupted by Tetsu brushing her hand off of him and responding with "Don't touch me." So that when she came back and pressed her finger into his face, she couldn't seem to help but blurt out, "Do you wonder why your brother went to work for your dad and you didn't? He doesn't want to see you, you were a mistake. You belong to no one." She stormed away a few steps in a deafened fury, before Tetsu grabbed her by her elbow, swinging her around to punch her squarely in the cheek.

Junichi lay completely still on the rocky path for about eight seconds, unconscious, before springing to life and running in terror for her home, locking the door behind her. Not that it would have made any difference. Tetsu stood paralyzed in place until the necessary number of hours passed for his father to return home. The next day, when Tetsu had gone to the local Academy to apply, his father, catching wind of it, raced to apologize for his son's embarrassing and sudden appearance. Voices from a million miles away seemed to take some kind of pity on him though, as words that he couldn't quite hear, from faces he couldn't exactly see, seemed to be bargaining for his release, and before the day was done, he was registered. He was finally alone, and happy.

Clan Request: N/A

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: Sorry, don't have that. See "Stone Anbu" flair
Old Training: Nope
Old Dojo: Nada

Special Usergroups: So if I were a moderator, I could just ask to be in the mod group again? I was not a mod, so N/A

Old Stats:

Gen: 425
Nin: 210
Tai: 329
Agi: 339
CC: 310
Sta: 320

Power Level: 1933

Old OOC Rank: Anbu
Stat Cut: Eh?

New Stats:
Gen: 525
Nin: 210
Tai: 210
CC: 389
Agi: 210
Sta: 389


New OOC Rank: Genin

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Keeping
E-Rank
Transformation: Mastered
Body Switch: Mastered

D-Rank
Cancel: Mastered
Crystal Eye: Mastered

C-Rank
Crippled: Mastered

B-Rank
Lingering Spark: Mastered

A-Rank
Torment of the Physical Plain: Rank 1

S-Rank

Refunding
E-Rank

D-Rank
Tickling: Mastered

C-Rank
Silly Fingers: Mastered

B-Rank
Petrification: Mastered
Depth Barrier: Mastered
Mime Box: Mastered
Slowed Percepion: Mastered
Night Mare: Mastered

A-Rank
Invisibility: Mastered

S-Rank

Swapping to

E-Rank

D-Rank
Drunken Stupor: Mastered

C-Rank
Revealed Mind - Persona: Mastered

B-Rank
Denied Mind: Shadow: Mastered
Eclipse Fury: Mastered
Anabolic Frenzy: Mastered
Prolong: Mastered
Phoenix' Embrace: Mastered

A-Rank
Tabula Rasa: Mastered

S-Rank

Other Refunds: N/A

Name of any Contract you currently own: N/A
Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
No

Kinjutsu Application: Grandeur Phantom


Downward, by degrees, the transparent liquid graveyard faded from clear, to a deep green, to nothingness. Everything invisible, it seemed, when stacked deeply enough, eventually collapsed into blackness. Tetsu could feel the waves lightly lapping against his face, like an unending onslaught of hands, weakly, but surely, pulling him into the depths of that monstrous orb of night that stood waiting below him. This is it...

Before he went down, he tried to take a kind of inventory. It was a strange instinct, Tetsu's lizard brain, in the midst of panic, performing a last ditch accounting feat, trying to organize his thoughts into a kind of priority; a rapid scan of his patterns of thinking, along with his memories, in search of useful information. Automatic, it overloaded his senses, his physical body awakening to an autonomous state to overpower his own agency, as if fed up with sitting dormant for fourteen years only to be killed by a fool. This was being simultaneously overridden by the internal clock on his dwindling oxygen supply telling him to find a single memory to hold and cherish. Time was running out, and the Goddess of the abyss was kind enough to let him carry one treasured possession with him to her watery throat.

'One more time.' The voice called out to him. Tetsu saw his father coming in through the front door, looking down at the handle as he closed it, waiting there for a fraction of a second with an indescribable look on his face, like he was trying to hold his breath while simultaneously struggling to breathe. He glanced up at Tetsu with a strange and un-self-conscious look as he passed, one that the boy had some difficulty parsing out, but it immediately made him feel as if he was on equal footing with the man. Not in a good way either, but rather, in the way your employer or teacher might look at you right before asking you to help them bury a body. Goro slowed down and rested his hand on a nearby table for support. "Listen..."

'Not that one.' The accountant in his head demanded. It was too long. The boy, if he wished to savor some memory, to chew on it, it had better be the single frame of a moment, selected from the very best, for a single moment was practically all he had to enjoy it with. If he was looking for clues, there simply was no time to chew the scenery, to try to exactly understand the nature and dynamic of his father's feint expression of grief. He jumped forward, to the forest, as he pushed and waded through the thick brush, his temper slowing and cooling to the pace of long hours spent managing the continual minor annoyances that hiking through unbeaten paths through the trees came with. He gripped a branch nearby as the crumbling soil beneath his feet trickled a little further down the ravine, and tried to catch a glimpse of the parted sky between dancing silhouettes of leaves. Where was he? How much further to the shore? One glimpse of the landscape, exposed from parting branches caught by the wind, immediately oriented Tetsu within his internal map of the countryside. His father had taught him how to do that. You could say what you wanted about the man, and everyone did, but for as much as he mocked the dead and cast aspersions on all those who believed living for 'honor' meant anything at all, he would always describe the forests and mountain ranges of the Lightning Country with the same passion and attention to detail that a man who had built his own house might. He loved this country, in his own way. Tetsu looked down at the soft Earth. He saw his mother's footprint impressed within the mud.

He thought back to that afternoon. He didn't mean to hit her. His body, encapsulated by the darkness, now began to vibrate and shake without his control. His chest hurt. It was unbearable, it was literally unbearable, but he knew he would not be asked to suffer it for too much longer. He had been robbed of everything. He could hear the voices of his screaming parents ringing in his head, distorted from his own gargled screams, back in the present, as if time itself was experiencing some kind of painful schism, the burst of sound emanating from him was being soaked within the memories he could not help but to play through the panicked and wordless landscape unraveling within his own mind. Blame, and the unknown. His parents had nightly surpassed every limit of anger a person could reasonably allow themselves to succumb to without resorting to absolute violence. Grievances, paranoia, denial; all of the same conversations playing out in forward, in reverse, laced with insidious commentaries on the contents of a person's character. The object stopped being to find the truth, or to live together, or even to prove, finally, that they were more right and more rightfully aggrieved; it was to inflict deep and lasting wounds, to injure more than they had been injured. The darkness was closing in now. He looked up to the fragmented sun, and searched for an answer for his life.

He couldn't face himself, even then. He felt a deep shame for it, if this was the end. If. The words seemed to echo mockingly from the abyss below. No, this was it. There was no saviour that would come in at the eleventh hour, and he had done absolutely nothing with all the time he had been given. He thought briefly of all of the millions of people who must have come before him, scythed out of existence without a thought in their head as to what was coming, a progression from the promise of one day possessing the whole world to, suddenly, nothing; a senseless and meaningless blip into the fabric of living reality. He could see his mother's smiling face, after she had made fun of him for something. He couldn't remember what. Ryuichi was there, and they were all waiting out on the edge of the forest for their father to finally wake up and take them into town. Was this it? His last memory? It was plucked from a nearly forgotten morning, there wasn't even anything particularly special about it; Tetsu simply remembered how stunning the look of the cold sun was on the dew covered grass of the countryside, the shadows from the trees and from their house as black as the night against the crystalline shimmer of the forest, and, he remembered, the particular expressions on the faces of Ryuichi, and his mom. Something deeply contented and hopeful from his brother, but also like he was enjoying a little joke to himself involving his own overly dramatic expression. Tetsu seemed sure his brother didn't even know anyone else would be looking at him, it was his own private little amusement. For some reason, from the very pit of his stomach, he wanted to burst out crying. If only he still had control over his body.

After, in a rage, Tetsu had hit his mother and run away, so too did his mother, as a kind of melodramatic show of fear. She would get as close as she could to the edge of the Country before expecting to be apprehended by Goro, who would be chasing her desperately for fear that she would be killed trying to flea the nation without a passport. 'Everything is always about you.' His own voice called out from the abyss. 'Your own mother risks her life to escape her violent and tyrannical son,' the voice was getting closer now, and he began to see the dark reflection of himself begin to emerge from the depths of the world below, 'And you somehow turn this into a sentiment where you're the victim of her melodramatic guilt trips. It just doesn't get much more narcissistic, don't you think?' The boy could feel rage and resentment and sadness all swirling around the small world inside of him, remembering all the nights he was beaten, but even then, under the gaze of his own mocking eyes, he knew the memory was insincere, an excuse invented to give to no one, just before he died. This was the way he lived his life; pathetically. There was, however, some small amount of truth in there, somewhere, and he decided to give himself to it. 'Then why do I feel this way?' He asked, knowing that this last uncomfortable realization that he was forming would, finally, become that small morsel of life that he would end up bringing with him. One last thought to crush his spirit and fracture his sense of identity. Well, it wasn't like he needed those things any more anyway.

'I wanted to be alone.' The words started pouring out from his mind, "I hated who I was, and I wanted to blame it on someone else. I feel like I'm filled with a rage that can never be satisfied, I feel betrayed.' And Tetsu's reflection came even closer, face to face with the boy and ready to pull him into the embrace of the monster, 'And you know why that is, right?' The sadistic smile crept up the boy's cheeks as he stared up at the other dying boy, 'Who is it that betrayed you? Who told you life was going to be different for you, that you were special enough that you could sit around doing nothing and expect life to just start for you?' Tetsu stopped struggling now. '...I did.' He told himself, 'I was waiting for something magical to happen.' And after a pause, he added, "And here it is." The voice agreed, echoing, "And here it is." As Tetsu, for the first time, really looked at the immensity of the ocean around him. He thought of his father, imagined the moment when the man would hear what had happened to his son. Tetsu knew that Goro would hold onto that burden indefinitely, until it killed him. He told himself simply that there was nothing he could do about that now. He thought of his mom. He thought of her face, and knew that thinking of her in words was not something he had the time or ability to manage any more, he just wanted to remember her.

When he awoke the next day on the beach, he immediately began throwing up water. His chest and legs hurt so much that he passed out from the coughing fit and only woke again several hours later, when the sun was just beginning it's setting trajectory. He sat up with a strange feeling, his thoughts overwhelming him to the point that it felt like a calm quiet had fallen over his mind. He felt light, like something blocking the flow of his blood, of his life and fate, had suddenly become unclogged, and he thought of the boy he found at the bottom of the ocean. He knew instantly that he had unlocked something fundamental to his jutsu techniques, lost in the novelty and experience of the specific feeling of enlightenment on the topic rather than any utility purpose for it. This was the pathway to the Grandeur Phantom kinjutsu, he understood what it was now as plainly as recognizing the sky for being blue, or water for being wet. He knew, too, why it was a kinjutsu; you had to die to learn it.


Note: I left his history ending on a description of Tetsu first registering for the Academy, despite applying to have him be a genin. I did this simply because it would make continuity with my later kinjutsu application, which follows immediately after the events in the history section, a little awkward if I suddenly mentioned a time skip in the middle of it. Regardless, well, it is his history, so it should be fine left as is.
 

Kagetsu Yuii

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Name > Good
Village > Bestest
Bloodline > A-ok
Class > Error
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Reverse Therapist
HP: (50+lvl) x stamina
CP: (65+lvl) x chakra control

Class Bonus: Kinjutsu
High: Gen DC
Average: Gen Save, Evasion
Low: Ranged Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Melee Accuracy

Because you have one high and three lows your modifiers should equal 105, not 105 (Each high is -10 and each low is +5 to your base 100 total)
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Please change your modifiers to the proper totals.
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Age > Good
Branch > Approved
Description > Good
History > Approved
Bl/CA App > Approved
New Stat Distribution > Correct

Your new jutsu List:

E-Rank
**- See note
Body Switch: Mastered

D-Rank
Cancel: Mastered
Crystal Eye: Mastered
Drunken Stupor: Mastered

C-Rank
Crippled: Mastered
*** - See note below

B-Rank
Lingering Spark: Mastered
Denied Mind: Shadow: Mastered
Eclipse Fury: Mastered
Anabolic Frenzy: Mastered
Prolong: Mastered
Phoenix' Embrace: Mastered

A-Rank
Torment of the Physical Plain: Rank 1
Tabula Rasa: Mastered

S-Rank

Notes:
> **Your original jutsu list did not include transformation or another E-rank jutsu.
> ***Revealed Mind - Persona: Mastered is an ability, not a C-rank jutsu


-Choose a different C-rank jutsu in place of revealed mind. If you want, we can remove 3000 yen so you can buy that ability now. The same goes for any other jutsu you wish to buy now, like transformation, you just won't be able to master them without pulling points from your stats.

>Kinjutsu

Your Kinjutsu has been copied to council forums for further review as they require more votes than an OCR. https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=374&t=59474 papertrail
 

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Easy fixes:

Class:

Reverse Therapist
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (60+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu
High: Gen DC
Average: Gen Save, Evasion
Low: Ranged Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Melee Accuracy

As my newly available C-rank jutsu, I would like to request Water Prison at Master Rank. Ditto on the E-level jutus, apologies for the oversight.

I would appreciate having my 3,000 yen removed for Revealed Mind - Persona. More to the point though, while I recognize that my kinjutsu application is not only in queue, but that it might be rejected, I would like to request that my swaps relating to that Kinjutsu simply be held in queue until such a time that my application is accepted, as I plan on continuously attempting it if this one fails, and don't mind waiting in a weakened state for that to happen. Is that alright?
 

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Certainly, however, for the time being, if you could create a character class without the kinjutsu option until then, you otherwise have everything you need for your rank and I'd feel safe approving you.

+1 pending that, you'll be to good to go with a second approval.


*** note to the second approver, please remove 3000yen for the kinjutsu ability
 

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Thank you. Revision posted below.

Class Update:

Reverse Therapist
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (60+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +3 Genjutsu Save
High: Gen DC
Average: Gen Save, Evasion
Low: Ranged Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Melee Accuracy
 

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Saito Hachirou said:
Thank you. Revision posted below.

Class Update:

Reverse Therapist
HP: (45+lvl) x stamina
CP: (60+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +3 Genjutsu Save
High: Gen DC
Average: Gen Save, Evasion
Low: Ranged Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy, Melee Accuracy

Class looks good to me. Approved.
Yen removed.
 

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Hey, so, uhhh... Let me in please?

2 council member approvals, don't I get, like, a village welcome thing? More to the point, gonna need access to Cloud, my banner replaced with a Cloud Genin banner, and my username changed (to Tetsu, or Omoi Tetsu if Tetsu is unavailable). Please and thank you.
 

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