Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Tera Karogy

Tera Kalogy

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Name: Tera Karogy
Age: 14
Physical Description:

Tera has brown hair, long enough to reach his shoulders. He is not amongst the tall characters. But his appearance other than his length seems normal, he isn't too fat, or too thin. Tera always wears a mask, covering his entire face. Apparently because he has a large scar under it, the reason for that scar is Unknown, and no one has ever discovered how he has been injured. Legend has it that he has been in a large accident, that almost got him killed, while he was attempting to fight an unknown shinobi.

Mental Description:

Tera has always been a calm and quiet person, He has no sense of humor, Tera barely ever smiles, this intrigues people, people are thinking, not knowing what has happened to him in the past, and not knowing how he ended up this way, it seems that there has been a tragic incident, that changed his life. He hasn't been happy ever since he was 6. Other than his quiet and calm behaviour. Tera is very confident, and serious when it comes to learning. It seems like he seeks revenge for what has happened to him earlier. Tera is also smart, Amongst the smartest, and often outsmarts people who made fun of him at school.

History:

In his early ages, Tera was a cheerful and polite person, he put a smile on his parents' faces every single day. Tera's Father was a fine shinobi. His father trained him about 4 hours per day, during the night. They simply loved each other. Tera had a loving/ caring family. Then, it was that one day that changed everything. An extremely powerful shinobi appeared, and has attempted to destroy the whole village. During the attack, Tera was coming home from school, not knowing what was going on. As soon as he enters the house, he finds both his parents, on the floor, lifeless. He gets really angry. He remembers what his father taught him. All the fighting techniques and all the practice. He stands up, and heads straight for the Unknown Shinobi. He grabs his sword. and attacks the shinobi with such speed. Unfortunately, the unknown shinobi was at a different level, and had an unbelievable dodging ability. Tera wasn't able to land one single hit on the shinobi. Soon enough, Tera was exhausted, never has he been this tired. The shinobi then grabbed his sword, And slashed it right accross Tera's face. His face was bleeding. And he was losing too much blood. Unfortunately he fainted, and the shinobi disappeard. Tera wakes up to find himself in a hospital, not knowing what happened. He was then told the story by his friends. From that day, he promised to get his revenge, so he trained as hard as he could every day, wishing to surpass the level of the shinobi. And never let out a smile again.
 

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Heya Tera (or Tera for the moment)

I think we may need to rename your character, Tera Karogy doesn't seem to be a particularly japanese name ... and it seems somewhat like a pun as well. You would also need to swap the order of the name so last name comes first.

This seems a bit rushed so... do take a moment to fix up some of your punctuation.

I get that your character arch seems to be a revenge story, and I do get that he is the strong silent type. That's good and all! We just need to do a little fix-er upper on a few items.
 

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