[Ready] Miyazaki Hikaru ➙ Sugihara Aki (Inactivity Rebirth)

[Sugihara Aki]

Old Character Name: Miyazaki Hikaru
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement (I'd like to keep Hikaru as an NPC, if that's possible!)
Last Known Where-abouts: Fire Country
Old IC Rank: Medical Ninja

New Character Name: Sugihara Akira
Preferred Username: Sugihara Aki
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Battlesmith
Custom Class:

Color Coordinated
HP: (55+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu & 1 free basic strike
High: Melee Acc.
Average: Dodge, Genjutsu Save
Low: Ninjutsu, Ranged, Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Chuunin

Character Age: 18
Gender: Female (she/they)
Sex: Female
Character's Physical Description: Aki is a short young woman with long blonde hair and tired eyes; her most striking feature is often the flecks of color that have found their way into her clothes and hair, staining them the shade of her creations. She prefers to keep her wardrobe simple, usually a plain shirt and jeans or sometimes her flak jacket, all similarly spotted with bright patches of pigment. Her posture is fluid but somewhat lazy, and watching her casual movements can be like watching a leaf fall to the ground: the destination is clear enough, but the path downwards is likely all over the place.
Character's Mental Description: Aki is as mellow as one can seem in a world filled with hardship and turmoil. She gives the impression of a long-retired grandmother even at her young age; averse to raising her voice and possessing a strongly nurtured empathy for those around her, she says what she thinks or says nothing at all. One of her more physically apparent hobbies is visual art, and because of it she dabbles in fields of design for everything from interior layouts to her specialty, tools and weapons. Though she buries it sometimes, she has always had a natural desire to understand the world and the people around her.
Character History: Aki is the fourth child of five, born to parents of the Sugihara clan: a scattered group of older-generation shinobi who had settled down to a mostly domestic life in the Fire Country, and one that possessed the unimpressive ability to synthesize many colored pigments from release of their chakra. Like her borthers and sisters before her, she was enrolled in the academy in the hopes of making a good name in the village for her clan. Although she often had trouble finding motivation to train (considering drawing a much more enjoyable use of her time), it eventually became clear that she, like her older brother, was a naturally gifted athlete whose developing skill with taijutsu far outclassed her meager ninjutsu capabilities. As she got older, Aki idolized her brother and his honest, hardworking attitude; she graduated from the academy and spent much of her time as a genin training alongside him. Right before her first chuunin exam, her brother, who had already been promoted, accepted a long-term mission abroad to ensure the safe development of a small village. Though she was desperate to request to join him, she was knocked out in the first round of the exam and was unable to. While she did eventually pass the exam, what turned into years without regular training with him once again turned her passion for being a ninja inward.

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: Link Here
Old Training: Link Here
Old Dojo: Link Here

Special Usergroups: Global Mod & CIT

Old Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: None (Inactivity Rebirth)
New Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

New OOC Rank: S-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

*I don't have access to my profile, so this isn't a full list yet

Keeping

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Low Sweep M
Janken M
Uncalled For Shot M
D-Rank - 1200
Combination Transformation M
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Spirit Lantern M
Contract Summoning M
Mystical Hand M
Coagulation M
Spinning Wind M
Dynamic Entry M
Sinkhole Fist M
C-Rank - 3250
Stunt Double M
One Element Sealing M
Elemental Negation M
Elemental Clone M
Barrier M
System Shock M
Skeletal Fortification M
Anesthetic Infusion M
System Restoration M
Dragon Assault M
Step-In Flash M
Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku M
Roaring Combination M
Grapple M
Inner Earth Reflection Lure M
B-Rank - 7500
Energy Transfer M
Leech Seal M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M
Cursed Sealing M
Mystical Force M
Medical Assistant M
Tranquilize M
Medical Ward M
Primary Lotus M
Shadow Step Strike M
Submission M
Spear Hand M
Multi-Hit Combo M
A-Rank - 12500
Perfected Rasengan M
Morality Sealing M
Nature's Guard M
Resuscitate M
Angelic Blessing M
Regeneration M
Pristine Aura M
Falcon Punch M
Eagle Drop M
Dance of the Waxing Moon M
Fist of Virtue M
Fist of Sin M
Fist of Gaia M

Refunding

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Wind Slash M
Pressure Burst M
Stone Bullet M
Gravel Shift M
Infernal Ember M
Thermal Maw M
The One-Two M
D-Rank - 1200
Whirlwind Spin M
Air Bullet M
Shredding Touch M
Earth Flow River M
Mud Clone M
Fireball M
Immolation Armor M
Combustive Seal M
4-Hit Combo M
Dynamic Finish M
Nut Buster M
C-Rank - 3250
Wind Scythe M
Tempest M
Gale Force M
Wind Release M
Dust Cloud M
Molecular Collision M
Particle Accelerator M
Dust Clone M
Harmonic Vibrations M
Hyper Clap M
Sonic Destabilizer M
Sonic Pulse M
Earth Flow Wave M
Rock Golem M
Earthen Coating M
Dragon Fire M
Searing Eruption M
Scalding Ash Cloud M
Heat Wave M
Jutsu Sealing M
Tiger Hook M
Shoryuken M
B-Rank - 7500
Great Wind Scythe M
Wind Scar M
Vacuum Sphere M
Cyclone Movement M
Particle Charge M
Dust Assimilation M
Particle Storm M
Molecule Breaker M
Sound Bullet M
Distorted Aura M
Harmonization M
Echo Strike M
Bedrock Coffin M
Weighted Rock Technique M
Earth Spiker M
Antlion Sinkhole M
Infernal Hellfire M
Firestorm M
Spontaneous Combustion M
Ring of Fire M
Shadow Shuriken Replication M
Suplex M
Seismic Toss M
A-Rank - 12500
Tatsumaki M
Hurricane M
Ambiance of the Forbidden M
Zephyr's Grace M
Detachment of the Primitive World M
Disruption Field M
Particle Destabilization M
Crop Dusting M
Concussion Wave M
Hypersonic Reverberation M
Resonating Howl M
Final Chime M
Earthen Magnitude M
Earthslide Wall M
Petrification M
Dragon Flame Bomb M
Sol Fire Tempest M
Abysmal Harbinger M
Flame Shield M
Five Element Seal M
Stardust Nova M
Gate of Enma M

Purchasing

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Bunt
Pound
Smash
Multi-Impale
Piercing Rain
Slash
Arcing Slash
Castling
D-Rank - 1200
Dynamic Charge
Double Slam
Shadow Play
Cross Pierce
Impaling Counter
Dynamic Pierce
Full Circle
Cross Rip
Crimson Flash
Puppet Transformation
Critical Exposure
C-Rank - 3250
Blast Rush
Skull Buster
Set-Up
Carpe Noctem
Carpe Diem
Expel
Chakra Absorption
Iron Point Prison
Clip Downpour
Spiked Shield
Feint Spike
Outer Rim Breaker
Lunar Steps
Whisperer
Puppet Clone
Active Camo
Mental Infiltration
Volt Charge
B-Rank - 7500
Rebound Blitz
Precise Interruption
Rigor Mortis
Hex Breaker
Unbound
Cover
Pressure Thruster
Million Stabs
Blood Letter
Magnum Break
Flight Aerial Strike
Terra Shift
Audio Medic
Incapacitate
Intangible Passage
Shadow Servant
A-Rank - 12500
Tombstone Driver
Memento Mori
White Lotus Strike
Rejected Assault
Pillar of the Four Dragons
Devastating Aura
Limit Break
Piercing Pinholder
Hyper Thrust
Trashin'
Higuma
Heavenly Sword
Physical Imprisonment Seal
Flock of Shadows
Black Blockade

Other Refunds: None

Name of any Contract you currently own:
- Obtained an Elemental Contract here! Will not be transferring it (because I don't have enough ASP); also I never made an actual summon
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own:
- None
Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Jinchuuriki (I can't access my profile or village request, so I don't have the link unfortunately)

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
None that are currently active

 

[Sazuki Nao]

Hello, below you will find an accurate list of what you had on your profile listed for Jutsu.

Ninjutsu

≈ Wind ≈	-	◌ Dust ◌	-	⍫ Poison ⍫	♪ Sound ♪
Spoiler All Mastered! E-Rank Wind Slash Pressure Burst D-Rank Air Bullet Whirlwind Spin Shredding Touch C-Rank Wind Scythe Gale Force Tempest Wind Release B-Rank Wind Scar Great Wind Scythe Vacuum Sphere Cyclone Movement A-Rank Ambiance of the Forbidden Hurricane Tatsumaki Zephyr's Grace	-​	Spoiler All Mastered! C-Rank Dust Cloud Dust Clone Particle Accelerator Molecular Collision B-Rank Particle Charge Dust Assimilation Particle Storm Molecule Breaker A-Rank Detachment of the Primitive World Disruption Field Particle Destabilization Crop Dusting	-​	Spoiler C-Rank Venom Needle (M) Immunity Break (M) Toxic Channeling (M) Poison Extraction (M) B-Rank Toxic Curse (M) Stun Vapor (M) Poison Mist (M) Venom Strike (M)	Spoiler All Mastered! C-Rank Sonic Destabilizer Hyper Clap Sonic Pulse Harmonic Vibrations B-Rank Sound Bullet Distorted Aura Harmonization Echo Strike A-Rank Final Chime Resonating Howl Hypersonic Reverberation Concussion Wave

-​	-​	-​	-​	-​	-​
-​	-​	-​	-​	-​	-​

​

ᨏ Earth ᨏ	✾ Wood ✾		-	-	-
Spoiler All Mastered! E-Rank Stone Bullet Gravel Shift D-Rank Sinkhole Fist Earth Flow River Mud Clone C-Rank Inner Earth Reflection Lure Earth Flow Wave Rock Golem Earthen Coating B-Rank Antlion Sinkhole Bedrock Coffin Earth Spiker Weighted Rock Technique A-Rank Petrification Earthslide Wall Earthen Magnitude Fist of Gaia	-​	-​	-​	-​	-​

≾ Water ≾	-	-	-	-	-
Spoiler E-Rank Pressurized Mist (M) Water Gun (M) D-Rank Water Whip (M) Aqua Fang (M) Rinse Off (M) C-Rank Grand Waterfall (M) Impaling Hydro Jet (M) Rain Dance (M) Water Prison (M)	-​	-​	-​	-​	-​

​

ỉ Fire ỉ	-	-	✫ Explosion ✫	-	-
Spoiler All Mastered! E-Rank Thermal Maw Infernal Ember D-Rank Fireball Immolation Armor Combustive Seal C-Rank Dragon Fire Scalding Ash Cloud Heat Wave Searing Eruption B-Rank Ring of Fire Spontaneous Combustion Infernal Hellfire Firestorm A-Rank Dragon Flame Bomb Abysmal Harbinger Sol Fire Tempest Flame Shield	-​	-​	-​	-​	-​

☉ Non-Elemental ☉	⧾ Medical ⧾	◓ ANBU ◓
Spoiler All Mastered! E-Rank Transformation Body Switch D-Rank Combination Transformation Crystal Eye Cancel Spirit Lantern Contract Summoning C-Rank Jutsu Sealing Stunt Double Elemental Clone Elemental Negation Barrier One Element Sealing B-Rank Chakra Shield Chakra Blast Rasengan Leech Seal Energy Transfer Shadow Shuriken Replication Cursed Sealing A-Rank Five Element Seal Gate of Enma Morality Sealing Nature's Guard Perfected Rasengan Stardust Nova	Spoiler All Mastered! D-Rank Mystical Hand Coagulation C-Rank System Shock Skeletal Fortification Anesthetic Infusion System Restoration B-Rank Tranquilize Medical Assistant Medical Ward Mystical Force A-Rank Angelic Blessing Pristine Aura Regeneration Resuscitate	Spoiler D-Rank Critical Exposure (M) Mask Summon (M) C-Rank Snapshot (M) Chaka Sense (M) Active Camo (M) Mental Infiltration (M)

Taijutsu

⚲ Unarmed ⚲	⸸ Slashing ⸸	↑ Piercing ↑	-
Spoiler All Mastered! E-Rank The One-Two Low Sweep Uncalled-For Shot Janken D-Rank 4-Hit Combo Spinning Wind Dynamic Entry Dynamic Finish Nut Buster C-Rank Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku Grapple Roaring Combination Step-In Flash Dragon Assault Tiger Hook B-Rank Suplex Multi-hit Combo Spear Hand Submission Seismic Toss Shadow Step Strike Primary Lotus A-Rank Falcon Punch Eagle Drop Dance of the Waxing Moon Fist of Virtue Fist of Sin	Spoiler E-Rank Slash (R1) Arcing Slash (R1) Dynamic Slash (R1) Overhead Strike (R1) D-Rank Full Circle (R1) Cross Rip (R1) Crimson Flash (R1) Gasher (R1) Heavy Tow (R1)	Spoiler E-Rank Stab (R1) Thrust (R1) Multi-Impale (R1) Piercing Rain (R1)	-​

-	-	-	⇮ Buffing ⇮
-​	-​	-​	Spoiler E-Rank Charge (M) Fleeted (M) Block (M) Grip (M) D-Rank Shadow Play (M) Muscle Control (M) Brandish (M) Basic Safeguard (M) Eagle Vision (M) C-Rank Dynamic Art (M) Chakra Extension (M) Shadow Dance (M) Gather (M) Barrage (M) Expel (M) Feint (M) Chakra Absorption (M)

Genjutsu

ꕺ Audial ꕺ	♠ Kinetic ♠	♣ Visual ♣	♡ Will ♡
Spoiler E-Rank Wasteful (M) Deception (M) Favoritism (M) D-Rank Gong (M) Pained Expression (M) Trembling Music (M) Appreciation of Music (M) C-Rank Deaf (M) Run it Back (M) Groans (M) Piercing Cry (M) Sometimes Shouting Works (M) B-Rank Bass Drop (R1) Wither (R1) Leak (R1) Prolong (R1) Death Chime (R1) Centralized (R1)	Spoiler E-Rank Stun (M) Hot Weapon (M) 1000 Years of Pain Kai (M) D-Rank Drunken Stupor (M) Influenza (M) Tickling (M) Facepalm (M) C-Rank Crippled (M) Crossed Wires (M) Masochism (M) Silly Fingers (M) Mist of Deceit (M) B-Rank Phoenix's Embrace (M) Petrification (M) Lingering Spark (M) Crush Depth (M) Puppet Betrayal (M) Pox (M)	Spoiler E-Rank Eye Strain (M) Mimic (M) False Surroundings (M) D-Rank Basic Clone (M) Blur (M) Rorschach Eye (M) Double Vision (M) C-Rank Verse of Darkness (M) Black Flash (M) Distortion (M) After-Image (M) Ocular Trauma (M) B-Rank Advanced Clone (M) Perception Filter (M) Depth Barrier (M) Night Mare (M) Mime Box (M) Solar Flare (M)	Spoiler E-Rank Lethargy (M) Tourniquet (M) Intimidation (M) D-Rank Amnesia (M) False Success (M) Leaking Mind (M) Sear of the Mind (M) C-Rank Blackout (M) Insomnia (M) Charismatic Breakdown (M) Untruth (M) Paranoia (M) B-Rank Havoc of the Doomed Mind (R1) Slowed Perception (R1) Oblivious Rapture (R1) Betrayal (R1) Taunt (R1) Thought Down (R1)

If you could please post it again with the necessarily changes made to the jutsu, we will start on the OCR progress =)

 

[Sugihara Aki]

Old Character Name: Miyazaki Hikaru
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement (I'd like to keep Hikaru as an NPC, if that's possible!)
Last Known Where-abouts: Fire Country
Old IC Rank: Medical Ninja

New Character Name: Sugihara Akira
Preferred Username: Sugihara Aki
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Battlesmith
Custom Class:

Color Coordinated
HP: (55+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu & 1 free basic strike
High: Melee Acc.
Average: Dodge, Genjutsu Save
Low: Ninjutsu, Ranged, Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Chuunin

Character Age: 18
Gender: Female (she/they)
Sex: Female
Character's Physical Description: Aki is a short young woman with long blonde hair and tired eyes; her most striking feature is often the flecks of color that have found their way into her clothes and hair, staining them the shade of her creations. She prefers to keep her wardrobe simple, usually a plain shirt and jeans or sometimes her flak jacket, all similarly spotted with bright patches of pigment. Her posture is fluid but somewhat lazy, and watching her casual movements can be like watching a leaf fall to the ground: the destination is clear enough, but the path downwards is likely all over the place.
Character's Mental Description: Aki is as mellow as one can seem in a world filled with hardship and turmoil. She gives the impression of a long-retired grandmother even at her young age; averse to raising her voice and possessing a strongly nurtured empathy for those around her, she says what she thinks or says nothing at all. One of her more physically apparent hobbies is visual art, and because of it she dabbles in fields of design for everything from interior layouts to her specialty, tools and weapons. Though she buries it sometimes, she has always had a natural desire to understand the world and the people around her.
Character History: Aki is the fourth child of five, born to parents of the Sugihara clan: a scattered group of older-generation shinobi who had settled down to a mostly domestic life in the Fire Country, and one that possessed the unimpressive ability to synthesize many colored pigments from release of their chakra. Like her borthers and sisters before her, she was enrolled in the academy in the hopes of making a good name in the village for her clan. Although she often had trouble finding motivation to train (considering drawing a much more enjoyable use of her time), it eventually became clear that she, like her older brother, was a naturally gifted athlete whose developing skill with taijutsu far outclassed her meager ninjutsu capabilities. As she got older, Aki idolized her brother and his honest, hardworking attitude; she graduated from the academy and spent much of her time as a genin training alongside him. Right before her first chuunin exam, her brother, who had already been promoted, accepted a long-term mission abroad to ensure the safe development of a small village. Though she was desperate to request to join him, she was knocked out in the first round of the exam and was unable to. While she did eventually pass the exam, what turned into years without regular training with him once again turned her passion for being a ninja inward.

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: Link Here
Old Training: Link Here
Old Dojo: Link Here

Special Usergroups: Global Mod & CIT

Old Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: None (Inactivity Rebirth)
New Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

New OOC Rank: S-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Keeping

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Low Sweep M
Janken M
Uncalled For Shot M
Slash
Arcing Slash
Multi-Impale
Piercing Rain
Eye Strain M
Mimic M
False Surroundings M
D-Rank - 1200
Combination Transformation M
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Spirit Lantern M
Contract Summoning M
Mystical Hand M
Coagulation M
Spinning Wind M
Dynamic Entry M
Sinkhole Fist M
Critical Exposure M
Full Circle
Cross Rip
Crimson Flash
Basic Clone M
Blur M
Rorschach Eye M
Double Vision M
C-Rank - 3250
Stunt Double M
One Element Sealing M
Elemental Negation M
Elemental Clone M
Barrier M
System Shock M
Skeletal Fortification M
Anesthetic Infusion M
System Restoration M
Dragon Assault M
Step-In Flash M
Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku M
Roaring Combination M
Grapple M
Inner Earth Reflection Lure M
Active Camo M
Mental Infiltration M
Verse of Darkness M
Black Flash M
Distortion M
After-Image M
Ocular Trauma M
B-Rank - 7500
Energy Transfer M
Leech Seal M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M
Cursed Sealing M
Mystical Force M
Medical Assistant M
Tranquilize M
Medical Ward M
Primary Lotus M
Shadow Step Strike M
Submission M
Spear Hand M
Multi-Hit Combo M
Advanced Clone M
Perception Filter M
Depth Barrier M
Night Mare M
Mime Box M
Solar Flare M
A-Rank - 12500
Perfected Rasengan M
Morality Sealing M
Nature's Guard M
Resuscitate M
Angelic Blessing M
Regeneration M
Pristine Aura M
Falcon Punch M
Eagle Drop M
Dance of the Waxing Moon M
Fist of Virtue M
Fist of Sin M
Fist of Gaia M

Refunding

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Wind Slash M
Pressure Burst M
Stone Bullet M
Gravel Shift M
Infernal Ember M
Thermal Maw M
The One-Two M
Pressurized Mist M
Water Gun M
Charge M
Fleeted M
Block M
Grip M
Wasteful M
Deception M
Favoritism M
Stun M
Hot Weapon M
1000 Years of Pain Kai M
Lethargy M
Tourniquet M
Intimidation M
Dynamic Slash
Overhead Strike
Stab
Thrust
Total: 26, 22 mastered

D-Rank - 1200
Whirlwind Spin M
Air Bullet M
Shredding Touch M
Earth Flow River M
Mud Clone M
Fireball M
Immolation Armor M
Combustive Seal M
4-Hit Combo M
Dynamic Finish M
Nut Buster M
Water Whip M
Aqua Fang M
Rinse Off M
Mask Summon M
Muscle Control M
Brandish M
Basic Safeguard M
Eagle Vision M
Gong M
Pained Expression M
Trembling Music M
Appreciation of Music M
Drunken Stupor M
Influenza M
Tickling M
Facepalm M
Amnesia M
False Success M
Leaking Mind M
Sear of the Mind M
Gasher
Heavy Tow
Total: 33, 31 mastered

C-Rank - 3250
Wind Scythe M
Tempest M
Gale Force M
Wind Release M
Dust Cloud M
Molecular Collision M
Particle Accelerator M
Dust Clone M
Harmonic Vibrations M
Hyper Clap M
Sonic Destabilizer M
Sonic Pulse M
Earth Flow Wave M
Rock Golem M
Earthen Coating M
Dragon Fire M
Searing Eruption M
Scalding Ash Cloud M
Heat Wave M
Jutsu Sealing M
Tiger Hook M
Shoryuken M
Venom Needle M
Immunity Break M
Toxic Channeling M
Poison Extraction M
Grand Waterfall M
Impaling Hydro Jet M
Rain Dance M
Water Prison M
Snapshot M
Chakra Sense M
Dynamic Art M
Chakra Extension M
Shadow Dance M
Gather M
Barrage M
Feint M
Deaf M
Run it Back M
Groans M
Piercing Cry M
Sometimes Shouting Works M
Crippled M
Crossed Wires M
Masochism M
Silly Fingers M
Mist of Deceit M
Blackout M
Insomnia M
Charismatic Breakdown M
Untruth M
Paranoia M
Total: 53, 53 mastered

B-Rank - 7500
Great Wind Scythe M
Wind Scar M
Vacuum Sphere M
Cyclone Movement M
Particle Charge M
Dust Assimilation M
Particle Storm M
Molecule Breaker M
Sound Bullet M
Distorted Aura M
Harmonization M
Echo Strike M
Bedrock Coffin M
Weighted Rock Technique M
Earth Spiker M
Antlion Sinkhole M
Infernal Hellfire M
Firestorm M
Spontaneous Combustion M
Ring of Fire M
Shadow Shuriken Replication M
Suplex M
Seismic Toss M
Toxic Curse M
Stun Vapor M
Poison Mist M
Venom Strike M
Phoenix's Embrace M
Petrification M
Lingering Spark M
Crush Depth M
Puppet Betrayal M
Pox M
Havoc of the Doomed Mind
Slowed Perception
Oblivious Rapture
Betrayal
Taunt
Thought Down
Bass Drop
Wither
Leak
Prolong
Death Chime
Centralized
Total: 45, 33 mastered

A-Rank - 12500
Tatsumaki M
Hurricane M
Ambiance of the Forbidden M
Zephyr's Grace M
Detachment of the Primitive World M
Disruption Field M
Particle Destabilization M
Crop Dusting M
Concussion Wave M
Hypersonic Reverberation M
Resonating Howl M
Final Chime M
Earthen Magnitude M
Earthslide Wall M
Petrification M
Dragon Flame Bomb M
Sol Fire Tempest M
Abysmal Harbinger M
Flame Shield M
Five Element Seal M
Stardust Nova M
Gate of Enma M
Total: 22, 22 mastered

Purchasing

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Bunt
Pound
Smash
Castling
Total: 4

D-Rank - 1200
Dynamic Charge
Double Slam
Shadow Play
Cross Pierce
Impaling Counter
Dynamic Pierce
Puppet Transformation
Total: 7

C-Rank - 3250
Blast Rush
Skull Buster
Set-Up
Carpe Noctem
Carpe Diem
Expel
Chakra Absorption
Iron Point Prison
Clip Downpour
Spiked Shield
Feint Spike
Outer Rim Breaker
Lunar Steps
Whisperer
Puppet Clone
Volt Charge
Total: 16

B-Rank - 7500
Rebound Blitz
Precise Interruption
Rigor Mortis
Hex Breaker
Unbound
Cover
Pressure Thruster
Million Stabs
Blood Letter
Magnum Break
Flight Aerial Strike
Terra Shift
Audio Medic
Incapacitate
Intangible Passage
Shadow Servant
Total: 16

A-Rank - 12500
Tombstone Driver
Memento Mori
White Lotus Strike
Rejected Assault
Pillar of the Four Dragons
Devastating Aura
Limit Break
Piercing Pinholder
Hyper Thrust
Trashin'
Higuma
Heavenly Sword
Physical Imprisonment Seal
Flock of Shadows
Black Blockade
The Reaper's Gaze
Ocular Assault
Body Double
Night
Deja Vu
Invisibility
Total: 21

Other Refunds: None

Name of any Contract you currently own:
- Obtained an Elemental Contract here! Will not be transferring it (because I don't have enough ASP); also I never made an actual summon
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own:
- None
Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Jinchuuriki (I can't access my profile or village request, so I don't have the link unfortunately)

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
None that are currently active

 

[Sazuki Nao]

Taking in to council. =)

 

[Sazuki Nao]

Tiny things;
1. Your class mentions Kinjutsu, but we see no application for this. Is that correct?
2. Your clan, is that an clan you apply for later or wish to do right now or..? =)

 

[Sugihara Aki]

1. I was confused by this part, to be honest- I looked at recent OCRs and only saw them list their owned kinjutsu, so I assumed that meant you had to apply after the OCR is complete...? Is it okay if I include my kinjutsu application here instead?
2. Not right now, but thank you for the reminder! I would like to do so at some point in the future, since in my mind they are not very established in the village yet.

 

[Sazuki Nao]

1. If you wish to get an Kinjutsu OK. you must apply for the kinjutsu itself. Inside the past OCR it was often already done inside the history itself or written as seperate. So if you would apply for it now, it needs to be written down yes. Also; just to verify, you do not have an application for a BL / CA correct?
2. amazing!

 

[Sugihara Aki]

I'll have my Kinjutsu application ready soon, and I can include an extra 300 words in there for my core ability application.
One other question: which of the ASP cards transfer to my new character? And what do I do with the ones that don't in my inventory?

 

[Sazuki Nao]

I dont quite understand what you mean with: "that dont my inventory"

But just like with the jutsu you "trade in". We pay you back the sellback difference. You yourself are responsible for selling them back from your inventory.

However ASP cards just needs to be removed that do not transfer with you. That is done by you or an admin. They must be written down for papertrail though!!

Same for augments.

As for which asp card transfers and which dont. Here is a link.

Training Rules & ASP

371053

ninpocho.com

If it doesnt make sense, please let me know.

 

[Sugihara Aki]

Old Character Name: Miyazaki Hikaru
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement (I'd like to keep Hikaru as an NPC, if that's possible!)
Last Known Where-abouts: Fire Country
Old IC Rank: Medical Ninja

New Character Name: Sugihara Akira
Preferred Username: Sugihara Aki
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Battlesmith
Custom Class:

Color Coordinated
HP: (55+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu & 1 free basic strike
High: Melee Acc.
Average: Dodge, Genjutsu Save
Low: Ninjutsu, Ranged, Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Chuunin

Character Age: 18
Gender: Female (she/they)
Sex: Female
Character's Physical Description: Aki is a short young woman with long blonde hair and tired eyes; her most striking feature is often the flecks of color that have found their way into her clothes and hair, staining them the shade of her creations. She prefers to keep her wardrobe simple, usually a plain shirt and jeans or sometimes her flak jacket, all similarly spotted with bright patches of pigment. Her posture is fluid but somewhat lazy, and watching her casual movements can be like watching a leaf fall to the ground: the destination is clear enough, but the path downwards is likely all over the place.
Character's Mental Description: Aki is as mellow as one can seem in a world filled with hardship and turmoil. She gives the impression of a long-retired grandmother even at her young age; averse to raising her voice and possessing a strongly nurtured empathy for those around her, she says what she thinks or says nothing at all. One of her more physically apparent hobbies is visual art, and because of it she dabbles in fields of design for everything from interior layouts to her specialty, tools and weapons. Though she buries it sometimes, she has always had a natural desire to understand the world and the people around her.
Character History: Aki is the fourth child of five, born to parents of the Sugihara clan: a scattered group of older-generation shinobi who had settled down to a mostly domestic life in the Fire Country, and one that possessed the unimpressive ability to synthesize many colored pigments from release of their chakra. Like her borthers and sisters before her, she was enrolled in the academy in the hopes of making a good name in the village for her clan. Although she often had trouble finding motivation to train (considering drawing a much more enjoyable use of her time), it eventually became clear that she, like her older brother, was a naturally gifted athlete whose developing skill with taijutsu far outclassed her meager ninjutsu capabilities. As she got older, Aki idolized her brother and his honest, hardworking attitude; she graduated from the academy and spent much of her time as a genin training alongside him. Right before her first chuunin exam, her brother, who had already been promoted, accepted a long-term mission abroad to ensure the safe development of a small village. Though she was desperate to request to join him, she was knocked out in the first round of the exam and was unable to. While she did eventually pass the exam, what turned into years without regular training with him once again turned her passion for being a ninja inward.

Spoiler: Kinjutsu & Core Ability Application

Aki stared idly across the treeline, swirling a floating blot of pink paint around her finger as she swept her gaze over the view from atop the gate once more. Right on schedule, a voice called from below, and an eager younger kunoichi hopped over the short wall near the guard post, giving her a wave to indicate she’d be taking her place. The Chuunin nodded in return, and, descending from the gate, began her walk home. It was still a bit strange to not be one of the newest of her rank in the village anymore… everyone she still kept up with from the Academy and Genin teams were off on missions all the time, so someone of her age did stick out a bit on gate duty or patrol. She didn’t mind- apparently those in charge of assignments were aware that her fighting style was often messy and easily identifiable, plus her grandparents had requested to only have one of their few heirs away from the village long-term. Less exciting stuff matched her demeanor anyway; she just missed the thrill of training alongside her brother, she supposed.

Her family was still very concerned with ‘their place in the village’ as they called it- given that her grandparents were the only remaining recognised leadership of what was once the Sugihara clan, their priority as heads of the family was to secure a place in the Leaf for its new generations (of which her and her siblings were the only current members). Essentially, after living here for the past decade and a half, they had finally come to the conclusion that Konoha was a safer and overall better place to be than the glorified bandit camp that the Sugihara name had eventually split apart from, and now they were desperate to solidify themselves here. Aki loved her grandparents, but they had a very old and paranoid way of going about their business. Perhaps it was because she was raised here, but to her it was obvious that the village already ‘accepted’ their family just as much as they did any other, and also certainly was not on the verge of collapse any time soon. Still, they had worked hard to help her brothers and sisters find stable jobs, and they had been nothing but supportive of her and her brother’s efforts to develop their paint release from the clan’s kekkei genkai of color-changing chakra.

Her mind continued to wander as she made her way home. On that subject… Sanjiro had mentioned in his last letter that there was a possibility that the colorful chakra-weapon-molding fighting style they called ‘paint release’ wasn’t technically an elemental release at all (not surprising, nobody in the clan had ninjutsu anywhere close to ink release), nor was it really a kekkei genkai or a Sugihara-exclusive thing at all (which was indeed surprising). According to her brother’s logic, while they could synthesize a paint-adjacent substance with their unique colored chakra, the technique of forming it into shapes and objects to enhance their taijutsu wasn’t unique- he had just read about something like it in the middle of his studies one day. Maybe that could be her way of giving back to the village and the clan, Aki pondered… she could teach people the fascinating intricacies of jutsu and life as a shinobi. Or maybe she just wanted an excuse to teach others like her brother had taught her. Either way, mixing it up from gate duty all the time might not be so bad.

She slid open their home’s side door, letting out a long yawn as she kicked off her shoes, unzipped her paint-splattered flak jacket, and tossed it over at her room’s open door. There was an art piece she had been working on the previous night that she could use the rest of the afternoon to finish, or she could see if anyone else was around the house… actually, she did hear voices coming from the main room, which was kind of strange for this time of day. Aki shuffled over to the doorway and poked her head inside. There were indeed more of the family around than normal- her grandmother was here, with an odd mixture of worry and relief on her face, and her two older sisters were back from their day jobs, one of them much earlier than usual. Her younger brother was sitting on the ground, and almost seemed sick to his stomach… and in the center of her room, surrounded by her parents on either side, was her older brother Sanjiro, with two bandaged stumps where his arms used to be.

“Ah- Akira, you’re home.” someone said as she stepped into the room. Her mind seemed to move in slow motion for a few moments- that would be her grandmother speaking, nobody called her that besides her. Of course they wouldn’t have had to call her home from gate duty; she was probably already on her way when he arrived. Her brother wasn’t supposed to be home from his assignment for another 58 days… although she could hazard a guess as to why he was here early. “What happened?” she murmured, sitting down and resting her chin between her fists.

“Great to see you too, Aki,” Sanjiro joked with a grimace, though she could tell from his tone and the upturned corner of his mouth that he meant it very genuinely. She smiled a bit in spite of the lingering shock, and he continued, “It was a construction accident, actually, thankfully nothing malicious. We were in the middle of putting together the frame for their new hospital building when one of the beams detached itself from above us; I managed to push the guy next to me out of the way, but… I couldn’t move myself away in time. My arms were shattered pretty badly- thankfully, the village’s medical corps was able to keep me alive and take care of my other injuries, but they could only do so much.” Her brother’s team had been on the same long-term mission for almost two years, assisting with the safe development of a small village near the Fire Country’s border. “Truthfully, I think I’m lucky to still be able to use my legs.” He seemed by far to be the calmest person in the room. Their mother looked like she wanted to say something, but as he noticed too, Sanjiro continued, “Right. As for my future as a shinobi: it’s obviously a little… murky right now, but I’ve spoken to some of the doctors at the Byoin and they’ve confirmed that I’m in reasonably good health otherwise. While it means I’ll have to rest here for a while instead of returning to my mission, I think it’s safe to say that this is far from the end of my career!” Their parents and grandmother didn’t seem very reassured as they left to get more bandages and prepare his room, but Aki was comforted by his optimism, even if she was still processing the consequences of this- it helped that one of those consequences was that her brother was back at home for the time being. So, she decided to speak her mind: “Teach me Aburidashi then.”

Sanjiro’s face darkened a bit with a real grimace, while her older sisters’ eyes widened in understanding. Aburidashi was her brother’s best-kept secret, and the furthest any of the Sugihara siblings had managed to push the concept of paint release by a significant margin. They had collectively named it ‘Aburidashi’ after an old shinobi technique, but they sometimes referred to it as ‘Invisible Ink’: taking the clan’s paint synthesis ability to a completely different level, it allowed the user to convert their chakra into liquid pigment while still inside their body, achieving an immensely greater degree of control over its composition. As its name suggested, it also let Sanjiro control the color of his paint after it was created, including the ability to make it invisible and visible again. When the technique was first developed, he had shown it only to her, and she begged to be able to learn so she could go on missions without worrying about leaving a trail of paint for enemies to follow. He had refused, however, until he was able to solve the issue of how much Aburidashi could damage the user’s body. Now, with his future uncertain and his arms gone… Aki was fully aware that she was the person he would trust most with developing this forbidden jutsu. The two of them alone were the clan’s taijutsu prodigies, the reason why paint style was designed to amplify one’s physical strength rather than mimicking Ink release with long-ranged combat. They had invented it together and trained with it since they were kids. If he couldn’t be the one to complete it, she would.

She could tell the same train of thought was running through her brother’s mind as well. Finally, with a long sigh, he agreed, “Okay. Be patient, though- I do need some time to rest.” She nodded, smiling. More than anything, she was just happy he was home.

A handful of days later, Aki stood in the middle of the nearby forest clearing that had served as their family’s training spot for as long as they’d lived in the village. Sanjiro sat on top of a log, practicing his balance as he instructed her. Their older sister Mikumi was there just in case one or both of them was injured, since she had a small amount of medical training through her job; their older sister Chikai and younger brother Shoji had tagged along because they were both ninja with some skill at paint release themselves. As she focused on the palms of her hands by her brother’s direction, she tried gathering chakra as if she were performing a taijutsu instead of a ninjutsu- while she had been practicing her general ninjutsu skills ever since she was promoted to Chuunin (and had improved a significant bit), taijutsu would always be her strong suit. She remembered vividly, as sweat beaded on her forehead, how amazed her Academy classmates had been when she first changed the color of her chakra, only to mock her for being bad with almost everything except hand-to-hand sparring, which she had picked up by watching her brother. Night fell, and the five of them were back at the clearing the next day. She remembered how she took up painting, wanting to spend her life doing that instead of being a ninja, and how she had been the very first to stumble upon her clan’s ability to turn their chakra into paint by complete accident. Another day passed. She recalled how, the day she graduated the Academy, Sanjiro had shown her this clearing, and the two of them spent months trying to turn their paint into a special technique. Another day. How eventually, they had both been able to mold it into the shape of a kunai, and how from that day forward, her passion for being a ninja was reignited.

After seventeen days of practice, Aki stood in the paint-splattered clearing, surrounded by her siblings, and watched with exhaustion and triumph as every speck of color on the ground, the trees, and even her body seemed to wash away, invisible.

Word Count: 1887
Applying for Battlesmith CA with 300 words
Applying for Chimera Kinjutsu with the remaining 1500 - choosing Void Walker as my second BL/CA

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: Link Here
Old Training: Link Here
Old Dojo: Link Here

Special Usergroups: Global Mod & CIT

Old Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: None (Inactivity Rebirth)
New Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

New OOC Rank: S-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Keeping

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Low Sweep M
Janken M
Uncalled For Shot M
Slash
Arcing Slash
Multi-Impale
Piercing Rain
Eye Strain M
Mimic M
False Surroundings M
D-Rank - 1200
Combination Transformation M
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Spirit Lantern M
Contract Summoning M
Mystical Hand M
Coagulation M
Spinning Wind M
Dynamic Entry M
Sinkhole Fist M
Critical Exposure M
Full Circle
Cross Rip
Crimson Flash
Basic Clone M
Blur M
Rorschach Eye M
Double Vision M
C-Rank - 3250
Stunt Double M
One Element Sealing M
Elemental Negation M
Elemental Clone M
Barrier M
System Shock M
Skeletal Fortification M
Anesthetic Infusion M
System Restoration M
Dragon Assault M
Step-In Flash M
Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku M
Roaring Combination M
Grapple M
Inner Earth Reflection Lure M
Active Camo M
Mental Infiltration M
Verse of Darkness M
Black Flash M
Distortion M
After-Image M
Ocular Trauma M
B-Rank - 7500
Energy Transfer M
Leech Seal M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M
Cursed Sealing M
Mystical Force M
Medical Assistant M
Tranquilize M
Medical Ward M
Primary Lotus M
Shadow Step Strike M
Submission M
Spear Hand M
Multi-Hit Combo M
Advanced Clone M
Perception Filter M
Depth Barrier M
Night Mare M
Mime Box M
Solar Flare M
A-Rank - 12500
Perfected Rasengan M
Morality Sealing M
Nature's Guard M
Resuscitate M
Angelic Blessing M
Regeneration M
Pristine Aura M
Falcon Punch M
Eagle Drop M
Dance of the Waxing Moon M
Fist of Virtue M
Fist of Sin M
Fist of Gaia M

Refunding

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Wind Slash M
Pressure Burst M
Stone Bullet M
Gravel Shift M
Infernal Ember M
Thermal Maw M
The One-Two M
Pressurized Mist M
Water Gun M
Charge M
Fleeted M
Block M
Grip M
Wasteful M
Deception M
Favoritism M
Stun M
Hot Weapon M
1000 Years of Pain Kai M
Lethargy M
Tourniquet M
Intimidation M
Dynamic Slash
Overhead Strike
Stab
Thrust
Total: 26, 22 mastered

D-Rank - 1200
Whirlwind Spin M
Air Bullet M
Shredding Touch M
Earth Flow River M
Mud Clone M
Fireball M
Immolation Armor M
Combustive Seal M
4-Hit Combo M
Dynamic Finish M
Nut Buster M
Water Whip M
Aqua Fang M
Rinse Off M
Mask Summon M
Muscle Control M
Brandish M
Basic Safeguard M
Eagle Vision M
Gong M
Pained Expression M
Trembling Music M
Appreciation of Music M
Drunken Stupor M
Influenza M
Tickling M
Facepalm M
Amnesia M
False Success M
Leaking Mind M
Sear of the Mind M
Gasher
Heavy Tow
Total: 33, 31 mastered

C-Rank - 3250
Wind Scythe M
Tempest M
Gale Force M
Wind Release M
Dust Cloud M
Molecular Collision M
Particle Accelerator M
Dust Clone M
Harmonic Vibrations M
Hyper Clap M
Sonic Destabilizer M
Sonic Pulse M
Earth Flow Wave M
Rock Golem M
Earthen Coating M
Dragon Fire M
Searing Eruption M
Scalding Ash Cloud M
Heat Wave M
Jutsu Sealing M
Tiger Hook M
Shoryuken M
Venom Needle M
Immunity Break M
Toxic Channeling M
Poison Extraction M
Grand Waterfall M
Impaling Hydro Jet M
Rain Dance M
Water Prison M
Snapshot M
Chakra Sense M
Dynamic Art M
Chakra Extension M
Shadow Dance M
Gather M
Barrage M
Feint M
Deaf M
Run it Back M
Groans M
Piercing Cry M
Sometimes Shouting Works M
Crippled M
Crossed Wires M
Masochism M
Silly Fingers M
Mist of Deceit M
Blackout M
Insomnia M
Charismatic Breakdown M
Untruth M
Paranoia M
Total: 53, 53 mastered

B-Rank - 7500
Great Wind Scythe M
Wind Scar M
Vacuum Sphere M
Cyclone Movement M
Particle Charge M
Dust Assimilation M
Particle Storm M
Molecule Breaker M
Sound Bullet M
Distorted Aura M
Harmonization M
Echo Strike M
Bedrock Coffin M
Weighted Rock Technique M
Earth Spiker M
Antlion Sinkhole M
Infernal Hellfire M
Firestorm M
Spontaneous Combustion M
Ring of Fire M
Shadow Shuriken Replication M
Suplex M
Seismic Toss M
Toxic Curse M
Stun Vapor M
Poison Mist M
Venom Strike M
Phoenix's Embrace M
Petrification M
Lingering Spark M
Crush Depth M
Puppet Betrayal M
Pox M
Havoc of the Doomed Mind
Slowed Perception
Oblivious Rapture
Betrayal
Taunt
Thought Down
Bass Drop
Wither
Leak
Prolong
Death Chime
Centralized
Total: 45, 33 mastered

A-Rank - 12500
Tatsumaki M
Hurricane M
Ambiance of the Forbidden M
Zephyr's Grace M
Detachment of the Primitive World M
Disruption Field M
Particle Destabilization M
Crop Dusting M
Concussion Wave M
Hypersonic Reverberation M
Resonating Howl M
Final Chime M
Earthen Magnitude M
Earthslide Wall M
Petrification M
Dragon Flame Bomb M
Sol Fire Tempest M
Abysmal Harbinger M
Flame Shield M
Five Element Seal M
Stardust Nova M
Gate of Enma M
Total: 22, 22 mastered

Purchasing

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Bunt
Pound
Smash
Castling
Total: 4

D-Rank - 1200
Dynamic Charge
Double Slam
Shadow Play
Cross Pierce
Impaling Counter
Dynamic Pierce
Puppet Transformation
Total: 7

C-Rank - 3250
Blast Rush
Skull Buster
Set-Up
Carpe Noctem
Carpe Diem
Expel
Chakra Absorption
Iron Point Prison
Clip Downpour
Spiked Shield
Feint Spike
Outer Rim Breaker
Lunar Steps
Whisperer
Puppet Clone
Volt Charge
Total: 16

B-Rank - 7500
Rebound Blitz
Precise Interruption
Rigor Mortis
Hex Breaker
Unbound
Cover
Pressure Thruster
Million Stabs
Blood Letter
Magnum Break
Flight Aerial Strike
Terra Shift
Audio Medic
Incapacitate
Intangible Passage
Shadow Servant
Total: 16

A-Rank - 12500
Tombstone Driver
Memento Mori
White Lotus Strike
Rejected Assault
Pillar of the Four Dragons
Devastating Aura
Limit Break
Piercing Pinholder
Hyper Thrust
Trashin'
Higuma
Heavenly Sword
Physical Imprisonment Seal
Flock of Shadows
Black Blockade
The Reaper's Gaze
Ocular Assault
Body Double
Night
Deja Vu
Invisibility
Total: 21

Other Refunds:

Spoiler: Augments

Keeping
2 Blitz
1 Lucky Strike
1 Vengeance
1 Tracer
1 Lantern
1 Pressure
1 Wide Edge
1 Quick Switch
1 Swift
1 Dual Weapon
1 Free Flow
Refunding
1 Pressure
1 Siege
1 Special Composition
Purchasing
None right now, I'll do that later

Name of any Contract you currently own:
- Obtained an Elemental Contract here! Will not be transferring it (because I don't have enough ASP); also I never made an actual summon
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own:
- None
Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Jinchuuriki (I can't access my profile or village request, so I don't have the link unfortunately)

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
None that are currently active

ASP Cards:
Immortality card - Transfers to Aki
Ability card - Transfers to Aki
Class Point card - Transfers to Aki
Item Hoarder - Stays with Hikaru
Weapons Galore - Stays with Hikaru

 

[Sazuki Nao]

Taking in

 

[Sugihara Aki]

Just wanted to request an update on this!
I'm aware that there's been two holiday weekends in a row (happy new year!), and that this is a very math/refund-heavy OCR, and that there has also been an increase in Leaf character creations recently. But this is the last week of my break before I go back to school for the term, so I just wanted to ask. Thank you!!

 

[Sazuki Nao]

I was supposed to get back to you earlier today, sorry this wasnt the case yet and for the delay.

Unfortionatly your OCR has not been approved.
We find the lack of your CA battlesmith and Kinjutsu chimera Void walker not up to par with what they should be and thus the story behind.
We feel there is no mention or not enough to either of them. We wish to see how your character unlocks this CA and how they get the Chimera Void Walker.

I hope this explained enough, if not you are free to reply or find my burrow (dm).

 

[Sugihara Aki]

I see what you're saying- I know it doesn't mention Battlesmith or Void Walker specifically. My idea was to flavor the CA and Kinjutsu to more closely tie in to the character's background and the faceclaim I had in mind:

• "paint release" is a stand-in for Battlesmith, Aki and others create weapons out of their chakra to augment their natural affinity for Taijutsu
• "Aburidashi/Invisible Ink" is a version of Void Walker and Chimera, a forbidden jutsu that takes a toll on the user but allows them to conceal their techniques and gives them greater control over their paint release (battlesmith)

I apologize for not making this clear, and if this still isn't sufficient I understand. Thanks for your time!

 

[Uchiha Takeshi]

Thanks for getting back in touch.

At this time the council still feels that this does not work with the Battlesmith and Void Walker/Chimera build, the flavor is not in line with these options and as such is still denied by the council, if you wish to rewrite your application to suit the chosen CA/Kin please post it back in here to be taken back into the council. Also for Invisible Ink or anything around this we would suggest this would be a CRPJ and not in line with something we would approve on that front due t the IC implications this would allow. As such this would be a separate request.

 

[Sugihara Aki]

Thanks for the feedback! I updated my CA/Kinjutsu application, and changed a line in my character history to reflect this as well.
Please let me know if I need to make any other changes- I decided to ultimately leave the flavoring for CRPJs down the line, and just rewrote things to more closely align with the CAs and Kinjutsu themselves.

Old Character Name: Miyazaki Hikaru
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement (I'd like to keep Hikaru as an NPC, if that's possible!)
Last Known Where-abouts: Fire Country
Old IC Rank: Medical Ninja

New Character Name: Sugihara Akira
Preferred Username: Sugihara Aki
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Battlesmith
Custom Class:

Color Coordinated
HP: (55+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu & 1 free basic strike
High: Melee Acc.
Average: Dodge, Genjutsu Save
Low: Ninjutsu, Ranged, Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Chuunin

Character Age: 18
Gender: Female (she/they)
Sex: Female
Character's Physical Description: Aki is a short young woman with long blonde hair and tired eyes; her most striking feature is often the flecks of color that have found their way into her clothes and hair, staining them the shade of her creations. She prefers to keep her wardrobe simple, usually a plain shirt and jeans or sometimes her flak jacket, all similarly spotted with bright patches of pigment. Her posture is fluid but somewhat lazy, and watching her casual movements can be like watching a leaf fall to the ground: the destination is clear enough, but the path downwards is likely all over the place.
Character's Mental Description: Aki is as mellow as one can seem in a world filled with hardship and turmoil. She gives the impression of a long-retired grandmother even at her young age; averse to raising her voice and possessing a strongly nurtured empathy for those around her, she says what she thinks or says nothing at all. One of her more physically apparent hobbies is visual art, and because of it she dabbles in fields of design for everything from interior layouts to her specialty, tools and weapons. Though she buries it sometimes, she has always had a natural desire to understand the world and the people around her.
Character History: Aki is the fourth child of five, born to parents of the Sugihara clan: a scattered group of older-generation shinobi with a decorated history in weapon smithing that seemed to be firmly in the past. Like her borthers and sisters before her, she was enrolled in the academy in the hopes of making a good name in the village for her clan. Although she often had trouble finding motivation to train (considering drawing a much more enjoyable use of her time), it eventually became clear that she, like her older brother, was a naturally gifted athlete whose developing skill with taijutsu far outclassed her meager ninjutsu capabilities. As she got older, Aki idolized her brother and his honest, hardworking attitude; she graduated from the academy and spent much of her time as a genin training alongside him. Right before her first chuunin exam, her brother, who had already been promoted, accepted a long-term mission abroad to ensure the safe development of a small village. Though she was desperate to request to join him, she was knocked out in the first round of the exam and was unable to. While she did eventually pass the exam, what turned into years without regular training with him once again turned her passion for being a ninja inward.

Spoiler: Revised Kinjutsu & Core Ability Application

Aki stared idly across the treeline, twirling an orchid-colored kunai around her finger as she swept her gaze over the view from atop the gate once more. Right on schedule, a voice called from below, and an eager younger kunoichi hopped over the short wall near the guard post, giving her a wave to indicate she’d be taking her place. The Chuunin nodded in return, and, descending from the gate, began her walk home. It was still a bit strange to not be one of the newest of her rank in the village anymore… everyone she still kept up with from the Academy and Genin teams were off on missions all the time, so someone of her age did stick out a bit on gate duty or patrol. She didn’t mind– apparently those in charge of assignments were aware that her fighting style was often messy and easily identifiable, plus her grandparents had requested to only have one of their few heirs away from the village long-term. Less exciting stuff matched her demeanor anyway; she just missed the thrill of training alongside her brother, she supposed.

Her family was still very concerned with ‘their place in the village’ as they called it– given that her grandparents were the only remaining recognized leadership of what was once the Sugihara clan, their priority as heads of the family was to secure a place in the Leaf for its new generations (of which her and her siblings were the only current members). Essentially, after living here for the past decade and a half, they had finally come to the conclusion that Konoha was a safer and overall better place to be than the glorified bandit camp that the Sugihara name had eventually split apart from, and now they were desperate to solidify themselves here. Aki loved her grandparents, but they had a very old and paranoid way of going about their business. Perhaps it was because she was raised here, but to her it was obvious that the village already ‘accepted’ their family just as much as they did any other, and also certainly was not on the verge of collapse any time soon. Still, they had worked hard to help her brothers and sisters find stable jobs, and they had been nothing but supportive of her and her brother’s efforts to revive the clan’s weapon-forging heritage.

Her mind continued to wander as she made her way home. On that subject… Sanjiro had mentioned in his last letter to her that the small village he was stationed at had taken a particular interest in his smithing skills, so he had decided to share his technique with them. She had specifically not mentioned that part to the rest of her family, although perhaps it would be better to tell them after all. She just assumed that her grandparents might take offense to their ‘clan secrets’ being taught freely, even though it had been her and her brother who had reopened the derelict tool shop near their house– despite them introducing the Sugihara siblings to their family history as weaponsmiths, Sanjiro had practiced the art itself ten times as much as they had, and if he shared his incredible knowledge with others then she didn’t want Grandmother and Grandfather stopping him. Maybe that could be her way of giving back to the village and the clan, Aki pondered… she could teach people the fascinating intricacies of jutsu and life as a shinobi. Or maybe she just wanted an excuse to teach others like her brother had taught her. Either way, mixing it up from gate duty all the time might not be so bad.

Like her older brother and older sister before her, Aki had started her shinobi career at the Academy in the interest of supporting her family and eventually herself. Though she struggled quite a bit at first, especially with ninjutsu, over time she was able to grasp a decent skill at taijutsu, in large part thanks to her brother Sanjiro’s training. The two of them motivated each other through their respective graduations, inspired by tales from their grandparents of their clan’s former status as legendary weapon-smiths years and years before they had come to the Leaf village. One day, they found their way into an old tool shop out of the forest near where they lived, and, intrigued, they began experimenting with what was left of it. Though the last truly skilled weaponsmiths from their clan had either died decades ago or outright refused to accompany their grandparents to Konoha, their techniques still existed in the family’s surviving records, and so Aki and Sanjiro studied those as best they could. They had continued practicing nearly every day, in fact, until her brother had left on his mission– though he turned out to be better at forging durable weapons through hours of hard work, she was always superior with coming up with well-thought-out designs, which let her master the clan’s signature technique before he did.

She slid open their home’s side door, letting out a long yawn as she kicked off her shoes, unzipped her paint-splattered flak jacket, and tossed it over at her room’s open door. There was an art piece she had been working on the previous night that she could use the rest of the afternoon to finish, or she could see if anyone else was–

“Aki, hurry in here!” her mother’s voice called urgently from the main room. She frowned, and did as she was told, rushing through the already-open door to see almost the entire family present: her mother, father, and grandmother, all conversing worriedly with a stern-faced young kunoichi wearing the symbol of the Konoha Byoin on a lab coat, along with her two older sisters and younger brother sitting in the back of the room and talking equally worriedly amongst themselves. The Chuunin nodded in greeting to their guest, still frowning, and requested, “What is this about? Is everything alright?”

The doctor spoke first, politely but clearly meaning to get the first word in before her parents could. “Your brother Sanjiro is currently in custody of the Byoin. He was seriously injured while on a long-term mission and needed to be returned to the village as soon as was possible.” Aki sucked in a breath, holding back the sudden wave of mixed emotions until the kunoichi had finished speaking. “While I unfortunately can’t disclose the full nature of his condition yet, since we need to run further tests to make sure, it’s looking very probable that he will need intensive care in order to survive.” She swept a look around at all of the Sugiharas gathered, running a hand through her short-shorn hair with an empathetic look. “The most important matter is that one or multiple of his able-bodied close family members will most likely be required to undergo a transfusion procedure in order to help stabilize him. We can go over more of the final details once we reach the hospital, but we would be taking significant amounts of chakra as well as blood and possibly skin tissue.”

Once again, her parents looked like they wanted to say something, but Aki simply interjected, “I’ll volunteer to go first. Mikumi doesn’t have enough chakra for a healthy transfusion, Chiaki is injured herself and shouldn’t undergo any surgeries right now, and Grandmother would never let Shoji do it.” She realized that everything she had said was true as she was saying it- it had been an instinctive reaction born from rising emotions, to leap to her older brother’s aid, but looking around at the expressions of everyone else in the room, they had been waiting for her to get home because they knew she was the best fit for the procedure. The doctor nodded. “If you’re sure… let’s get going then. You still have until we reach the Byoin to decide.”

After what felt like mere seconds, they were standing in the hospital, looking through a glass window into an unconscious, bedridden Sanjiro’s room. His skin was an unnaturally pale, almost blue color, and his breathing was slow and heavy, each breath seeming to shake his entire frame. It seemed to be a miracle already that he could have been transported from the site of his mission in any condition like this. The same young doctor appeared from down the hallway once more, followed by an earnest-looking man wearing a symbol on his clothes that Aki didn’t recognize. “I apologize again, but the details of the transfusion need to be discussed in private. Follow me, please.”

“According to the reports of his teammates and Mr. Sato,” she gestured to the man who had accompanied her and the Sugihara family to have their discussion, “Sanjiro was gravely injured when he ventured into a cave, and the local medical unit had to implant foreign DNA into his body in order to save him. While it may have helped him survive until now, his body is beginning to reject it violently- or, rather, it is rejecting his body. In his weakened state, his body isn’t able to assimilate the new DNA properly.” Mr. Sato spoke up, giving Aki a concerned look. “We don’t have much time, so I’ll try to tell the story as fast as I can. Sugihara-san did indeed rush into the Cave of Rites after a child from our village. The Cave is our closest link to the Void, the origin of our village’s power- only those of a certain lineage can handle the atmosphere there, and the child, in a bout of foolishness, wished to test himself before his time. As it turned out, he was a suitable conduit for the Void, but Sugihara-san, who ran in to protect him, was not: exposure to the Void that resides in the Cave has killed outsiders before, and he looked to be no different. Our bodies can handle its drain more naturally than others since we live our lives near the cave, so in an effort to both patch up his physical wounds and provide him with resistance against… forgive me if it is difficult to explain, but… the Void’s hunger.”

The doctor nodded, pocketing the pad of notes she had been writing on during the explanation and addressing Aki, “It’s time. I can explain more after the procedure is complete, but we’ve concluded that the biggest threats to your brother right now are the rejection of the implanted DNA and the prolonged draining of his chakra due to exposure to this Void Mr. Sato spoke of.” She tapped the pen she’d been writing with to the side of her head.” The plan is to even that out between the two of you- since your chakra signatures and genetic makeup are similar enough as siblings, we can spread the foreign DNA to your body and link your chakra networks. If everything goes well, the bit of “Void” that’s draining chakra will fizzle out– it’s already beginning to do so, it just needs to be fed more chakra until it dissolves, we believe– and the distributed DNA will be able to be safely assimilated by your healthy body and his recovering one.” Aki nodded. Perhaps it was part of the job description, but it was reassuring that this doctor didn’t seem outwardly worried. The way she made it sound, they had figured out the perfect solution. Any natural inhibitions she may have had were no match against her desire to keep her brother alive, anyway.

The next thing Aki remembered was a distinct, almost cold feeling, and being awake without being able to see or hear or move. It was similar to the uncertain dread she got when she used to imagine her brother never returning from his mission late at night, or thinking about her own death; a dark chill on the back of her neck, except now it was less intense and all over her body. At first she felt the usual twinge of fear in her chest, but after who knows how long she spent in the dark, she began to get used to it. It wasn’t painful at least–

–at least, not until she did eventually open her eyes. A wave of discomfort washed over her at the sight of the bright hospital room, but it faded after a few moments, leaving just the cold feeling, which itself was starting to ebb away. It was quiet, though she could hear steady breathing to her left. With some effort, she discovered she could move her arms and legs relatively normally, albeit with some numbness; she tilted her head, looking over to see Sanjiro in the next bed over, asleep. Aki smiled, tilted her head back, and closed her eyes again.

Word Count: 2124
Applying for Battlesmith CA with 300 words
Applying for Chimera Kinjutsu with the remaining 1500 - choosing Void Walker as my second BL/CA

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: Link Here
Old Training: Link Here
Old Dojo: Link Here

Special Usergroups: Global Mod & CIT

Old Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: None (Inactivity Rebirth)
New Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

New OOC Rank: S-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Keeping

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Low Sweep M
Janken M
Uncalled For Shot M
Slash
Arcing Slash
Multi-Impale
Piercing Rain
Eye Strain M
Mimic M
False Surroundings M
D-Rank - 1200
Combination Transformation M
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Spirit Lantern M
Contract Summoning M
Mystical Hand M
Coagulation M
Spinning Wind M
Dynamic Entry M
Sinkhole Fist M
Critical Exposure M
Full Circle
Cross Rip
Crimson Flash
Basic Clone M
Blur M
Rorschach Eye M
Double Vision M
C-Rank - 3250
Stunt Double M
One Element Sealing M
Elemental Negation M
Elemental Clone M
Barrier M
System Shock M
Skeletal Fortification M
Anesthetic Infusion M
System Restoration M
Dragon Assault M
Step-In Flash M
Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku M
Roaring Combination M
Grapple M
Inner Earth Reflection Lure M
Active Camo M
Mental Infiltration M
Verse of Darkness M
Black Flash M
Distortion M
After-Image M
Ocular Trauma M
B-Rank - 7500
Energy Transfer M
Leech Seal M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M
Cursed Sealing M
Mystical Force M
Medical Assistant M
Tranquilize M
Medical Ward M
Primary Lotus M
Shadow Step Strike M
Submission M
Spear Hand M
Multi-Hit Combo M
Advanced Clone M
Perception Filter M
Depth Barrier M
Night Mare M
Mime Box M
Solar Flare M
A-Rank - 12500
Perfected Rasengan M
Morality Sealing M
Nature's Guard M
Resuscitate M
Angelic Blessing M
Regeneration M
Pristine Aura M
Falcon Punch M
Eagle Drop M
Dance of the Waxing Moon M
Fist of Virtue M
Fist of Sin M
Fist of Gaia M

Refunding

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Wind Slash M
Pressure Burst M
Stone Bullet M
Gravel Shift M
Infernal Ember M
Thermal Maw M
The One-Two M
Pressurized Mist M
Water Gun M
Charge M
Fleeted M
Block M
Grip M
Wasteful M
Deception M
Favoritism M
Stun M
Hot Weapon M
1000 Years of Pain Kai M
Lethargy M
Tourniquet M
Intimidation M
Dynamic Slash
Overhead Strike
Stab
Thrust
Total: 26, 22 mastered

D-Rank - 1200
Whirlwind Spin M
Air Bullet M
Shredding Touch M
Earth Flow River M
Mud Clone M
Fireball M
Immolation Armor M
Combustive Seal M
4-Hit Combo M
Dynamic Finish M
Nut Buster M
Water Whip M
Aqua Fang M
Rinse Off M
Mask Summon M
Muscle Control M
Brandish M
Basic Safeguard M
Eagle Vision M
Gong M
Pained Expression M
Trembling Music M
Appreciation of Music M
Drunken Stupor M
Influenza M
Tickling M
Facepalm M
Amnesia M
False Success M
Leaking Mind M
Sear of the Mind M
Gasher
Heavy Tow
Total: 33, 31 mastered

C-Rank - 3250
Wind Scythe M
Tempest M
Gale Force M
Wind Release M
Dust Cloud M
Molecular Collision M
Particle Accelerator M
Dust Clone M
Harmonic Vibrations M
Hyper Clap M
Sonic Destabilizer M
Sonic Pulse M
Earth Flow Wave M
Rock Golem M
Earthen Coating M
Dragon Fire M
Searing Eruption M
Scalding Ash Cloud M
Heat Wave M
Jutsu Sealing M
Tiger Hook M
Shoryuken M
Venom Needle M
Immunity Break M
Toxic Channeling M
Poison Extraction M
Grand Waterfall M
Impaling Hydro Jet M
Rain Dance M
Water Prison M
Snapshot M
Chakra Sense M
Dynamic Art M
Chakra Extension M
Shadow Dance M
Gather M
Barrage M
Feint M
Deaf M
Run it Back M
Groans M
Piercing Cry M
Sometimes Shouting Works M
Crippled M
Crossed Wires M
Masochism M
Silly Fingers M
Mist of Deceit M
Blackout M
Insomnia M
Charismatic Breakdown M
Untruth M
Paranoia M
Total: 53, 53 mastered

B-Rank - 7500
Great Wind Scythe M
Wind Scar M
Vacuum Sphere M
Cyclone Movement M
Particle Charge M
Dust Assimilation M
Particle Storm M
Molecule Breaker M
Sound Bullet M
Distorted Aura M
Harmonization M
Echo Strike M
Bedrock Coffin M
Weighted Rock Technique M
Earth Spiker M
Antlion Sinkhole M
Infernal Hellfire M
Firestorm M
Spontaneous Combustion M
Ring of Fire M
Shadow Shuriken Replication M
Suplex M
Seismic Toss M
Toxic Curse M
Stun Vapor M
Poison Mist M
Venom Strike M
Phoenix's Embrace M
Petrification M
Lingering Spark M
Crush Depth M
Puppet Betrayal M
Pox M
Havoc of the Doomed Mind
Slowed Perception
Oblivious Rapture
Betrayal
Taunt
Thought Down
Bass Drop
Wither
Leak
Prolong
Death Chime
Centralized
Total: 45, 33 mastered

A-Rank - 12500
Tatsumaki M
Hurricane M
Ambiance of the Forbidden M
Zephyr's Grace M
Detachment of the Primitive World M
Disruption Field M
Particle Destabilization M
Crop Dusting M
Concussion Wave M
Hypersonic Reverberation M
Resonating Howl M
Final Chime M
Earthen Magnitude M
Earthslide Wall M
Petrification M
Dragon Flame Bomb M
Sol Fire Tempest M
Abysmal Harbinger M
Flame Shield M
Five Element Seal M
Stardust Nova M
Gate of Enma M
Total: 22, 22 mastered

Purchasing

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Bunt
Pound
Smash
Castling
Total: 4

D-Rank - 1200
Dynamic Charge
Double Slam
Shadow Play
Cross Pierce
Impaling Counter
Dynamic Pierce
Puppet Transformation
Total: 7

C-Rank - 3250
Blast Rush
Skull Buster
Set-Up
Carpe Noctem
Carpe Diem
Expel
Chakra Absorption
Iron Point Prison
Clip Downpour
Spiked Shield
Feint Spike
Outer Rim Breaker
Lunar Steps
Whisperer
Puppet Clone
Volt Charge
Total: 16

B-Rank - 7500
Rebound Blitz
Precise Interruption
Rigor Mortis
Hex Breaker
Unbound
Cover
Pressure Thruster
Million Stabs
Blood Letter
Magnum Break
Flight Aerial Strike
Terra Shift
Audio Medic
Incapacitate
Intangible Passage
Shadow Servant
Total: 16

A-Rank - 12500
Tombstone Driver
Memento Mori
White Lotus Strike
Rejected Assault
Pillar of the Four Dragons
Devastating Aura
Limit Break
Piercing Pinholder
Hyper Thrust
Trashin'
Higuma
Heavenly Sword
Physical Imprisonment Seal
Flock of Shadows
Black Blockade
The Reaper's Gaze
Ocular Assault
Body Double
Night
Deja Vu
Invisibility
Total: 21

Other Refunds:

Spoiler: Augments

Keeping
2 Blitz
1 Lucky Strike
1 Vengeance
1 Tracer
1 Lantern
1 Pressure
1 Wide Edge
1 Quick Switch
1 Swift
1 Dual Weapon
1 Free Flow
Refunding
1 Pressure
1 Siege
1 Special Composition
Purchasing
None right now, I'll do that later

Name of any Contract you currently own:
- Obtained an Elemental Contract here! Will not be transferring it (because I don't have enough ASP); also I never made an actual summon
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own:
- None
Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Jinchuuriki (I can't access my profile or village request, so I don't have the link unfortunately)

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
None that are currently active

ASP Cards:
Immortality card - Transfers to Aki
Ability card - Transfers to Aki
Class Point card - Transfers to Aki
Item Hoarder - Stays with Hikaru
Weapons Galore - Stays with Hikaru

 

[Sazuki Nao]

Taking in to council land.

Spoiler: papertrail

Thanks for the feedback! I updated my CA/Kinjutsu application, and changed a line in my character history to reflect this as well.
Please let me know if I need to make any other changes- I decided to ultimately leave the flavoring for CRPJs down the line, and just rewrote things to more closely align with the CAs and Kinjutsu themselves.

Old Character Name: Miyazaki Hikaru
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Inactivity Retirement (I'd like to keep Hikaru as an NPC, if that's possible!)
Last Known Where-abouts: Fire Country
Old IC Rank: Medical Ninja

New Character Name: Sugihara Akira
Preferred Username: Sugihara Aki
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Battlesmith
Custom Class:

Color Coordinated
HP: (55+lvl) x stamina
CP: (50+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu & 1 free basic strike
High: Melee Acc.
Average: Dodge, Genjutsu Save
Low: Ninjutsu, Ranged, Genjutsu DC

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Chuunin

Character Age: 18
Gender: Female (she/they)
Sex: Female
Character's Physical Description: Aki is a short young woman with long blonde hair and tired eyes; her most striking feature is often the flecks of color that have found their way into her clothes and hair, staining them the shade of her creations. She prefers to keep her wardrobe simple, usually a plain shirt and jeans or sometimes her flak jacket, all similarly spotted with bright patches of pigment. Her posture is fluid but somewhat lazy, and watching her casual movements can be like watching a leaf fall to the ground: the destination is clear enough, but the path downwards is likely all over the place.
Character's Mental Description: Aki is as mellow as one can seem in a world filled with hardship and turmoil. She gives the impression of a long-retired grandmother even at her young age; averse to raising her voice and possessing a strongly nurtured empathy for those around her, she says what she thinks or says nothing at all. One of her more physically apparent hobbies is visual art, and because of it she dabbles in fields of design for everything from interior layouts to her specialty, tools and weapons. Though she buries it sometimes, she has always had a natural desire to understand the world and the people around her.
Character History: Aki is the fourth child of five, born to parents of the Sugihara clan: a scattered group of older-generation shinobi with a decorated history in weapon smithing that seemed to be firmly in the past. Like her borthers and sisters before her, she was enrolled in the academy in the hopes of making a good name in the village for her clan. Although she often had trouble finding motivation to train (considering drawing a much more enjoyable use of her time), it eventually became clear that she, like her older brother, was a naturally gifted athlete whose developing skill with taijutsu far outclassed her meager ninjutsu capabilities. As she got older, Aki idolized her brother and his honest, hardworking attitude; she graduated from the academy and spent much of her time as a genin training alongside him. Right before her first chuunin exam, her brother, who had already been promoted, accepted a long-term mission abroad to ensure the safe development of a small village. Though she was desperate to request to join him, she was knocked out in the first round of the exam and was unable to. While she did eventually pass the exam, what turned into years without regular training with him once again turned her passion for being a ninja inward.

Spoiler: Revised Kinjutsu & Core Ability Application

Aki stared idly across the treeline, twirling an orchid-colored kunai around her finger as she swept her gaze over the view from atop the gate once more. Right on schedule, a voice called from below, and an eager younger kunoichi hopped over the short wall near the guard post, giving her a wave to indicate she’d be taking her place. The Chuunin nodded in return, and, descending from the gate, began her walk home. It was still a bit strange to not be one of the newest of her rank in the village anymore… everyone she still kept up with from the Academy and Genin teams were off on missions all the time, so someone of her age did stick out a bit on gate duty or patrol. She didn’t mind– apparently those in charge of assignments were aware that her fighting style was often messy and easily identifiable, plus her grandparents had requested to only have one of their few heirs away from the village long-term. Less exciting stuff matched her demeanor anyway; she just missed the thrill of training alongside her brother, she supposed.

Her family was still very concerned with ‘their place in the village’ as they called it– given that her grandparents were the only remaining recognized leadership of what was once the Sugihara clan, their priority as heads of the family was to secure a place in the Leaf for its new generations (of which her and her siblings were the only current members). Essentially, after living here for the past decade and a half, they had finally come to the conclusion that Konoha was a safer and overall better place to be than the glorified bandit camp that the Sugihara name had eventually split apart from, and now they were desperate to solidify themselves here. Aki loved her grandparents, but they had a very old and paranoid way of going about their business. Perhaps it was because she was raised here, but to her it was obvious that the village already ‘accepted’ their family just as much as they did any other, and also certainly was not on the verge of collapse any time soon. Still, they had worked hard to help her brothers and sisters find stable jobs, and they had been nothing but supportive of her and her brother’s efforts to revive the clan’s weapon-forging heritage.

Her mind continued to wander as she made her way home. On that subject… Sanjiro had mentioned in his last letter to her that the small village he was stationed at had taken a particular interest in his smithing skills, so he had decided to share his technique with them. She had specifically not mentioned that part to the rest of her family, although perhaps it would be better to tell them after all. She just assumed that her grandparents might take offense to their ‘clan secrets’ being taught freely, even though it had been her and her brother who had reopened the derelict tool shop near their house– despite them introducing the Sugihara siblings to their family history as weaponsmiths, Sanjiro had practiced the art itself ten times as much as they had, and if he shared his incredible knowledge with others then she didn’t want Grandmother and Grandfather stopping him. Maybe that could be her way of giving back to the village and the clan, Aki pondered… she could teach people the fascinating intricacies of jutsu and life as a shinobi. Or maybe she just wanted an excuse to teach others like her brother had taught her. Either way, mixing it up from gate duty all the time might not be so bad.

Like her older brother and older sister before her, Aki had started her shinobi career at the Academy in the interest of supporting her family and eventually herself. Though she struggled quite a bit at first, especially with ninjutsu, over time she was able to grasp a decent skill at taijutsu, in large part thanks to her brother Sanjiro’s training. The two of them motivated each other through their respective graduations, inspired by tales from their grandparents of their clan’s former status as legendary weapon-smiths years and years before they had come to the Leaf village. One day, they found their way into an old tool shop out of the forest near where they lived, and, intrigued, they began experimenting with what was left of it. Though the last truly skilled weaponsmiths from their clan had either died decades ago or outright refused to accompany their grandparents to Konoha, their techniques still existed in the family’s surviving records, and so Aki and Sanjiro studied those as best they could. They had continued practicing nearly every day, in fact, until her brother had left on his mission– though he turned out to be better at forging durable weapons through hours of hard work, she was always superior with coming up with well-thought-out designs, which let her master the clan’s signature technique before he did.

She slid open their home’s side door, letting out a long yawn as she kicked off her shoes, unzipped her paint-splattered flak jacket, and tossed it over at her room’s open door. There was an art piece she had been working on the previous night that she could use the rest of the afternoon to finish, or she could see if anyone else was–

“Aki, hurry in here!” her mother’s voice called urgently from the main room. She frowned, and did as she was told, rushing through the already-open door to see almost the entire family present: her mother, father, and grandmother, all conversing worriedly with a stern-faced young kunoichi wearing the symbol of the Konoha Byoin on a lab coat, along with her two older sisters and younger brother sitting in the back of the room and talking equally worriedly amongst themselves. The Chuunin nodded in greeting to their guest, still frowning, and requested, “What is this about? Is everything alright?”

The doctor spoke first, politely but clearly meaning to get the first word in before her parents could. “Your brother Sanjiro is currently in custody of the Byoin. He was seriously injured while on a long-term mission and needed to be returned to the village as soon as was possible.” Aki sucked in a breath, holding back the sudden wave of mixed emotions until the kunoichi had finished speaking. “While I unfortunately can’t disclose the full nature of his condition yet, since we need to run further tests to make sure, it’s looking very probable that he will need intensive care in order to survive.” She swept a look around at all of the Sugiharas gathered, running a hand through her short-shorn hair with an empathetic look. “The most important matter is that one or multiple of his able-bodied close family members will most likely be required to undergo a transfusion procedure in order to help stabilize him. We can go over more of the final details once we reach the hospital, but we would be taking significant amounts of chakra as well as blood and possibly skin tissue.”

Once again, her parents looked like they wanted to say something, but Aki simply interjected, “I’ll volunteer to go first. Mikumi doesn’t have enough chakra for a healthy transfusion, Chiaki is injured herself and shouldn’t undergo any surgeries right now, and Grandmother would never let Shoji do it.” She realized that everything she had said was true as she was saying it- it had been an instinctive reaction born from rising emotions, to leap to her older brother’s aid, but looking around at the expressions of everyone else in the room, they had been waiting for her to get home because they knew she was the best fit for the procedure. The doctor nodded. “If you’re sure… let’s get going then. You still have until we reach the Byoin to decide.”

After what felt like mere seconds, they were standing in the hospital, looking through a glass window into an unconscious, bedridden Sanjiro’s room. His skin was an unnaturally pale, almost blue color, and his breathing was slow and heavy, each breath seeming to shake his entire frame. It seemed to be a miracle already that he could have been transported from the site of his mission in any condition like this. The same young doctor appeared from down the hallway once more, followed by an earnest-looking man wearing a symbol on his clothes that Aki didn’t recognize. “I apologize again, but the details of the transfusion need to be discussed in private. Follow me, please.”

“According to the reports of his teammates and Mr. Sato,” she gestured to the man who had accompanied her and the Sugihara family to have their discussion, “Sanjiro was gravely injured when he ventured into a cave, and the local medical unit had to implant foreign DNA into his body in order to save him. While it may have helped him survive until now, his body is beginning to reject it violently- or, rather, it is rejecting his body. In his weakened state, his body isn’t able to assimilate the new DNA properly.” Mr. Sato spoke up, giving Aki a concerned look. “We don’t have much time, so I’ll try to tell the story as fast as I can. Sugihara-san did indeed rush into the Cave of Rites after a child from our village. The Cave is our closest link to the Void, the origin of our village’s power- only those of a certain lineage can handle the atmosphere there, and the child, in a bout of foolishness, wished to test himself before his time. As it turned out, he was a suitable conduit for the Void, but Sugihara-san, who ran in to protect him, was not: exposure to the Void that resides in the Cave has killed outsiders before, and he looked to be no different. Our bodies can handle its drain more naturally than others since we live our lives near the cave, so in an effort to both patch up his physical wounds and provide him with resistance against… forgive me if it is difficult to explain, but… the Void’s hunger.”

The doctor nodded, pocketing the pad of notes she had been writing on during the explanation and addressing Aki, “It’s time. I can explain more after the procedure is complete, but we’ve concluded that the biggest threats to your brother right now are the rejection of the implanted DNA and the prolonged draining of his chakra due to exposure to this Void Mr. Sato spoke of.” She tapped the pen she’d been writing with to the side of her head.” The plan is to even that out between the two of you- since your chakra signatures and genetic makeup are similar enough as siblings, we can spread the foreign DNA to your body and link your chakra networks. If everything goes well, the bit of “Void” that’s draining chakra will fizzle out– it’s already beginning to do so, it just needs to be fed more chakra until it dissolves, we believe– and the distributed DNA will be able to be safely assimilated by your healthy body and his recovering one.” Aki nodded. Perhaps it was part of the job description, but it was reassuring that this doctor didn’t seem outwardly worried. The way she made it sound, they had figured out the perfect solution. Any natural inhibitions she may have had were no match against her desire to keep her brother alive, anyway.

The next thing Aki remembered was a distinct, almost cold feeling, and being awake without being able to see or hear or move. It was similar to the uncertain dread she got when she used to imagine her brother never returning from his mission late at night, or thinking about her own death; a dark chill on the back of her neck, except now it was less intense and all over her body. At first she felt the usual twinge of fear in her chest, but after who knows how long she spent in the dark, she began to get used to it. It wasn’t painful at least–

–at least, not until she did eventually open her eyes. A wave of discomfort washed over her at the sight of the bright hospital room, but it faded after a few moments, leaving just the cold feeling, which itself was starting to ebb away. It was quiet, though she could hear steady breathing to her left. With some effort, she discovered she could move her arms and legs relatively normally, albeit with some numbness; she tilted her head, looking over to see Sanjiro in the next bed over, asleep. Aki smiled, tilted her head back, and closed her eyes again.

Word Count: 2124
Applying for Battlesmith CA with 300 words
Applying for Chimera Kinjutsu with the remaining 1500 - choosing Void Walker as my second BL/CA

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: Link Here
Old Training: Link Here
Old Dojo: Link Here

Special Usergroups: Global Mod & CIT

Old Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

Old OOC Rank: S-Rank
Stat Cut: None (Inactivity Rebirth)
New Stats:

Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600%

PL: 3600
Level 15

New OOC Rank: S-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:

Keeping

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Transformation M
Body Switch M
Low Sweep M
Janken M
Uncalled For Shot M
Slash
Arcing Slash
Multi-Impale
Piercing Rain
Eye Strain M
Mimic M
False Surroundings M
D-Rank - 1200
Combination Transformation M
Crystal Eye M
Cancel M
Spirit Lantern M
Contract Summoning M
Mystical Hand M
Coagulation M
Spinning Wind M
Dynamic Entry M
Sinkhole Fist M
Critical Exposure M
Full Circle
Cross Rip
Crimson Flash
Basic Clone M
Blur M
Rorschach Eye M
Double Vision M
C-Rank - 3250
Stunt Double M
One Element Sealing M
Elemental Negation M
Elemental Clone M
Barrier M
System Shock M
Skeletal Fortification M
Anesthetic Infusion M
System Restoration M
Dragon Assault M
Step-In Flash M
Tatsumaki Senpuu Kyaku M
Roaring Combination M
Grapple M
Inner Earth Reflection Lure M
Active Camo M
Mental Infiltration M
Verse of Darkness M
Black Flash M
Distortion M
After-Image M
Ocular Trauma M
B-Rank - 7500
Energy Transfer M
Leech Seal M
Chakra Shield M
Chakra Blast M
Rasengan M
Cursed Sealing M
Mystical Force M
Medical Assistant M
Tranquilize M
Medical Ward M
Primary Lotus M
Shadow Step Strike M
Submission M
Spear Hand M
Multi-Hit Combo M
Advanced Clone M
Perception Filter M
Depth Barrier M
Night Mare M
Mime Box M
Solar Flare M
A-Rank - 12500
Perfected Rasengan M
Morality Sealing M
Nature's Guard M
Resuscitate M
Angelic Blessing M
Regeneration M
Pristine Aura M
Falcon Punch M
Eagle Drop M
Dance of the Waxing Moon M
Fist of Virtue M
Fist of Sin M
Fist of Gaia M

Refunding

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Wind Slash M
Pressure Burst M
Stone Bullet M
Gravel Shift M
Infernal Ember M
Thermal Maw M
The One-Two M
Pressurized Mist M
Water Gun M
Charge M
Fleeted M
Block M
Grip M
Wasteful M
Deception M
Favoritism M
Stun M
Hot Weapon M
1000 Years of Pain Kai M
Lethargy M
Tourniquet M
Intimidation M
Dynamic Slash
Overhead Strike
Stab
Thrust
Total: 26, 22 mastered

D-Rank - 1200
Whirlwind Spin M
Air Bullet M
Shredding Touch M
Earth Flow River M
Mud Clone M
Fireball M
Immolation Armor M
Combustive Seal M
4-Hit Combo M
Dynamic Finish M
Nut Buster M
Water Whip M
Aqua Fang M
Rinse Off M
Mask Summon M
Muscle Control M
Brandish M
Basic Safeguard M
Eagle Vision M
Gong M
Pained Expression M
Trembling Music M
Appreciation of Music M
Drunken Stupor M
Influenza M
Tickling M
Facepalm M
Amnesia M
False Success M
Leaking Mind M
Sear of the Mind M
Gasher
Heavy Tow
Total: 33, 31 mastered

C-Rank - 3250
Wind Scythe M
Tempest M
Gale Force M
Wind Release M
Dust Cloud M
Molecular Collision M
Particle Accelerator M
Dust Clone M
Harmonic Vibrations M
Hyper Clap M
Sonic Destabilizer M
Sonic Pulse M
Earth Flow Wave M
Rock Golem M
Earthen Coating M
Dragon Fire M
Searing Eruption M
Scalding Ash Cloud M
Heat Wave M
Jutsu Sealing M
Tiger Hook M
Shoryuken M
Venom Needle M
Immunity Break M
Toxic Channeling M
Poison Extraction M
Grand Waterfall M
Impaling Hydro Jet M
Rain Dance M
Water Prison M
Snapshot M
Chakra Sense M
Dynamic Art M
Chakra Extension M
Shadow Dance M
Gather M
Barrage M
Feint M
Deaf M
Run it Back M
Groans M
Piercing Cry M
Sometimes Shouting Works M
Crippled M
Crossed Wires M
Masochism M
Silly Fingers M
Mist of Deceit M
Blackout M
Insomnia M
Charismatic Breakdown M
Untruth M
Paranoia M
Total: 53, 53 mastered

B-Rank - 7500
Great Wind Scythe M
Wind Scar M
Vacuum Sphere M
Cyclone Movement M
Particle Charge M
Dust Assimilation M
Particle Storm M
Molecule Breaker M
Sound Bullet M
Distorted Aura M
Harmonization M
Echo Strike M
Bedrock Coffin M
Weighted Rock Technique M
Earth Spiker M
Antlion Sinkhole M
Infernal Hellfire M
Firestorm M
Spontaneous Combustion M
Ring of Fire M
Shadow Shuriken Replication M
Suplex M
Seismic Toss M
Toxic Curse M
Stun Vapor M
Poison Mist M
Venom Strike M
Phoenix's Embrace M
Petrification M
Lingering Spark M
Crush Depth M
Puppet Betrayal M
Pox M
Havoc of the Doomed Mind
Slowed Perception
Oblivious Rapture
Betrayal
Taunt
Thought Down
Bass Drop
Wither
Leak
Prolong
Death Chime
Centralized
Total: 45, 33 mastered

A-Rank - 12500
Tatsumaki M
Hurricane M
Ambiance of the Forbidden M
Zephyr's Grace M
Detachment of the Primitive World M
Disruption Field M
Particle Destabilization M
Crop Dusting M
Concussion Wave M
Hypersonic Reverberation M
Resonating Howl M
Final Chime M
Earthen Magnitude M
Earthslide Wall M
Petrification M
Dragon Flame Bomb M
Sol Fire Tempest M
Abysmal Harbinger M
Flame Shield M
Five Element Seal M
Stardust Nova M
Gate of Enma M
Total: 22, 22 mastered

Purchasing

Spoiler

E-Rank - 450
Bunt
Pound
Smash
Castling
Total: 4

D-Rank - 1200
Dynamic Charge
Double Slam
Shadow Play
Cross Pierce
Impaling Counter
Dynamic Pierce
Puppet Transformation
Total: 7

C-Rank - 3250
Blast Rush
Skull Buster
Set-Up
Carpe Noctem
Carpe Diem
Expel
Chakra Absorption
Iron Point Prison
Clip Downpour
Spiked Shield
Feint Spike
Outer Rim Breaker
Lunar Steps
Whisperer
Puppet Clone
Volt Charge
Total: 16

B-Rank - 7500
Rebound Blitz
Precise Interruption
Rigor Mortis
Hex Breaker
Unbound
Cover
Pressure Thruster
Million Stabs
Blood Letter
Magnum Break
Flight Aerial Strike
Terra Shift
Audio Medic
Incapacitate
Intangible Passage
Shadow Servant
Total: 16

A-Rank - 12500
Tombstone Driver
Memento Mori
White Lotus Strike
Rejected Assault
Pillar of the Four Dragons
Devastating Aura
Limit Break
Piercing Pinholder
Hyper Thrust
Trashin'
Higuma
Heavenly Sword
Physical Imprisonment Seal
Flock of Shadows
Black Blockade
The Reaper's Gaze
Ocular Assault
Body Double
Night
Deja Vu
Invisibility
Total: 21

Other Refunds:

Spoiler: Augments

Keeping
2 Blitz
1 Lucky Strike
1 Vengeance
1 Tracer
1 Lantern
1 Pressure
1 Wide Edge
1 Quick Switch
1 Swift
1 Dual Weapon
1 Free Flow
Refunding
1 Pressure
1 Siege
1 Special Composition
Purchasing
None right now, I'll do that later

Name of any Contract you currently own:
- Obtained an Elemental Contract here! Will not be transferring it (because I don't have enough ASP); also I never made an actual summon
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own:
- None
Name of Kinjutsu you own:
- Jinchuuriki (I can't access my profile or village request, so I don't have the link unfortunately)

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
None that are currently active

ASP Cards:
Immortality card - Transfers to Aki
Ability card - Transfers to Aki
Class Point card - Transfers to Aki
Item Hoarder - Stays with Hikaru
Weapons Galore - Stays with Hikaru

 

[Sazuki Nao]

You have been approved.
The following Yen has yet to be paid out: 836.050
Following ASP has been paid out: 1.289

Please REMOVE your jutsu from the inventory, this is something we cannot do ourselves. When you are done with removing the Jutsu you wish to refund, let us know. We will cash you the Yen you require. =)

 

[Sugihara Aki]

I've discarded all the jutsu I want to refund!

 

[Sazuki Nao]

And you are 100% done