Zenichi -> Zethui Kobayashi

[Zethui Kobayashi]

Old Character Name: Zenichi
Old Village/Missing: Missing
OCR Type: Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: I don't remember
Old IC Rank: S-rank

New Character Name: Zethui Kobayashi
Preferred Username: Zethui Kobayashi
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New BL/CA: Seikon
Custom Class:

[u]Unbroken[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (65+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (35+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +2 Accuracy and Dodge
[i]High:[/i] Melee Accuracy
[i]Average:[/i] All others
[i]Low:[/i] Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Med-nin
IC Rank: Jounin

Character Age: 28
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description:

​

Zethui is a seasoned veteran and his body shows it. His arm was ripped off by an overzealous ANBU during his AiT exam. His torso has been sliced and shredded from years of training and fighting. Many of his scars could have been avoided if he wore a shirt occasionally. He wore long hair for a long time but after a small mishap with a Kaiton user, he was forced to shop it all off. His emerald green eyes have always been clear and cold.

Character's Mental Description: Zethui originated in the ANBU corps. Years of harsh training and cruel unorthodox mentors he has become shut off from the world emotionally. He would have been a captain of black ops if Leaf had not fallen. It took several years of wandering the world for him to feel the need for human interaction. His travels had brought him to Cloud and he found himself unable to continue the dark life of a ANBU crony. In hopes of finding more of his humanity, he found his way into the medical corps.

Multiple Personality Application: none

Character History: Zethui was born and raised in Konohagakure. He fought and bled for a dying nation. When Leaf fell, he was blindsided by its demise. He had lived in the shadows of ANBU and didn’t know how to live in the light. Even after having his arm cut off by a ANBU captain, he was dedicated to living in the shadows. The darkness was deep within his heart and allowed him to kill without remorse. When the walls fell in Leaf, Zethui continued to hide in the shadows but couldn’t find consistent work. Soon, he found himself living off the land as a traveling vagrant. Being kicked out village after village became routine. In the winter, he traveled south, in the summer he traveled east. It was only after several years of solitude that he realized that he wanted to be with others like him, ninjas. He had heard of a village that was nearby called Cloud and he decided to make his way there. [/i]

Clan Request: None

Death/Retirement Thread: viewtopic.php?f=574&t=42767
Old Profile: viewtopic.php?f=486&t=40153
Old Training: viewforum.php?f=487
Old Dojo: viewtopic.php?f=488&t=40155&start=30
Old FAQ: viewtopic.php?f=554&t=5443

Special Usergroups:

Old Stats: Capped
Old OOC Rank: S-rank
Stat Cut: None
New Stats: Capped
New OOC Rank: S-rank

Justu Mastery Swaps: None

Name of any Contract you currently own: Youkai viewtopic.php?f=271&t=9575
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: Astral (given by Kazuki), Lunar: Given by Self), Gaia (given by Kuro)
Name of Kinjutsu you own: Chimera - viewtopic.php?f=489&t=40476

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads? None

Note: I am unretiring Zethui and he had a Lunar Seal. Kuro gave it to me in the Chuunin Exams in the Toraono Dojo when Leaf and Suna held joint exams there.

 

[Shinrya Kitsune]

For admins curious about the contract, when the thread itself was unfinished: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=187998#p187998 This thread has all the explanation needed.

For others. *Puts on Contract Boss hat.* He has the contract. Mkay? Mkay. *Takes hat off again, nods, and walks back out for now.*

 

[Kogami Ayumu]

Name: Approved
BL/CA: Not approved. There is no mention of this at all in your history.
Class: Approved
IC Rank: Unsure of what rank you are asking for. Your IC rank says Jounin, your branch says Med-nin, your history says he was formerly ANBU. Please clarify.
Physical Description: Approved
Mental Description: Approved, though it may change based on history
History: This is a bit lacking and could use some more fleshing out. Origin in Leaf will require Stone Council's approval once complete. Needs to include how Seikon related to the character and their experience with it. Also, whatever rank you are asking for, you should include something about how your character reached that rank in a new village.
Stats: Approved, S-rank and capped.
Current ASP: 765 (retrieved from most recent training)
Jutsu Swaps: N/A - see below
Cursed Seals, Contracts, Kinjutsu: Just as a note, none of these items carry over to a new character, but the Contract may be carried over for 300 ASP or swapped for 450 during OCR.



Assuming you are keeping the same jutsus from Zenichi, here is the jutsu list from Zenichi's old profile for papertrailing:
Jutsu

Spoiler

Stone Bullet (M)
Gravel Shift (M)

Earth Flow River (M)
Sinkhole Fist (M)
Mud Clone (M)

Inner Earth Reflection Lure (M)
Earth Flow Wave (M)
Rock Golem (M)
Earth Coating (M)

Bedrock Coffin (M)
Weighted Rock Technique (M)
Earth Spiker (M)
Antilion Sinkhole (M)

Fist of Gaia(M)
Earthen Magnitude(M)
Earthslide Wall(M)
Petrification(M)

Infernal Ember (M)
Thermal Maw (M)

Fireball (M)
Immolation Armor (M)
Combustive Seal (M)

Dragon Fire (M)
Searing Eruption (M)
Scalding Ash Cloud (M)
Heat Wave (M)

Infernal Hellfire (M)
Firestorm (M)
Spontaneous Combustion (M)
Ring of Fire (M)

Dragon Flame Bomb (M)
Sol Fire Tempest (M)
Abysmal Harbinger (M)
Flame Shield (M)

Storm Bolt (M)
Thunderfist (M)

Thunderclap (M)
Electroshock (M)
Electrocution (M)

Zeus Flash (M)
Lightning Torrent (M)
Thunderstruck (M)
Volt Charge (M)

Gigavolt Cannon (M)
Chidori (M)
Lightning Beast (M)
Amp Field(M)

Raijin's Revenge (M)
Chidori Control (M)
Thunder Dome (M)
Kirin(M)

Pressurized Mist (M)
Water Gun (M)

Water Whip (M)
Aqua Fang (M)
Rinse Off (M)

Grand Waterfall (M)
Impaling Hydro Jet (M)
Water Prison (M)
Rain Dance (M)

Torrential Vortex (M)
Hydro Tidal Shockwave (M)
Water Shark Bomb (M)
Mystical Pond (M)

Grand Hydra Excavation (M)
Water Dragon Bullet (M)
Scorn of Aquarius (M)
Supreme Aqua Realm(M)

Wind Slash (M)
Pressure Burst (M)

Whirlwind Spin (M)
Air Bullet (M)
Shredding Touch (M)

Wind Scythe (M)
Tempest (M)
Gale Force (M)
Wind Release (M)

Great Wind Scythe (M)
Wind Scar (M)
Vacuum Sphere (M)
Cyclone Movement (M)

Tatsumaki (M)
Hurricane (M)
Ambience of the Forbidden (M)
Zephyr's Grace (M)

Hidden Mist(M)
Mist Ball(M)

White Mist(M)
Burning Mist(M)

Black Mist(M)

Topaz Tempest(M)
Ruby Rain(M)
Fluorite Spikes(M)

Burning Mist(M)

Transformation (M)
Body Switch (M)
Basic Summoning (M)

Combination Transformation (M)
Crystal Eye (M)
Cancel (M)
Spirit Lantern (M)
Contract Summoning (M)

Jutsu Sealing (M)
Stunt Double (M)
One Elemental Sealing (M)
Elemental Negation (M)
Elemental Clone (M)
Barrier (M)

Chakra Blast (M)
Rasengan (M)

Perfected Rasengan (M)
Nature's Guard (M)

Toxic Channeling (M)
Poison Extraction (M)

Toxic Curse (M)
Venom Strike(M)

Corrupted Mist (M)
Touch of the Accursed(M)

Black Eruption (M)
Spectre Shade (M)
Dark Displacement (M)

Ebony Nightmare (M)

Shadow Summoning(M)
Shadow Garb(M)
Darkness Falls(M)
Absolute Void(M)

Landmine (M)
Big Bang Bullet (M)
Blast Wave (M)

Minefield (M)

Meteor Aura(M)

Acid Rain (M)
Weapon Corrosion (M)

Acid Clone (M)
Acidic Sweat (M)

Hearthburn Disorder(M)
Lure of the Flytrap(M)

Mystical Hand (M)
Coagulation (M)

System Shock (M)
Skeletal Fortification (M)
Anesthetic Infusion (M)
System Restoration (M)

Medical Ward(M)

Regeneration(M)
Pristine Aura(M)

 

[Zethui Kobayashi]

Zethui's cursed seal doesn't carry over to his rebirth even though I spent several weeks training in obtaining it and ranking it up? This is not a new character, it is one I played for almost 2 years. He was my first character and I played him until he was a Special Jounin. He was a Leaf ninja, would he still need approval?

I'll work on the history, thanks for the pointers.

 

[Kogami Ayumu]

Unfortunately, as Zethui was a character on the last site, records of what cursed seals he may have had are lost. I understand that he isn't a new character as I wouldn't consider any of my former character from before the hack new either. However, since this is a new version / site and the history of the world and all villages except Cloud has changed dramatically, for the purposes of OCR characters from the previous site are considered new and their histories must be worked to fit into the new setting. Because Stone Council currently "owns" Leaf (as in, anything regarding Leaf must be run by them first) they have to approve any history that uses Leaf. Sorry for the inconvenience, but I can't bypass that. If you have any more questions let me know.

By the way, just a note moving forward: please post any changes you make in new posts rather than editing the old one. It speeds up the OCR process because otherwise we'd have to double check what was edited in the previous posts.

 

[Zethui Kobayashi]

Old Character Name: Zenichi
Old Village/Missing: Missing
OCR Type: Retire
Last Known Where-abouts: I don't remember
Old IC Rank: S-rank

New Character Name: Zethui Kobayashi
Preferred Username: Zethui Kobayashi
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New BL/CA: Seikon
Custom Class:

[u]Unbroken[/u]
[b]HP:[/b] (65+lvl) x stamina
[b]CP:[/b] (35+lvl) x chakra control
Class Bonus: +2 Accuracy and Dodge
[i]High:[/i] Melee Accuracy
[i]Average:[/i] All others
[i]Low:[/i] Puppet Accuracy and Genjutsu Difficulty

Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Med-nin
IC Rank: MiT

Character Age: 28
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Character's Physical Description:

​

Zethui is a seasoned veteran and his body shows it. His arm was ripped off by an overzealous ANBU during his AiT exam. His torso has been sliced and shredded from years of training and fighting. Many of his scars could have been avoided if he wore a shirt occasionally. He wore long hair for a long time but after a small mishap with a Kaiton user, he was forced to shop it all off. His emerald green eyes have always been clear and cold.

Character's Mental Description: Zethui originated in the ANBU corps. Years of harsh training and cruel unorthodox mentors he has become shut off from the world emotionally. He would have been a captain of black ops if Leaf had not fallen. It took several years of wandering the world for him to feel the need for human interaction. His travels had brought him to Cloud and he found himself unable to continue the dark life of a ANBU crony. In hopes of finding more of his humanity, he found his way into the medical corps.

Multiple Personality Application: none

Character History: Zethui was born and raised in Konohagakure. He fought and bled for a dying nation. When Leaf fell, he was blindsided by its demise. He had lived in the shadows of ANBU and didn’t know how to live in the light. Even after having his arm cut off by a ANBU captain, he was dedicated to living in the shadows. The darkness was deep within his heart and allowed him to kill without remorse. When the walls fell in Leaf, Zethui continued to hide in the shadows but couldn’t find consistent work. Soon, he found himself living off the land as a traveling vagrant. Being kicked out village after village became routine. In the winter, he traveled south, in the summer he traveled east. It was only after several years of solitude that he realized that he wanted to be with others like him, ninjas. He had heard of a village that was nearby called Cloud and he decided to make his way there.

As he entered the village, he was met with apprehension. He had the eyes of a killer and the personality to match. He secretly longed to join back into a familiar military style unit like the anbu corps but knew he was an outsider. Instead, he moved towards helping in the hospitals and medical centers. He has been slow to learn the finer art of healing but it has given him a sense of wholeness and well being.


Bloodline History: At one time, Zethui was a powerful Rikido Sannin who utilized the power of the Rinnegan. He wore several bodies at if there were extensions of himself. Each path has a purpose and a value. Zethui was able to find power in new ways. As his understanding of how bloodlines and other natural talents gained their power, he was able to expand his abilities. Soon, he would find a quicken thirst for more knowledge could not be quenched. Paths and bodies soon started to stack up and Zethui's core became thinner and thinner. SImilar to how Kage no Bushin spreads one's chakra evenly over dozens of clones, Zethui's mind was stread thin across countless paths. He felt that he was within arms reach of learning how to unlock a hidden power that could change the world.

In a very diluted mental state, he was able to make a single cognitive thought, to release the Almighty Harbringer. This beast from hell consumed every path, merging each sliver conciousness with itself. Each body was stripped of Zethui's power and the Rinnegan. As each tainted morsel of self flodded back to Zethui, he felt a thousands screams in his head. He wished for death each second and was thrilled at the rush in between. As the Harbinger spit out the last path, it would grab Zethui's original body and move to consume the consolidated being. The last thing Zethui would remember was the smell of sulfer as it was dropped into its mouth.

Some unknown time later, Zethui woke up in a field. His eyes hurt as if seeing light was new to him. His mind was on fire and his body ached. A small village was nearby and his stomach told him that he was in dire need of substance. Each step was a hurdle but he pushed on very slowly. In an effort to ignore his body's aches, he fantasized about the Ramen in the nearby town. The last meal he had ate was at a little hole in the wall place and he could imagine himself there as if was still there.

You going to order something buddy, or just stand there?

After a second to aclimate his surroundings, he realized that he was at the ramen shop.


Death/Retirement Thread: viewtopic.php?f=574&t=42767
Old Profile: viewtopic.php?f=486&t=40153
Old Training: viewforum.php?f=487
Old Dojo: viewtopic.php?f=488&t=40155&start=30
Old FAQ: viewtopic.php?f=554&t=5443

Special Usergroups:

Old Stats: Capped
Old OOC Rank: S-rank
Stat Cut: None
New Stats: Capped
New OOC Rank: S-rank

Justu Mastery Swaps: None

Name of any Contract you currently own: Youkai viewtopic.php?f=271&t=9575
Name of any Cursed Seals you currently own: Astral (given by Kazuki), Lunar: Given by Self), Gaia (given by Kuro)
Name of Kinjutsu you own: Chimera - viewtopic.php?f=489&t=40476

Still actively roleplaying in any other threads? None

Note: I am unretiring Zethui and he had a Lunar Seal. Kuro gave it to me in the Chuunin Exams in the Toraono Dojo when Leaf and Suna held joint exams there.

Does that include the 500 ASP that was refunded back to me? I would check but I can't see any of my old trainings or profiles.

 

[Toraono Kuro]

I can vouch for any seals given if necessary... just let me know if anyone has any questions

 

[Kouin]

Ok. I've gone through multiple thread, OCRs, trainings to derive a proper amount, and I feel a bit of a mathematical error has occured.

Redirect One: Old OCR
Redirect Two: Kin Removal Refund

There it is stated that you had 645 due to spending 500 on a Kin removal card. That was then refunded back to you bring you to 1145 ASP. Then, your last training in Stone Land:

Koba Training

Stats: Capped 1130 ACP
+ 3 weeks Limbo Training
+ 1 week training

=1190acp
-425 Points-Re-Birth Card
765acp

For four weeks of training you should net +140, not +60, also you should've had +15 starting total also.

So, taking this all into consideration 1145(starting amount)+140(4 weeks of training) = 1285-425(Rebirth Card(Didn't get a refund asfaik)) = 860 is your new ASP balance. Now I'm human, so I might be wrong, so if you have any questions or concerns, please PM me and I'll get back to you ASAP. Now as you have been waiting god knows how long, let us continue shall we?


Name: Approved
BL/CA: This seems more geared towards starting a Kinjutsu Removal App. You suddenly lost your link to a majority of paths, and then reappeared in the Ramen Shop; if you could outline a bit more of the seikon's abilities in use that would be splendid. So I'll +0 it, and if the second councilor +1s I'll go with that grade.
Class: Approved
IC Rank: Consider the Med Sennin paged
Physical Description: Approved
Mental Description: Approved
History: Since this is an unretirement, I don't think we need to hassle Stone Council? If not I'll try to not cut any corners. It's a little bare, but I believe that's mostly because you developed Zethui mainly through IC encounter, and arent stating it all here, which fine, but questions are raised. Why was his arm cut off? Did he ever get a prosthetic? All these things add more depth to your history. Some simple elaboration in key areas would be wonderful.
Stats: Approved, S-rank and capped.
Current ASP: 860 (See above)
Jutsu Swaps: N/A
Cursed Seals, Contracts, Kinjutsu: So you get the Youkai, and Kuro if it isn't too much could you PM me links to the Curse Sealings if it isn't too much; if not I'll just do more digging. Once I get the verification their that's approved and squared.

 

[Zethui Kobayashi]

The Youkai contract is associated with Zenichi, not Zethui. Zethui never had a contract

Kuro will not be able to link you giving me the cursed seal since it was fine on the old site almost 6 years ago

 

[Kouin]

Mk. Well you can still transfer over the contract using ASP if you wish. And his testament should suffice i think.

 

[Shinrya Kahako]

Medical sennin here! I approve of the MiT rank. No specializations will be applied.

 

[Shinrya Kitsune]

*Rolls back in, wearing Contract Boss hat* Transfer of contract is tree, without the fiddy. ASP, that is. Not dollars. - Also requires a writeup of how you obtained the contract.

 

[Shimatsu Shigeru]

So this looks like everything is alright except for a right up about the contract, if that's what you even want. I'd like to get this moved along and finished.

We should be able to take kuros word about the cursed seals. So as long as admin is fine with that we are.

Bloodline: Approved, looks good to me, and my previous councilor stated he would defer to the next, so that is a +2 for that.

Everything else is approved from me as well.

So contract write up or not, and I'll get an admin to look at this.

 

[Keiji]

Bang, zoom, straight to the moon.
(All done)

Don't forget to change avatar in accordingly with the avatar rules.
I.e please change it to your currently active primary character.