Toromaki Ace

[Ace]

Name: Toromaki Ace
Age: 12
Gender: Female

General Description: Ace has long white hair that runs down her back, ending in a triangle cut at the backs of her knees. She constantly has a nervous look on her face, doubled with her fearful blue eyes, so many judge her as "the shy girl." However, she can be very outgoing, happy, and determined, but only when she feels comfortable. Most people treat her poorly, or are afraid to her due to the Jinchuuriki inside of her, except for her childhood friend, Dante Isudansei, who for the past 12 years has not known about her demon. (anything not covered here, just look to the pic)

History: Ace was born in the Hidden Village of Sound, but after a few strong accusations on their people by other villages, her parents decided that it would be best for them to move. On the way to the Hidden Village of Cloud, the were attacked by Akatsuki members, and pregnant Misses Toromaki was hit with a sealing jutsu. Her child now bore the curse of a demon, becoming a Jinchuuriki, and her husband dead. Then, without anything more, the Akatsuki disappeared, and Ace's mother was free to continue her journey in pain and devastation. By the time she had reached the village, she went in to labor and gave birth to Ace. Due to the birth of a Jinchuuriki, her mother died and Ace was left to fend for herself, until Dante's family offered to take her in and care for her until she was older.

Name: Misutokami (God of the mists)
Gender: Male

Misutokami is a Chakra Monster who was created as an experiment by the Akatsuki, and their first attempt at creating a man made Jinchuuriki. The tailed beast posses, just as any other Chakra Monster, an unrivaled amount of chakra, but also various genjutsu. Most of these genjutsu include illusions, (usually with mist) and depriving them of their five senses. At her current age, Ace can only do such things as giving an opponent tunnel vision, muffling noises they hear, diluting their taste buds from the taste of poisons, preventing them from feeling these poisons for an extended period of time, and keeping dogs from tracking a scent. Misutokami and it's Jinchuuriki are not at peace with one another, and constantly struggle over the control of Ace's body.

 

[Ace]

Ready, and awaiting approval

 

[Takaki Saeko]

Hello, and thank you for your interest in Ninpocho Chronicles. Before we can approve your character, we need to clarify certain things that may not be immediately apparent for players.

This is a forum-based roleplaying site that is inspired by, but NOT directly copied from Naruto by Kishimoto. That is to say, the basic concepts are there (chakra-enhanced humans serving hidden shinobi villages for various nation-states in a technologically idiosyncratic world with the cultural backdrop of medieval Japan), but the specific events, characters, and even plot of the anime/manga are not. There never was an Akatsuki organization, Uzumaki Naruto, Uchiha Sasuke, Tsunade, Jiraiya, etc. Many of the political relationships between the hidden villages seen in the anime/manga are completely different on this site. You can think of NC as an alternate universe, if it simplifies things.

So in your application, there are several issues:
1) There is no official Sound Village yet – at present you can only be part of one of the four main villages.
2) There is no Akatsuki organization.
3) Game mechanics state that you cannot create a character with the Jinchuuriki ability, since it is actually a real character bonus that you can apply for later in the game that grants significant combat bonuses.
4) “Ace” is not going to be allowed as a given name on this site for character application. We recently toughened up the limits of what’s acceptable for naming. That is not to say that you can’t tell other characters that Ace is your character’s nickname or preferred name, but it cannot be the “legal” name.

If you wish to continue with the application process, please address these issues, thanks!