Uchiha Sora ---> Oosugi Ryuuichi

[Uchiha Arata]

Old Character Name: Uchiha Sora
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: Leaf
Old IC Rank: Student

New Character Name: Oosugi Ryuuichi
Preferred Username: Oosugi Ryuuichi
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Santaru
Custom Class:

[u]Thunder God[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (50+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (45+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +20% lightning
[i]High:[/i] Melee Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy
[i]Average:[/i] Gen DC, Gen Save, Evasion
[i]Low:[/i] Puppet Accuracy, Ranged Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Genin

Character Age: 13
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description:

Spoiler

Ryuuchi has light skin and Hazel eyes with dark brown hair. His attire differs constantly. Casually he may wear a blue shirt sleeves button up polo, other times just a T-shirt. His clothing frequently changes to the occasion. Ryuuichi always comes prepared though.

Character's Mental Description: Ryuuichi is usually cool headed and always keeps his composure. It is rare for him to ever get angry. He is usually rather quiet, he prefers to observe before really speaking anything. However he is pretty outgoing and isn't afraid to speak out and even strike up conversation with strangers. He is the type to not take things for granted and sees the good in everybody, no matter their actions. Of anything, he blames himself.
Multiple Personality Application:
Character History: Born to a Santaru Anbu and a main branch Jounin, Ryuuichi had a rather boring childhood. His parents were always busy so he was always alone. He hated being alone. He was even afraid of being alone. Though when he was home he wasn't so much since of course to a 5 year old child, home was the safest place in the world.

While his parents were out, Ryuuichi went outside to play. Even though he didn't know too much about what his parents did, he wanted to be a Shinobi just like them! He always liked to go out into the forest and play pretend ninja. Today was no different. He ran through the forest smiling and laughing. He pretended that there were bad guys and punched and kicked at the air.

"Alright! Gotta go beat up the bad guys at their base!" Ryuuichi grinned and leaped over a bush and gave a roundhouse kick to somebodies face. He dropped instantly before he turned around and gave an uppercut to another. One of the enemies threw a Kunai at him but he quickly spun out of the way and threw two shuriken which would kill his opponent. To anybody who would have watched him, it'd just be Ryuuichi swinging at the air and moving around like an idiot.

Usually Ryuuichi went back home well before dark, however he got carried away this time while taking out the enemy complex and couldn't return back to Headquarters to report his mission. Before he knew it, it was dark. He didn't know where he was and got scared quickly. Where was he in this forest? It was dark and looming. Everything seemed to come alive, everything seemed to have killing intent. The atmosphere was heavy and it was as if he were in a thick fog, but then there was light.

Ryuuichi was drawn to this light in his moment of despair to find it as his salvation. Pushing a branch out of the way he saw what seemed to be a boy his age but with golden skin and glowing yellow eyes. The unknown boy noticed Ryuuichi and smiled. The smile was all Hayami needed to know this was a friend and not an enemy in this treacherous forest of evil.

Ryuuichi ran over to the boy, smiling.
"Hey, hey! What's your name?!"
Hayami had a huge grin on his face and bright wide eyes. He rarely had any company since he was always alone, to him, he was very excited.

The golden boy smiled calmly.
"My name is... Raiden. Say, would you like to play?"

Ryuuichi just about screamed yes before he realized how late it was.
"Well.. I would but... I really need to go home. Do you know where the exit is, Raiden?"

Raiden paused for a moment before he answered.
"The exit? Why it's right over there"
He then proceeded to point to his right.

Ryuuichi felt bad about just leaving his friend. He had to do something to return the favor...
"Well.. how about I'll come back and play tomorrow! I promise! Pinky promise!"
Ryuuichi grinned and held his pinky up.

Raiden began to smile. This was just what he wanted. He did the same and wrapped his pinky around Hayami's. The seal was complete.

Raiden was not the little boy Ryuuichi thought he was. That was just how Ryuuichi perceived Raiden, whom is actually the Thunder God. Normally Raiden wouldn't want to be sealed. This brings up question. Just what exactly is his motive?

Raiden was betrayed by people. After all the Thunder God had done for people, people betrayed him. They trapped him, sealed him in some jar. For many many years he was trapped before being able to escape. By this point there was nothing the angry god could do. He was weak, powerless... at least for now.

By taking a human host, he could recover and take over its body, eventually being able to crush humanity for its sins against him. Raiden was a passionate god, he was normally cool headed but that was not the case. Initially his plan when he escaped would've to go out and kill everybody. He could see it now. Zap here, smash there, sprinkle in some lightning over here... but would that truly be enough? He obviously couldn't if he was weak enough to be trapped in the first place. Though this time he wouldn't be caught off guard, instead the humans would be. Possessing one of their own and launching a surprise attack? It could work.

This plan took a while to develop however. Raiden was infuriated at his betrayal and fumed with anger for years until settling down. Once at his cool headed state, he devised the plan. Of course it'd take a lot of time to execute, but time was the only thing he currently had. Seal himself in somebody. Lend them his power, his almighty power. He'd be beloved by all. People who'd adore him and aspire to be him. Once he gained the world's respect, it'd be time to wreck havoc once more. Nobody would suspect that their savior would end up as their downfall.

The plan was risky though. He could be found out. If he was found out too early it could ruin everything... though there was again another chance. They'd find out the boy was a jinchuriki, but what about when he took over? When he decided to wreck havoc once more? It was all time and place, but none of that mattered. No matter what he would extract his revenge.

When Ryuuichi returned the next day, the boy was nowhere to be found. Was he busy? Did he move houses? Where was he? Did he get.. stood up? Ryuuichi shook his head and smiled once more. It didn't matter. He decided to forget about it and go home.

Eventually his parents sent him to the leaf to meet new people and eventually graduate the academy and became a Genin.

Clan Request: Nah

Death/Retirement Thread: Nahhh
Old Profile: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=773&t=50460&p=243804#p243804
Old Training: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=774&t=50462
Old Dojo: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=775&t=50461

Special Usergroups: Leaf, Cloud.

Old Stats: Agility: 175/300
Stamina: 175/300
Taijutsu: 124/300
Ninjutsu: 153/300
Genjutsu: 101/300
Chakra Control: 175/300
PL: 903
Old OOC Rank: B-Rank
Stat Cut: 20%
New Stats:
Agility: 150/175
Stamina: 150/175
Taijutsu: 100/175
Ninjutsu: 100/175
Genjutsu: 100/175
Chakra Control: 123/175
PL: 723

E rank - 20 minimum in each stat
D rank - 40 minimum in each stat
C rank - 70 minimum in each stat
B rank - 120 minimum in each stat
A rank - 210 minimum in each stat
S rank - 240 minimum in each stat

New OOC Rank: C-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:
KEEP
E-Rank
Storm Bolt - Master
Thunderfist - Master
Transformation - Master

D-Rank
Cancel - Master

B-Rank
Chidori - Master
(Can I keep it but not use it till B rank?)

Refunds:
E-Rank
Overhead strike - Rank 1
Dynamic slash - Rank 1
Slash - Rank 1
Thermal Maw - Master
Infernal Ember - Master
Eye-Strain - Rank 1

D-Rank
Fireball - Master

C-Rank
Gravitational Pull - Master
Gravity distortion - Master

Gravity Advanced Ninjutsu

Get:
Storm (free from Santaru)

D-Rank
4-hit combo - Master

C-Rank
Shielding Tempest - Master
Fissure Slash - Master
Waterfall - Master

Other Refunds: Ninjutsu Composition Augment.

Name of any Contract you currently own: Nah
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: Nah
Name of Kinjutsu you own:
I shall use this to apply when I get b rank again.

Born to a Santaru Anbu and a main branch Jounin, Ryuuichi had a rather boring childhood. His parents were always busy so he was always alone. He hated being alone. He was even afraid of being alone. Though when he was home he wasn't so much since of course to a 5 year old child, home was the safest place in the world.

While his parents were out, Ryuuichi went outside to play. Even though he didn't know too much about what his parents did, he wanted to be a Shinobi just like them! He always liked to go out into the forest and play pretend ninja. Today was no different. He ran through the forest smiling and laughing. He pretended that there were bad guys and punched and kicked at the air.

"Alright! Gotta go beat up the bad guys at their base!" Ryuuichi grinned and leaped over a bush and gave a roundhouse kick to somebodies face. He dropped instantly before he turned around and gave an uppercut to another. One of the enemies threw a Kunai at him but he quickly spun out of the way and threw two shuriken which would kill his opponent. To anybody who would have watched him, it'd just be Ryuuichi swinging at the air and moving around like an idiot.

Usually Ryuuichi went back home well before dark, however he got carried away this time while taking out the enemy complex and couldn't return back to Headquarters to report his mission. Before he knew it, it was dark. He didn't know where he was and got scared quickly. Where was he in this forest? It was dark and looming. Everything seemed to come alive, everything seemed to have killing intent. The atmosphere was heavy and it was as if he were in a thick fog, but then there was light.

Ryuuichi was drawn to this light in his moment of despair to find it as his salvation. Pushing a branch out of the way he saw what seemed to be a boy his age but with golden skin and glowing yellow eyes. The unknown boy noticed Ryuuichi and smiled. The smile was all Hayami needed to know this was a friend and not an enemy in this treacherous forest of evil.

Ryuuichi ran over to the boy, smiling.
"Hey, hey! What's your name?!"
Hayami had a huge grin on his face and bright wide eyes. He rarely had any company since he was always alone, to him, he was very excited.

The golden boy smiled calmly.
"My name is... Raiden. Say, would you like to play?"

Ryuuichi just about screamed yes before he realized how late it was.
"Well.. I would but... I really need to go home. Do you know where the exit is, Raiden?"

Raiden paused for a moment before he answered.
"The exit? Why it's right over there"
He then proceeded to point to his right.

Ryuuichi felt bad about just leaving his friend. He had to do something to return the favor...
"Well.. how about I'll come back and play tomorrow! I promise! Pinky promise!"
Ryuuichi grinned and held his pinky up.

Raiden began to smile. This was just what he wanted. He did the same and wrapped his pinky around Hayami's. The seal was complete.

Raiden was not the little boy Ryuuichi thought he was. That was just how Ryuuichi perceived Raiden, whom is actually the Thunder God. Normally Raiden wouldn't want to be sealed. This brings up question. Just what exactly is his motive?

Raiden was betrayed by people. After all the Thunder God had done for people, people betrayed him. They trapped him, sealed him in some jar. For many many years he was trapped before being able to escape. By this point there was nothing the angry god could do. He was weak, powerless... at least for now.

By taking a human host, he could recover and take over its body, eventually being able to crush humanity for its sins against him. Raiden was a passionate god, he was normally cool headed but that was not the case. Initially his plan when he escaped would've to go out and kill everybody. He could see it now. Zap here, smash there, sprinkle in some lightning over here... but would that truly be enough? He obviously couldn't if he was weak enough to be trapped in the first place. Though this time he wouldn't be caught off guard, instead the humans would be. Possessing one of their own and launching a surprise attack? It could work.

This plan took a while to develop however. Raiden was infuriated at his betrayal and fumed with anger for years until settling down. Once at his cool headed state, he devised the plan. Of course it'd take a lot of time to execute, but time was the only thing he currently had. Seal himself in somebody. Lend them his power, his almighty power. He'd be beloved by all. People who'd adore him and aspire to be him. Once he gained the world's respect, it'd be time to wreck havoc once more. Nobody would suspect that their savior would end up as their downfall.

The plan was risky though. He could be found out. If he was found out too early it could ruin everything... though there was again another chance. They'd find out the boy was a jinchuriki, but what about when he took over? When he decided to wreck havoc once more? It was all time and place, but none of that mattered. No matter what he would extract his revenge.

When Ryuuichi returned the next day, the boy was nowhere to be found. Was he busy? Did he move houses? Where was he? Did he get.. stood up? Ryuuichi shook his head and smiled once more. It didn't matter. He could continue to play ninja!!

Duck, weave, punch, kick. The ninja were surrounding him, the bad guys were gonna get him! He was out of breath, injured, fatigued, and alone. Reinforcements wouldn't return for another ten minutes so he was stuck defending the princess all on his own. It was his duty to protect her. He had only one option left, use his most powerful Jutsu! The lightning bolt!!

Ryuuichi thrusted his hands straight outwards and out shot a large bolt of electricity straight at the enemies! Pow! He saved the princess and survived!!

Wait. What was that?

Ryuuichi cut back to reality when he noticed sparks of electricity surrounding his hands. Looking ahead of him he noticed singe marks on the tree in front of him with a slight trail of electricity back to his hands. Did he actually perform a Jutsu? He didn't even use any handseals.. just what was this? He shook his head and let it go. He decided it was best to get home.

As time went on, he began to develop a better affinity for lightning. It just came naturally to him. Before even entering the academy he knew post academy level Jutsu. His father taught him a couple but didn't think he could complete them. He figured this was due to his Santaru bloodline, but this wasn't the case.. it couldn't be.. he was just too extraordinary. He couldn't even notice him do the handseals to complete the Jutsu.

As it got near time for him to enter the academy, his parents worried. It wasn't healthy how fast he was progressing. He knew nothing of water, and wasn't very good at it yet but he was so developed in lightning. Being a Santaru he should be able to do a couple Jutsu but he just seemed too much into lightning. It definitely wasn't his bloodline making him so good.

However despite not being too good at water style, he did already know a couple Storm Jutsu from his father. This was normal. One didn't need to be a master at water style to learn Storm Jutsu, plus he didn't even need to know one or the other due to his bloodline. Of course these Jutsu were rather advanced but he didn't struggle.

By this point his parents decided to send him off to his aunt and uncles. His personality changed as well. He used to be such an energetic child but now began to relax a bit. Though this could be due to him maturing a bit, but he was still just a kid!

His parents lied to him. They told him to go off and get some knowledge about other places so they sent him to the leaf with his aunt and uncle. Ryuuichi was unaware and happily went along. When he got there he attended the academy and passed easily. He wasn't the top of his class though, but it was easy to him. He just didn't want to put in the effort for studying. Instead he wanted to train and train and train. He even began to develop his own ninjutsu, well at least he thought they were his own Jutsu. Turns out they were all already created.

One thing in common was they were all lightning Jutsu. It was strange, he had some sort of natural affinity. He didn't even use hand seals for lightning Jutsu. Most others did as he observed them, so it was obvious it wasnt as if everybody were like him. He was... special?

As he passed the academy classes and graduated, he finally became a Genin. He was predicted to be one of the Genin to watch out for just due to how there weren't too many in leaf since leaf only recently was taken back. However he had more potential than most of the other Genin, and as such he was held on a higher standard despite not being even the top 10% in his classes or being the best ninja. However, there was something special about him that put him above where he would be. Normally he'd be seen as some average ninja that could turn out being better or worse than expected. Though there was something special, like some kind of hidden power he had but nobody could ever put their finger on it.

To this day Ryuuichi now awaits being put into a squad to complete ninja missions with. Being a Genin he had to do the lowest of the low missions, but he already knew this was going to be a lot of fun and he couldn't wait to get started!

 

[Seijin]

I could have missed it but who's Hayami to your character?

 

[Uchiha Arata]

That's an accident. His original name was gonna be Hayami but I decided to change it and since I made it in notes I had to try and go through and switch it.

 

[Uchiha Arata]

Edited the 20% stat deduction in. This drops me to c rank so I was wondering if I can just keep the history but not have the jinchuriki abilities yet till I apply again at B rank?

 

[Uchiha Arata]

Edited history. No kin. Everything should be good.

 

[Gushiken Yama]

Name: Okay!
BL/CA: Okay!
Branch/Rank: Okay!
Age/Sex/Physical Description: Okay!
History: Taking to Cloud Council for approval of using their deity in your history.
Character Class: Hold up! Your HP and CP modifiers do not reflect your highs/lows. If you want to have 95 in both you'll need to put all of your modifiers in average. Also make note that you are getting +20% Lightning Damage.
Stats: Okay!
Jutsu Swaps: Okay! Second council should do your yen modifications.

You should go ahead and save your Kinjutsu app and apply when you hit B-Rank. I'll take the history issue to Cloud real quick and get that all settled, and then we'll go from there.

EDIT: Also from this point on, repost your entire OCR application with the requested changes instead of making edits to the original please.

 

[Kagetsu Yuii]

Alright, so our overall decision on the direct use of Raiden like this is no. We're highly uncomfortable with the idea of placing our Countries main deity in the hands of a single player. The god already has a lot of history and is used too much.

A suggestion? You're best off just coming up with some back story for some demon being worshipped as a god by a village and then being betrayed and what not. Maybe the village, for whatever reason, believed the demon is Raiden because he has some Lightning powers, maybe the demon wanted them to believe he was Raiden. He might even trick Sora into believing that he is Raiden. The demon might even think that he is Raiden. But it can't *actually* be Raiden. This should be the least amount of work as far as changing your history goes.

That, or make up a new god that could potentially become part of Fire Countries' deities. ^^

 

[Uchiha Arata]

Old Character Name: Uchiha Sora
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: Leaf
Old IC Rank: Genin

New Character Name: Oosugi Ryuuichi
Preferred Username: Oosugi Ryuuichi
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Santaru
Custom Class:

[u]God of the Devils[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (50+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (40+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +20% Storm Damage
[i]High:[/i] Melee Accuracy, Ninjutsu Accuracy
[i]Average:[/i] Gen DC, Gen Save, Evasion
[i]Low:[/i] Puppet Accuracy, Ranged Accuracy

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Genin

Character Age: 13
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description:
FC: 25th Baam - Tower of God
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Ryuuchi has light skin and Hazel/Golden with dark brown hair. His attire differs constantly. Casually he may wear a blue shirt sleeves button up polo, other times just a T-shirt. However for his missions for The Organization he wears a black robe with red markings at the bottom.
Character's Mental Description:
Ryuuichi used to be very energetic and cheerful, but since his fall from innocence, he has changed. More often he is quiet and more tentative, but that doesn't mean he's lost his playful side. Since being in the lead village it is proof he is still his naive self. He is an optimistic person who has no trace of killing intent.
Multiple Personality Application: When working for The Organization he has to be a different person, somebody cold and ruthless. Somebody not afraid to kill, though parts of his personality still leak through at times that influence his personality. However he is generally silent, he rarely speaks and only follows his orders as exact as he can.

Character History: "You...you...you..." They pointed their fingers, like one would choose cattle or merchandise. It was as if they were picking pieces of candy out of a bucket they they thought looked nice. Finally the finger was pointed at him, it passed by. The voice drone on. He picked some and skipped others. Lined up were 9-12 year old boys and girls. Didn't matter race, gender, height, weight, or family. Hell almost everybody was chosen. About 200 kids were selected or of 270or so. The man with the clipboard handed it to another man. Both had black robes on and had their hoods up, it was hard to distinguish their features.

The non selected people were sent off, however for some reason, it seemed as if he was forgotten. He wasn't chosen, but he was still here. Did they make a mistake? It seems as if they didn't care though. Instead the man who previously had the clipboard spoke up.
"You have all been selected for a special kind of training. All of you have been hand selected because we believe you all have the potential to be the next leaders of the world! Now you will all go to the changing rooms and get ready for a test. "

There were two rooms, for the boys and for the girls. Ryuuichi of course followed the rest of the boys and changed into the attire that was given to them. Each of them had the same attire, almost like a uniform. This consisted of a black long sleeved short and black pants: over the shirt was a gray vest. After everybody changed the headed out into what seemed to be a one man elevator. Everybody got into one and was randomly brought up to a room. Well room wasn't the right word. The area seemed as if thy were out in an open plains area with a lot of hills and trees scattered around. The area was easily 5 kilometers, however around it were invisible walls that prevented escape. As they came up, the elevator emerged from the ground and when they stepped out, it descended again and in it's place was a patch of grassy floor.

A booming voice was heard amongst everybody that was scattered around. If sounded as if somebody was using a microphone to talk to them.
"Since there are 200 of you here, your first test is to cut the number in half. The first test will end when 100 of you remain. Good luck."

With that, the tests began. For most it took them a few moments to understand what was happening. Others however instantly knew it was a battle to the death. The boys and girls began attacking each other. Using everything in their Arsenal to kill the others and do whatever they could to survive.

Ryuuichi was under the shade of a large tree. Nobody seemed to be around him so things seemed safe, at least for now. Though what seemed to be doesn't necessarily mean it's truth. From behind somebody put a knife to his back.
"Ah.. you seem to be new to this sort of thing...."

Why was that boy just standing there? Did he not hear him? We are supposed to kill each other... or does he think he's safe? Izachi sighed and shook his head. This would be an easy picking but... maybe he should at least give him a chance? After all, he had been trying to gather teammates since the remaining 100 would pass and most likely be put on teams.

The Nara decided to then to go up behind him and put the knife to his back.
"Ah.. you seem to be new to this sort of thing."
He smiled as the boy took a step forward and quickly turned around.

The pointy thing at his back was a kunai. Ryuuichi took a step forward and pivoted to face him. He saw a boy with clean and sharp, obviously well kept, black hair. He had earrings which Ryuuichi found rather strange.
"You didn't kill me.. but you had the perfect opportunity to..."

"I've had the perfect opportunity for a while now. But I've decided to be generous. How about we team up? By this point... it seems about 120 or so people are left so how about we call a truce and team up."

Ryuuichi had no choice but to accept his offer. He didn't know too many Jutsu nor was he that great at Taijutsu. It was obvious he was at a disadvantage and wouldn't win even in the best of circumstances.
"Alright.. let's team up.. Mr......."

"Nara Izachi."

"Oosugi Ryuuichi."

After a few more moments the voice returned.
"Stop! Seize fighting. There are now only 100 remaining. Everybody come to the center platform for further instructions. No killing, no fighting."

There wasn't much of a choice. It was time to continue on with the tests. It didn't take long for everybody to reach the center platform that rose from the ground. Momentarily, it dropped down once more. Now they seemed to be inside a large complex. But once again, there was a man. However he wore a white trenchcoat and had blonde hair. He had a smile on his face and seemed rather confident.
"Congratulations for passing the first test. It went faster than expected. Next off we will be teaching you all how to be better ninja. This means we are putting you into classes based on your strengths. Now here are the classes.

Strategists.. Izachi Nara, Hime Fuuchika, Arale Yudo, Hiro Kaminaki...
Genjutsu users.. Hado satsuma, Yamasaki Hademiro, yoro takitsuchi, Ikari Uchiha...
Taijutsu.. Hatsu Strider, Utsuro Kaguya, Anatsu Fei, Harada Akimichi
Ninjutsu.. Ryuuichi Oosugi, Laurie Getsuchu, Setsu Aburame...
And this next is for a... special position
Androssi Zahard, Anaak Zahard, and Evan Khun.

Now that you all know your classes, go to your assigned teacher. In four weeks we will have another test. I expect to see you all there."
The man then exited as the trainee's went to their assigned teacher.

"Ninjutsu huh... alright! This should be fun. I can meet a lot of new people here!"
Ryuuichi grinned and went into the classroom. He wasn't the last nor the first, but there were plenty of people, around 20 or so. They all waited a bit for class to begin when the teacher turned to face them. He was rather tall, though of course since they were all under 13. He had a dark brown hair color in a very simple style. It wasn't very styled, if anything it looked as if he just woke up, but it wasn't very messy either. It looked rather natural, unlike Mr. Izachi's hair.

"Alright class.. you are all going to learn some simple ninjutsu and those with potential will learn some advanced ninjutsu. I'm sure you all already know the most basic ones so let's get straight into it. Let's try something called Storm Jutsu. I doubt any of you will be able to do this, but let's find out if anybody has potential. After this we will step it down a notch to D rank Jutsu."

As one after another went up t try it, nobody succeeded. There were three people remaining, him included. Ryuuichi's name was called and he stood nervously. It was clear he didn't know what he was doing but he went up and did as he was told. He made the proper hand seals and stuck his hands out. Unlike everybody else, a beam of energy shot out, though weak.
"Ah very good... Mr. Ryuuichi was it? Excellent. However we are all going to work on some D rank Jutsu..."

The four weeks went by quickly, but by the end of it the whole class had improved. Ryuuichi was the 7th highest ranked in his class. His abilities were sub par but he wasn't terrible, he had potential. Especially since he learned so quickly. Everybody met up once more. Once more the man in the white trench coat with blonde hair appeared.
"Well.. it seems the four weeks have passed and you are all ready for the next test. You will all be split into teams. Of course if you haven't noticed, half of you are gone. Those deemed not good enough were sent off, so we have enough people for two teams since there are 60 of you. The teams are the following.

Team A: Anaak Zahard, Laurie Getsuchu, Evan Khun, Hime Fuuchika, Arale Yudo, Hado satsuma, Setsu Aburame, Utsuro Kaguya...

Team B: Androssi Zahard, Izachi Nara, Ikari Uchiha, Ryuuichi Oosugi, Hatsu Strider, Yoro Takitsuchi, Harada Akimichi...

Now with these teams I'll now explain the game. Each team will take a turn at fighting... me! It'll be like a game of tag. I'll have this pin here in my hand pinned onto my shirt. Each of you will have one as well. The Goal is to land one strike against it. Once a strike connects it'll turn from red to green."
The man then demonstrated by poking it with a bit of force.
" Now, team A will go first. Try not to die..."

Team A was sent back to the large outdoor "room" once more along with the man. As they began their test, Team B had time to socialize. Ryuuichi sat himself down next to Izachi.
"So... do you actually think we can win? This guy is like.. A rank? No.. maybe even S rank?"

Izachi just smirked and looked at Ryuuichi with a look of confidence.
"This'll be a win as long as everybody follows my plan."

Izachi gave Ryuuichi a smile before it got rather quiet. It seemed as if most of the guys if not all of them turned their attention to Androssi Zahard who had just entered the room. Saying she was beautiful was an understatement. She already captivated nearly every man in the room.
"Ah.. plan? Well I already have one. We're going to split the team up. This is how our team will be split up.

Team Ba: Izachi Nara, Hatsu Strider, Harada Akimichi....

Team Bb: Androssi Zahard, Ryuuichi Oosugi, Ikari Uchiha.

Team B is obviously smaller but that's for a reason. This team is for an Ambush. Team A will be for a main assault on him to distract him. He never said where you had to put the pin so it could be anywhere on him. Team A will try to draw out his abilities and what he can do, also the location of the pin. While distracted, Team B will jump in for an ambush and take him down."
She smiled at her plan as the rest of the guys agreed with it. Izachi however seemed disappointed.

"Hey hey, Team A is getting destroyed!"
The guy next to Ryuuichi spoke. It was Hatsu. This made everybody look towards the screen before them which showed the battle, however it was a rather poor viewing experience.

Ryuuichi then noticed the katana.. katana's, two, that Hatsu had.
"Ah so you're a swordsman then!"
Hatsu then looked over at Ryuuichi and smiled.

"Yeah I am Strider... I go by Hatsu though. Indeed I am a swordsman though! I live and die by the sword!"

"Woah that's actually pretty cool Mr. Hatsu! Where did you learn from?"

"Most of what I know I learned from my father, but I did pick up a couple things from the class, but not too much. I'm the top seed in my class."

"You're the top seed? That's awesome! I'm only ranked seventh."

"That's nothing to worry about! I'm sure you'll do great if you just believe in yourself!"
Hatsu smiled at Ryuuichi. Hatsu had dark black hair and had black eyes as well.

Another voice cut into the conversation though.
"Of course you'll do fine. I did make a perfect plan so don't leave me out of this. Androssi Zahard, top seed."
She gave the both of them a smile. She had brown hair that went down to her shoulders. She really was worthy of all the fawning and the looks she got from the guys.

"Team A, fail! Team B please come out!"

"Well this is it guys!"
Ryuuichi grinned at his teammates as he stood up. He was happy and proud. Over the last four weeks he had learned a lot and wouldn't let it go to waste, he didn't want the new friends he made to fail now.

"Ryuu... Ryuu..! Ryuu!!"
He snapped to it from the sound of Androssi's voice.
"Huh? What? Sorry is was out of it for a moment..."

"Geez focus Ryuu! We're in the middle of our test. From what we found out it seems half of Team Ba has been taken down..."
She motioned about 200 meters away where the action was happening. Nobody seemed to take a hit on him yet and everybody had gone down in one hit except for a few others. Currently Yoro just got man handled so Hatsu quickly stepped in. Unlike the rest, Hatsu was able to attack and defend at the same time. Both were surprisingly going head to head for a while, exchanging blows and dodging at the same time. It was captivating how beautiful it was.

"So Ryuu, Ikari come here, I have the plan.."
When Ikari got closer, Androssi covered her hand in chakra and thrusted it through his stomach, impaling him. She kept her hand inside him for a few moments and watched Ikari's face of confused. He was helpless, like a bird who's wings got clipped and was now prey. Androssi dropped the body and smirked at Ryuuichi.
"So it seems you have a lot of potential Ryuu~ The trainers were all impressed at how quickly you were developing... you have a real talent, some even call you a monster... many are jealous..."

By this point the man kneed Hatsu's arm upwards and grabbed his face, then picking him up and slamming him down against the ground. A huge crater formed and his body was stuck there. However he was already unconscious from the strike.
"You're pretty good Hatsu.. you have no need to fear passing. I give you a passing mark now.. nobody has done as good as you today. Though isn't your team a little.. short handed?"

Izachi looked worried but kept it cool.
"No.. you've beaten nearly everybody. The only people left are right here!"

"You head that Ryuu~ they need their backup to come...."
Ryuuichi was frozen in place, metaphorically of course. She just killed him.. just who was she?
"Ahh I see... you just be wondering why I killed him? Well let me tell you something. People need to be stepped on in order for another to gain strength. He was a potential enemy in the future. Ikari was actually pretty strong.. I mean, didn't you wonder what happened to Harada? Dead. But Ryuu... you're special.. you're a monster but.... you're weak!"

Androssi grinned before walking towards the blonde man.
"Consider yourself lucky Ryuuichi... I'll be seeing you."

The man had just finished off defeating everybody else of team Ba except for a few stragglers. Everything seemed hopeless but.. why did Androssi seem so confident?

"So there you are Androssi... I was wondering where you were."
He gave her a smile.

"Oh I was just waiting for you to finally finish these guys off.. you play with them too much."
She gave a smirk and opened up her vest to show a flash of red.

"And yours?"
The blonde man then lifted his shirt up a bit to reveal the red pin on his hip

"Right here Androssi.."

She smirked and charged him, beginning with a high kick and then spinning vertically as it was dodged to deliver an axe kick, which was successfully blocked but the sound could be heard by everybody just from contact. It was obvious Androssi was strong, most likely the strongest person here..

Ryuuichi watched in awe. Just what was this.. what was she? This wasn't her real personality... he just knew it.. maybe she was doing this to protect them? Maybe there was something she was hiding.... he couldn't just sit here forever though, Ryuuichi ran out to help. Of the bodies he saw Hatsu and even some of the higher ranked Ninjutsu specialists. That just showed he had to sue some strong ninjutsu to actually be effective.

Androssi backed up but got struck right where her pin supposedly was.. but there was no green.
"What.. is there a problem with the pin? It didn't turn green why is it-"

His eyes widened. She smirked. She lied to him. She probably just showed his something else that was red when she flashed it to him. There was no time to see if it was actually the pin. The blonde man began to get angry and he gave a reverse kick to his abdomen and sent her back a bit.
"You're very foolish for being such a big wig here... or did you just underestimate us?"

Androssi grinned and went back at the attack then, but the man simply smiled and stood in place until the last second.
"Enough games..."

Killing intent, even more than what Androssi showed earlier.. this was heavy, thick, almost like wading through thigh high swamp except it's everywhere. It was getting hard to breath... this wasn't the time to stop though. However that moment was all the man needed to grab Androssi's neck, he was crushing it, applying pressure just a bit more and it'd snap... tighter... tighter.... and-

With a flash of light, two words were announced.

"Fight over!"

Ryuuichi stood panting a bit, he did it...

The blonde man looked down and noticed his pin was green.. but when.. what... his eyes widened. He realized what happened. The kid used Storm Jutsu. He thought he was out of the way as he was squeezing her neck but... it hit him.. the man calmed down and closed his eyes, dropping Androssi to the ground as she recovered a bit, clutching at her throat.
"Ahem... congratulations boy.. your team passes... you may return to your rooms now."

Two days passed and everybody recovered somewhat. They were all in a good enough condition so it was decided another test was to be had.

"We have lost a few others at this point.. now we are down to about 40 of you. Congratulations! You are the best of the best! Now we have one more test..."

He was cut off by the cheering of everybody. They all gave each other high fives. Even though Team A lost, they were allowed to continue on.

"Settle down.. this next test will be your final test until graduation... then you will all be working for us, continuing to be put on tests. Now back on topic. For this test you must complete a maze. Each person is issued a partner and at random times they will all be put out into a large, self changing maze. It is impossible to map out. That means even for those that are scouts, it'll be difficult to journey through. Now.. for the pairings.

Androssi Zahard, Hatsu Strider.
Izachi Nara, Setsu Aburame
Ryuuichi Oosugi, Utsuro Kaguya
...

Now that everybody knows their partners, we will also release them in the same orde as announced. First off, team Androssi and Hatsu will go. After 5 minutes Izachi and Setsu, another 5 Ryuuichi and Utsuro, then onwards. The higher score goes to whoever exits first with the best time. Then the score decreases the longer it takes you... alright! Good luck to everybody!"

It's been 10 minutes... finally the green light was given for them to run into the maze. The 20 meter tall bushes around them seemed to really be alive.. maybe he wasn't lying about the maze changing on its own. Two minutes in and things seemed hopeless.

"This maze is impossible!... you've been quiet for a while Utsuro.. is everything okay?"
Ryuuichi turned around and smiled at him, only for his eyes to go wide and instead have an expression of shock. The Kaguya placed his hand on Ryuuichi's chest while charging forwards and let a bone shoot out of his palm and dig itself into Ryuuichi while pushing him backwards into the bush. The wall then wrapped around his arms and legs and began sucking him in.

"Goodbye... Santaru..."

What? Santaru? Why? What? What is he doing.. what is happening, why is this happening? It hurts... Izachi? Hatsu? ... Androssi?....

Everything faded to black.

Two hours later

"And the test is over! The first place winners are Androssi and Hatsu! Second..."

As the announcer droned on Androssi looked around.
"Hey.. where's that boy Ryuu at? He didn't die did he? I actually was beginning to think he was pretty cute..."
Androssi pouted for a moment.

Hatsu sighed and shook his head
"Geez he's probably around her somewhere.. his spirit is unbeatable...."

Izachi rolled his eyes.
"Did you really think he'd die? No way.. Ryuuichi isn't that bad. He's somewhat decent. Besides there's something... special about him."

"Attention trainees... Ryuuichi Oosugi is dead. His body is nowhere to be found within the maze and as such is considered dead."

It was silent...

"Ah rise and shine.... God..."

As Ryuuichi opened his eyes, he saw his former trainer, the one who taught him some more Ninjutsu. He had on a black button up and had on some dark tan pants.

"Where..."
As he looked around it seemed like some kind of cave.. it was dark and the candles on the walls only provided so much light.

"Congratulations Ryuu... you've been chosen. You have been chosen to fulfill our wishes, and become our God.. you are now to begin your training.. two years. With your talent, you should become incredibly strong in that amount of time. We'll train you and you'll do our bidding, whether it be killing... or even a massacre."
He began to grow a sinister smirk.

Ryuuichi however, had a look of horror.
"Wh-What I... No.. you can't make me do this! I don't want to!"

"Oh.. then I guess you won't mind if we kill all of your friends right now? Perhaps if you do as we say... we won't kill them... every time you mess up. Every mission you screw up, we kill one of your friends.. one by one, until they all die."

He bit his lip and just stared at him.

"Awww don't give me that look. Come on, let me teach you some real ninjutsu, and don't just think it'll stop there. We're gonna teach you everything. Ninjutsu, genjutsu, Taijutsu. We're gonna teach you how to strategize, how to effectively scout, how to fight multiple opponents, how to fight just one. You'll be an all purpose Shinobi.. you'll become our God, and fulfill all of our wishes... We are The Organization, and you are now a Slayer Nominee. Slayers are for killing, and killing is one of the things we'll have you do. "

One year

"You... you really are a monster... Ryuu of Org...."
The voice faded away as the man passed out. Ryuuichi remained silent as he looked at the unconscious man. Killing intent.. he didn't have any. He wouldn't kill anybody.. but he seemed close enough to dead. Ryuuichi sighed and progressed back to The Organizations headquarters. It didn't really take long. When he returned a familiar face greeted him.

"Ahhh Slayer Nominee Ryuuichi. Your training has been going along nicely.. seems you're finally perfecting what I've taught you so far.. now it's time for something else. Walk with me and let's talk.."

Ryuuichi did as he was told silently. The hallway seemed to go on forever, but it didn't matter.

"Alright.. so we're gonna give you massive amounts of strength really fast. Of course there's a risk, but that's why we waited so long. Also, id like to congratulate you on your progress. You've learned Storm Jutsu excellently from a year ago. Of course this wouldn't be possible without your Santaru blood. By now it's confirmed you're a Santaru. That's perfect. This is exactly why we need you for this. We've been looking for a Santaru this whole time. This is why we're in Cloud anyway, since this is where Santaru generally are be.. you're a Santaru and you have something special... though not just your storm Jutsu but even lightning and water Jutsu are exceptional.. your parents must have been something... anyway let's continue. "

Ryuuichi remained silent. Just what could it be that would make him stronger? ... it didn't matter... as long as he had the strength to protect his friends and overcome The Organization.. nothing mattered.

Two Years

"This next Mission is for real.. you can't screw this up... you are to infiltrate the Leaf Village as a Genin.. so far you have only fought those of the Genin level, even a couple Chuunin.. but that was only at the peak of your power! You are to go in as somebody who just graduated the Academy.. make friends with them.. become one of them.. but remember, they are all to be disposed of, so don't become attached. The Organization won't be able to watch you there, but you'll know the signal when you see it.."

Ryuuichi nodded and turned to head out.

"Ah, wait.. wear something more casual.. here."
The man tossed him some clothes.
"Get changed and head out. I'll see you later.. my God..."

Ryuuichi changed into a light blue short sleeve button up, a white T-shirt under, and a pair of tan pants. The shirt however was unbuttoned to reveal the white shirt underneath. With all the supplies he needed, he headed out towards the leaf village. On his forehead was a shiny leaf forehead protector.

Death/Retirement Thread: None
Old Profile: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=773&t=50460&p=243804#p243804
Old Training:https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=774&t=50462
Old Dojo:https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=775&t=50461

Special Usergroups: Leaf, Cloud.

Old Stats: Agility: 175/300
Stamina: 175/300
Taijutsu: 124/300
Ninjutsu: 153/300
Genjutsu: 101/300
Chakra Control: 175/300
PL: 903
Old OOC Rank: B-Rank
Stat Cut: 20%
New Stats:
Agility: 150/175
Stamina: 150/175
Taijutsu: 100/175
Ninjutsu: 100/175
Genjutsu: 100/175
Chakra Control: 123/175
PL: 723

E rank - 20 minimum in each stat
D rank - 40 minimum in each stat
C rank - 70 minimum in each stat
B rank - 120 minimum in each stat
A rank - 210 minimum in each stat
S rank - 240 minimum in each stat

New OOC Rank: C-Rank

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:
KEEP
E-Rank
Storm Bolt - Master
Thunderfist - Master
Transformation - Master

D-Rank
Cancel - Master

B-Rank
Chidori - Master
(Can I keep it but not use it till B rank?)

Refunds:
E-Rank
Overhead strike - Rank 1
Dynamic slash - Rank 1
Slash - Rank 1
Thermal Maw - Master
Infernal Ember - Master
Eye-Strain - Rank 1

D-Rank
Fireball - Master

C-Rank
Gravitational Pull - Master
Gravity distortion - Master

Gravity Advanced Ninjutsu

Get:
Storm (free from Santaru)

D-Rank
4-hit combo - Master

C-Rank
Shielding Tempest - Master
Fissure Slash - Master
Waterfall - Master

Other Refunds: Ninjutsu Composition Augment.

Name of any Contract you currently own: Nah
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: Nah
Name of Kinjutsu you own: Nope. I'll have one later though

 

[Seijin]

Character's Mental Description and Multiple Personality Application, can I get about 50ish more words in both? I see what you're trying to do but at least 100 words will give a better picture as far as more detail if at all possible.

I'm also sending word to Cloud to look at this concerning this "Organization" so that it doesn't look like we're trumping up charges unduly against their Village/Country.

 

[Uchiha Arata]

Character's Mental Description:
Ryuuichi used to be very energetic and cheerful, but since his fall from innocence, he has changed. More often he is quiet and more tentative, but that doesn't mean he's lost his playful side. Since being in the lead village it is proof he is still his naive self. He is an optimistic person who has no trace of killing intent. It really takes a lot to get him angry. Though the only thing that would really phase him would be the loss of his friends or them in danger. He is the type of person to give up his own life for his friends and hates to see anybody die whether that be friend or foe.

Multiple Personality Application:
When working for The Organization he has to be a different person, somebody cold and ruthless. Somebody not afraid to kill, though parts of his personality still leak through at times that influence his personality. However he is generally silent, he rarely speaks and only follows his orders as exact as he can. Ryuuichi likes to be alone when doing any missions for The Organization. That isn't necessarily him being cold, though it seems like it is, but really he knows he'll have to kill any teammates he gets during a mission. However what really is getting to him is the fact he has to make friends for his current mission...

Also want to clarify that The Organization isn't necessarily from Cloud. It's just currently residing by it, and it isn't even Cloud itself, really just the land of lightning. It's only there for a Santaru. If anything it can be from the land of fire

 

[Kagetsu Yuii]

We still control the land of lightning. Near or far, our Country is fairly well established setting wise. Would you like a map?.

This time, our discomfort is the fact that you've created a loose 'organisation' that is meant to be based, or have had dealings in our village/country without any details as to their motivation, connections and so on (beyond being their pet murderer). How did this group manage to steal one of our shinobi right from under our noses, for instance? You will need a LOT more detail before we're willing to approve it, or your other option is once again to use another place for your group's/plots basing.(as you said, fire country would be fine) I suggest a write up about them, either way, but if you cut the group's connection with lightning, it stops being our concern.

 

[Uchiha Arata]

So I changed it up a bit. All I did was add two paragraphs before the "One Year" timeskip. It explains their goals, the type of people there, and how they were able to get the children. I got rid of anything that had to do with cloud and had land of lightning instead. Which is still within your jurisdiction of course, but now it's about the smaller less noticeable towns.



"You...you...you..." They pointed their fingers, like one would choose cattle or merchandise. It was as if they were picking pieces of candy out of a bucket they they thought looked nice. Finally the finger was pointed at him, it passed by. The voice drone on. He picked some and skipped others. Lined up were 9-12 year old boys and girls. Didn't matter race, gender, height, weight, or family. Hell almost everybody was chosen. About 200 kids were selected or of 270or so. The man with the clipboard handed it to another man. Both had black robes on and had their hoods up, it was hard to distinguish their features.

The non selected people were sent off, however for some reason, it seemed as if he was forgotten. He wasn't chosen, but he was still here. Did they make a mistake? It seems as if they didn't care though. Instead the man who previously had the clipboard spoke up.
"You have all been selected for a special kind of training. All of you have been hand selected because we believe you all have the potential to be the next leaders of the world! Now you will all go to the changing rooms and get ready for a test. "

There were two rooms, for the boys and for the girls. Ryuuichi of course followed the rest of the boys and changed into the attire that was given to them. Each of them had the same attire, almost like a uniform. This consisted of a black long sleeved short and black pants: over the shirt was a gray vest. After everybody changed the headed out into what seemed to be a one man elevator. Everybody got into one and was randomly brought up to a room. Well room wasn't the right word. The area seemed as if thy were out in an open plains area with a lot of hills and trees scattered around. The area was easily 5 kilometers, however around it were invisible walls that prevented escape. As they came up, the elevator emerged from the ground and when they stepped out, it descended again and in it's place was a patch of grassy floor.

A booming voice was heard amongst everybody that was scattered around. If sounded as if somebody was using a microphone to talk to them.
"Since there are 200 of you here, your first test is to cut the number in half. The first test will end when 100 of you remain. Good luck."

With that, the tests began. For most it took them a few moments to understand what was happening. Others however instantly knew it was a battle to the death. The boys and girls began attacking each other. Using everything in their Arsenal to kill the others and do whatever they could to survive.

Ryuuichi was under the shade of a large tree. Nobody seemed to be around him so things seemed safe, at least for now. Though what seemed to be doesn't necessarily mean it's truth. From behind somebody put a knife to his back.
"Ah.. you seem to be new to this sort of thing...."

Why was that boy just standing there? Did he not hear him? We are supposed to kill each other... or does he think he's safe? Izachi sighed and shook his head. This would be an easy picking but... maybe he should at least give him a chance? After all, he had been trying to gather teammates since the remaining 100 would pass and most likely be put on teams.

The Nara decided to then to go up behind him and put the knife to his back.
"Ah.. you seem to be new to this sort of thing."
He smiled as the boy took a step forward and quickly turned around.

The pointy thing at his back was a kunai. Ryuuichi took a step forward and pivoted to face him. He saw a boy with clean and sharp, obviously well kept, black hair. He had earrings which Ryuuichi found rather strange.
"You didn't kill me.. but you had the perfect opportunity to..."

"I've had the perfect opportunity for a while now. But I've decided to be generous. How about we team up? By this point... it seems about 120 or so people are left so how about we call a truce and team up."

Ryuuichi had no choice but to accept his offer. He didn't know too many Jutsu nor was he that great at Taijutsu. It was obvious he was at a disadvantage and wouldn't win even in the best of circumstances.
"Alright.. let's team up.. Mr......."

"Nara Izachi."

"Oosugi Ryuuichi."

After a few more moments the voice returned.
"Stop! Seize fighting. There are now only 100 remaining. Everybody come to the center platform for further instructions. No killing, no fighting."

There wasn't much of a choice. It was time to continue on with the tests. It didn't take long for everybody to reach the center platform that rose from the ground. Momentarily, it dropped down once more. Now they seemed to be inside a large complex. But once again, there was a man. However he wore a white trenchcoat and had blonde hair. He had a smile on his face and seemed rather confident.
"Congratulations for passing the first test. It went faster than expected. Next off we will be teaching you all how to be better ninja. This means we are putting you into classes based on your strengths. Now here are the classes.

Strategists.. Izachi Nara, Hime Fuuchika, Arale Yudo, Hiro Kaminaki...
Genjutsu users.. Hado satsuma, Yamasaki Hademiro, yoro takitsuchi, Ikari Uchiha...
Taijutsu.. Hatsu Strider, Utsuro Kaguya, Anatsu Fei, Harada Akimichi
Ninjutsu.. Ryuuichi Oosugi, Laurie Getsuchu, Setsu Aburame...
And this next is for a... special position
Androssi Zahard, Anaak Zahard, and Evan Khun.

Now that you all know your classes, go to your assigned teacher. In four weeks we will have another test. I expect to see you all there."
The man then exited as the trainee's went to their assigned teacher.

"Ninjutsu huh... alright! This should be fun. I can meet a lot of new people here!"
Ryuuichi grinned and went into the classroom. He wasn't the last nor the first, but there were plenty of people, around 20 or so. They all waited a bit for class to begin when the teacher turned to face them. He was rather tall, though of course since they were all under 13. He had a dark brown hair color in a very simple style. It wasn't very styled, if anything it looked as if he just woke up, but it wasn't very messy either. It looked rather natural, unlike Mr. Izachi's hair.

"Alright class.. you are all going to learn some simple ninjutsu and those with potential will learn some advanced ninjutsu. I'm sure you all already know the most basic ones so let's get straight into it. Let's try something called Storm Jutsu. I doubt any of you will be able to do this, but let's find out if anybody has potential. After this we will step it down a notch to D rank Jutsu."

As one after another went up t try it, nobody succeeded. There were three people remaining, him included. Ryuuichi's name was called and he stood nervously. It was clear he didn't know what he was doing but he went up and did as he was told. He made the proper hand seals and stuck his hands out. Unlike everybody else, a beam of energy shot out, though weak.
"Ah very good... Mr. Ryuuichi was it? Excellent. However we are all going to work on some D rank Jutsu..."

The four weeks went by quickly, but by the end of it the whole class had improved. Ryuuichi was the 7th highest ranked in his class. His abilities were sub par but he wasn't terrible, he had potential. Especially since he learned so quickly. Everybody met up once more. Once more the man in the white trench coat with blonde hair appeared.
"Well.. it seems the four weeks have passed and you are all ready for the next test. You will all be split into teams. Of course if you haven't noticed, half of you are gone. Those deemed not good enough were sent off, so we have enough people for two teams since there are 60 of you. The teams are the following.

Team A: Anaak Zahard, Laurie Getsuchu, Evan Khun, Hime Fuuchika, Arale Yudo, Hado satsuma, Setsu Aburame, Utsuro Kaguya...

Team B: Androssi Zahard, Izachi Nara, Ikari Uchiha, Ryuuichi Oosugi, Hatsu Strider, Yoro Takitsuchi, Harada Akimichi...

Now with these teams I'll now explain the game. Each team will take a turn at fighting... me! It'll be like a game of tag. I'll have this pin here in my hand pinned onto my shirt. Each of you will have one as well. The Goal is to land one strike against it. Once a strike connects it'll turn from red to green."
The man then demonstrated by poking it with a bit of force.
" Now, team A will go first. Try not to die..."

Team A was sent back to the large outdoor "room" once more along with the man. As they began their test, Team B had time to socialize. Ryuuichi sat himself down next to Izachi.
"So... do you actually think we can win? This guy is like.. A rank? No.. maybe even S rank?"

Izachi just smirked and looked at Ryuuichi with a look of confidence.
"This'll be a win as long as everybody follows my plan."

Izachi gave Ryuuichi a smile before it got rather quiet. It seemed as if most of the guys if not all of them turned their attention to Androssi Zahard who had just entered the room. Saying she was beautiful was an understatement. She already captivated nearly every man in the room.
"Ah.. plan? Well I already have one. We're going to split the team up. This is how our team will be split up.

Team Ba: Izachi Nara, Hatsu Strider, Harada Akimichi....

Team Bb: Androssi Zahard, Ryuuichi Oosugi, Ikari Uchiha.

Team B is obviously smaller but that's for a reason. This team is for an Ambush. Team A will be for a main assault on him to distract him. He never said where you had to put the pin so it could be anywhere on him. Team A will try to draw out his abilities and what he can do, also the location of the pin. While distracted, Team B will jump in for an ambush and take him down."
She smiled at her plan as the rest of the guys agreed with it. Izachi however seemed disappointed.

"Hey hey, Team A is getting destroyed!"
The guy next to Ryuuichi spoke. It was Hatsu. This made everybody look towards the screen before them which showed the battle, however it was a rather poor viewing experience.

Ryuuichi then noticed the katana.. katana's, two, that Hatsu had.
"Ah so you're a swordsman then!"
Hatsu then looked over at Ryuuichi and smiled.

"Yeah I am Strider... I go by Hatsu though. Indeed I am a swordsman though! I live and die by the sword!"

"Woah that's actually pretty cool Mr. Hatsu! Where did you learn from?"

"Most of what I know I learned from my father, but I did pick up a couple things from the class, but not too much. I'm the top seed in my class."

"You're the top seed? That's awesome! I'm only ranked seventh."

"That's nothing to worry about! I'm sure you'll do great if you just believe in yourself!"
Hatsu smiled at Ryuuichi. Hatsu had dark black hair and had black eyes as well.

Another voice cut into the conversation though.
"Of course you'll do fine. I did make a perfect plan so don't leave me out of this. Androssi Zahard, top seed."
She gave the both of them a smile. She had brown hair that went down to her shoulders. She really was worthy of all the fawning and the looks she got from the guys.

"Team A, fail! Team B please come out!"

"Well this is it guys!"
Ryuuichi grinned at his teammates as he stood up. He was happy and proud. Over the last four weeks he had learned a lot and wouldn't let it go to waste, he didn't want the new friends he made to fail now.

"Ryuu... Ryuu..! Ryuu!!"
He snapped to it from the sound of Androssi's voice.
"Huh? What? Sorry is was out of it for a moment..."

"Geez focus Ryuu! We're in the middle of our test. From what we found out it seems half of Team Ba has been taken down..."
She motioned about 200 meters away where the action was happening. Nobody seemed to take a hit on him yet and everybody had gone down in one hit except for a few others. Currently Yoro just got man handled so Hatsu quickly stepped in. Unlike the rest, Hatsu was able to attack and defend at the same time. Both were surprisingly going head to head for a while, exchanging blows and dodging at the same time. It was captivating how beautiful it was.

"So Ryuu, Ikari come here, I have the plan.."
When Ikari got closer, Androssi covered her hand in chakra and thrusted it through his stomach, impaling him. She kept her hand inside him for a few moments and watched Ikari's face of confused. He was helpless, like a bird who's wings got clipped and was now prey. Androssi dropped the body and smirked at Ryuuichi.
"So it seems you have a lot of potential Ryuu~ The trainers were all impressed at how quickly you were developing... you have a real talent, some even call you a monster... many are jealous..."

By this point the man kneed Hatsu's arm upwards and grabbed his face, then picking him up and slamming him down against the ground. A huge crater formed and his body was stuck there. However he was already unconscious from the strike.
"You're pretty good Hatsu.. you have no need to fear passing. I give you a passing mark now.. nobody has done as good as you today. Though isn't your team a little.. short handed?"

Izachi looked worried but kept it cool.
"No.. you've beaten nearly everybody. The only people left are right here!"

"You head that Ryuu~ they need their backup to come...."
Ryuuichi was frozen in place, metaphorically of course. She just killed him.. just who was she?
"Ahh I see... you just be wondering why I killed him? Well let me tell you something. People need to be stepped on in order for another to gain strength. He was a potential enemy in the future. Ikari was actually pretty strong.. I mean, didn't you wonder what happened to Harada? Dead. But Ryuu... you're special.. you're a monster but.... you're weak!"

Androssi grinned before walking towards the blonde man.
"Consider yourself lucky Ryuuichi... I'll be seeing you."

The man had just finished off defeating everybody else of team Ba except for a few stragglers. Everything seemed hopeless but.. why did Androssi seem so confident?

"So there you are Androssi... I was wondering where you were."
He gave her a smile.

"Oh I was just waiting for you to finally finish these guys off.. you play with them too much."
She gave a smirk and opened up her vest to show a flash of red.

"And yours?"
The blonde man then lifted his shirt up a bit to reveal the red pin on his hip

"Right here Androssi.."

She smirked and charged him, beginning with a high kick and then spinning vertically as it was dodged to deliver an axe kick, which was successfully blocked but the sound could be heard by everybody just from contact. It was obvious Androssi was strong, most likely the strongest person here..

Ryuuichi watched in awe. Just what was this.. what was she? This wasn't her real personality... he just knew it.. maybe she was doing this to protect them? Maybe there was something she was hiding.... he couldn't just sit here forever though, Ryuuichi ran out to help. Of the bodies he saw Hatsu and even some of the higher ranked Ninjutsu specialists. That just showed he had to sue some strong ninjutsu to actually be effective.

Androssi backed up but got struck right where her pin supposedly was.. but there was no green.
"What.. is there a problem with the pin? It didn't turn green why is it-"

His eyes widened. She smirked. She lied to him. She probably just showed his something else that was red when she flashed it to him. There was no time to see if it was actually the pin. The blonde man began to get angry and he gave a reverse kick to his abdomen and sent her back a bit.
"You're very foolish for being such a big wig here... or did you just underestimate us?"

Androssi grinned and went back at the attack then, but the man simply smiled and stood in place until the last second.
"Enough games..."

Killing intent, even more than what Androssi showed earlier.. this was heavy, thick, almost like wading through thigh high swamp except it's everywhere. It was getting hard to breath... this wasn't the time to stop though. However that moment was all the man needed to grab Androssi's neck, he was crushing it, applying pressure just a bit more and it'd snap... tighter... tighter.... and-

With a flash of light, two words were announced.

"Fight over!"

Ryuuichi stood panting a bit, he did it...

The blonde man looked down and noticed his pin was green.. but when.. what... his eyes widened. He realized what happened. The kid used Storm Jutsu. He thought he was out of the way as he was squeezing her neck but... it hit him.. the man calmed down and closed his eyes, dropping Androssi to the ground as she recovered a bit, clutching at her throat.
"Ahem... congratulations boy.. your team passes... you may return to your rooms now."

Two days passed and everybody recovered somewhat. They were all in a good enough condition so it was decided another test was to be had.

"We have lost a few others at this point.. now we are down to about 40 of you. Congratulations! You are the best of the best! Now we have one more test..."

He was cut off by the cheering of everybody. They all gave each other high fives. Even though Team A lost, they were allowed to continue on.

"Settle down.. this next test will be your final test until graduation... then you will all be working for us, continuing to be put on tests. Now back on topic. For this test you must complete a maze. Each person is issued a partner and at random times they will all be put out into a large, self changing maze. It is impossible to map out. That means even for those that are scouts, it'll be difficult to journey through. Now.. for the pairings.

Androssi Zahard, Hatsu Strider.
Izachi Nara, Setsu Aburame
Ryuuichi Oosugi, Utsuro Kaguya
...

Now that everybody knows their partners, we will also release them in the same orde as announced. First off, team Androssi and Hatsu will go. After 5 minutes Izachi and Setsu, another 5 Ryuuichi and Utsuro, then onwards. The higher score goes to whoever exits first with the best time. Then the score decreases the longer it takes you... alright! Good luck to everybody!"

It's been 10 minutes... finally the green light was given for them to run into the maze. The 20 meter tall bushes around them seemed to really be alive.. maybe he wasn't lying about the maze changing on its own. Two minutes in and things seemed hopeless.

"This maze is impossible!... you've been quiet for a while Utsuro.. is everything okay?"
Ryuuichi turned around and smiled at him, only for his eyes to go wide and instead have an expression of shock. The Kaguya placed his hand on Ryuuichi's chest while charging forwards and let a bone shoot out of his palm and dig itself into Ryuuichi while pushing him backwards into the bush. The wall then wrapped around his arms and legs and began sucking him in.

"Goodbye... Santaru..."

What? Santaru? Why? What? What is he doing.. what is happening, why is this happening? It hurts... Izachi? Hatsu? ... Androssi?....

Everything faded to black.

Two hours later

"And the test is over! The first place winners are Androssi and Hatsu! Second..."

As the announcer droned on Androssi looked around.
"Hey.. where's that boy Ryuu at? He didn't die did he? I actually was beginning to think he was pretty cute..."
Androssi pouted for a moment.

Hatsu sighed and shook his head
"Geez he's probably around her somewhere.. his spirit is unbeatable...."

Izachi rolled his eyes.
"Did you really think he'd die? No way.. Ryuuichi isn't that bad. He's somewhat decent. Besides there's something... special about him."

"Attention trainees... Ryuuichi Oosugi is dead. His body is nowhere to be found within the maze and as such is considered dead."

It was silent...

"Ah rise and shine.... God..."

As Ryuuichi opened his eyes, he saw his former trainer, the one who taught him some more Ninjutsu. He had on a black button up and had on some dark tan pants.

"Where..."
As he looked around it seemed like some kind of cave.. it was dark and the candles on the walls only provided so much light.

"Congratulations Ryuu... you've been chosen. You have been chosen to fulfill our wishes, and become our God.. you are now to begin your training.. two years. With your talent, you should become incredibly strong in that amount of time. We'll train you and you'll do our bidding, whether it be killing... or even a massacre."
He began to grow a sinister smirk.

Ryuuichi however, had a look of horror.
"Wh-What I... No.. you can't make me do this! I don't want to!"

"Oh.. then I guess you won't mind if we kill all of your friends right now? Perhaps if you do as we say... we won't kill them... every time you mess up. Every mission you screw up, we kill one of your friends.. one by one, until they all die."

He bit his lip and just stared at him.

"Awww don't give me that look. Come on, let me teach you some real ninjutsu, and don't just think it'll stop there. We're gonna teach you everything. Ninjutsu, genjutsu, Taijutsu. We're gonna teach you how to strategize, how to effectively scout, how to fight multiple opponents, how to fight just one. You'll be an all purpose Shinobi.. you'll become our God, and fulfill all of our wishes... We are The Organization, and you are now a Slayer Nominee. Slayers are for killing, and killing is one of the things we'll have you do. "

Just what exactly was this organization? This organization is based upon those who are stepped on, oppressed by those with power. The Organization was made up of people who hate upon others with power. Their goal? Their goal is simply to exterminate all of those with power and authority. That meant killing the kage and sennin. But they couldn't just simply come out and ask for people's help to go kill kage. They had to remain low profile, have a cover up. Their cover was a rather simple one. Recruit young children with potential to join a small militia for private training before being sent to the Cloud Village. Of course going into the main Village of Cloud would be a no since they wouldn't be able to get anybody there. But what about other towns that weren't watched as much? By gathering children from small towns in the Land of Lightning, they were able to come up with a large group and then bring them to the border of the land of fire where they would begin the selection.

Why would any parent want to give up their child for some militia? Money. The Organization was rather wealthy and offered up sums of money to those that agreed to give them their children... however those that accepted would eventually meet an untimely death, an assassination. Of course it wasn't an obvious killing. Poisoning, anything that made it seem like an accident. But with the children taken, all that was left would be to test them all to find what they needed amongst the group after fleeing the land of lightning and setting up in the land of fire.

One year

"You... you really are a monster... Ryuu of Org...."
The voice faded away as the man passed out. Ryuuichi remained silent as he looked at the unconscious man. Killing intent.. he didn't have any. He wouldn't kill anybody.. but he seemed close enough to dead. Ryuuichi sighed and progressed back to The Organizations headquarters. It didn't really take long. When he returned a familiar face greeted him.

"Ahhh Slayer Nominee Ryuuichi. Your training has been going along nicely.. seems you're finally perfecting what I've taught you so far.. now it's time for something else. Walk with me and let's talk.."

Ryuuichi did as he was told silently. The hallway seemed to go on forever, but it didn't matter.

"Alright.. so we're gonna give you massive amounts of strength really fast. Of course there's a risk, but that's why we waited so long. Also, id like to congratulate you on your progress. You've learned Storm Jutsu excellently from a year ago. Of course this wouldn't be possible without your Santaru blood. By now it's confirmed you're a Santaru. That's perfect. This is exactly why we need you for this. We've been looking for a Santaru this whole time. This is why we searched the land of lightning, since this is where Santaru generally are are.. you're a Santaru and you have something special... though not just your storm Jutsu but even lightning and water Jutsu are exceptional.. your parents must have been something... anyway let's continue. We have something for you.. something that'll increase your strength rapidly!"

Ryuuichi remained silent. What was it that would make him strong? Strong enough to overcome The Organization?.. if it makes him stronger, it's worth it so he can protect his friends and overcome the Organization.

Two Years

"This next Mission is for real.. you can't screw this up... you are to infiltrate the Leaf Village as a Genin.. so far you have only fought those of the Genin level, even a couple Chuunin.. but that was only at the peak of your power! You are to go in as somebody who just graduated the Academy.. make friends with them.. become one of them.. but remember, they are all to be disposed of, so don't become attached. The Organization won't be able to watch you there, but you'll know the signal when you see it.."

Ryuuichi nodded and turned to head out.

"Ah, wait.. wear something more casual.. here."
The man tossed him some clothes.
"Get changed and head out. I'll see you later.. my God..."

Ryuuichi was thought dead to everybody, his existence erased except for a false one planted into the Academy database for him to have proof of graduating from it. Everybody would believe he was just an average Genin in the Leaf Village who was born in a town in the outskirts of the Fire country.

Ryuuichi changed into a light blue short sleeve button up, a white T-shirt under, and a pair of tan pants. The shirt however was unbuttoned to reveal the white shirt underneath. With all the supplies he needed, he headed out towards the leaf village. On his forehead was a shiny leaf forehead protector.

 

[Kagetsu Yuii]

This is acceptable. *stamps*

For paper trail: https://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=76&t=51237&p=250631#p250631

 

[Shinobu]

Spoiler

So I changed it up a bit. All I did was add two paragraphs before the "One Year" timeskip. It explains their goals, the type of people there, and how they were able to get the children. I got rid of anything that had to do with cloud and had land of lightning instead. Which is still within your jurisdiction of course, but now it's about the smaller less noticeable towns.



"You...you...you..." They pointed their fingers, like one would choose cattle or merchandise. It was as if they were picking pieces of candy out of a bucket they they thought looked nice. Finally the finger was pointed at him, it passed by. The voice drone on. He picked some and skipped others. Lined up were 9-12 year old boys and girls. Didn't matter race, gender, height, weight, or family. Hell almost everybody was chosen. About 200 kids were selected or of 270or so. The man with the clipboard handed it to another man. Both had black robes on and had their hoods up, it was hard to distinguish their features.

The non selected people were sent off, however for some reason, it seemed as if he was forgotten. He wasn't chosen, but he was still here. Did they make a mistake? It seems as if they didn't care though. Instead the man who previously had the clipboard spoke up.
"You have all been selected for a special kind of training. All of you have been hand selected because we believe you all have the potential to be the next leaders of the world! Now you will all go to the changing rooms and get ready for a test. "

There were two rooms, for the boys and for the girls. Ryuuichi of course followed the rest of the boys and changed into the attire that was given to them. Each of them had the same attire, almost like a uniform. This consisted of a black long sleeved short and black pants: over the shirt was a gray vest. After everybody changed the headed out into what seemed to be a one man elevator. Everybody got into one and was randomly brought up to a room. Well room wasn't the right word. The area seemed as if thy were out in an open plains area with a lot of hills and trees scattered around. The area was easily 5 kilometers, however around it were invisible walls that prevented escape. As they came up, the elevator emerged from the ground and when they stepped out, it descended again and in it's place was a patch of grassy floor.

A booming voice was heard amongst everybody that was scattered around. If sounded as if somebody was using a microphone to talk to them.
"Since there are 200 of you here, your first test is to cut the number in half. The first test will end when 100 of you remain. Good luck."

With that, the tests began. For most it took them a few moments to understand what was happening. Others however instantly knew it was a battle to the death. The boys and girls began attacking each other. Using everything in their Arsenal to kill the others and do whatever they could to survive.

Ryuuichi was under the shade of a large tree. Nobody seemed to be around him so things seemed safe, at least for now. Though what seemed to be doesn't necessarily mean it's truth. From behind somebody put a knife to his back.
"Ah.. you seem to be new to this sort of thing...."

Why was that boy just standing there? Did he not hear him? We are supposed to kill each other... or does he think he's safe? Izachi sighed and shook his head. This would be an easy picking but... maybe he should at least give him a chance? After all, he had been trying to gather teammates since the remaining 100 would pass and most likely be put on teams.

The Nara decided to then to go up behind him and put the knife to his back.
"Ah.. you seem to be new to this sort of thing."
He smiled as the boy took a step forward and quickly turned around.

The pointy thing at his back was a kunai. Ryuuichi took a step forward and pivoted to face him. He saw a boy with clean and sharp, obviously well kept, black hair. He had earrings which Ryuuichi found rather strange.
"You didn't kill me.. but you had the perfect opportunity to..."

"I've had the perfect opportunity for a while now. But I've decided to be generous. How about we team up? By this point... it seems about 120 or so people are left so how about we call a truce and team up."

Ryuuichi had no choice but to accept his offer. He didn't know too many Jutsu nor was he that great at Taijutsu. It was obvious he was at a disadvantage and wouldn't win even in the best of circumstances.
"Alright.. let's team up.. Mr......."

"Nara Izachi."

"Oosugi Ryuuichi."

After a few more moments the voice returned.
"Stop! Seize fighting. There are now only 100 remaining. Everybody come to the center platform for further instructions. No killing, no fighting."

There wasn't much of a choice. It was time to continue on with the tests. It didn't take long for everybody to reach the center platform that rose from the ground. Momentarily, it dropped down once more. Now they seemed to be inside a large complex. But once again, there was a man. However he wore a white trenchcoat and had blonde hair. He had a smile on his face and seemed rather confident.
"Congratulations for passing the first test. It went faster than expected. Next off we will be teaching you all how to be better ninja. This means we are putting you into classes based on your strengths. Now here are the classes.

Strategists.. Izachi Nara, Hime Fuuchika, Arale Yudo, Hiro Kaminaki...
Genjutsu users.. Hado satsuma, Yamasaki Hademiro, yoro takitsuchi, Ikari Uchiha...
Taijutsu.. Hatsu Strider, Utsuro Kaguya, Anatsu Fei, Harada Akimichi
Ninjutsu.. Ryuuichi Oosugi, Laurie Getsuchu, Setsu Aburame...
And this next is for a... special position
Androssi Zahard, Anaak Zahard, and Evan Khun.

Now that you all know your classes, go to your assigned teacher. In four weeks we will have another test. I expect to see you all there."
The man then exited as the trainee's went to their assigned teacher.

"Ninjutsu huh... alright! This should be fun. I can meet a lot of new people here!"
Ryuuichi grinned and went into the classroom. He wasn't the last nor the first, but there were plenty of people, around 20 or so. They all waited a bit for class to begin when the teacher turned to face them. He was rather tall, though of course since they were all under 13. He had a dark brown hair color in a very simple style. It wasn't very styled, if anything it looked as if he just woke up, but it wasn't very messy either. It looked rather natural, unlike Mr. Izachi's hair.

"Alright class.. you are all going to learn some simple ninjutsu and those with potential will learn some advanced ninjutsu. I'm sure you all already know the most basic ones so let's get straight into it. Let's try something called Storm Jutsu. I doubt any of you will be able to do this, but let's find out if anybody has potential. After this we will step it down a notch to D rank Jutsu."

As one after another went up t try it, nobody succeeded. There were three people remaining, him included. Ryuuichi's name was called and he stood nervously. It was clear he didn't know what he was doing but he went up and did as he was told. He made the proper hand seals and stuck his hands out. Unlike everybody else, a beam of energy shot out, though weak.
"Ah very good... Mr. Ryuuichi was it? Excellent. However we are all going to work on some D rank Jutsu..."

The four weeks went by quickly, but by the end of it the whole class had improved. Ryuuichi was the 7th highest ranked in his class. His abilities were sub par but he wasn't terrible, he had potential. Especially since he learned so quickly. Everybody met up once more. Once more the man in the white trench coat with blonde hair appeared.
"Well.. it seems the four weeks have passed and you are all ready for the next test. You will all be split into teams. Of course if you haven't noticed, half of you are gone. Those deemed not good enough were sent off, so we have enough people for two teams since there are 60 of you. The teams are the following.

Team A: Anaak Zahard, Laurie Getsuchu, Evan Khun, Hime Fuuchika, Arale Yudo, Hado satsuma, Setsu Aburame, Utsuro Kaguya...

Team B: Androssi Zahard, Izachi Nara, Ikari Uchiha, Ryuuichi Oosugi, Hatsu Strider, Yoro Takitsuchi, Harada Akimichi...

Now with these teams I'll now explain the game. Each team will take a turn at fighting... me! It'll be like a game of tag. I'll have this pin here in my hand pinned onto my shirt. Each of you will have one as well. The Goal is to land one strike against it. Once a strike connects it'll turn from red to green."
The man then demonstrated by poking it with a bit of force.
" Now, team A will go first. Try not to die..."

Team A was sent back to the large outdoor "room" once more along with the man. As they began their test, Team B had time to socialize. Ryuuichi sat himself down next to Izachi.
"So... do you actually think we can win? This guy is like.. A rank? No.. maybe even S rank?"

Izachi just smirked and looked at Ryuuichi with a look of confidence.
"This'll be a win as long as everybody follows my plan."

Izachi gave Ryuuichi a smile before it got rather quiet. It seemed as if most of the guys if not all of them turned their attention to Androssi Zahard who had just entered the room. Saying she was beautiful was an understatement. She already captivated nearly every man in the room.
"Ah.. plan? Well I already have one. We're going to split the team up. This is how our team will be split up.

Team Ba: Izachi Nara, Hatsu Strider, Harada Akimichi....

Team Bb: Androssi Zahard, Ryuuichi Oosugi, Ikari Uchiha.

Team B is obviously smaller but that's for a reason. This team is for an Ambush. Team A will be for a main assault on him to distract him. He never said where you had to put the pin so it could be anywhere on him. Team A will try to draw out his abilities and what he can do, also the location of the pin. While distracted, Team B will jump in for an ambush and take him down."
She smiled at her plan as the rest of the guys agreed with it. Izachi however seemed disappointed.

"Hey hey, Team A is getting destroyed!"
The guy next to Ryuuichi spoke. It was Hatsu. This made everybody look towards the screen before them which showed the battle, however it was a rather poor viewing experience.

Ryuuichi then noticed the katana.. katana's, two, that Hatsu had.
"Ah so you're a swordsman then!"
Hatsu then looked over at Ryuuichi and smiled.

"Yeah I am Strider... I go by Hatsu though. Indeed I am a swordsman though! I live and die by the sword!"

"Woah that's actually pretty cool Mr. Hatsu! Where did you learn from?"

"Most of what I know I learned from my father, but I did pick up a couple things from the class, but not too much. I'm the top seed in my class."

"You're the top seed? That's awesome! I'm only ranked seventh."

"That's nothing to worry about! I'm sure you'll do great if you just believe in yourself!"
Hatsu smiled at Ryuuichi. Hatsu had dark black hair and had black eyes as well.

Another voice cut into the conversation though.
"Of course you'll do fine. I did make a perfect plan so don't leave me out of this. Androssi Zahard, top seed."
She gave the both of them a smile. She had brown hair that went down to her shoulders. She really was worthy of all the fawning and the looks she got from the guys.

"Team A, fail! Team B please come out!"

"Well this is it guys!"
Ryuuichi grinned at his teammates as he stood up. He was happy and proud. Over the last four weeks he had learned a lot and wouldn't let it go to waste, he didn't want the new friends he made to fail now.

"Ryuu... Ryuu..! Ryuu!!"
He snapped to it from the sound of Androssi's voice.
"Huh? What? Sorry is was out of it for a moment..."

"Geez focus Ryuu! We're in the middle of our test. From what we found out it seems half of Team Ba has been taken down..."
She motioned about 200 meters away where the action was happening. Nobody seemed to take a hit on him yet and everybody had gone down in one hit except for a few others. Currently Yoro just got man handled so Hatsu quickly stepped in. Unlike the rest, Hatsu was able to attack and defend at the same time. Both were surprisingly going head to head for a while, exchanging blows and dodging at the same time. It was captivating how beautiful it was.

"So Ryuu, Ikari come here, I have the plan.."
When Ikari got closer, Androssi covered her hand in chakra and thrusted it through his stomach, impaling him. She kept her hand inside him for a few moments and watched Ikari's face of confused. He was helpless, like a bird who's wings got clipped and was now prey. Androssi dropped the body and smirked at Ryuuichi.
"So it seems you have a lot of potential Ryuu~ The trainers were all impressed at how quickly you were developing... you have a real talent, some even call you a monster... many are jealous..."

By this point the man kneed Hatsu's arm upwards and grabbed his face, then picking him up and slamming him down against the ground. A huge crater formed and his body was stuck there. However he was already unconscious from the strike.
"You're pretty good Hatsu.. you have no need to fear passing. I give you a passing mark now.. nobody has done as good as you today. Though isn't your team a little.. short handed?"

Izachi looked worried but kept it cool.
"No.. you've beaten nearly everybody. The only people left are right here!"

"You head that Ryuu~ they need their backup to come...."
Ryuuichi was frozen in place, metaphorically of course. She just killed him.. just who was she?
"Ahh I see... you just be wondering why I killed him? Well let me tell you something. People need to be stepped on in order for another to gain strength. He was a potential enemy in the future. Ikari was actually pretty strong.. I mean, didn't you wonder what happened to Harada? Dead. But Ryuu... you're special.. you're a monster but.... you're weak!"

Androssi grinned before walking towards the blonde man.
"Consider yourself lucky Ryuuichi... I'll be seeing you."

The man had just finished off defeating everybody else of team Ba except for a few stragglers. Everything seemed hopeless but.. why did Androssi seem so confident?

"So there you are Androssi... I was wondering where you were."
He gave her a smile.

"Oh I was just waiting for you to finally finish these guys off.. you play with them too much."
She gave a smirk and opened up her vest to show a flash of red.

"And yours?"
The blonde man then lifted his shirt up a bit to reveal the red pin on his hip

"Right here Androssi.."

She smirked and charged him, beginning with a high kick and then spinning vertically as it was dodged to deliver an axe kick, which was successfully blocked but the sound could be heard by everybody just from contact. It was obvious Androssi was strong, most likely the strongest person here..

Ryuuichi watched in awe. Just what was this.. what was she? This wasn't her real personality... he just knew it.. maybe she was doing this to protect them? Maybe there was something she was hiding.... he couldn't just sit here forever though, Ryuuichi ran out to help. Of the bodies he saw Hatsu and even some of the higher ranked Ninjutsu specialists. That just showed he had to sue some strong ninjutsu to actually be effective.

Androssi backed up but got struck right where her pin supposedly was.. but there was no green.
"What.. is there a problem with the pin? It didn't turn green why is it-"

His eyes widened. She smirked. She lied to him. She probably just showed his something else that was red when she flashed it to him. There was no time to see if it was actually the pin. The blonde man began to get angry and he gave a reverse kick to his abdomen and sent her back a bit.
"You're very foolish for being such a big wig here... or did you just underestimate us?"

Androssi grinned and went back at the attack then, but the man simply smiled and stood in place until the last second.
"Enough games..."

Killing intent, even more than what Androssi showed earlier.. this was heavy, thick, almost like wading through thigh high swamp except it's everywhere. It was getting hard to breath... this wasn't the time to stop though. However that moment was all the man needed to grab Androssi's neck, he was crushing it, applying pressure just a bit more and it'd snap... tighter... tighter.... and-

With a flash of light, two words were announced.

"Fight over!"

Ryuuichi stood panting a bit, he did it...

The blonde man looked down and noticed his pin was green.. but when.. what... his eyes widened. He realized what happened. The kid used Storm Jutsu. He thought he was out of the way as he was squeezing her neck but... it hit him.. the man calmed down and closed his eyes, dropping Androssi to the ground as she recovered a bit, clutching at her throat.
"Ahem... congratulations boy.. your team passes... you may return to your rooms now."

Two days passed and everybody recovered somewhat. They were all in a good enough condition so it was decided another test was to be had.

"We have lost a few others at this point.. now we are down to about 40 of you. Congratulations! You are the best of the best! Now we have one more test..."

He was cut off by the cheering of everybody. They all gave each other high fives. Even though Team A lost, they were allowed to continue on.

"Settle down.. this next test will be your final test until graduation... then you will all be working for us, continuing to be put on tests. Now back on topic. For this test you must complete a maze. Each person is issued a partner and at random times they will all be put out into a large, self changing maze. It is impossible to map out. That means even for those that are scouts, it'll be difficult to journey through. Now.. for the pairings.

Androssi Zahard, Hatsu Strider.
Izachi Nara, Setsu Aburame
Ryuuichi Oosugi, Utsuro Kaguya
...

Now that everybody knows their partners, we will also release them in the same orde as announced. First off, team Androssi and Hatsu will go. After 5 minutes Izachi and Setsu, another 5 Ryuuichi and Utsuro, then onwards. The higher score goes to whoever exits first with the best time. Then the score decreases the longer it takes you... alright! Good luck to everybody!"

It's been 10 minutes... finally the green light was given for them to run into the maze. The 20 meter tall bushes around them seemed to really be alive.. maybe he wasn't lying about the maze changing on its own. Two minutes in and things seemed hopeless.

"This maze is impossible!... you've been quiet for a while Utsuro.. is everything okay?"
Ryuuichi turned around and smiled at him, only for his eyes to go wide and instead have an expression of shock. The Kaguya placed his hand on Ryuuichi's chest while charging forwards and let a bone shoot out of his palm and dig itself into Ryuuichi while pushing him backwards into the bush. The wall then wrapped around his arms and legs and began sucking him in.

"Goodbye... Santaru..."

What? Santaru? Why? What? What is he doing.. what is happening, why is this happening? It hurts... Izachi? Hatsu? ... Androssi?....

Everything faded to black.

Two hours later

"And the test is over! The first place winners are Androssi and Hatsu! Second..."

As the announcer droned on Androssi looked around.
"Hey.. where's that boy Ryuu at? He didn't die did he? I actually was beginning to think he was pretty cute..."
Androssi pouted for a moment.

Hatsu sighed and shook his head
"Geez he's probably around her somewhere.. his spirit is unbeatable...."

Izachi rolled his eyes.
"Did you really think he'd die? No way.. Ryuuichi isn't that bad. He's somewhat decent. Besides there's something... special about him."

"Attention trainees... Ryuuichi Oosugi is dead. His body is nowhere to be found within the maze and as such is considered dead."

It was silent...

"Ah rise and shine.... God..."

As Ryuuichi opened his eyes, he saw his former trainer, the one who taught him some more Ninjutsu. He had on a black button up and had on some dark tan pants.

"Where..."
As he looked around it seemed like some kind of cave.. it was dark and the candles on the walls only provided so much light.

"Congratulations Ryuu... you've been chosen. You have been chosen to fulfill our wishes, and become our God.. you are now to begin your training.. two years. With your talent, you should become incredibly strong in that amount of time. We'll train you and you'll do our bidding, whether it be killing... or even a massacre."
He began to grow a sinister smirk.

Ryuuichi however, had a look of horror.
"Wh-What I... No.. you can't make me do this! I don't want to!"

"Oh.. then I guess you won't mind if we kill all of your friends right now? Perhaps if you do as we say... we won't kill them... every time you mess up. Every mission you screw up, we kill one of your friends.. one by one, until they all die."

He bit his lip and just stared at him.

"Awww don't give me that look. Come on, let me teach you some real ninjutsu, and don't just think it'll stop there. We're gonna teach you everything. Ninjutsu, genjutsu, Taijutsu. We're gonna teach you how to strategize, how to effectively scout, how to fight multiple opponents, how to fight just one. You'll be an all purpose Shinobi.. you'll become our God, and fulfill all of our wishes... We are The Organization, and you are now a Slayer Nominee. Slayers are for killing, and killing is one of the things we'll have you do. "

Just what exactly was this organization? This organization is based upon those who are stepped on, oppressed by those with power. The Organization was made up of people who hate upon others with power. Their goal? Their goal is simply to exterminate all of those with power and authority. That meant killing the kage and sennin. But they couldn't just simply come out and ask for people's help to go kill kage. They had to remain low profile, have a cover up. Their cover was a rather simple one. Recruit young children with potential to join a small militia for private training before being sent to the Cloud Village. Of course going into the main Village of Cloud would be a no since they wouldn't be able to get anybody there. But what about other towns that weren't watched as much? By gathering children from small towns in the Land of Lightning, they were able to come up with a large group and then bring them to the border of the land of fire where they would begin the selection.

Why would any parent want to give up their child for some militia? Money. The Organization was rather wealthy and offered up sums of money to those that agreed to give them their children... however those that accepted would eventually meet an untimely death, an assassination. Of course it wasn't an obvious killing. Poisoning, anything that made it seem like an accident. But with the children taken, all that was left would be to test them all to find what they needed amongst the group after fleeing the land of lightning and setting up in the land of fire.

One year

"You... you really are a monster... Ryuu of Org...."
The voice faded away as the man passed out. Ryuuichi remained silent as he looked at the unconscious man. Killing intent.. he didn't have any. He wouldn't kill anybody.. but he seemed close enough to dead. Ryuuichi sighed and progressed back to The Organizations headquarters. It didn't really take long. When he returned a familiar face greeted him.

"Ahhh Slayer Nominee Ryuuichi. Your training has been going along nicely.. seems you're finally perfecting what I've taught you so far.. now it's time for something else. Walk with me and let's talk.."

Ryuuichi did as he was told silently. The hallway seemed to go on forever, but it didn't matter.

"Alright.. so we're gonna give you massive amounts of strength really fast. Of course there's a risk, but that's why we waited so long. Also, id like to congratulate you on your progress. You've learned Storm Jutsu excellently from a year ago. Of course this wouldn't be possible without your Santaru blood. By now it's confirmed you're a Santaru. That's perfect. This is exactly why we need you for this. We've been looking for a Santaru this whole time. This is why we searched the land of lightning, since this is where Santaru generally are are.. you're a Santaru and you have something special... though not just your storm Jutsu but even lightning and water Jutsu are exceptional.. your parents must have been something... anyway let's continue. We have something for you.. something that'll increase your strength rapidly!"

Ryuuichi remained silent. What was it that would make him strong? Strong enough to overcome The Organization?.. if it makes him stronger, it's worth it so he can protect his friends and overcome the Organization.

Two Years

"This next Mission is for real.. you can't screw this up... you are to infiltrate the Leaf Village as a Genin.. so far you have only fought those of the Genin level, even a couple Chuunin.. but that was only at the peak of your power! You are to go in as somebody who just graduated the Academy.. make friends with them.. become one of them.. but remember, they are all to be disposed of, so don't become attached. The Organization won't be able to watch you there, but you'll know the signal when you see it.."

Ryuuichi nodded and turned to head out.

"Ah, wait.. wear something more casual.. here."
The man tossed him some clothes.
"Get changed and head out. I'll see you later.. my God..."

Ryuuichi was thought dead to everybody, his existence erased except for a false one planted into the Academy database for him to have proof of graduating from it. Everybody would believe he was just an average Genin in the Leaf Village who was born in a town in the outskirts of the Fire country.

Ryuuichi changed into a light blue short sleeve button up, a white T-shirt under, and a pair of tan pants. The shirt however was unbuttoned to reveal the white shirt underneath. With all the supplies he needed, he headed out towards the leaf village. On his forehead was a shiny leaf forehead protector.

Approved new history with Cloud stamp.
Just need Umashi to approve the edits he asked for and you will be good to go.

Swap Calculations

Jutsu Mastery Swaps:
KEEP
E-Rank
Storm Bolt - Master
Thunderfist - Master
Transformation - Master

D-Rank
Cancel - Master

B-Rank
Chidori - Master
(Can I keep it but not use it till B rank?)

Refunds:
E-Rank
Overhead strike - Rank 1
Dynamic slash - Rank 1
Slash - Rank 1
Thermal Maw - Master
Infernal Ember - Master
Eye-Strain - Rank 1

D-Rank
Fireball - Master

C-Rank
Gravitational Pull - Master
Gravity distortion - Master

Gravity Advanced Ninjutsu

Get:
Storm (free from Santaru)

D-Rank
4-hit combo - Master

C-Rank
Shielding Tempest - Master
Fissure Slash - Master
Waterfall - Master

Other Refunds: Ninjutsu Composition Augment.

I doubled checked and you may not keep the B Rank.

Selling 6xE (2700 and 12ASP), 1xD (1250 and 8ASP), 2xC (6500 and 20ASP) 1xAugment (2400) 1xB (7500 and 12ASP) Total 20,350 and 52 ASP
Buying 1xD (1250 and 8ASP), 3xC (9750 and 30ASP) Total = 11,000 and 38ASP
Total Refund amount is 9350 and 14ASP

 

[Uchiha Arata]

So since the K'Gaiden event ended, Sora gained 40 stat points and 10k yen. So with the -25% Ryuuichi has 707 PL and I must edit my stats once more.

So just take -16 from Chakra Control. This leaves me at 107/175 for Chakra Control

 

[Seijin]

Use your mission rewards in your next training since the rewards were given out after you started this OCR. You shouldn't be penalized for me simply posting late.

Other than that, you're approved. I've modded your yen with your refunds from your OCR. Request a name and banner change from the admin request area.

 

[Tao]

Papertrail:
Name changed to Oosugi Ryuuichi
Banner changed to leaf genin
Removed from the cloud usergroup