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Chigokai Momoko [Cloud] > Chigokai Yuka [Cloud]

Wed May 16, 2018 3:50 pm

Old Character Name: Chigokai Momoko
Old Village/Missing: Cloud
OCR Type: Inactivity Rebirth
Last Known Where-abouts: Unsure, dont have access,
Old IC Rank: Genin

New Character Name: Chigokai Yuka
Preferred Username: Chigokai Yuka
New Village/Missing: Cloud
New BL/CA: Chigokai
Main Branch/ANBU/Med-Nin: Main Branch
IC Rank: Genin
Character Age: 15
Gender: female
Sex: female
Character's Physical Description: Yuka is, for all intents and purposes, albino. She has long, snowy white hair, reaching almost to the small of her back. The locks are imperfectly straight, a few waves here and there, with tight curls at the base of her neck. Her eyes are a blood red that stand out even more against her pale skin. Yuka is very frail and small, looking much younger than she actually is. She stands at a mere five foot one, weighing a meager ninety pounds, well below that of the average 15 year old. She doesn’t show as much emotion as her fellow genin but is not completely dead of expression. Her weak appearance gives her an edge against her enemies as they find her to not be as formidable of a foe, but in reality, she is quite strong and her structure gives her the agility that her teammates lack.

Character's Mental Description: Yuka is quite disturbed, mentally. On the outside, she acts kind and bit distanced, pretty quiet around those she doesn’t know well. But inside her head, she is filled with turmoil. Having to listen all her life the sound of other’s blood pumping in their veins has practically drove her insane, much like someone who has hallucinations. She hates being in large crowds because of this and frequently would choose to stay home rather than go out with her family. She never did get a handle on the sounds as much as her siblings did, despite being older, which has caused a bit of disappointment from her mother. The death of her father and consistently being feared as a child played a huge part in Yuka’s mentality as well. She’s afraid to get too close too anyone, thinking they will either run away is fear or somehow end up dead, whether by her own hands or someone else’s. Occasionally, she will have a breakdown. She tries her best to keep them in until she at and alone, though, where she can scream without further judgment.
Multiple Personality Application: N/A
Character History: Yuka grew up in a pretty traditional Chigokai household. Her mother ruled the roof and her father was pretty docile, taking care of chores like cooking, cleaning, and overall caring for the children. She has two younger siblings, a set of fraternal twins, Ami and Ari. Her father was her favorite person in the world. He was loving and admirable in the fact that he would do anything to protect his children. He would reassure her that she was not crazy, that she was a strong and powerful successor to their line of the Chigokai family. When she was still in the academy, her father grew very ill. He became weak and immobile, bedridden as he rode out the last days of his life. From there, her mother took over everything, but not very well and with much distaste. Yuka’s mother is a prime example of a Chigokai matriarch. From the day she was born, she would tell Yuka about how she would find the perfect boy and perfect family to marry off her first daughter to. She would tell her to embrace the violent thoughts Yuka had, that it made her fearful in the eyes of others and that the Chigokai’s needed to keep up this reputation of strength.
Throughout her time in the academy, Yuka was bullied. But not in the usual type where she was picked on or made fun of or pushed around. Instead, she was ignored, as the other students were scared of her. Her snowy white hair and deep crimson eyes were scary enough, but the realization of what clan she was from made everything worse. There were times when she would throw tantrums, as most children do, that even the sensei would flinch and cower behind his desk.
As she got older, Yuka began to accept the fact that no one would ever be anything but afraid of her. She embraced it even, as he mother so often told her to. She started yearning to learn the ways of her clan, wanting revenge on all that looked down on her. But there was still a part of her that wanted nothing but to be held, embraced, have a shoulder to cry on.
Clan Request: Chigokai

Death/Retirement Thread: N/A

Old Profile: Name: Chigokai Momoko

IC Rank: Genin

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Physical Description:
Momoko has long, silky red hair that she normally wears in side-set ponytail. She’ll braid her bangs back and pin them out of her face when she’s studying, training, or on missions. Her eyes are equally deep red and stand out against her smooth pale skin. Although her face is nearly flawless, her arms, hands, and fingers are covered in scars from practicing with her blood line trait. Momoko is very small for her age, in height and weight. She’s five foot even and weighing in at only 100 lbs.
Personality:
Momoko has a very conflicted mental state. She wants to prove that she’s not evil, as everyone seems to think she is because of her bloodline, but she also wants to do in those her wronged her. She’s very hot tempered and people in generally tend to irritate her. She seems to think that her abilities and skills are far greater than those around her and she is not afraid to voice this.


History:
From the moment she was born, Momoko was shunned from society. She was born into the Chigokai blood line and as such looked at as if she were the devil himself. Growing up, her parents kept her inside, at home, and away from all those that could hurt her. They knew that the people of the cloud would not be afraid to get physical with Momoko despite that the fact that she was still just a child. But Momoko was about to be cooped up all her life. She wanted to be a ninja, and a powerful one at that. So, after many tantrums, arguments, and attempted bribary to her parents, she was finally enrolled into the academy. School was not at all when Momoko was expecting though. On her first day of school, after her introduction, the classroom had gone quiet. Her parents had warned her not to share her family but Momoko felt no shame. She thought her family was powerful and strong. Her new classmates didn’t seem to share the thought. They avoided her at recess and lunch time, they would gather up and giggle and whisper when they thought she wasn’t looking. One boy even went as far as punch her until her nose bleed. He had screamed at her to use her bloodline trait, mocking and judegemental. The next day, a bandage and split secured around her broken nose, she walked up to the boy and punched him back. From then on, Momoko seemed to have no control over her temper. She lashed out at her teachers, yelled at classmates when she caught them whispering, and was involved in more than her fair share of physical fights. At this point, she had long discovered how to use the Chigokai trait but still did not have complete control over it. Neither of her parents had inherited it, and while her grandfather did, he had long ago passed when Momoko was still a baby. Now, she’s a fresh graduate from the academy. Finally she was out of that too small classroom and away from the crowds of judgment. All she wanted to do now, was get stronger and stronger. She wanted to use her strength to help people in any way she could. She wanted to redo the stigma behind the Chigokai bloodline, that they weren’t all evil. And she was determined to do it.
Bloodline/Core Ability: Chigokai

Character Class: Rookie

OOC Rank: E

Stats:
Agility: 30/50
Stamina: 30/50
Taijutsu:30/50
Ninjutsu: 50/50
Genjutsu: 33/50
Chakra Control: 50%/50%
Power Level: 223


Jutsu:
Infernal Ember (M)
False Surroundings (M)
Bloodlust (R1)
Release (R1)
Crimson Water (R1)
Thermal Maw (R1)

Old Training: viewtopic.php?f=79&t=53052&p=264704#p264704
Old Dojo: N/A
Special Usergroups: N/A
Old Stats: Agility: 30/50
Stamina: 30/50
Taijutsu:30/50
Ninjutsu: 50/50
Genjutsu: 33/50
Chakra Control: 50%/50%
Power Level: 223

Old OOC Rank: E
Stat Cut: N/A (As far as I know. Feel free to correct this)
New Stats: Agility: 30/50
Stamina: 30/50
Taijutsu:30/50
Ninjutsu: 50/50
Genjutsu: 33/50
Chakra Control: 50%/50%
Power Level: 223

New OOC Rank: E
Jutsu Mastery Swaps: Infernal Ember
False Surroundings
Keeping both.


(Im pretty sure I got everything. Let me know if I missed something, I'll be happy to fix it!)
Last edited by Chigokai Yuka on Fri May 18, 2018 9:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Chigokai Momoko [Cloud] > Chigokai Yuka [Cloud]

Thu May 17, 2018 8:05 pm

Character name, clan relations, rank, history, and stats/jutsu look all good to go. My only recommendation before proceeding is to at least make Yuka's physical and mental description a bit longer. I know there is no visible WC requirement in the OCR app, but usual character requirements (via Character Creation) usually require a combined total of 150 WC for both physical/mental description. Once that is edited and put in, post here and I'll take another look. Also, feel free to PM me with any questions or if you need help.
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Re: Chigokai Momoko [Cloud] > Chigokai Yuka [Cloud]

Thu May 17, 2018 9:02 pm

Yuka is, for all intents and purposes, albino. She has long, snowy white hair, reaching almost to the small of her back. The locks are imperfectly straight, a few waves here and there, with tight curls at the base of her neck. Her eyes are a blood red that stand out even more against her pale skin. Yuka is very frail and small, looking much younger than she actually is. She stands at a mere five foot one, weighing a meager ninety pounds, well below that of the average 15 year old. She doesn’t show as much emotion as her fellow genin but is not completely dead of expression. Her weak appearance gives her an edge against her enemies as they find her to not be as formidable of a foe, but in reality, she is quite strong and her structure gives her the agility that her teammates lack.

(sorry about that! I had intended to add more to it originally but I guess I just got distracted)
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Re: Chigokai Momoko [Cloud] > Chigokai Yuka [Cloud]

Thu May 17, 2018 9:08 pm

Yuka is quite disturbed, mentally. On the outside, she acts kind and bit distanced, pretty quiet around those she doesn’t know well. But inside her head, she is filled with turmoil. Having to listen all her life the sound of other’s blood pumping in their veins has practically drove her insane, much like someone who has hallucinations. She hates being in large crowds because of this and frequently would choose to stay home rather than go out with her family. She never did get a handle on the sounds as much as her siblings did, despite being older, which has caused a bit of disappointment from her mother. The death of her father and consistently being feared as a child played a huge part in Yuka’s mentality as well. She’s afraid to get too close too anyone, thinking they will either run away is fear or somehow end up dead, whether by her own hands or someone else’s. Occasionally, she will have a breakdown. She tries her best to keep them in until she at and alone, though, where she can scream without further judgment.

(here is the better mentality description.)
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Re: Chigokai Momoko [Cloud] > Chigokai Yuka [Cloud]

Fri May 18, 2018 6:31 am

Thankies! Make sure to edit those descriptions in your first post. Other than that, all that was mentioned above + your descriptions have my approval! Once you get one more approval from another Council member, you will be good to go!
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Re: Chigokai Momoko [Cloud] > Chigokai Yuka [Cloud]

Sun May 20, 2018 8:36 pm

The two councilor approval requirement has been met, so you are now good to go! Please link this thread when requesting your Name Change in Admin Request. Welcome back to Cloud!

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