Kyojin's Dojo - Tallest of all Mountains

[Xiangtian Xiao]

Greetings! I would like to request the following abilities:

0. Branch: Journeyman
0. Shinobi 101 Taijutsu - Unarmed use Slashing
1. Fearless
2. Defensive Technique
3. Healing Factor
4. Clumsiness
5. Weapon Mastery - Unarmed
6. Initiative
7. Bull's Strength
8. Combat Instinct
9. Hidden Potential
10. Kinjutsu
11. Kinjutsu
12. Kinjutsu

Extra ability slot was purchased long ago and is in Kyojin's FAQ: Proof. (Will likely need admin councilors to see this because I do believe only they can. But all this was approved anyway in my OCR so if that is needed rather than the proof link, here: OCR. Simply look at class creation and councilor Nanami's approval. The ability slot and extra class bonus are both in the FAQ.)

Spoiler

Journeyman: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=183574#p183574 (The first and second paragraphs should suffice.)

Shinobi 101 - Taijutsu: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=183941#p183941

I am become Steel. Steel knows no fear. Steel knows no doubt. Steel does not hesitate.

These are words every member of the Kroc tribe know. Words drilled into one's mind in preparation for the blood-agoge. Words every Kroc in history uttered before battle. Steel has been used by many as a material to create things, especially true of weapons. In the hands of a true warrior, Steel is fearsome. But the bodies of the Kroc are already a dangerous weapon, since they are descendants of the Kyoujouran. The Kroc then became Steel. Steel is an inanimate object thus it cannot know fear nor doubt. The Kroc became Steel and lost their fear.

Especially Kyojin.

Kyojin was a warrior, a Titan. In his tribe, a Titan was the mightiest and most skilled of the Kroc. As such, he knew how to dish out damage effectively. However, the fall of Mist and an incident turned him to the ways of a Mercenary. He learned that the best offense is a good defense but it is also true that the best defense was a good offense. Through his jobs, he experimented with a technique that allowed him to take less damage in order to dish out more and gained enough experience in doing so. An example of this is turning his face if someone punched him on the cheek. Doing this lessened the impact and thus the damage.

The descendant of a miraculous union between a Kyoujouran and a Terrarite, elemental beings of the earth, Kyojin possessed extraordinary vitality. A severe wound would take him a few hours to heal with rest. If his skin is cracked, it will become unblemished again in matter of seconds. Kyojin was tuned to the earth more than possibly imagined and herbal remedies, for some reason, has its effect tripled if drank with a sliver of Kroc crystals. Coupled with his incredible defenses, taking him down is not an easy feat. He was a tank. And a juggernaut. A tankernaut?

Ha. Maybe.

Kyojin was big, over three hundred pounds of muscle. And tall. Though he was comfortable with his body and moved quite well for such a giant, he could also be clumsy if he was not careful. He was the type that took damage head-on, not flutter around like a butterfly trying to avoid it. His size made certain things difficult. Rashly sitting on a chair caused it to crumble under him and he finds himself the butt of the joke. He also cursed the size of cups, often breaking them in an attempt to hold a cup. But sometimes, just sometimes he can become lucky and avoid a serious, fatal strike when tripping at the right time. Not a true klutz perhaps but he was just as close as any.

Roughly a thousand year ago, there existed a clan widely known—and feared—for their prowess with the Taijutsu. This clan was known as the Kyoujouran, people blessed by the earth with hardy constitution. In fear and disgust, the clan was attacked many a time, due to the horrid rigorous and vicious training regime placed upon the young of the Kyoujouran, known as Jags, which left many of them dead. When a Jag has grown old enough and had survived the harsh training, they become a warrior of their clan, becoming Crags. Only a true master of the Kyoujouran can become a Titan.

And Kyojin was with no exception a true master of his bloodline, of Taijutsu. All he ever needed for weapons were his fists. Swords and the like can be knocked off one's hands, but not fists.

His fists has never failed him.

Those who do not prepare properly are the greatest of sinners, for to prepare and anticipate every contingency is the greatest of virtue.

A Kroc saying. Whether in battle or out of it, Kyojin always prepared for every contingency. When an opportunity came up, he seized it. When he planned five moves ahead, victory is assured. Being able to account for his opponent's reactions and actions would grant him an incredible advantage in speed, for speed was the key to everything. Though not as fast as the agilest of shinobi, Kyojin's bulk and preparedness made up for it. Forcing his foes to play on his field rather than theirs and take them by surprise was an effective strategy he always was able to count on.

Look at Kyojin! He is visibly largely muscular and well built; seemingly athletic, and weighs over 300 pounds of pure muscles and is as heavy as boulders. Thanks to the harsh, rigorous and forbidden training of a Kyoujouran his blows are powerful enough to pierce others barehanded as if his hands were spears. Simply put, he is a hulking mass of destruction. Not to mention, Kyojin is also very tall with his height of 7'6". There are very few who do match Kyojin’s height, which was fine with him, as he liked to tower over others. He possessed the blood of Kyoujouran. The toughness and hardness of a Kyoujouran’s skin is known to be as hard as steel, but Kyojin’s body is unique in that it possessed an unique crystalline skeletal system, his flesh as tough as diamonds.

It is no wonder things that require the strength of ten or more men to be even touched can be easily lifted by Kyojin. As such, his blows carry overwhelming force.

Kyojin, from birth, was drilled with the law of the Oni Saiseki and the way of the Zaiken. His parents felt their child was meant for greatness. They taught him to be strong, to stand tall, to tower over others, but at the same time to be humble, kind, fair and honorable. The Namazu numbers were small, roughly twenty people in the clan, but very strong. Every six months, they’d put four children at the age of seven through the ancient rigorous training, but not pushing them to the brink of death. If one did not seem they could make it, then they clearly did not possess the Kyoujouran prowess. Those who survived possessed the strong blood of their ancestors. Enjin and Kana had settled on one child, which was risky, because if it turned out Kyojin did not possess the Kyoujouran powers, they’d be disappointed but okay with it. They only wanted the bloodline to keep going.

Kyojin was a warrior at heart. At a young age, he learned to hunt and developed instincts that saved his life one too many times. As he grew older and found himself in numerous battles, he realized that if he fought his opponent without thinking at all, completely giving in to his instinct, he would unleash incredible strength that left his opponent constantly battered, weakened and if he wished so, dead.

As mentioned, Kyojin's vitality is extraordinary but there were times when he nearly died. During a mercenary job, he was near death and bloody with weariness seeping throughout his body. He was about to give up when he suddenly felt something, all around him. He could feel… life? The earth, he thought. It was more than that. Tuned to the earth in mysterious ways, he could feel everything under the ground, on the ground, even deeper. It was incredible. The feeling filled him up with a strength of fire and the closer he was to dying, the stronger he became. Once... just once did he almost destroy an entire building with a single punch. Deep within the seven foot and a half giant was the hidden potential to become the "tallest of all mountains."

Cheers.

 

[Yomoko]

all of them are approved.

I handled part of your OCR and remember reading about it. You're all set.

Enjoy bud.

 

[Xiangtian Xiao]

Thanks!

Now for weapon creation:

"Never have you failed to tear my foes asunder and so I will give you a name. I shall call you Sunderer."

Sunderer - Unarmed
Mods: -5% damage, +2 Accuracy (Bull's Strength)
Augments: Vanguard, Primal, Lantern

"Woundbiter estas mia nomo mi estas homara detruo. Woundbiter is mine name I am mankind's bane."

Woundbiter - Unarmed
Mods: +15% damage, -1 Accuracy (Bull's Strength)
Augments: Vanguard, Primal, Siege

Note: The words in the first line of Woundbiter is the Mist tongue Mizugo, which used the Esperanto language.

Note #2: Yes, inspiration came from The Hobbit if you were wondering

I think I did it right, but its been a while so If I missed anything, let me know!

 

[Tsukino Nanami]

Couple things:

1) You need to shelf your items so I can see if you own the augments

• User Control Panel -> Shop -> Display on Shelf

Do this for every item you own.

2) Your weapons don't mention what their "Special is"
With unarmed, they are:
May naturally inflict Suppression
OR
May use Handseals while armed with an Unarmed Weapon.

3) Sunderer:
Everything looks alright -- Needs unarmed special listed. Needs augments shown.
4) Woundbiter:
Everything looks alright -- Needs unarmed special listed. Needs augments shown.

 

[Xiangtian Xiao]

Ah, not a problem at all. Here you go!

A ruby fist of unparalleled strength.

"Never have you failed to tear my foes asunder and so I will give you a name. I shall call you Sunderer."

Sunderer - Unarmed
Mods: -10% damage, +2 Accuracy
Special: May naturally inflict Suppression
Augments: Vanguard, Primal, Lantern

A citrine fist of destruction and death.

"Woundbiter estas mia nomo mi estas homara detruo. Woundbiter is mine name I am mankind's bane."

Woundbiter - Unarmed
Mods: +10% damage, -2 Accuracy
Special: May naturally inflict Suppression
Augments: Vanguard, Primal, Siege

Fix:
-Displayed all of my items.
-Added Specials for both weapons.
-Removed Bull's Strength bonuses.

Many thanks in advance.

 

[Tsukino Nanami]

Ah, not a problem at all. Here you go!

A ruby fist of unparalleled strength.

"Never have you failed to tear my foes asunder and so I will give you a name. I shall call you Sunderer."

Sunderer - Unarmed
Mods: -10% damage, +2 Accuracy
Special: May naturally inflict Suppression
Augments: Vanguard, Primal, Lantern

A citrine fist of destruction and death.

"Woundbiter estas mia nomo mi estas homara detruo. Woundbiter is mine name I am mankind's bane."

Woundbiter - Unarmed
Mods: +10% damage, -2 Accuracy
Special: May naturally inflict Suppression
Augments: Vanguard, Primal, Siege

Fix:
-Displayed all of my items.
-Added Specials for both weapons.
-Removed Bull's Strength bonuses.

Many thanks in advance.

Weapons and augments approved.

 

[Tsukino Nanami]

Kyojin is declared inactive:

Profile: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?p=183156#p183156
Training: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=487&t=42076
Dojo: http://www.ninpocho.com/viewtopic.php?f=488&t=42448