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Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Ayeka ----> Mira OCR

Ayeka

Ayeka

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Old Character Name: Ayeka
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Rebirth from Inactivity
Last Known Where-abouts: Leaf
Old IC Rank: Head Jonin

New Character Name: Hyuuga Mira
Preferred Username: Mira
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Hyuuga
Kinjutsu: None


Name: Hyuuga Mira
Age: 10
Rank: Academy Student
Physical Description: Mira is of a smaller stature only coming to about four feet tall with raven locks cascading down her back in long sweeping tresses stopping at the back of her knees. Her figure was fairly normally in line with a child at her age though more on the lean and muscular side due to the training she has completed. Mira's eyes are deep sapphire blue only missing the pupil from the center due to her bloodline. Her skin is very pale much like most of the Hyuuga clan though her clothes are very different from her clan. Mira likes to wear a black and white dress with purple trim with the skirt coming down to her lower thigh. The dress itself has no sleeves but does have a large ribbon in the lower back with the end of the ribbon floating free behind her. Mira also wears black thigh high stockings and white calf high boots. Perched in her hair is a black headband with a black rose on the right side of the headband.
Mental Description: Mira is a misanthrope due to her creation and upbringing. This means Mira views other humans as weak, disgusting and gross and identifies them as a different species than herself prevents her from forming bons with others. This is further exacerbated by the fact that Mira is extremely prideful often ignoring others or spinning facts in her head in order to maintain her pride and perceived genetic superiority. Mira often views others as beneath her and instead of measuring a person by how they act or what they do for others, she values others specifically on what they can do for her and will be discarded or ignored if they do not fall into her plans. Mira is a naturally very intelligent person with a charismatic nature about often speaking in a third person manner to denote her superiority to others which leads her to speaking in a more old fashioned manner which may also stem from her very sheltered child hood.
History: Project 33, a offsite black project undertaken within the leaf village developed and funded by a small group of medical ninja that wanted to answer what was talent. Did it exist within the ninja potential of a person, psychological talent, within the spirit of the genetic potential of the individual. This particular group of ninja felt that the perfect warrior would dwell within the genetic potential of humanity and not in the innate shinobi factor so they delved into research and decided to develop an artificial human from the refined genetic traits of the villagers within the village taking samples during ever day work within the hospital when a person was discovered to have an attractive genetic traits. People with naturally strong muscle fibers, people with immense flexibility, people who age gracefully, people who rarely get sick. All people who demonstrated exceptional non ninja related traits where selected with the experiments objective to create a human whose natural traits would give birth to someone with exceptional shinobi qualities.

This process of research, distillation of traits and genetic grafting took years and immense amount of funds paid directly out of the medic nins pockets with whatever funds they could get as their passion project continued some embezzling funds from civilian infrastructure in order to complete their work. Eventually their specimen took shape and before long the child that would be eventually named Mira was born from her tank. However upon her birth the medic nins were disappointed to find she herself while being an absolute perfect example of a human being genetically speaking, did not actually exhibit any heightened ninja traits despite inheriting the Hyuuga's genetic traits from one of the unknown donors. In fact Mira was no more destined to be a ninja than any civilian child and with their project a failure with no results to absolve their guilt to the village the medical nins turned themselves in for embellishment and handed Mira over to a orphanage within the village only giving her a name before handing her over to the caretakers.

Mira herself was raised like any normal child however unbeknownst to her creators Mira had been born with a brain much more developed than usual. This has led to her maintaining impressions and rough memories only days after she was born which had allowed her to observe her parents. These memories of her parents discussing her creation amongst themselves in front of her and what she was meant meant nothing to the baby version of herself but as she grew and developed she gained comprehension. Mira the one who's name meant admirable and peace whose hope was for her to be a weapon of peace for the leaf village developed the opinion she had been created to be arbiter of this world and whether that was for better or worse as the perfect human only time would tell.


Bloodline/Core Ability: Hyuuga
 
This application was denied on the reasoning: The history, we feel like Medical Shinobi wouldn't do this and would not be able to do this regards of funds to create such a space and more. We would like to encourage this story however, so we hope to aid you a little. Why not create the story that Jashin's were behind creating such a lab, forming the lifeform in those eviroments and let Leaf Shinobi ransak the place saving your PC? It gives the same fibe for your main history. We also would like to see more as to how this person has Hyuuga. Excells in punches or gets the eyes for example visible in the history.
 
Old Character Name: Ayeka
Old Village/Missing: Leaf
OCR Type: Rebirth from Inactivity
Last Known Where-abouts: Leaf
Old IC Rank: Head Jonin

New Character Name: Hyuuga Setsuna
Preferred Username: Mira
New Village/Missing: Leaf
New BL/CA: Hyuuga
Kinjutsu: None


Name: Hyuuga Setsuna
Age: 10
Rank: Academy Student
Physical Description: Setsuna is of a smaller stature only coming to about four feet tall with raven locks cascading down her back in long sweeping tresses stopping at the back of her knees. Her figure was fairly normally in line with a child at her age though more on the lean and muscular side due to the training she has completed. Setsuna's eyes are deep sapphire blue only missing the pupil from the center due to her bloodline. Her skin is very pale much like most of the Hyuuga clan though her clothes are very different from her clan. Setsuna likes to wear a black and white dress with purple trim with the skirt coming down to her lower thigh. The dress itself has no sleeves but does have a large ribbon in the lower back with the end of the ribbon floating free behind her. Mira also wears black thigh high stockings and white calf high boots. Perched in her hair is a black headband with a black rose on the right side of the headband.
Mental Description: Setsuna is a misanthrope due to her creation and upbringing. This means Setsuna views other humans as weak, disgusting and gross and identifies them as a different species than herself prevents her from forming bonds with others. This is further exacerbated by the fact that Setsuna is extremely prideful often ignoring others or spinning facts in her head in order to maintain her pride and perceived genetic superiority. Setsuna often views others as beneath her and instead of measuring a person by how they act or what they do for others, she values others specifically on what they can do for her and will be discarded or ignored if they do not fall into her plans. Setsuna is a naturally very intelligent person with a charismatic nature about often speaking in a third person manner to denote her superiority to others which leads her to speaking in a more old fashioned manner which may also stem from her very sheltered child hood.
History: Blood is the source of life, the source of vitality and to the worshippers of Jashin the medium of their worship and they revealed in both the taking and providing of this vital essence for their god blessed his followers with his love with many abilities. However the cult of Jashin did share one common problem within their belief and that was a general lack of consensus on what their god looked like. Was it a towering man who separated warriors with a single strike of his halberd, blood raining down from the sky or a young women with cruel red eyes who rendered her victims into bloody pieces with swipes of cruel claws lips smiling while blood stains her hands.

Of course within the many cults this often sparked argument often bloody though never fatal due to the unique gifts of their god. However one group of the blood gods followers did come up with a most peculiar idea. Why not make a blessed alter for Jashin made of the flesh and blood he so loves, a sort of child of their god who would function as a site of worship in other religions it would be similar to a saint or deacon a place that was not their god but a direct connection to it that they may worship as a proxy. However this alter would not be perfect in every aspect not a single defect physical or mental could be within the child and thus they hatched a plan, when they prayed to their god through holy rites they would take a keepsake of blood from their most glorious victims, men and women who were gifted with the strongest of muscle, the quickest of whit's or those who survived long enough to be a decent challenge to them.

These Jashinists would then return to their shared lair deep within the forest of the fire country and store the blood on mass to one day join them together but they had one further problem. To join life essence together would need the most in depth knowledge of the human body and the most depraved desires of man to carry forth their dream. The cultists had the desire but not the knowledge so they would go forth and target leaf village patrols, slaughtering those they could and kidnapping any medical ninja they could find before putting them to work. Under pain on torture these poor ninja were forced to put their talents to use until finally it was completed. A tiny vial of the concentrated essence of thousands who had been killed in their gods names though they were careful to never take the essence of ninja for shinobi traits was not what they wanted. What they wanted was the most perfect human that they could produce free of disease, mental illness, genetic defects or anything that would prevent their worship for only the most perfect of blood and flesh could be an alter to their god and only in the most pure human could those traits be found as many shinobi demonstrate inhuman traits derived from beasts or non human entities.

However in this perfection they did make one concession. A god is all seeing and all knowing, they take what they want from this world which is why Jashin sent his believers into the world so that he may reap all as his right. And so when an incubator was selected for this most perfect of seed they chose a young women of the Hyuuga clan, a civilian who had inherited nothing but great beauty and her parents eyes, A being who had committed no great sin nor accomplished any great achievement but whose eyes would gift their alter with unparalleled sight. They stole within the leaf village and stole her slaughtering her family members as they did as if to bless the act and to consummate the blessing.

The vessel itself could not be stained with the sin of lust and so the medical ninja were forced to anoint the vessel with the fruit of their labour using the most careful of medical and shinobi arts. The day they received news that the seed had taken root was filled with jubilations and blood as insanity and joy coalesced into one. However they would now need to hide and provide for the vessel in secret. They slaughtered their hostages only leaving one alive who would assist with brining forth the blessed child before leaving their cavernous hideout to delve even deeper into the woods not yet knowing that the leaf had been aware of these fanatics actions and slaughter and they were hunting them.

The child was born with little problem many months later her mother nothing more than a sacrifice that was butchered the moment the blessed child was born so that she may be anointed in the name of Jashin. The first few years of Setsuna's life was filled with worship and praise, her body as designed was the most perfect example of pure humanity without a single defect or negative trait within her and the cultists treated her as tended. A beautiful shrine dedicated to their god, victims were slaughtered in front of her so that their god could view their devotion through her, their blood decorating her body. Setsuna for the most part enjoyed the attention, she didn't understand the attention nor the devotion for this god whom she had never met but being worshipped as perfect was enough for her, getting whatever she wanted was enough for her and the slaughter she witnessed was just a normal part of her life. She never had a moment where the tang of blood did not reach her nose and as such viewed it as normal.

However everything changed when the leaf village finally found the cult. For years this group of fanatic has been a painful thorn in the side. They would slaughter and kill and torture and then evaporate into mist before the ninja could arrive to punish them until finally they had a breakthrough. The last surviving med Nin had managed to convince their captors that they had converted to Jashinism was was thus spared in return for acting as a servant for their blessed child since she created the child in the first place. It took years of the most disgusting acts where she almost lost her mind many times before she was trusted enough to leave the stronghold and even longer to make it back to the village but her retribution was swift.

The Leaf invaded the stronghold and swiftly killed and sealed every members knowing that they wouldn't truly die but would be stored away in eternal misery unable to pray to their god. However Setsuna was spared at the med Nin's request. She was nothing more than a child who had no control of her birth and was technically of the Hyuuga clan and thus be returned to the leaf however they would never know of the hatred that burned within the child for they had ruined her perfect world and for that Setsuna would get even.




How is that for a rewrite?


Bloodline/Core Ability: Hyuuga
 
Your general history has been improved and accepted, we are sad to see that you did nothing with the bloodline bit as we asked. We would like to see your application to this as to how they unlocked it and we are sorry, but a mention of Hyuuga clan and or a parent being hyuuga ain't enough.

Also keep in mind, Leaf has no official Hyuuga Clan.
 
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