Shattered Blade (Takikage, Yami's Dojo)

[Takikage Yami]

New Weapon

Weapon: Yonyokai

Description: 4 very long but slender and thin katanas all identical. Each one is a very long blade that is slightly thinner in width from a normal katana and extremely thin. They are lightweight due to how thin they are and extremely sharp, they are also extremely hard and a twice as dense as a sword of equal specifications and thus they do weigh a bit more than a normal sword of this size. The blades are a dark jet black but polished to nearly mirror like, all except for the edge of the blade which is more like a gunmetal gray color. These swords are all made of a single piece of a rare not well known alloy coated in a diamond powder layer on the blade edge, the hilt is just red and black cloth "bandage like" wrapping that is woven over an unsharped bottom end of the swords. The swords are ancient clan heirlooms in the Takikage clan. They are designed to be quick rapid striking blades aimed at cutting away at an opponent and are more attuned to landing a large number of quick consecutive blows. They are also made extra durable to keep them strong and sharp after many battles, of coarse over time the blades will need to be sharpened by heating and morphing the blades rather than normal practices so as to not lose any of the already scarce surface mass of the blades. The blades have a special trait that allows them to have chakra channeled into them causing the blade portion to vibrate at a high rate and have a fine saw blade effect thus increasing the cutting speed and strength, as a side effect the blade portion glows a vibrant red. The swords are designed to be used all at once in a 4 swords fighting style for experienced users, they are usually only used one or two at a time by lesser experienced users. These are sister swords to the Yontenshi blades which are red blades of the same design with black edges, these blades more "eat" or "absorb" portions of chakra from the victims hit by them each time one of these blades make contact. The Weapon's creator made both sets of swords to be used in an 8 sword fighting style similar to killer bee's fighting style by an expert wielder, the blades would both use a combination of taking bites of chakra to replenish the user's chakra while attempting to hit vital spots with the accelerated assaulting blades. Yami currently only possesses the Yonyokai "4 demons".

Type:Slashing

Effect: naturally inflict bleeding

Accuracy: +1

Damage: -5%

Augments (1): none

New Weapon

Weapon: Tsubusu Kusari

Description: A long, sturdy, fairly lightweight chain 10 ft. long in length that Yami typically wears around his torso from his right shoulder to his left hip. This chain has small thick links and ever 8 links has a small metal clip to attach kunai, swords, and other small blades. Occasionally he will attach wieghts to this weapon if the situation calls for it. Usually Yami swings a portion of the chain around him to hit an opponent or knock away light projectiles, he also wraps it around opponents to detain them so he can use a more powerful ability or taijutsu. The chain can be used to grapple or grab things at a distance and also wrapped around part of Yami's own body to act as a metal armor or to strengthen a punch or kick.

Type: ranged suppression

Effect: suppression

Accuracy: -2

Damage: +10%

Augments (1): none

 

[Murakami Reizo]

At the moment, both weapons are denied.

Yonyokai: Effects of a weapon are chosen from the list here based upon their weapon type. For slashing weapons, you may chose between the following effects: may naturally inflicting bleeding or naturally inflicting suppression.

Tsubusu Kusari: Effects of a weapon are chosen from the list here based upon their weapon type. For ranged weapons, you may chose between the following effects: may naturally inflict Bleeding(making it a slashing or piercing ranged weapon) or Suppression (making it a bludgeoning ranged weapon) or +3% chance for Called Shots. Also, the accuracy and damage are restricted to the following choices: -2 accuracy/+10% damage, -1 accuracy/+5% damage, +0 accuracy/+0% damage, +1 accuracy/-5% damage, or +2 accuracy/-10% damage (At most, -2 accuracy, +10% damage or +2 accuracy, -10% damage).

Also, so that you know. The description you have for Tsubusu Kusari

[...]knock away light projectiles, he also wraps it around opponents to detain them so he can use a more powerful ability or taijutsu. The chain can be used to grapple or grab things at a distance and also wrapped around part of Yami's own body to act as a metal armor or to strengthen a punch or kick. The chain has special seals engraved that allow a higher level wielder to turn the chain into a sealing type technique which causes the chain to bind itself around an opponent, the caster of the sealing can trigger the seal's second phase that causes the chain to continue to tighted until it tightens upon itself and if not stopped will cause the chain to break it's own links, to avoid self destructing the weapon the wielder must pull hard on the chain after it has half crushed through the opponent to rip the opponent into either a mangled mess or quite a few chunks depending on how early the seal was broken, pulling the chain hard breaks the sealing technique thus saving the weapon from self destruction.

will do nothing for you in modded combat. You may look at augments to accomplish things of that nature in the future for modded combat. The same is true of the sister sword's ability to eat/absorb chakra, which you mention in Yonyokai's description.

 

[Takikage Yami]

I've corrected the above mentioned issues, let me know if anything else needs fixed.

 

[Murakami Reizo]

Awesome, that's what I needed.
Approved!

At E-Rank, Takikage Yami may have 2 weapons. (2/2 created)

Weapon 1

Weapon: Yonyokai
Description:

Spoiler

4 very long but slender and thin katanas all identical. Each one is a very long blade that is slightly thinner in width from a normal katana and extremely thin. They are lightweight due to how thin they are and extremely sharp, they are also extremely hard and a twice as dense as a sword of equal specifications and thus they do weigh a bit more than a normal sword of this size. The blades are a dark jet black but polished to nearly mirror like, all except for the edge of the blade which is more like a gunmetal gray color. These swords are all made of a single piece of a rare not well known alloy coated in a diamond powder layer on the blade edge, the hilt is just red and black cloth "bandage like" wrapping that is woven over an unsharped bottom end of the swords. The swords are ancient clan heirlooms in the Takikage clan. They are designed to be quick rapid striking blades aimed at cutting away at an opponent and are more attuned to landing a large number of quick consecutive blows. They are also made extra durable to keep them strong and sharp after many battles, of coarse over time the blades will need to be sharpened by heating and morphing the blades rather than normal practices so as to not lose any of the already scarce surface mass of the blades. The blades have a special trait that allows them to have chakra channeled into them causing the blade portion to vibrate at a high rate and have a fine saw blade effect thus increasing the cutting speed and strength, as a side effect the blade portion glows a vibrant red. The swords are designed to be used all at once in a 4 swords fighting style for experienced users, they are usually only used one or two at a time by lesser experienced users. These are sister swords to the Yontenshi blades which are red blades of the same design with black edges, these blades more "eat" or "absorb" portions of chakra from the victims hit by them each time one of these blades make contact. The Weapon's creator made both sets of swords to be used in an 8 sword fighting style similar to killer bee's fighting style by an expert wielder, the blades would both use a combination of taking bites of chakra to replenish the user's chakra while attempting to hit vital spots with the accelerated assaulting blades. Yami currently only possesses the Yonyokai "4 demons".

Type: Slashing
Effect: May naturally inflict bleeding
Accuracy: +1
Damage: -5%
Augments (1): none

Weapon 2

Weapon: Tsubusu Kusari
Description:

Spoiler

A long, sturdy, fairly lightweight chain 10 ft. long in length that Yami typically wears around his torso from his right shoulder to his left hip. This chain has small thick links and ever 8 links has a small metal clip to attach kunai, swords, and other small blades. Occasionally he will attach wieghts to this weapon if the situation calls for it. Usually Yami swings a portion of the chain around him to hit an opponent or knock away light projectiles, he also wraps it around opponents to detain them so he can use a more powerful ability or taijutsu. The chain can be used to grapple or grab things at a distance and also wrapped around part of Yami's own body to act as a metal armor or to strengthen a punch or kick.

Type: Ranged (Bludgeoning)
Effect: May naturally cause suppression
Accuracy: -2
Damage: +10%
Augments (1): none

As a final note, you still need to have your username adjusted here to proper japanese format (in this case, Takikage Yami), or you'll probably get referred to as Takikage as your first name.