[I thought I'd start a thread in a somewhat under-frequented subforum and see if anyone bites. After a semester of taking nothing but science classes I need a good writing warm up lol.]
Ryunaramaru Jin was up bright and early, for today was a special day. As he opened his eyes he instinctively stretched his limbs up towards the ceiling and took in a deep breath of the brisk, invigorating air permeating through his modest abode. Jin resided in a little igloo, crafted by his own hands, in Cloud country though several miles out from the general population. It was located on a mountain slope where temperatures remained particularly frigid at all times of the year. But while this circumstance did little to bolster his house’s resale value, to Jin, below zero temperatures were of little consequence. He was a man incapable of feeling cold. Today happened to be a unique day for Jin because once again he would be making his weekly trek into town; every seven days he deviated from his customary routine of meditating and training amongst the wild beasts of the mountain to travel down the slope for a fresh batch of supplies and necessities. While he appreciated the change of scenery and return to civilization, however, Kumogakure’s far more temperate climate made Jin feel like Frosty the Snowman during springtime. With a bit of foreboding apprehension, he began to put on the appropriate clothes, dressing himself modestly in just a pair of thin pants and a short-sleeve shirt.
The sun radiated and gleamed off every minute flake of ice encasing the mountain slope, though Jin’s mind had already begun to wander off to other worlds, and barely noticed the rising temperatures and increasing presence of green grass as he got closer and closer into town. Unfortunately, Jin was a bit aloof to the village’s social dynamics and failed to even register a problem as he turned into a rather seedy section of the village. Cronopolis, while once a thriving municipality standing as a bastion of Cloud’s military might, has since slipped into a rather blighted purlieu for housing citizens at the bottom end of the socio-economic scale. Having been training in isolation for so long, however, relative to a desolate mountainside present-day Cronopolis looked like a thriving metropolis to him. A pleasant-looking tea house caught Jin’s interest from the corner of his eye, and realizing he was a bit thirsty after his long hike, decided to check the place out.
The interior was far larger than Jin had imagined and stuffed to the brim with a rowdy pack of customers. There were dense crowds sprawled at tables and on the floor, gambling with various forms of cards and dice. To get to the counter Jin even had to tip toe over the bodies of blacked out drunkards who appeared to have been left laying on the ground from the night before. This domicile, which was clearly more of a bar than a tea house, was raucous and disorientating and smelled of a curious amalgamation of smoke and old people.
At last Jin found his way to the counter and took a seat between two empty stools. Without even taking the time to turn his glance towards Jin, the bartender started yapping at his new customer. “Heh heh heh, looks like we got anotha’ wannabe shinobi here,” the old man cackled behind the counter, wiping the inside of a glass with a ragged cloth yet still not facing Jin. “You see all them hooligans passed out in their own drool? ‘I’m gonna be a shinobi when I grow up! Believe it, believe it!’ they all said, and look at ‘em now. Spent so long chasing the stars they forgot to live in the real world.”
The old man gave a slight grin, and with an abrupt 180 degree spin, faced Jin with an electric glare. Despite his age his eyes exuded vigor and energy. “But maybe you’ll be the one who finally can get out of the hellhole and make somethin’ for ya’self. So anyway, what can I do for ya? Beer, sake, somethin’ harder?”
“Well sir…” Jin stammered, completely unprepared to meet a character like this so early in the morning. “Tea will be perfectly fine for me, please. Green. And on the cooler side, if you don’t mind.” The old man let out an audible grunt as Jin finished his request with a slight bow, barking some explicative as he filled a glass and slammed it on the counter in front of Jin. The young shinobi slowly sipped at his cup, enjoying the pleasant aroma that was made up a single drop of equanimity in a sea of debauchery. Jin could never predict what going to town would entail, and that randomness provided him a bit of warm relief from his cold, regimented schedule. He pondered what other interesting characters just might join him in this small, seedy bar on this exciting morning in Cloud Village.
The words of the old man infiltrated Jin’s pleasant thoughts, however, and he couldn’t help but feel a bit overwrought at the prospect of them potentially being true. Were all these unshaven, middle-aged bums, spending what few pennies they had to their name on cards and beer, really failed shinobis no different than himself once upon a time? Jin subconsciously tapped his forehead protector. It had been hardly a week since he had successfully completed his Chuunin Exam, one of the few moments in recent memory that made the traditionally reserved Jin smile with excitement. Now he frowned slightly, but Jin knew that unlike these men who had since given up hope long ago, he still had something to fight for. His love for his Village and all of his Cloud brethren, even these friendly rapscallions who probably hadn’t held a real job in the past decade, was too strong for Jin to ever give up his quest to become a powerful shinobi. Knowing that he’d be lying dead on a battlefield long before he ended up drinking his failures away in some seedy bar brought great solace to Jin’s conflicted mind, and seeing the end result of those who given up firsthand only further motivated Jin to chase his dreams with even more vigor.
Ryunaramaru Jin was up bright and early, for today was a special day. As he opened his eyes he instinctively stretched his limbs up towards the ceiling and took in a deep breath of the brisk, invigorating air permeating through his modest abode. Jin resided in a little igloo, crafted by his own hands, in Cloud country though several miles out from the general population. It was located on a mountain slope where temperatures remained particularly frigid at all times of the year. But while this circumstance did little to bolster his house’s resale value, to Jin, below zero temperatures were of little consequence. He was a man incapable of feeling cold. Today happened to be a unique day for Jin because once again he would be making his weekly trek into town; every seven days he deviated from his customary routine of meditating and training amongst the wild beasts of the mountain to travel down the slope for a fresh batch of supplies and necessities. While he appreciated the change of scenery and return to civilization, however, Kumogakure’s far more temperate climate made Jin feel like Frosty the Snowman during springtime. With a bit of foreboding apprehension, he began to put on the appropriate clothes, dressing himself modestly in just a pair of thin pants and a short-sleeve shirt.
The sun radiated and gleamed off every minute flake of ice encasing the mountain slope, though Jin’s mind had already begun to wander off to other worlds, and barely noticed the rising temperatures and increasing presence of green grass as he got closer and closer into town. Unfortunately, Jin was a bit aloof to the village’s social dynamics and failed to even register a problem as he turned into a rather seedy section of the village. Cronopolis, while once a thriving municipality standing as a bastion of Cloud’s military might, has since slipped into a rather blighted purlieu for housing citizens at the bottom end of the socio-economic scale. Having been training in isolation for so long, however, relative to a desolate mountainside present-day Cronopolis looked like a thriving metropolis to him. A pleasant-looking tea house caught Jin’s interest from the corner of his eye, and realizing he was a bit thirsty after his long hike, decided to check the place out.
The interior was far larger than Jin had imagined and stuffed to the brim with a rowdy pack of customers. There were dense crowds sprawled at tables and on the floor, gambling with various forms of cards and dice. To get to the counter Jin even had to tip toe over the bodies of blacked out drunkards who appeared to have been left laying on the ground from the night before. This domicile, which was clearly more of a bar than a tea house, was raucous and disorientating and smelled of a curious amalgamation of smoke and old people.
At last Jin found his way to the counter and took a seat between two empty stools. Without even taking the time to turn his glance towards Jin, the bartender started yapping at his new customer. “Heh heh heh, looks like we got anotha’ wannabe shinobi here,” the old man cackled behind the counter, wiping the inside of a glass with a ragged cloth yet still not facing Jin. “You see all them hooligans passed out in their own drool? ‘I’m gonna be a shinobi when I grow up! Believe it, believe it!’ they all said, and look at ‘em now. Spent so long chasing the stars they forgot to live in the real world.”
The old man gave a slight grin, and with an abrupt 180 degree spin, faced Jin with an electric glare. Despite his age his eyes exuded vigor and energy. “But maybe you’ll be the one who finally can get out of the hellhole and make somethin’ for ya’self. So anyway, what can I do for ya? Beer, sake, somethin’ harder?”
“Well sir…” Jin stammered, completely unprepared to meet a character like this so early in the morning. “Tea will be perfectly fine for me, please. Green. And on the cooler side, if you don’t mind.” The old man let out an audible grunt as Jin finished his request with a slight bow, barking some explicative as he filled a glass and slammed it on the counter in front of Jin. The young shinobi slowly sipped at his cup, enjoying the pleasant aroma that was made up a single drop of equanimity in a sea of debauchery. Jin could never predict what going to town would entail, and that randomness provided him a bit of warm relief from his cold, regimented schedule. He pondered what other interesting characters just might join him in this small, seedy bar on this exciting morning in Cloud Village.
The words of the old man infiltrated Jin’s pleasant thoughts, however, and he couldn’t help but feel a bit overwrought at the prospect of them potentially being true. Were all these unshaven, middle-aged bums, spending what few pennies they had to their name on cards and beer, really failed shinobis no different than himself once upon a time? Jin subconsciously tapped his forehead protector. It had been hardly a week since he had successfully completed his Chuunin Exam, one of the few moments in recent memory that made the traditionally reserved Jin smile with excitement. Now he frowned slightly, but Jin knew that unlike these men who had since given up hope long ago, he still had something to fight for. His love for his Village and all of his Cloud brethren, even these friendly rapscallions who probably hadn’t held a real job in the past decade, was too strong for Jin to ever give up his quest to become a powerful shinobi. Knowing that he’d be lying dead on a battlefield long before he ended up drinking his failures away in some seedy bar brought great solace to Jin’s conflicted mind, and seeing the end result of those who given up firsthand only further motivated Jin to chase his dreams with even more vigor.