Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

Current Ninpocho Chronicles Time:

Uchiha Haruchi ----> Mizutsune Mira (Ready)

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Old Character Name: Uchiha Haruichi
Old Village/Missing: Stone
OCR Type: Full Retirement
Last Known Where-abouts: Santuary of Forgotten Life
Old IC Rank: Med-nin

New Character Name: Mizutsune Mira
Preferred Username: Mizutsune Mira
New Village/Missing: Stone
New BL/CA: Touji
Custom Class:
Custom Class said:
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[u]Beautfiul Armageddon[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (60+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (30+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: (4) +20% Earth Ninjutsu Damage, (2) +5% Ninjutsu Damage
[i]High:[/i] Ninjutsu Accuracy
[i]Average:[/i] Ranged Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty.
[i]Low:[/i] Melee Accuracy and Puppet Accuracy
Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch - Blast Corps
IC Rank: Ranger
Character Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sex: Female

Character's Physical Description:
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Mira stands at 5'11 feet tall and weighs around 320 pounds. Mira, ironically to her name, is a bright, fiery person. Her skin is tanned to a light chocolate color. Her gut rests outwards just above her groin with dual layers of fat. She has a scar that runs alongside her stomach with five black stitches, though from what she gained it from is unknown. Her light black hair goes down to her neck and naturally curls a bit, with a single strip of hair that goes down to her ankles. Her chubby face is embedded with bright violet eyes. Her arms have some chub to them, though they hold a good amount of muscle. Her hands are smooth and that of a slacker, but erupt into the maws of the Touji bloodline. Mira has bloated thighs and feet similar in shape to an elephant's own, though a bit smaller.

She tends to be in the extreme ends when it comes to clothes. In the heavier end of her clothes, she wears a bright orange and black overcoat with a flipped over collar, though her hair tends to hide the collar. The coat's sleeves are rarely filled, left to sway in the wind. Then down to her pants, she tends to wear baggy black pants that split just below the knees, ending in strangely clean tatters. A loincloth-like extension covers the groin region on the top of the pants, marked with a blue, soapy bubble. However, on the lightest part of her outfit, Mira only wears bandages for a top. They tightly grasp her chest, leaving nothing to gawk at.

Mira wears a clay-colored jumpsuit with a single long sleeve on her left arm. A stone colored ballistic jacket adorns her frame with light blue stitches, showing that she had to adjust it a few times. Golden buttons rest on her shoulders to attach the two pieces of her jacket. The two attachments keep Miras's headband showing her Iwagakure shinobi plate. A single clay-colored flap of cloth hangs out from her belt covering her right leg down to the knee. She lacks her stomach pack (for very obvious reasons) and instead has two thigh pockets. Her long clay-colored pants reach down to close to her ankles by a few inches. Mira wears fishnet-like socks that go down to her military shoes.

Character's Mental Description: Mira is normally a lazy, stable person, but she is extremely passionate when she is motivated. Her eyes sparkle and burn with emotion followed closely by her face, leaving everyone aware of her emotional state. She loves all forms of art and to the end of that, Explosions. She enjoys making explosions, feeling the flame and enjoying the bright glows of crimson. She knows a good amount of self-control, but she loves her hobbies to the point of looking like recklessness. She fears being set on fire, but not fire itself. She is normally a bit anxious around flames for this reason, and never using direct fire ninjutsu. She's also immature useing weird tactics and weapons to get what she wants with a flurry of fun added on...

Character History: Mira came from common stock. She was a passionate artist that enjoyed bright, warm colors and making grand masterpieces, though due to her youth they were only grand to the eyes of a child. Her art projects would take most of her free time, leading to her constant failure at ninja academy. She was finally accepted on her third attempt, becoming a Gennin at the age of 12. She was put into another team of slackers with little to no hope of advancing in life, just functional enough to earn a paycheck. It was a satisfying life, even if it was a lazy one! She was content until she found something that made her drool with excitement.

The Blast Corps had opened to average Shinobi. She felt a natural draw to become a Ranger, zooming out into the fields and making shows of her art! She could make beauty, help people at the same time AND GET PAID?! Her hobby and her job mixed into one! Maybe that was what she needed! She resigned from her team and became a part of the Blast Corps with literal flying colors. Finally motivated to get off of her ass, Mira desires to show the entire world her awesome explosions! She marches onto her hopefully brighter path of being a true shinobi.

Death/Retirement Thread: Post the thread that your character died or retired. If applicable
Old Profile: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=228154#p228154
Old Training: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=228433#p228433
Old Dojo: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=228493#p228493

Special Usergroups: Contract ( I am still being voted for so technically not, but just in case it happens while I am Rebirthing)

Old Stats:
Agility: 370 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 525 / 525
Ninjutsu: 385 / 525
Genjutsu: 300 / 525
Chakra Control: 335 / 525
PL: 2440
OOC: A

Old OOC Rank: A
Stat Cut: None
New Stats:

Agility: 445 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 210 / 525
Ninjutsu: 525 / 525
Genjutsu: 210 / 525
Chakra Control: 525 / 525
PL: 2440
OOC: A

Justu Mastery Swaps:
Justu Mastery:
FIRE - E rank
Infernal Ember (Master)
Thermal Maw (Master)
- D Rank
Fireball (Master)
Immolation Armor (Master)
Combustive Seal Master)
- C Rank
Dragon Fire (Master)
Searing Eruption (Master)
Scalding Ash Cloud (Master)
Heat Wave (Master)
- B rank
Infernal Hellfire (Master)
Firestorm (Master)
Spontaneous Combustion (Master)
Ring of Fire (Master)
- A Rank
Dragon Flame Bomb (Master)
Sol Fire Tempest (Master)
Abysmal Harbinger (Master)
Flame Shield (Master)


Kinjutsu: Hachimon
- C Rank
- Body Flicker (Master)
Chakra Gates (master)
- B Rank
Ura Renge (master)
- A rank
Evening Mammoth (master)


Transfering all four for 2 C, 1 B, and 1 A / 20 + 12 + 15 / 47 Advanced Shop points and 27,000 Yen[/quote]

Neutral - E Rank
Transformation (Master)
Body Switch
- D Rank
Combination Transformation
Crystal Eye
Cancel
Spirit Lantern
Contract Summoning

Medical ninjutsu - D
Mystical Hand (Mastered)
Coagulation (Mastered)
- C
Skeletal Formation
System Restoration (Master)
- B
Mystical Force (Master)
Tranquilize (Master)
- A
Angelic Blessing (Mastered)
Pristine Aura


Transferring over Mystical Force, Tranquilize, Angelic Blessing, and Pristine Aura for 30 ASP + 24 / 54 ASP and 40,000 Yen

ANBU - D
Mask Summon
- C
Snapshot
Chakra Sense

Taijutsu - E - Unarmed
The One-Two (Mastered)
Low Sweep (Mastered)
Janken (Mastered)
- B Rank
16 Hit combo
- A rank
Dance of the Waxing Moon (Master)

Genjutsu- B rank
Pox - Kinetic(Master)
- A rank
Body Double - Visual (Master)
Radial Shock - Audio (master)
MEEEEENNNTAAALLL KOMMMBAAATT!! - Will (Master)
Curse of the Leper - Kinetic (Master)
Temple of Nirvana = Will


Sell Backs: When you OCR you may sell back your jutsus and get a full refund for them. To do this you MUST NOT sell your jutsus until you have announced which jutsus you are selling in your OCR thread and had a staff person respond to your OCR thread. This is done to make sure that you actually have the jutsus that you claim that you are going to sell. List your jutsu name(s) and their respective rank(s) and cost when you lost them for your Council Person. Once they have responded to your post they will direct you to sell the jutsus that you intend to sell. SELL your jutsus and do not be alarmed by the fact that you are only getting a percentage of what you spent back, this is why you listed the jutsus that you intend to sell with their costs -- the Council Person will compensate you for the difference. Please note, this can only be done at the time of the OCR so you cannot defer this to a later date.

Name of any Contract you currently own:
None (I wish)

Name of Kinjutsu you own: Hachimon
Gained via OCR - https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=613&t=48345

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads?
https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=568&t=48447 - Contract Search
I have not had a response in about 2 weeks, so I would like to ask since it is a moderated situation, for it to be canceled (I will not be playing as Haruichi ever again) since I can not continue it.

What is Limbo Training?
This is the training that you would have gotten if you did not move on to your new character's life. Your caps are determined by your rebirthed stats. You must keep a record of your stats gained during limbo in your OCR thread. You may NOT request for an automatic rank up should you find that your new stats allow you to upgrade.
 

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Re: Uchiha Haruchi ----> Mizutsune Miras (Ready)

Character name: Approved.
Rank: Approved.
Appearance: Approved.
Personality: Approved.
History: Approved.
Bloodline: Approved.
Kinjustu: N/A
Justu Swaps: Look good to me. The second approver can actually do the swaps.
 
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Kinjutsu Application - Revenant
Breath. That was the single command that came to her mind when she was first born, but she did not have any lungs to breath with. An amber glow was all that she could make as she squirmed and twisted around herself. Mira felt only cold, wet things. The tips of her body felt a burning thing grab her before an explosion of light awoke her senses. She was fished out of a tube of hundreds of pitch black threads, all flowing gently in a glowing test tube. She was so small then, about the size of the average Yen coin. It dawned upon her that this stranger in white dragged her away with a careful grace. He was preparing for her, or was she being prepared for him? He felt so warm and so alive. She slowly became jealous of this strange gift this man had.

The glowing amber thing flopped into glowing emerald hands that made her feel so, bubbly! She felt like she had to burp, but this bubble just kept on growing up inside her tell she bloated. The piece of thread ripped itself apart, turning into a thin frame of a ball. She didn't feel pain, instead just confusion that she was being peeled. She rubbed up against whatever was pushing her open, tasting it upon her threads. It was so sweet and savory! It was so thin, yet felt like it was a boulder of weight. She couldn't have just a sip, so she began to plunge in. The strange figure that was making the green ball gasped in surprise, watching the threads begin to grow longer like hair. The threads took their sweet time, savoring each and every slurp from the strange orb of green power. The liquid was her Ambrosia, and she refused to be taken from her only treat. Each thread suckling like a baby to its mother, in a strange unaware bliss that let it grow.

The growing mass was kept fed by another hand, one that was harsher and more worked, but sweet just the same. The aether flowed like flood gates, feeding her more and more. She was now around the size of the figure's hand. When it was done, it began to play with her threads as if it were dough. The feelings were just like all the others, strange, foreign, and new. The warm fingers unraveled her strict body, warping around the fingers as if she was melting. The man in panic brought his hand back, letting the ball fall to the floor. Squish she went! She was splattered over the floor like a deflated tower, every part of her hanging out. She just bubbled with pleasure before being picked up with tweezers. She was quickly brought back to her cage to regenerate, which she never managed to do.

She became basically dough from that point on, always flopped over and spread out like some molten blob. The man felt horrible about ruining the experiments, but quite the contrary proved to be the truth. It made her love of life even greater, it made her thirst for warmth a near zealotic lust. She wanted to be like these gods of peach, tan, brick and obsidian with all of her metaphorical hearts. Each was warm with life and fed her nectar. Each and every time she was fed, the heavenly bliss made her disfigured body bloat more and more. She was as large as one of the gods now, but she was still a molten beach ball in appearance. When she was being fed again, her body hit its critical mass of thought. The chain reaction within her body was subtle, but her mind grew more than the heart of a Grinch. Her body warped forward, reaching past the energy and pooling around the fingers of the woman. She squeaked in horror, calling for something known as 'Help'. The words meant nothing to her now that she has her hands on her prey, and her lust for warmth could finally be sated. She grew a hideous smile inside herself as she finally got what she desired for so long...

Mira began shaping an arm, her fingers forming first based off of the molds she was consuming. The surge of thread flew back from the woman's arm to reveal the replica. It was warped to a fatter, more droopy form, but the fact it copied her was what made her calm down. She kneeled down and nervously yanked her other arm up out of her lab coat. She slowly stuck her hand into the mass of bubbling thread, which was molded and formed around her body. It was stitched to a new position reminiscent of the other, which it began to learn from. The more appropriate mold was switching information down the threads, which had all changed to be more of a nervous system. All of the information trading made her one giant living brain of thread. With her large arms formed, the thing surged and wrapped around the woman. She screamed in more of a cold gasp of shock as the cold threads began examing her skin, replicating the detail and after a short amount of time, the color. The light chocolate appearance she acquired rapidly came from the thread, which softly suckled from its god's body. The thread twirled around her face gently, sticking into each and every pore and drinking the hormones. it left her face soft and smooth afterwards, but that was just a distraction at the moment. She began to copy the complex details of the face while being puffed up from the woman, rising up as a blob of nightmare black thread.

Within a minute, the woman fell to the floor in a overwhelmed coma. Standing there was the form of the large woman, looking as if a hundred pounds at least were added to the frame due to her early deformation of figure. Now, now she could see properly. The eye replicas finished forming, and through it she finally saw the complex figures and shapes of the world. She recoiled in horror as the help she had called for finally arrived. Three revolver wielding guards, which all proceeded to lower their guns at the sight of the nude woman. She silently looked up, before allowing her new found instincts to take over. She gave off a kind smile before accepting air for the first time. She warped her throat to form vocals, channeling her words out in a slow, precise single breath, "Hi! I think she might need some help..."

Mira was quickly shown clothes, and as such became an intimidating figure of war, if it weren't for her soft, fat appearance. She opened her violet eyes to her new clothes. She could feel and replicate the texture, but seeing the colors for herself? It was a wonderful, warm sight! She looked down to the slightly smaller man and yanked him up with all of her might. She kissed the scientist on the forehead which made his face burn up a bit. After composing himself, the lessons began. She learned the concept of chakra, and the fact that being made of spirit and body means that it can also be reversed. By being reversed, chakra turned her into body and spirit and got absorbed like water into the thread. She was physically knitted into existence, and with that, she became born as a living thing.

The strangeness of reversal made sense to her, but how it was done was a bit crazy. She just accepted it as fact and learned from the videos she watched. Hand signs, warping her chakra, and generating chakra all came naturally. The strange beast of thread would become a civilized, happy, yet lazy creature that just enjoyed life. She would create massive explosions wherever she was needed, and try to work as a soldier of Sand. Now that the storm is gone and the sun can be seen, the lazy soldier hunts on for an even brighter future for her masters.

In her down time, Mira learned the dynamic art of using pastry dough by infusing her chakra into it. Warping the ingredients like her own thread, she would create cakes, pastries, and other concoctions like a 3D printing! She never revealed HOW she made her craft, but it was so simple to make she literally breathed out cakes if she wanted to! With this discovery out of the way, Mira decided to open up her own business as a chef! As an artist of flesh and sweet delights that reminded her of her past, she decided she had to be able to wear these 'clothes' people speak of. She even began to design clothes for herself, which were some of the most revolting things in the world. Now they are mismatching patterns of crazy that just happen to be extremely convenient, so it has a purpose at least! the strange clothes would make her look like she was cosplaying horribly, but in truth, it was her lack of understanding of Human nature. The unknown thing lumbers on, enjoying every second of every hour.
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Custom Class Change
Beautfiul Armageddon
HP: (60+lvl) x stamina
CP: (30+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu
High: Ninjutsu Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty.
Low: Melee Accuracy and Puppet Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Chuunin
Age - 17 Months

History: The woman of thread was born to be a medical worker. A living puppet of thread that could think for itself and protect people wherever it went! That was their original plan, but out came a fat, chocolate skinned woman who absorbed the Touji part of the chakra bath. The woman known as Mira has only lived for a very short time, and in that time she knows almost nothing of Human culture. The Threadborne knows how to utilize her deadly talents for the greater good, but otherwise she is lost. By faking colors with chakra and shaping her entire body to be a fluidless husk of a person, she had one of the highest potentials for being an infiltrator, if it weren't for a man messed with her and warping her appearance.

The woman's most noticeable advancement, and pretty much only advancement, since she was released from her master's experiments was her shop! She opened a store on the surface to the new Sand, offering pasty dough she had barfed up into cakes! By utilizing the freshest ingredients with her Earth Ninjutsu, and the purification of Flame ninjutsu, she makes explosive cupcakes that explode gently out of their wrappers when opened. The custom made pastries are one of the fastest ways to get treats in Sunagakure, so she has started to attract a small fanbase.
 
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A few cosmetic changes...
Physical Description:
Mira stands at 5'11 feet tall and weighs around 320 pounds. Mira, ironically to her name, is a bright, fiery person. Her skin is tanned to a light chocolate color. Her gut rests outwards just above her groin with dual layers of fat. She has a scar that runs alongside her stomach with five black stitches, though from what she gained it from is unknown. Her light black hair goes down to her neck and naturally curls a bit, with a single strip of hair that goes down to her ankles. Her chubby face is embedded with bright violet eyes. Her arms have some chub to them, though they hold a good amount of muscle. Her hands are smooth and that of a slacker, but erupt into the maws of the Touji bloodline. Mira has bloated thighs and feet similar in shape to an elephant's own, though a bit smaller.

She tends to be in the extreme ends when it comes to clothes. In the heavier end of her clothes, she wears a bright orange and black overcoat with a flipped over collar, though her hair tends to hide the collar. The coat's sleeves are rarely filled, left to sway in the wind. Then down to her pants, she tends to wear baggy black pants that split just below the knees, ending in strangely clean tatters. A loincloth-like extension covers the groin region on the top of the pants, marked with a blue, soapy bubble. However, on the lightest part of her outfit, Mira only wears bandages for a top. They tightly grasp her chest, leaving nothing to gawk at.

Mira during active duty or just walking around town wears an assault jacket with a high collar and extended shoulder pads. Under the vest is a black jumpsuit with white cloth wrapped around the left leg to show a small pouch. A belt helps keep the entire uniform together, littered with multiple pouches towards the edge of Mira's thighs. A cloth cap coats Mira's head, draping to the sides a bit like hair to protect her from the heat. Her headband wraps around the cloth, showing her alignment to Sunagakure. Her legs are covered in layers of cloth to protect her from sand nipped at her heels, to her casual gray shoes.
 

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New Character Name: Mizutsune Mira
Preferred Username: Mizutsune Mira
New Village/Missing: Stone
New BL/CA: Touji
Custom Class:
Custom Class wrote:
CODE: SELECT ALL
Beautfiul Armageddon
HP: (60+lvl) x stamina
CP: (30+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: Kinjutsu
High: Ninjutsu Accuracy
Average: Ranged Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty.
Low: Melee Accuracy and Puppet Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Medic? Refer to below.
IC Rank: Medic -- This will require Akujin or another ranked Medic for approval
Age - 17 Months -- this is below the site age range of 8-13 for starter students and much longer spans for OCRs.
Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch - Blast Corps Med-Nin
IC Rank: Ranger Chuunin: needs to be quantified in the history
Character Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sex: Female
Character's Physical Description: If that is what you want.
Character's Mental Description:
History: Explains to Genin. But The Blast Corps had opened to average Shinobi. She felt a natural draw to become a Ranger, zooming out into the fields and making shows of her art! She could make beauty, help people at the same time AND GET PAID?! Her hobby and her job mixed into one! Maybe that was what she needed! She resigned from her team and became a part of the Blast Corps with literal flying colors. Finally motivated to get off of her ass, Mira desires to show the entire world her awesome explosions! She marches onto her hopefully brighter path of being a true shinobi. This was changed to the new bio later. This new bio has confused me because I did not know (I still do not) exactly what you are. It makes it sound like you are not even human here or that you became a Touji by taking a bath or that you were a tadpole that was fed something and that she is basically a shapeless something. I just need to know what she is. In addition, I need some sort of mention regarding how you became a shinobi (the basic I entered the academy and graduated, did some genin things then after a few successful missions I did the Chuunin exam and some stuff happened but ultimately I passed, etc.
Jutsus:
Kinjutsu: Hachimon
- C Rank
- Body Flicker (Master)
Chakra Gates (master)
- B Rank
Ura Renge (master)
- A rank
Evening Mammoth (master)

Transferring all four for 2 C, 1 B, and 1 A / 20 + 12 + 15 / 47 Advanced Shop points and 27,000 Yen

Medical ninjutsu - D
Mystical Hand (Mastered)
Coagulation (Mastered)
- C
Skeletal Formation
System Restoration (Master)
- B
Mystical Force (Master)
Tranquilize (Master)
- A
Angelic Blessing (Mastered)
Pristine Aura

Transferring over Mystical Force, Tranquilize, Angelic Blessing, and Pristine Aura for 30 ASP + 24 / 54 ASP and 40,000 Yen


47 Advanced Shop points and 27,000 Yen
54 ASP and 40,000 Yen
101 ASP and 67,000 yen

Cash on hand: 32,261.00 Yen
New total (placed in on hand) 99261

Kinjutsu: Actually liked the language use in there. Thumbs up. I just need the above question satisfied to finish this part off.
 
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I couldn't edit the post because of Papertrail, so I mentioned it in a response, so I am very sorry for the walls of text.
Idea of What she is - The Threads of a Revenant were experimented with to see if the inverse process could be made of instead of a Human being made of thread, a being of thread that made itself into a Human. She uses her chakra to color herself, while also controlling her threads physical attributes to be as 'Human' as she can manage. She can unravel herself (which I was going to apply for as a Custom Roleplay Ninjutsu later on) and warp her appearance and vocal cords. I just really loved the idea of breaking the normal quote, "I never asked to be born", and explore what would happen if something DID want to be born, and got its wish... a bit like a warped soldier Pinocchio.

BL, Age and History - This was way vaguer than I would like it to be... so new one!

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Genin
Age - 15 Years (Mentally)
9 Years (Physically)

History: Mira was born as an experiment, titled as 'Wasteland Genesis". She created to survey the outside world and find the source of the maelstrom. With noble intentions, ways of creating artificial humans or things that could survive the diamond sand for a long time was coming up short, let alone checking off the rest of the list. That was until a strange idea came into one of the younger scientist's brain. What if, they just simply made something that was so simple that it could repair and weave itself? Like the theoretical A.I. reprogramming itself, Mira was made with the ability to reweave her flesh. She was bathed in chakra day after day, mixing in Yin release to try and cause a similar pattern to brain cells within the thread. A few threads reacted, shining off negative light. The only thread that glowed with the accepted light was the strand that would form into Mira.

Years upon years of growing would happen to her, warped by warmth and life to desire it beyond all things. The thing that never lived desired life, and so it became living. Mira gained her form from an assistant and was shaped further from the remains of the head scientist's dead daughter. The creation would take over where she left off, and so Mira learned a way to shape chakra in hopes of being a closer fit. She ate a piece of clay and began to work on it with her belly, weaving chakra into it and making it a part of herself. Then, she unleashed it. It would take her months to learn how to precisely handle the explosives, but it was a start. She would be entered in and in a meeting, show that she was independent of her creators. Financially and lawfully, she was, but she would sleep over at the lab for diagnostics, surprises and to hang out with the staff. Mira showed her immense power and got accepted as a Genin. As a newly added Genin, and finally exposed to the Sun, Mira plans to climb the ranks and prove her loyalty to her home land.
 

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The Maelstrom did die out going back a few years now.

Did you ... want to consider that she was not able to find the source of it, and that references to it have been on the mum?
 
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Damn didn't state that part..
The idea was that the reason more of her don't exist (or it isn't full scale) is because that the Maelstrom died out. So... more along the lines of there is no more need for her, so they just let her live as a person while they just kept going on to new projects
 
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This is kind of bothering me...
Old Stats:
Agility: 370 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 525 / 525
Ninjutsu: 385 / 525
Genjutsu: 300 / 525
Chakra Control: 335 / 525
PL: 2440
OOC: A

Old OOC Rank: A
Stat Cut: None
New Stats:

Agility: 445 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 210 / 525
Ninjutsu: 525 / 525
Genjutsu: 210 / 525
Chakra Control: 525 / 525
PL: 2440
OOC: A
How did your agility, CC, and ninjutsu go up, but taijutsu and genjutsu go down?

This is my first time dealing with an OCR, so I'm not personally sure if you are able to alter stats like that. If you are however, you took 405 total points from tai and gen and only spent 330. So... Changes will have to be made.
 

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Actually, I just checked the stats. These stats are fine. When OCRing, you can move where stats are as long as the totals are the same for the overall stats which they are. But thank you for being so vigilant. OCRs are super hard. =)
 
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Speaking of Stats... I would like to request the following
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OCR Training 9/16/16 - 10/7/16 ( 3 weeks, all words coming from Kinjutsu App)

Agility: 445 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 210 / 525
Ninjutsu: 525 / 525
Genjutsu: 315 / 525
Chakra Control: 525 / 525
PL: 2545

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9/16/16 - 10/9/16 ( 4 weeks, all words coming from Kinjutsu App)

Agility: 480 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 210 / 525
Ninjutsu: 525 / 525
Genjutsu: 315 / 525
Chakra Control: 525 / 525
PL: 2580
 
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9/16/16 - 10/18/16 ( 5 weeks, all words coming from Kinjutsu App, 1250 words used)

Agility: 480 / 525
Stamina: 525 / 525
Taijutsu: 245 / 525
Ninjutsu: 525 / 525
Genjutsu: 315 / 525
Chakra Control: 525 / 525
PL: 2615
 

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Sorry about the delay!

Stats approved, membership (awesome name color change) completed, can't change your name for you (unfortunately) but once that is taken care of you will be officially complete!

Welcome to the sand box, try not to make too much of a mess ;)
 

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