OCR Form said:Old Character Name: Shin Ha
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: Leaf. Keeping Ha as an NPC.
Old IC Rank: Jounin
New Character Name: Tonkon Maki 沌魂魔鬼
Preferred Username: Maki
New Village/Missing: Missing
New BL/CA: Ghostwalker
New Kinjutsu Revenant
Custom Class:
Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: MedninCustom Class said:Code:[u] Eien no Inochi (Vet) [/u] [b]HP:[/b] (43+lvl) x stamina [b]CP:[/b] (42+lvl) x chakra control Class Bonus: Kinjutsu, +1 Genjutsu DC (Class point card) [i]High:[/i] Genjutsu DC, Melee Accuracy [i]Average:[/i] Genjutsu Save, Evasion, Ninjutsu Accuracy [i]Low:[/i] Ranged Accuracy
IC Rank: Mercenary
Character Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description: Maki is just shy of six feet tall, which with his 175 lbs of weight gives him the lean body of a fighter. Often referred to as wiry, he has very little fat on him, and the muscles he has tend to be more for function than show. This makes him capable of extreme bursts of power, but sustaining it can be problematic. He keeps his hair long, with a ponytail coming from the upper back and two bangs coming from the sites. But his most striking feature is his eyes. A glowing blue color that seems to seep the light of souls from within his form, something is definitely off about those orbs if one takes the time to study them.
Character's Mental Description: Maki is intelligent, driven, and completely without conscience. While he will not let such minor inconveniences as ethics or morals get in the way of his goals, this does not mean he is stupid. He understands that there are laws to deal with should his need to attain his desires cross certain lines, and he knows that breaking those laws can often get in the way of him reaching his goals. He rarely acts in haste, preferring to step back and plan ahead. Those who know him well often have trouble placing his personality. Sometimes he will be cold and aloof, others he might be warm and personable. It depends on which soul is strongest at that moment. But while they can affect his moods, they do not interfere with his actions.
Multiple Personality Application: Maki does have a slight issue. As a Revenant, instead of hearts he absorbs the souls of others. When he does this, he takes on the most dominant part of their personality. Occasionally one soul will shine brighter and sway his attitude. This will be referenced by his eye color changing in the RP. While his mood can be altered in this way, he is always in control of his actions and how he responds to these mood swings. Currently he only has his mom’s soul, which gives him a compassionate mood when it takes over.
Character History: (WC: 2399) ”Hold him still. And someone gag him, I’m sick of hearing that crying.”
Shokia let a smile come over his face as the maids rushed to fulfill his brother’s order. One day that power would be his. After all, his nephew was an invalid from birth, the pride of the clan was nothing more than a simpleton. His sister in law was pregnant again, but if that child turned out like the one on the table before them, it might too be sacrificed in some insane blood ritual to attempt to give their firstborn a real chance at life. He looks down at the table, where the infant struggled against its bonds and the gag stuffed into its mouth to silence the crying. One strong of body with weak of mind, another strong of spirit but weak of body.
Even now he planned on how to remove his brother. He could only hope his own children would be obedient and well enough to aid him when they were older. Even now his wife was pregnant with their second. And while Tenken was proving rather soft hearted, he knew that many children had that trait. He would burn that softness out and replace it with a loyal pawn. Who did as they were told.
His mind returns to the present as Tsukari steps forward, murmuring under his breath to the man beside him. Some vagabond who claimed he could see into the next world. And his brother bought it hook, line, and sinker. This man would fatten himself on the money of their clan with his false words. Tsukari and Taki thought they had it all figured out, though. When their second child came out misshapen, they had this man verify there were no obvious defects of the soul. Their hope was to move the one over to their first, and let a whole soul and a whole body become a whole being. And then to discard the shell left behind with half a life. It would have been a good plan if they could believe even a third of what this man told them.
The pretender steps aside as the first child enters the room. He was only slightly older than his own child, just able to walk. Tenken could form words at three, and this thing simply stared at walls and made wordless noises as things no one could see. It was preposterous that he should have anything short of a rock to the head. And two in a row. He would be bringing this up as proof of his brother’s weak seed, and his inability to bring the clan a worthy heir. He would be given the right to challenge, if it came to it.
The charlatan laid the elder beside the babe and pressed his hands to their heads. Immediately both children closed their eyes and fell silent. The steady rise and fall of chests told him that they were asleep. So what? A genjutsu and nothing more. Shokia himself could do rudimentary genjutsu. Sure, he wasn’t trained in them, but it never hurt to learn. He leans forward, intent now on what would happen before him.
At a word from his brother, the servants present extinguish the torches in the room, bathing them all in darkness. Shokia’s hand falls to the blade at his side as this happens, tensing and waiting for his moment. The room falls into a silence, the hush broken by a soft murmuring that was rising in volume. The faker was between the two children and he was speaking in what had to be tongues. His hands were before him, working at prayer beads. Shokia could just barely make this out because the two forms before him were giving a gentle glow. More genjutsu, no doubt.
The man’s hands come apart to rest palm down just above he child’s heart. And still he prays to whatever god he had chosen. The glow rose in intensity as he did. The room began to shake. A stone fell and landed on Shokia’s hand, bringing a sharp retort to his lips. That wasn’t a genjutsu, that hurt like nothing short of reality. He looks back to the man with renewed suspicion. What was he doing?
One of the doors in the room burst open. Not the one they came down to this accursed cellar in, the one behind the bookcase that led deeper into the caverns under the village. When it opened the whole collection of literature came tumbling down, books flying across the room from the force with which it did so. And still the man prayed, his words nearly drowning out the sound of wind rushing up from the staircase going down.
He began to lift his hands, as if it was a great effort to do so. Light came with them, from the children. Light that did not wish to move. From the heir, it was a dull thing that looked like it could be put out with a breath. But from the babe it shown bright and clear, lighting up the room brighter than the torches that were there before. Amidst the praying and the wind a new sound arose, a squalling scream from that light. The man slaps his hands together, the two lights merging above the two children. With somewhat more ease of movement he moves his hands over the eldest born and lowers them, the light vanishing into the boy’s form.
”It is done. As agreed, I will take my payment now.”
”No. You will not.
Shokia rises from his seat, blade drawn forth as he does so. The man makes a sound and suddenly the torches flare to life before them, revealing that Tsukari had drawn his own blade. As the faker tries to defend against his brother, Shokia simply steps up behind him and slides his sword between the man’s ribs. ”Let us see your genjutsu save you from this, you showy bastard.”
He looks up to see his brother killing the few servants that were also present. After all, it wouldn’t be good for word to get out amongst the village elite that they were engaged in some sort of demonic ritual to make their retarded child whole. Shokia leans down to clean his blade using the man’s own shirt and sheathes it.
”See? I knew he was just a fool. They’re both alive. He said the babe would die with no soul.” Shokia pulls his dagger free from his coat and steps over to the babe, raising the weapon. It was bad enough to have one with a mental handicap. It would unravel their clan if anyone knew of the shame of their leader’s second child being a physical invalid as well. But his brother stops him from plunging the weapon down.
”No. If the man spoke true, then he’s not going to amount to anything more than a burden. If he spoke false, then the child will be whole of mind and spirit, but not body. And I will find another. But he is of no use to anyone dead. Send him to our cousins in Fire country. Let them raise him.”
”But they don’t bear the clan name! Bad enough you birthed this bastard child, but to birth two in a row and then simply send one off to one day become a thorn in our side is not a plan I will join in with, brother. If you will not let me put him out of his misery then I will have no part of his saving.”
”Then leave. I will make the arrangements. Your help was appreciated, Shokia, but mind your tongue. I am the leader of this clan, whatever your opinion of my offspring might be. I will do what I must to ensure we have a valid successor to the chair, but I will not brook betrayal. A word of this, to anyone, and you will be taken care of. Am I clear?
”Yes, my dearest brother. Crystal. May you, your whore, and your half children be safe and happy. But do not expect me to defend your actions to the rest of the clan if it comes up. We need a true leader, not whatever that boy is.”
Shokia looks down at the two sleeping children and then back up at his brother and turns on heel, walking out of the cellar and back upstairs to the main floor of the manor. He would not hide this from the rest of the clan, but he would not be obvious in how he let them know. He did not live this long being foolish enough to betray the leader of the clan in a less than subtle manner. While he cared little for his family members individually, the clan was paramount. And he would die before he let his brother bring them down.
He could rot in that cellar with that mentally challenged bastard Hoshikata, for all Shokia cared. The Isaki clan didn’t need either of them.
~~~~~
”Who are you talking to, Maki?”
Blue eyes look up, and Maki smiles as his mom’s face appears in his vision. She, at least, seemed to care for him. Unlike his father who more often than not treated him like an animal. He looks around and points to the corner at the funny man. His mom looks to the corner and simply smiles and ruffles his hair. ”More friends I see. Well tell this one you need to get a bath. And then off to school with you. Your father pulled a lot of strings to get you into the academy you know.”
Maki nods and looks at the funny man, telling him he had to go. The man simply nods and rises from the floor, walking through the wall and out of the home. Maki also rises and steps into the shower room, but not before he hears his mom’s words.
”One day he’ll get over those imaginary friends, I’m sure. And maybe he’ll finally start talking.”
~~~~~
Life was not easy for him. While Maki was intelligent, he simply did not know how to speak. And sometimes his mind would blank. But the worst part was what he saw. People, animals, other things. Things that he shouldn’t see. Like the funny man. Maki laughed at his jokes but the fact that he had to carry his head around in his hands wasn’t normal. Or the woman across the street who kept asking him to water her flowers. Maki knew she shouldn’t be doing that after they buried her, but she still did. She just didn’t pay him anymore for doing so. It was distracting, having these people and things in his life. No one else seemed to notice them, and so he’d gotten in a lot of trouble in class about them.
His dad had indeed pulled strings. The Tonkon were not poor, but they also were not obscenely wealthy like dad said his cousins were. While they never wanted for anything, the spoon in his mouth was more often iron than silver. Frugal spending, his dad said, is what kept them above the water. When he bothered saying anything to Maki, that is. But strings had been pulled. A Tonkon had attended every generation, and being mute was no excuse not to.
But he learned quickly enough when his mind didn’t blank on him. And while he might never be a jounin, he was excited when he was promoted to genin. And then to chuunin. He was placed in the medical branch and even succeeded in gaining the rank of a full Mednin. Each promotion was a day of celebration with his mom and a good meal. But then the samurai attacked.
It was a terrible way to leave. The Daimyo unleashed his horrid rain that caused everyone to lose their abilities. Maki tried to get his mom to safety, but his dad was too sure of his importance to the Daimyo. When the samurai burst in for Maki, they did not ask questions. The cut his mom down without hesitation for trying to hide him, and set the house on fire when they couldn’t find him.
He came upon the inferno too late to help, he could already see his mom and dad standing outside the house looking at what remained of their forms turning to ash. His dad turned to him and muttered something about ‘the mute bastard can’t even cry’ before fading out. But as his mom too began to fade, Maki reached out for her form. To keep her here.
Instead of fading, she began to shine brightly in his grip. And she screamed, a noise that echoed from the next world into his own. It pierced the night, and caused the samurai to look up at him as he stood in shock, holding onto his mother’s spirit unable to let go. And she glowed brighter and brighter, losing all details in the all consuming light. And then she simply faded into his hand. The light began to lessen before him, but his arm was ensconced by a glow.
He barely managed to escape the samurai as they came for him. His mind was not his own during the flight. His memories clashed with memories not his own. Alongside memories of his mom playing peek-a-boo were her own memories of a white haired man giving her a boy and telling her he would be useless, but he was hers. He had his memories of his dad insulting him for not living up to some expectation or another, and yet his mom’s memories of when they found out his dad was unable to have children.
He awoke in a field. Unsure of where he was, only that the abominable rain was over. Maki picked himself up and looked around, his mind unconsciously looking for her even though it knew she was gone. ”Mom?”
~~~~
Maki regained himself fully just before the counter attack to bring Konoha back under shinobi control. He helped the fight by treated the wounded and helping them get back on their feet. But once that was over he decided he needed to discover his past. He needed to find out who gave him to his parents and why. And he needed to know what he’d done to his mom.
Clan Request: Related directly to the Isaki clan but does not claim membership. Seeing as I own that clan I’ll just go ahead and give myself permission to use it.
Death/Retirement Thread: N/A
Old Profile: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=773&t=50264
Old Training: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=774&t=50271
Old Dojo: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=775&t=50265
Special Usergroups: I would prefer to keep admin. This character will be making his way back to Leaf in an attempt to rejoin it at a later date, so I’ll leave it up to Leaf Council if they wish to leave me a member.
Old Stats: Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600
ASP: 68
Old OOC Rank: Jounin
Stat Cut: Free rebirth.
New Stats: Agility: 600
Stamina: 600
Taijutsu: 600
Ninjutsu: 600
Genjutsu: 600
Chakra Control: 600
ASP: 68
New OOC Rank: Keep your new stats in mind when posting your new OOC RankStat Minimums said:E rank - 20 minimum in each stat
D rank - 40 minimum in each stat
C rank - 70 minimum in each stat
B rank - 120 minimum in each stat
A rank - 210 minimum in each stat
S rank - 240 minimum in each stat
Jutsu Mastery Swaps: This is gonna be long.
KEEPING:
Wind Slash - Mastered
Pressure Burst - Mastered
Whirlwind Spin - Mastered
Air Bullet - Mastered
Shredding Touch - Mastered
Wind Scythe - Mastered
Tempest - Mastered
Gale Force - Mastered
Wind Release - Mastered
Great Wind Scythe - Mastered
Wind Scar - Mastered
Vacuum Sphere - Mastered
Cyclone Movement - Mastered
Tatsumaki - Mastered
Hurricane - Mastered
Ambiance Of The Forbidden - Mastered
Zephyr's Grace – Mastered
Transformation - Mastered
Body Switch - Mastered
Combination Transformation - Mastered
Crystal Eye - Mastered
Cancel - Mastered
Spirit Lantern - Mastered
Jutsu Sealing - Mastered
Stunt Double - Mastered
One Element Sealing - Mastered
Elemental Negation - Mastered
Elemental Clone - Mastered
Barrier - Mastered
Shadow Shuriken Replication - Mastered
Energy Transfer - Mastered
Leech Seal - Mastered
Chakra Shield - Mastered
Chakra Blast - Mastered
Cursed Sealing - Mastered
Rasengan - Mastered
Advanced Combination Transformation - Mastered
Perfected Rasengan - Mastered
Five Element Seal - Mastered
Morality Sealing - Mastered
Natures Guard - Mastered
Stardust Nova - Mastered
Gate of Enma – Mastered
Stone Bullet - Mastered
Gravel Shift - Mastered
Earth Flow River - Mastered
Sinkhole Fist[ - Mastered
Mud Clone - Mastered
Inner Earth Reflection Lure - Mastered
Earth Flow Wave - Mastered
Rock Golem - Mastered
Earthen Coating - Mastered
Bedrock Coffin - Mastered
Weighted Rock Technique - Mastered
Earth Spiker - Mastered
Antlion Sinkhole - Mastered
Fist of Gaia - Mastered
Earthen Magnitude - Mastered
Earthslide Wall - Mastered
Petrification – Mastered
Storm Bolt - Mastered
Thunderfist - Mastered
Thunderclap - Mastered
Electroshock - Mastered
Electrocution - Mastered
Zeus Flash - Mastered
Lightning Torrent - Mastered
Thunderstruck - Mastered
Volt Charge - Mastered
Gigavolt Cannon - Mastered
Chidori - Mastered
Lightning Beast - Mastered
Amp Field - Mastered
Raijin's Vengeance - Mastered
Chidori Control - Mastered
Kirin - Mastered
Thunderdome – Mastered
Infernal Ember - Mastered
Thermal Maw - Mastered
Fireball - Mastered
Immolation Armor - Mastered
Combustive Seal - Mastered
Dragon Fire - Mastered
Searing Eruption - Mastered
Searing Ash Cloud - Mastered
Heat Wave - Mastered
Infernal Hellfire - Mastered
Firestorm - Mastered
Spontaneous Combustion - Mastered
Ring of Fire - Mastered
Dragon Flame Bomb - Mastered
Sol Fire Tempest - Mastered
Abysmal Harbinger - Mastered
Flame Shield – Mastered
Mimic - Mastered
False Surroundings - Mastered
Eye Strain - Mastered
Basic Clone - Mastered
Blur - Mastered
Rorschach Eye - Mastered
Double Vision - Mastered
Distortion - Mastered
Ocular Trauma - Mastered
Black Flash - Mastered
After-Image - Mastered
Verse of Darkness - Mastered
Advanced Clone - Mastered
Perception Filter - Mastered
Depth Barrier - Mastered
Night Mare - Mastered
Solar Flare - Mastered
Mime Box - Mastered
The Reaper's Gaze - Mastered
Ocular Assault - Mastered
Body Double - Mastered
Night - Mastered
Deja Vu - Mastered
Invisibility – Mastered
Lethargy - Mastered
Tourniquet - Mastered
Intimidation - Mastered
Amnesia - Mastered
False Success - Mastered
Leaking Mind - Mastered
Sear of the Mind - Mastered
Black Out - Mastered
Insomnia - Mastered
Paranoia - Mastered
Charismatic Breakdown - Mastered
Untruth - Mastered
Havoc of the Doomed Mind - Mastered
Slowed Perception - Mastered
Oblivious Rapture - Mastered
Betrayal - Mastered
Taunt - Mastered
Thought Down - Mastered
Torment of the Physical Plain - Mastered
Corruption of the Earthly Plain - Mastered
Chaos of the Mental Plain - Mastered
Mind's Eye Chaos - Mastered
Temple of Nirvana - Mastered
Repetition – Mastered
REFUNDING:
C Rank:
Harmonic Vibrations – Mastered
Hyper Clap - Mastered
Sonic Destabilizer - Mastered
Sonic Pulse – Mastered
Ice Shards - Mastered
Frigid Ice Blast - Mastered
Hypothermic Touch - Mastered
Arctic Aether – Mastered
B Rank:
Sound Bullet - Mastered
Distorted Aura - Mastered
Harmonization - Mastered
Echo Strike - Mastered
Ice Transmutation - Mastered
Snowflake Shuriken - Mastered
Crystallize - Mastered
Ice Prison – Mastered
Defiled touch - Mastered
Corpse Soil - Mastered
A Rank:
Concussion Wave - Mastered
Hypersonic Reverberation - Mastered
Resonating Howl - Mastered
Final Chime – Mastered
Hailstorm - Mastered
Koorikan - Mastered
Falling Snow - Mastered
Subzero Purge – Mastered
Graveyard Amalgamation - Mastered
S Rank:
Reaper's Court - Mastered
Swapping for:
C rank:
Force Blast
Psionic Assault
Kinetic Infusion
Force Guard
System Shock
Skeletal Fortification
Anesthetic Infusion
System Restoration
B rank:
Malicious Tendrils
Ragdoll Repair
Psi-shock
Force Break
Mind Lock
Reflection
Mystical Force
Medical Assistant
Tranquilize
Medical Ward
A rank:
Ghoulish Shroud
Kinetic Blast
Psionic Rend
Concussion Pulse
Redirection
Resuscitate
Angelic Blessing
Regeneration
Pristine Aura
S rank:
Malevolent Spectre
I have enough yen and ASP (16 ASP, 2400 yen) to buy and master the two D rank medical jutsu, so let us please do that now? (New ASP would be 52)
Mastering: Mystical Hand and Coagulation
Other Refunds: Kinjutsu abilities: Soul Harvest and Dark Invitation. I will be swapping those for Death Pulse and Dark Immortality from the Rev table.
Name of any Contract you currently own:
- If Retiring character, list link to obtaining the Contract. You will regain this contract upon rebirth back into this character. Contracts do not carry over to new characters normally. You may pay 300 Advanced Shop Points to carry over a single contract you currently own, or pay 450 Advanced Shop Points to swap one contract you own for another contract during the OCR process. Both options require a writeup to be sent to the contract team for approval of how you gained the contract as your new character. You may not switch to Kami/Youkai from another contract.
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: None
- If Retiring character, list link to obtaining the cursed seal (from village request). You will regain this cursed seal upon rebirth back into this character. Curse Seals do not carry over to new characters.
Name of Kinjutsu you own: Dark Sage, https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=50243
- If retiring character, list link to obtaining the kinjutsu (from your village request). You will regain this kinjutsu upon rebirth back into this character. Kinjutsus do not carry over to new character. Also, you may choose any kinjutsu fr your new character, but you will need to apply for it with your new character.
Still actively roleplaying in any other threads? Not actively, no.
Upon death, roleplayers in ANY of your other incomplete thread(s) are to vote whether they can deal with your non-existence from the beginning of these thread(s). Whether you joined these thread(s) before or after you entered the battle that got you killed, you are still considered a part of these thread(s).
- If players vote yes, you get to move on to your next life.
- If players vote no, you must stay in those threads as if you were still alive.
You can still train (see: explanation of Limbo Training below) and do other OOC things, but you may NOT join any new threads. After you have completed these thread(s), post in OCR again and we will move you on to your next life.
What is Limbo Training?
This is the training that you would have gotten if you did not move on to your new character's life. Your caps are determined by your rebirthed stats. You must keep a record of your stats gained during limbo in your OCR thread. You may NOT request for an automatic rank up should you find that your new stats allow you to upgrade. Limbo training is only for people who have died in modded combat or suicide. Anyone whose character has not died is still capable of RPing that character until their OCR is finalized, and thus can train as normal.
Things you do NOT need to state, but take note of:
- Abilities = All of your Abilities are auto-untrained upon rebirth. In order to have any Abilities for your new character, you must activate them by posting in your character’s Dojo topic in your new village.
- Character History = By suiciding/rebirthing, you're making a new character. This means your new character must not know or remember anything of your old character's life/thoughts/feelings. If your new character has ANY direct/indirect connection to your old character, you MUST state that in your new character history write up for Admin & Village approvals. All Medical or ANBU related experience should be reflected in your history along with CA or BL influence.
- Editing Your New Character Application = Do not edit a post you have made in your OCR. You must copy all of your information from your last post and add the changes to the new post. This is for papertrail reasons.
Things that do NOT transfer with your next character:
Please take notice of which ASP shop items that you have bought transfer with your character, and which do not.
Let me know if I missed anything.
