Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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Kanami Aiko

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Kanami Aiko

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Name: Aiko Kanami

Age: 6

Physical Description:
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His build is slender and not to much muscular seeing as how he doesn't work out at all. His height is 4'5ft and 60lb. He wears a black shirt all the time, never changes clothing at all. His eyes are blue and his hair is white with bangs covering his forehead.

Mental Description:

Genius - He is considered a genius because he inherit that mentality of intelligence from his father's dad. His intelligence was measured in various scenarios. From physical activities, from throwing weapons at that land mark with perfection, to doing hand signs much faster than the average eight year old From mental activities, from reading tons of books, to actually memorizing every important aspect of that book/books.

Insanity - He developed insanity from reading too many books, and ultimately feeling pressured to be just like his parents. The physical symptoms are, shaking, baggy eyes, and insomnia. The mental symptoms are, thinking to fast, and having irrational speaking to where his sentences were all mixed up with mumble speech.


History:

Year 0 - Born from two jounin parents, who named Aiko by the father's dad name. He developed similar traits more from his grandpa than anyone else from his parents. They notice the facial structure, his white hair, and blue eyes when the year ended. They felt the presents of the reincarnation of the father's dad within their own son. In order to have this valid, they waited a year to pass by to see if there hypotheses was correct.

Year 1 - They notice that he was different than the other babies that they have witness during their life span. Both the father and mother notice that he learned how to walk much earlier than the average child, speak, and even remembered the hand signs that both the parents taught him. They had hope he would remember all this the following year. They had their high hopes for this child being of promise, and show great potential as a gifted child.

Year 2 - They notice he started to learn more of the hand signs much faster, they notice him calling out each hand sign as he made the respected sign. They notice that he took interest in reading books about the elements, about hand signs, and the parents would sit down at night and read to him and make him learn how to read at an early age. The parents themselves were struggling to pay the rent each month, because they were given C and B rank missions mostly because the A rank missions were taken already.

Year 3 - They notice that Aiko was getting insane by reading the books, and doing outdoor activities. They notice the shaking, the baggy eyes of not sleeping, they notice a lot of things happening to their baby boy. They didn't have the money to afford to take him to the hospital. The father and mother begged the Kaze kage to give them A rank assignments, and the Kaze Kage agreed to help them out in their time of need and that it was only temporarily. Aiko was pretty much most of the time at the local daycare center while his parents were out doing the missions. Aiko at this point in his early childhood, was showing signs of insanity.

Year 4 - The father and mother were living the good life, but at the cost of not being at home with their child all the time. They paid the day care on time always, the rent, the hospital bill to see what was wrong with Aiko which turned out that all he needed was sleep and that he was given pills to take. Aiko's home for 10 hours of the day, was at the daycare. He was rebellious, got into fights with the other kids, and mostly was put into timeout day by day. In order for the day care to put up with his behavior, they asked for extra pay. The parents agreed to pay more, and didn't really have time for conflict, since they were dealing with their own conflict during the missions.

Year 5 - The father and mother, even though the Kazekage said that it was going to be temporarily, he decided to give them a choice whether or not to stick to A rank assignments, or choose to do B and C rank missions. The parents didn't want to go back to that poverty stage again where they both were struggling and that they want their boy to grow up without ever seeing the struggle that they went through. The parents agreed to only do A rank assignments for their son. Back at the daycare, Aiko started to feel abandoned by both his parents, he had seen that the daycare center, the staff members became his new parents. He had missed both his father and mother, who he rarely saw during the day. A couple of hours in the morning, then going home at night to sleep. This process was day in and day out, and Aiko's behavior grew more rebellious because he wanted to be with his parents. He quit reading books, and doing physical activities because of the loneliness in his heart.

Year 6 - The news that Aiko's parents dying during a mission would be devastating to tell Aiko, but eventually he would find out anyway that he was going home to live by himself. Aiko's parents earned enough money, for Aiko to feed himself, to pay for the rent on time, and a total savings account that had Aiko almost rich since he was living on his own. Aiko spent day by day crying at night, reading more books than ever before to keep his mind occupied. Aiko did end up like his grandpa, living alone, reading and spending his nights crying and training as well. Aiko grew more cold and wanted the world to pay for his parents death. He mainly learned the fire ball jutsu that whole year from reading the books and also the hand signs.

Year 7 - Aiko spent the whole year constantly training everyday, push ups, sit ups, hand sign training, weapon training, and insomnia is what kept him training for a few hours more until he eventually passed out. He did the same routine over and over, growing his hatred for the village, and seeing as how Sunagakure was already in chaos, he had to be stronger more than ever to take on the enemies of the world. Aiko decided not to attend the academy once he turns 8 and has decided to live his life, and learning jutsu his own way. He doesn't want to be known to his village, he hates his village and plans to do something about it one day.

Year 8 - Just like he planned, he decided to forget about attending the academy and going to the rich district of Sungakure and read all the books that they have to offer. He mainly spent this whole year alone just reading and learning more about the world. He attended the library on a regular bases, by going in the morning, then going home at night, eat a meal, then go straight to bed. He did this so routinely that his insomnia went away that whole year, since he was going to bed much earlier than before. He made sure to one day make his parents proud of him and exact his revenge on the village that sent his parents to their death on a mission. Aiko spent some of this year, visiting their graves and planting flowers and candles, wishing they would come back to him.
 

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Re: Kanami Nex

Welcome to Suna, thanks for choosing us however before we begin there are a few concerns.

1) It's fine that you want to have your character be "insane" but you must consider from a standpoint that you are essentially a weak student. Classes are ran by Chuunin and up who have far more experience. You must remember that these people are training you to be a composed soldier. So with their abilities I'm sure they'd have known it was you causing the danger among students.

2) I'm not understanding the insanity or how it spawned. You say the spirit of your grandfather but it would be great if you could expand on that. How does Nex live everyday without being courted for this supposed extreme insanity? Why would the shinobi allow someone with such clear mental instability in their ranks? Delve more into describing the workings of your character's mind. How does he function? How does he work?

3) The hospital incident is simply a bit far-fetched. It's clear you want your character to be a killer but I would suggest you focus more on the back story of your character before getting to the Academy. You would still be starting as a student and when you get approved into the village you could continue whatever story you wish to expand on such as turning Nex into a killer but would face the ramifications of the village.

If you want some suggestions please PM me and I'll happily help where I can.

Just try to tone down on how much violence and killing Nex has done, and rather focus on the origin of him, his insanity and family. It would do well to reinforce that and roleplay his violent dealings in the village.

Also one smaller minor thing, Nex isn't really a Japanese Word from what I can tell. If you need name suggestions or can find a legit Japanese Name it would do well for this process.
 

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